| Star Wars Jedi Academy: Novel - Battle of the Academy | |
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Lian Del Rey - Student  |
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away... STAR WARS The Jedi Academy Episode I Battle of the Academy It has been six years since the fall of the Empire, and Kyle Katarn has defeated Desann, a fallen Jedi Academy student. Imperials fell back and built their blueprints up again. Things had to be redone. Luke Skywalker has chosen young Massadoobie to be his partner in order of the Jedi Academy. Swamptrooper armor has been stripped to defend the Jedi from damage. Despite the fallback of the Empire, rumor is that there is a new ruler, and she has helped out regain control of the galaxy. To prepare for this, Massadoobie is giving heavy training to the Jedi Academy students, doubling their efforts, on the small moon of Yavin 4... _______________ slorp |
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Rampage - Student 
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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In the jungle of Yavin IV, oblivious to the battle in progress at the academy... "I did it! " Johnny Rico looked at the hilt of his saber as it glinted in the sunlight. "I finally am a Jedi Knight." He ignited his saber and smiled at the sight of the emerging shaft of emerald green light. He waved his saber around, fondly recalling the trial he had completed the previous day. Hacking away at a parasitic growth of shrubbery, he once again felt the pain of Nightcrawler's attack in his left rib. The dimunitive furry blue elf was a powerful Jedi, though his misleading appearance was the topic of much unwarranted jibes. He had been the trainer in charge of Johnny's trial. "Ouch!" he dropped his saber and clutched at his side. "Still bruising from that kick, eh?" It was none other than Nightcrawler himself. "You wish, Nighty." said Johnny. "Your attack hurt me as much as a tickle stick would hitting a bantha." "Don't call me Nighty." said Nightcrawler with a frown. "Okay, Nightie." "Don't.." "I didn't call you Nighty. Check the spelling. That's Nightie, with an ie." "Whatever." Nightcrawler shrugged it off. "Knight jocks." "Yeah, well, I still can't get over it. I mean, me, a Jedi Knight! That's like, wow!" "You did well at the trial, Johhny. Everyone there could see it. You really were one with the force." "Thanks, Nightcrawler. That really means a lot to me. At times I still wonder what my parents would have thought of my decision." "I'm sure they would have been proud." "Thanks Nighty. Catch you later." Johhny headed back towards the grand temple. Nightcrawler stood in the clearing for a while after he left, lost in thought. He didn't notice the dark presence in the force behind him, nor did he hear the whoosh of the tranquilizer dart until its tip penetrated his skin. Nightcrawler, Jedi Academy trainer, sank to the ground in a fitful state of paralysis. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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[Not in story] Ha...ha... The original story was incredibly long. I might have to cut it short a couple of pages to clear the HackerBubu/JAserver stuff. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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doobie - Jedi Council 
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[not in story] man, i'm such a badass  _______________ -Academy Leader/Dictator/Defeater of DJ Sith and JACen Solo in the JAK+ Tournament -I do think it (the JA) will help convert dozens, maybe hundreds, to the dork nation... --me |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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For the first time, Massadoobie was overflown with anger. He had been cloned and his clone was the strongest dark side foe he ever met. His rage exploded and he started fighting with the clone. It was all but impossible to count the number of times they were in a saberlock, RDFA break, lungelock or YDFA counter. Both seemed to be of equal skill and neither would give. They clashed again and again until they were both covered with slash mark and close to collapse from exhausted, but the will to fight was still strong in them, and the need to win stronger still. Masadoobie landed hard after a particualrly vicious charge. He struggled to stand and kept his lightsaber facing the ground. The clone seem to anticipate all his moves. I've never met anyone like him, he mused. Then the realization hit. I've never met anyone like him before because he is me. Since he is me, he is a strong as me. But while he has my strenghs, he also has my weaknesses. I've been trying to hard to guess what anyone else would do in his place. I should be trying to guess what I would do. Suddenly, he smiled. He knew what he had to do to win. He looked the clone straight in the eye and spoke. "You are me and I am you, but at the same time we are both different people. There's only enough place for one Masadoobie