| Star Wars Jedi Academy: Novel - Song of Harmony | |
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Lian Del Rey - Student  |
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away... STAR WARS The Jedi Academy Episode 3 Song of Harmony Six years have passed since all the casualties in the Age of War. The Empress has a fled to the planet of Coruscant to make a hidden base there, leaving the the Deathstar completely defenseless. Josh, who has managed to keep from morning the death of his master, Vaughn or more commonly now known as Shadow~G, has gone to the planet of Naboo where they are making the new Jedi Academy. There are rumors that the Empress got a new apprentice from the Jedi Academy. But from all messages from the Empress, she claims she has no apprentice. However, there are now more casualties reported from Coruscant now more than ever. Now, Josh and his fellow Jedi are disguised as imperialists to interrogate any other imperial and discover what is the source of this problem.. _______________ slorp |
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MarkoZ - Student 
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bumped  _______________ "Easy is not for a Jedi"- Corran Horn, "I Jedi" Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol. |
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Vaughn - Student 
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oh. I understand. Spammer. *jk abt the spammer* _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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alternate does not mean 'and what happened after.' it means, 'what could have happened.' get it? _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Vaughn - Student
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i dont understand _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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you can do that...but what I meant was-you saw how Lian did double endings for her last post? something like that, only starting from the part where the Jedi entered the throne room. I dont use word. you know what word does to a sci-fi story?  what I do is read through before posting. maybe you just type fast. monstrosity...any reason why you remember that particular word? battle of the academy is fine for me...I've got plenty of ideas for it. when do I have to hand it in? _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. This comment was edited by Flamori Athena on Mar 29 2004 02:08pm. |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] Flamori, you said that we still have to do our alternate endings... does that mean the 'what happens next, but isnt big enough to be a sequal'? Because if its like the after credits 'whats happened to everyone', i have an idea... *shifty eyes* _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student 
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[not in story] Yeah... I was away for 10 days, and the story's over... so wait, Lian, which ending? Levi and Soong died... but did the Empress win... or did the Jedi win? BAH! Age of War confusing? well, maybe I don't remember what happened... but as far as I recall it was simple enough (maybe the confusing ones were my posts?  ).So... if you guys get the story done, and dont want my help... then i guess i'll just have to say this. SHOT TURNING IT INTO A SCRIPT AND FULL RIGHTS TO IT!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!!! *cough* well, you know what I mean. Lian said she wanted it as some sort of... play/movie/story thing. Of course, doing the animations in 3dsmax or milkshape would be so much easier than doing them in the game... specially with all the talking and fancy shmancy moves. Now, if only there were the maps and characters of everything... but thats another day. Edit again: reading Age of War.. hehe, flashbacks, going DBZ style, etc. heh... whats so confusing about it? _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson This comment was edited by Vaughn on Mar 28 2004 03:25am. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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AAAAAAAAAAND you don't have spelling mistakes because you use Word. Word has a spelling check. Ok, help. Remake Battle of the Academy (I confess I haven't worked on that... wait, I did, but go ahead) and I'll do the rest. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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Ahem, I said I had an A in English. That means I have the least spelling mistakes... Besides, I could spell big words like monstrosity in what? 1st grade? _______________ slorp |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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did you really think I'd let you do all the work...? I have a fine-tuned edition of the first part of the Academy Battle that you could use. And I make the least spelling mistakes amongst us all. If you dont think so browse back and make a comparision. Either way I'm not going to be excluded from this. I've seen this thorugh to here, I have to help. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. This comment was edited by Flamori Athena on Mar 25 2004 12:49pm. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[After the credits rolled] Lianiotte looked at the Jedi Academy, concealed, making herself invisible to any student that's still in the Jedi Academy. To her right she saw... Vaughn. He walked up the steps of the wall she was sitting on and joined her. "Worried?" he asked. "Nah," she said. "They're doing just find." Flamori came, concealed as well. "You know, there's still a galaxy full of trouble out there." Josh came. "Are we ready for the challenge?" he asked. Lianiotte stood up and turned to them. Then she said, "readier than we'll ever be." [Black out] _______________ slorp This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on Mar 24 2004 11:39pm. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] You sure? I've already started a long time ago, still working on it. Plus I've always had A's in English, and I know how to format stories. And double-spacing reeks! Also there are many, MANY parts I need to edit to make them work, so do yourself a favor and leave it all to me.  _______________ slorp This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on Mar 24 2004 11:36pm. |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not In Story] so ends the Jedi Academy Trilogy. woohoo, Lian. Now all that we have to do is 1. gather the shards, 2. fix the innumerable spelling and grammatical errors, 3. rewrite whole portions of the story, 4. give the first book a proper ending (the story was never finished, though it was explained in the second book what happened), 5. figure out what really happened in the Age of War (you'd have to be either a genius or a writer to understand the last few posts) 6. make sense of it all, 7. do those other alternate endings we wanted, and 8. finally acquire a complete version of the Jedi Academy Trilogy. There's no need for you to tire yourselves out, just leave the work to me. Write your alternate endings if you want. I'll write mine after. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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Chapter #: Song of Harmony The Sith Temple is like a cave. A cave that echoes with the battle's roar, the dyer's scream, an elder's legend. The cave had a story to tell. The Sith Temple was shallow, and every step that Soong walked echoed off the walls. Korriban. It was like Korriban. The walls were trimmed with ancient Sith writing and the walls glowed a pale gold. He had sensed something. He felt he was not alone. His hand rested firmly on his lightsaber hilt to turn and saw the white light of a ghostly figure. “What are you doing, Soong?” Mideon's ghost said. “You’ve damned all you’ve ever come in contact with. You’ve betrayed all who were your closest friends. But you’ve never once felt pity, nor sorrow.” “Don’t try to talk me out of this, old master,” Soong said. “I will have power, and I won’t let any old Dark Jedi stop me, especially one that’s way past his expiration date.” “Then your destiny has been chosen,” Mideon said calmly. “And your destiny will be stopped.” His right hand drew out from his side, fingers extended, pointed towards Soong. Cyan light poured out of Mideon’s fingertips, mixed along with a little black lightning, as Soong, who had his red lightsaber activated, flew backwards, and his lightsaber crashed into the ground. Soong banged into the wall behind him, and across a long hall in the temple was Mideon. “Give up your foolish dream,” he said, as he started to float high into the air. “It is a fool’s errand. And trying to claim your power over the galaxy this way is the biggest example for the word called, ‘desperate.’” “Maybe you’re right,” Soong said, his face facing the ground. Mideon smiled, but then his face looked concerned after he saw that Soong’s lightsaber hilt was nowhere in sight. “Maybe,” Soong continued, “maybe we can rule the galaxy together.” “I’m glad you see it my way,” Mideon said. “And maybe the idiot that ever thought of that as the truth has mental problems!” Soong said. He threw his activated lightsaber up to the ghost Mideon, and it went through the body, causing two halves split with blue smoke puffing out of the two white halves split apart. Mideon’s ghost vanished, and his tale too, was added to the echoes of the Sith Temple. Soong has walked for quite a while now, and now heard electrical zapping from the room in front of him. There was blue lightning shooting in the center of a room, guarded by a glass cylinder. The rest of the room was like a desert in a room. Pure sand, and a few fallen pillars. “Finally,” Soong said. “The power I have been seeking for all my life.” He activated his lightsaber and was ready to swing at the glass, but he noticed the glass was already cracked a bit, and a figure was floating in the lightning. “I knew I’d see you again, Soong,” the figure said. “What are you doing to the aura?!” Soong screamed. “I’m purifying it,” the figure spoke. “Turning it into Jedi power, and making it strong enough to make this temple collide and be covered with the grains of sand like it should be.” Levi crashed out of the glass, still floating, surrounded by blue energy. “The temple will go down in a matter of minutes,” he said, “and we will go down with it.” Soong grew worried. “YOU FOOL!” he shouted. He switched to his blaster and shot rapid fire at Levi, but Levi drew his hand, and the energy exploded on his hands, without making a single pain on Levi. “You still have much to learn,” Levi said. “You had much to learn before you willingly let Mideon die. But it’s good you let him die, for then I wouldn’t have to deal with two of you creatures that have no brain. Shame. You had much to learn, but now you don’t have the chance to learn it, for this is the hour we fall with honor.” Levi was now wearing golden Jedi robes, and had a golden lightsaber hilt, and the blade was golden too. In midair, Levi activated his glittering lightsaber, and then stopped levitating, and then his blade crashed with Soong’s after he fell long enough. Their lightsabers popped and crashed, and the battle’s already gone on a few minutes now. A few seconds later, the wall fell a little. The energy has given Levi a little more of an advantage. He now was One with the Force. He shot colorful energies and released giant balls of Force energy that shook the air. Soong was hit with one, and landed on the ground. “You’ll pay for that one!” he shouted. He struggled to get up, but he was trapped now. Levi had his lightsaber blade in front of his face. “The Force is my ally,” he said, as he stabbed Soong in the stomach. Soong screamed an unusual sound, a sound of demonic screaming, like it was from a demon itself. Black energy exploded out of Soong, who was hovering over the ground a bit. His eyes exploded with fire, along with other parts of his body. Black lightning then shot out of Soong, and soon normal lightning. Now all three flooded out together, and then it seemed that Soong started to have black marble growing up on him, starting from his foot up. After it covered his head, the energy stopped flowing, and Soong fell to the ground with a thud. Levi looked up, and then looked down at Soong, with his eyes closed, and deactivated his saber, then the ceiling fell down on them. The Wingless broke out of her stasis prison, and then activated her cyan lightsaber. “How?” Aeril asked. But The Wingless was already attacking Aeril like crazy, along with the rest of the Jedi. Aeril then started pushing madly, pushing so hard that she created dents in her ship. Then the Jedi remembered their plans. But their plan was in vain, for Aeril ran up to the retired Council member, and caused a heavy slash to DJ Sith’s stomach. She ran up DJ Sith’s body and kicked off, causing DJ to fly backwards and crashing into the wall. “You’ll pay for that!” Flamori shouted. “Yes, yes,” Aeril said boredly. “They all say that.” Aeril closed her eyes, but then she had wished she hadn’t, because the Jedi used kata on Aeril, causing deep wounds on her. Aeril fell to the ground. “Jedi fools!” she shouted. “You will pay for that!” She ran towards the hopeful Jedi Academy members, and then cut them all down, one by one. Or she would have, if her blades hadn’t disappeared. She pressed her lightsaber buttons, but they didn’t go on. And Aeril feared what she thought had just happened, and she turned around and looked down at herself, lying there, motionless. She was dead. The Demon ships exploded, along with the Black Academy Ships and the White Academy Ships. “What a world,” Xavion shouted. “Who knew it would end like this?!” “We have lived to our purpose,” Isonic said silently. “May we rest with the Force.” Deep in the worlds, the Black Academy shot out black beams, and the beams traveled around the academy, and the academy exploded, leaving no ruins left. The White Academy shot out white beams and exploded as well, and also, leaving no ruins. The Gates of Hell exploded in fire, and the demons all fell backwards, melting into the magma they fell into. The TIEs also blew up. Now there were only traditionally-colored X-Wings, floating there, only with a few other custom ships, by themselves. They felt alone, but only few knew that they were not alone, like Shadow~G and Josh. They heard drums, though there weren’t any drums to hear. They heard screaming, though there was nobody there to hear screaming. There were horns, there were many musical things... They played a beautiful tune… Then they shrieked with torment. The other music could still be heard, but the shrieking was so loud, and unavoidable. A few X-Wings blew up, and others caught on fire or electricity.” All the Jedi to ever have been in the Jedi Academy were flooding the ceremonial hall of DJ Sith’s old Jedi Academy. Of course it was destroyed, it was on Yavin 4. Yavin 4’s been inactive for many years, and DJ Sith’s academy has gone through much damage. Evil feminine laughter echoed on the walls, as the Empress’s invisible figure floated out of the ground. “Hahahaha,” she laughed. “Our deal is done. Now see the true nature of the Force!” Every single Jedi flew up into the air and crashed into the walls. Some unfortunate ones flew out of the window and died. The Song of Harmony screamed in the middle of the battle. Lightsabers appeared out of hidden in the wall, and they activated themselves, and flew around in the room, bouncing off any wall it came in contact with. Many Jedi were cut down, and others were smart enough to activate their own lightsabers. [Triumph of the Empire] The Empress was knocking down the Jedi all too easily. “The crystals,” Lianiotte said to herself. “The crystals! The crystals are the only things that can defeat the Empress!” Shadow~G charged up to the Empress and had a theory that the Empress was transparent, but still living, and therefore could be harmed like any other living thing. He jumped high up into the air and slashed at the Empress, but the slashing did no damage. The Empress grabbed Shadow~G and then held him up. “It’s time to say goodbye, Vaughn.” “My name is—!!” Shadow~G exploded in a giant fire explosion. The Empress returned to a normal size and activated her black lightsaber. She held her blade down into the ground and swung around 10 times quickly, and all the Jedi flew up, most dead. Lianiotte had a sword that was bursting with cyan light, and she and The Wingless slashed at the Empress. The Empress pulled out her own sword. This one had red light. It was the Sith Sword. Every time her blade and Lianiotte’s blade met, there was a fiery explosion. The Empress cut through Lianiotte, and then she cut through The Wingless. “The crystals are nowhere to be found,” Flamori said. “We must use the Song of Harmony, this song that haunts us!” Many Jedi have already died from listening