in this galaxy." After saying so, he threw his saber at the clone. Masadoobie jumped into the air, while the clone blocked the throw. In flight Masadoobie caught his saber and performed a spectacular DFA2. He landed behind the clone, his back to it. The clone froze, then slid to the ground in two neat halves. Massadoobie smiled. DJ Sith had taught him that trick. No matter how hard he tried, he had never been able to counter it. And now he thanked the Force he hadn't. He looked at the fallen clone. "You are strong, my clone. You might even have won if not for one thing. It is not my strenghs who make me who I am. It is my weaknesses. You do not know the difference, that is why you will never win. Remember that." Taking one last look at the clone, he made his way slowly back to the higher levels of the academy. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. This comment was edited by Flamori Athena on Jun 18 2003 10:11am. |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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Those dark burning eyes......such hate.....such anger.... Massadoobie's body exploded into pain. His evry nerve felt on fire. He reached out and searched for the opponent who had hidden himself. "Show yourself!" Massadoobie had now reached the basement of the Academy. It was cold. Mist had enveloped everything. "Well done Massdoobie." The sound of mock applause sounded and a shadowy figure stepped out of the mist. Massadoobie's eyes opened wide with amazement. The mystery figure was a mirror image of himself. That is, except for the eyes. They were filled with anger. Anger, and hate. The figure smiled. "Yes, fear me, Massaddoobie, because you have every right to. I have been following your every move in silence for years. From the moment you arrived in this universe I have never left your side." "I am your clone, remember that little training session you had on Kamino? Well you left a little DNA behind, and I am the result. Carefully raised by my good friend and master, Jigsawcity." "That two-bit freak raised you?" Massadoobie raised an eyebrow. "Mother would have been devastated. The clone ignored him, igniting his saber. His eyes were full of malice. "So...brother...your time in the worlds of the living is over, it is now time for you to become one with the force." Massadoobie's mind was reeling form the shock, he fought to stay focussed and not be distracted by the clone's words. "I will defeat you, I will defeat you you freak!" "My dear Massadoobie, How can you defeat.....yourself?" The mist descended, and the clone's eyes blazed like blood red rubies........ _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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In another part of the academy, Masadoobie regained conciousness and started to walk towards the heart of the academy. All around him he could hear sounds of the fighting, nut he ignored them. He knew what he had to do. Then he dropped down into the temple depths, where a strange, dark figure with hellish burning eyes stepped out of the shadows to confront him. The Dark Side was very powerfull in him. Masadoobie ignited his saber........ _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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Then suddenly all the rifles, lightsabers and Master Yoda's ghost knows what more were pointed at Buzz Vader. His black helmet seemed to shrink. "What is the meaning of this?" The troopers stepped aside. A trooper in red armor, apparently the batalion commander, appeared in front of the two Sith Lords. Suddenly he took his helmet off. "WTF!?!" shouted Buzz and Jigsaw behind him. It was none other than DJ Sith...... _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Jello` - Student 
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[out of story] Whatever, i deleted it, i suck at these _______________ Brady Brothers: Orion-Greg, Furi0us-Peter, Me-Bobby. Long lost cousin to Flash. Midbie Council #007. Ex-JAK. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Heh.. .ermm... Jell-O, we're re-writing an old post. Might want to check out the Song of Harmony thread.  _______________ slorp |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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All of the troopers surrounded the fallen Jedi, and the droidekas rolled into all four corners of the room. They halted and locked into assault position. Wisps of smoke and the acrid smell of burnt leather hung in the air. All trooper rifles were trained on the Jedi and on the sith. The door opened and in strode Buzz Vader, flanked by the jive talking ex-Jedi, Jigsaw city. "Heh, How izzy ken it be to kell Jedi, too dam izzy thets whut...hehehehe" Jigsaw thought he was a dude. "Shut up Jigsaw! " Buzz Vader commanded respect from all corners of the galaxy. "This was too easy for us. Reports are coming in that the Academy Council conference has ended on Yavin. We have to be quick else all the Knights and council members will be upon us before you know it! Take all the clone troopers, and mine every entrance to the academy. Go " Jigsaw city pointed to the clone commanders and left the matrix room. "Droidekas, guard every entrance, Go!" An intercom crackled into life... "Landing bay active council transport landing in 60 Parsecs. All landing personnel to courtyard" Buzz signaled to a shadowy group of figures in the corner of the room. "You mercenaries. One Bothan Crystalline Ruby, for every head of a council member you bring me. Disintegrate the Knights and Trainers.... I have no use for them..."" "30 Seconds to landing" Buzz Vader's black helmet glistened... "So Chosen-One ...today will be a good day to die..........." _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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They were coming closer and closer, when suddenly Jacen Aratan ran into the room. He was grinning strangely. Luke stayed with Exar Kun and Bubu faced Jacen. The Sith both ignited their sabers and dropped into a stance the Jedi had never seen. Luke tried to trap Exar Kun in his own mind for a while, but the Dark lord was too strong for him. “Jedi fool, you are no match for the Dark Side!” Exar Kun sent out a telekinetic mind shock, and Luke fell to the ground into a strange sleep. His own enemy defeated, Exar turned his attention towards Bubu and Jacen. Bubu did a YDFA, and Jacen leapt above him. “The Force betrays you, Jedi!” he shouted, preparing to RDFA down on him. Bubu rolled to the side and kicked Jacen away from him. The Sith jumped up ad used lightning to blast Bubu to the floor, then gripped himand slammed him against the ceiling. Bubu pushed Jacen, freeing himself of the Sith’s grip and RDFA’d down. Jacen jumped out of the way and lunged for Bubu, but Bubu was too fast for him and sabered Jacen in the back. He fell to the floor and didn’t move. Exar Kun sneaked up on Bubu from behind and gripped him. Bubu tried to move but Exar was too powerful. It seemed to be over, when suddenly Exar Kun flew into the air, mercilessly pushed away. He stood up and saw Eclipse on the ground near Bubu. Both Jedi realized that it was not the time to worry about falling to the dark side and started gripping Exar Kun. Exar couldn't even breathe dominated by the power of the two Jedi. Then the doors of the room opened and an entire assault force of battle droids, stormtroopers, clone troopers, Reborn, droidekas and Shadowtroopers ran into the room. "At....last....." mumbled Exar and then lost consciousness. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] Hey, I did try to explain the ending of the first book in Age of War. I'm just going to copy-paste most of the valid parts of the old book and edit them a bit. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Flash - Student 
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................Do we have to rewrite this? Can't you just make changes to the parts you didn't like? |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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[Not in story] Heh Luke, this story was already made, but were complicating it  _______________ slorp |
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Luke Skywalker - Student 
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[Not in story] Sweet, I'm in the story ^_^ (Don't expect me to contribute to it though  , never was good at these sort of things.) _______________  Luke Skywalker
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Vaughn - Student 
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[not in story] ok, i saw this before i read the song of harmony. the orignial point was it to be a fun/somewhat silly/random novel about the jedi academy in jk2. thats what it was originally meant to be. Secondly, there was no ending, because you started the age of war before we got to an ending. in the same sence, the age of war had no ending - it lead on to the song of harmony. basically, your argument doesnt make much sence, if you take into account the reason the novel was made in the first place, and the fact that you started the second one before we (all the authors) had finished the first one _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Vaughn, do you NOT read? Also, the original first story was stupid, and most parts were pointless, and it had nothing related to Star Wars, it was like the whole thing was playing JK2. Also, there was no ending. Yiayia. _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] what was so bad about the first one that made you start over? Is the song of harmony finsihed? _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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Exar Kun's, Eclipse's, and Luke Skywalker's lightsabers activated. The glow of their lightsabers filled the room. Luke charged towards Exar Kun, and Exar Kun had a goofy stance, acting all cool, holding his lightsaber down by his side. "Yaargh!" yelled Luke and Eclipse. Easily, Exar Kun held his lightsaber down and cut off Eclipse's leg. On the falling, his lightsaber flew at Exar Kun, along with Eclipse's, but Exar Kun easily deflected them. "Enough of this charade." Exar Kun leaped in the air. For a few seconds, he hovered over Luke, and performed a DFA2. SSSSSSSSSHHHHWOOOOOOOOOOOO SLASH Luke was too fast for that, and rolled over by the side. He grabbed his lightsaber on the ground. Suddenly, the matrix door slid open and in came Bubu, Jedi Trainer, with his blue lightsaber graciously lit, slowly walking foward, and stopped by Luke. "This party's over," he said cooly. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Parts to not include: Parts from Lord of the Rings Parts of the Dragon Parts of Lianiotte dying a lot Part with GOLLUM (that goes with LotR) Part with Bubu hacking into the JA servers And all the parts that don't seem neccessary that will not effect the parts in the next two novels. Also, since the story stopped right in the middle of it, we're going to have to finish the rest. Master Mideon and Soong, perhaps? _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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Young Massadoobie had a dream. A dream that Jedi were trained and learned all about the light side of the Force. After twenty years of hard training, he has realized his dream. He started to watch the start of a knighting trial. Suddenly, he felt a strong wave of energy from the living Force, tightening a grip around Massadoobie's throat. He struggled to turn only to have the invisible fingers draw tighter. With a concentrated effort, he willed the grip to release. Falling to the ground, gasping for air, he turned and gazed upward to the shrouded figure. He obviously wasn't an academy student, as Massadoobie has never seen him before. Although he was clothed in coarse linen steel gray robes with the musty smelling of corners in an old spanner closet, he exuded a strange dark power. The figure hovered above Massadoobie and said with a booming voice, "Massadoobie, join me, and together we shall rule the galaxy." He threw back his hood to reveal his face. "Ex... Exar Kun!" shouted Massadoobie. Although he was too weak from the grip around his throat, he managed to use the last remaning inch of the Force flowing in his body to push something, starting the alarm. Exar Kun, not being fast enough to stop the alarm, or Massadoobie falling into a coma, grabbed a communicator from his robe. "Bring them in," boomed Exar Kun's voice. "Now." [Not in story] Note that this is before Age of War and Song of Harmony. This is a much better version of the original novel that started the trilogy: http://www.thejediacademy.net/forums_detail_page.php?f_id=259&f_position=153 Note that you must write the basics, and a few details that weren't included in the story. Also the "I'm playing JK2" thing and "respawning" thing is not allowed, especially the part where Bubu gets kicked out of his computer and tries to hack into the Jedi Academy servers. Also note that Flamori 2 nor The Empress was talked about in the first novel. But main ideas that were: The Battle of the Academy Jedi Academy Crystal The Virus (the dead Empress is a reincarnation of the Virus) Dark Crystal Zero's death Flamori 1 using the dark crystal to end the war The Evil Lianiotte (who is alive in this one) Anyway, I'll continue.. [In story] ShadowSith who was running a trial, kicked the door open, and charged towards Exar Kun, knocking him down. His fall created a shockwave, making most of the Stormtroopers who rushed in fall to the ground, and also knocking them unconscious. He used invisibility to sneak past the other Stormtroopers to go inside the pit room, where Chosen One and La Magra were dueling. He told them the situation. They quickly rushed into the Matrix where Exar Kun was already expecting their arrival, apparently after coming off the floor. The Jedi activated their emerald lightsabers. They charged toward Exar Kun. Chosen One performed a DFA2 (mentioned at the beginning of Song of Harmony what happens) at Exar Kun. La Magra lunged at Exar Kun. ShadowSith YDFA'ed Exar Kun. They thought together they could stand a chance. Their thoughts betray them. Exar Kun held out his two hands, draining the three Jedi, sucking the life and energy out of them. He then spun around, having black lightning booming out of all his fingers on his two hands, making them flash all through the Matrix. Chosen One was the last one standing, holding his lightsaber low. Exar Kun used rage, and the energy shockwaves themselves knocked Chosen One to the ground. His lightsaber being activated, cut off his own hand. Exar Kun started laughing like Jabba the Hutt. He saw his next to opponents. Eclipse and the main runner of the Jedi Academy, Luke Skywalker. Chosen One had summoned them before falling into a coma. "Ahh, Luke Skywalker," laughed Exar Kun. "We meet again." _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] I'll start out _______________ slorp |
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