to the song. The Jedi concentrated all their energy to the song, and then a big ball that seemed like to be fog in the air, appeared over the Jedi. They were going to thrust it at the Empress, but the Empress quickly harnessed it. “Thank you, Jedi,” she said. She hurled the ball at the Jedi, who all flew up to the ceiling and fell, dead. “And so the new order arises,” the Empress said, as she flew up to the ceiling to re-create the Song of Harmony. The End. The Balance Returns The Empress was knocking down the Jedi all too easily. “The crystals,” Lianiotte said to herself. “The crystals! The crystals are the only things that can defeat the Empress!” Shadow~G charged up to the Empress and had a theory that the Empress was transparent, but still living, and therefore could be harmed like any other living thing. He jumped high up into the air and slashed at the Empress, but the slashing did no damage. The Empress tried to grab hold of Shadow~G, but, luckily, he quickly moved in midair to dodge the Empress’s hand. “The crystals are nowhere to be found,” Flamori said. “We must use the Song of Harmony, this song that haunts us!” Many Jedi have already died from listening to the song. The Jedi concentrated all their energy to the song, and then a big ball that seemed like to be fog in the air, appeared over the Jedi. They hurled it at the Empress, and fire exploded on the Empress’s ghostly surface. “Nooo-oo-oo!” she shouted, as white beams shot out of her. Lianiotte and The Wingless appeared floating before the Empress. “Begone, foul beast, and return to your makers!” they shouted. They both sacrificed their lightsabers, throwing it at the Empress. The Empress’s eyes shot out white beams, and soon enough, the Empress exploded. And so the Jedi finally have their long-awaited rest. They’ve returned to Naboo and returned to their ordinary teaching selves. They all waited at the ceremonial hall, awaiting Massadoobie’s State of the Academy speech. They laughed and talked amongst themselves, just as they used to. Massadoobie, Phroot, DJ Sith, Huxley, Silent Whisper, Chosen One, Jacen Solo, Buzz, and Virtue all finally arrived, and then stood at the front of the Academy. All the Jedi’s laughter and chit chat quickly died. They all looked at the council members silently. Massadoobie finally spoke. “I once had a dream. A dream to have all the Jedi to remain on the path of light. I nearly achieved that goal, when Exar Kun miraculously arose from the grave and sabered us with the Ancient Sith Art. We met some new friends, we met some new allies, but most of them are dead now. We realize that we have kept some of our prepared students left into the Academy, and they have never come to the Jedi Order, which they’ve been training for for a long time. That’s why I promote you: Flamori, Lianiotte, Vaughn, Josh, and Flash. You are all now full-pledged members of the Jedi Order. But that doesn’t mean you shouldn’t watch out, though. The Evil Lianiotte is still to be heard from. For the past many years, we’ve been struggling with many difficulties, especially after we’ve entered the Age of War. Our periods of peace have been luxurious, although we’ve always had the worry on our heads of when the evil are going to strike. So now I, Massadoobie DeBois, proudly announce that the peace has finally returned to us— forever!” The Jedi cheered cheerfully, wiping away a few tears, and hooted. They all rushed out of the Jedi Academy and felt the weight of the galaxy be picked up off of their shoulders. Their time was theirs, now. Their decisions were theirs, as well. And the choice of staying connected with the Force, as it always was, is forever— theirs. The End. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Post. Just do it. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Dude! Quote: [Not in story] Quote: [Not in story] Quote: [Not in story] Quote: [Not in story] Quote: [Not in story] Quote: [Not in story] Quote: [Not in story] Post. Or else. _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] i know. I was the academy hypocrite. I just couldnt think of a better word _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] A hypocrite is someone who says "don't do this" and then they do it. _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] then why are you here? Hypocrite _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not In Story] I've in the middle of an EXAM. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Quote: [Not in story] Quote: [Not in story] Quote: [Not in story] Quote: [Not in story] Quote: [Not in story] Quote: [Not in story] Post. Or else. _______________ slorp |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not In Story] It has to be on the fringes of the galaxy, or the unknown regions. Otherwise why would the demons reach there first? If you check your NJO books, Commenor is close to Coruscant. So who's the guy who went to get them? _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Also, Flamori, who knows how close Aeril's sphere thingy is to Commenor? It never had an exact location. I'd write some, but I'm mapping for the RPG Group. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Quote: And speaking of that, they did a subtle help in the Mandalorian War. If they were around for that long, I'd say they're more than any ordinary human. _______________ slorp |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not In Story] I intend to bring Levi back to life, only joined with the Levi/Lian clone. And he will have a rematch with Soong before the end. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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