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Star Wars Jedi Academy - Novel: Age of War
Nov 24 2024 08:04am

Lian Del Rey
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Lian Del Rey
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...

STAR WARS


Episode (Who Knows)
Age of War

13 years have passed since the destruction of Desann and Galak's defeat in the BATTLE OF THE ACADEMY. Bodies of those who opposed the academy are scattered throughout THE OLD REBUBLIC THE SECOND.

Strange sightings have been seen in the old inactive planet of YAVIN4. Most have been seen in the destroyed JEDI ACADEMY.

MASSADOOBIE and his long-time partner, DJ SITH, have been sent to YAVIN4, and seek out what the cause is.......

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slorp

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Dec 09 2003 01:55am

Lian Del Rey
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 Lian Del Rey

Bump
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slorp

Apr 30 2003 11:54am

Flamori Athena
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 Flamori Athena

The story has ended...
AAAARRRRGGGGHHHH!!!!!
I miss the forum for two days and the story has ended!
Ah well, at the end of it all, I have only one thing to say.
The title Age of War is a bit of a misnomer, don't you think?
Shouldn't it be about the Jedi and Alliance soilders battling the Emperor's final clone and the Final Imperium throughout the galaxy?

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True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing.


Apr 29 2003 04:13am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
To save up the time and COUGHbettergrammarfixesCOUGH and knowing what's really going on stuff, I already typed up three chapters at least so far. So I can do it Vaughn :P
No really.
I can do it.
I CAN!!
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slorp

Apr 29 2003 04:07am

Vaughn
 - Student
 Vaughn

[not in story]
Dang... thats crazy

nice... new story
Icco, can you type this up?
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When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are.
- Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson


Apr 29 2003 03:16am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Now that it's all over, I'm going to make the sequel to this soon.. :)
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slorp

Apr 29 2003 03:15am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

THE FINAL CHAPTER.

"I've seen better coming from a Stormtrooper," taunted the Empress. She activated her dual lightsaber.

Lianiotte wasn't serverly damaged from the crystal being destroyed. She was just standing by her knees.

The Empress turned her head to Lianiotte. "See how your 'tools' have turned against you!" She threw her lightsaber at Lianiotte.

"Lian!" shouted Josh. He shuddered to think about what happened to Lianiotte. But when he turned his head to Lianiotte, she has dodged it.

Or did she? Lianiotte was lying motionless on the floor.

Josh ran towards Lianiotte and put his hand beneath his head. "Lianiotte! If you go.. we all die!"
"But Josh.. I'm too tired.. heh.. which I hardly ever am. I only sleep one time a year." She shook her head. "But this time..."
Josh watched the blood run down Lianiotte's lip and cheek.
"..well.. I guess I'll break my rule."
She tilted her head.

A green and glowing "X" sign appeared on Lianiotte's forehead.

Josh looked in front of him. His hair started to raise up, and the hole room was flashing and glowing red. He turned around.

It seemed the Empress was on fire. "Is she dying?! ..Because of her masters death.. she becomes nothing now?!"
But Josh was wrong. She was being what they all feared would happen to the Empress.
Empowerment.

Energy was flowing through the Empress's veins.

Josh had to stop her. He charged toward the Empress with his lightsaber in his hands. SWIING!!

DODGE! The Empress quickly dodged his attack. Although the empowerment was finished, she continued to glow.

(If you have Heart of Sword from Rurouni Kenshin, play it :P)

"Pathedic Jedi failure."
She turned her head twice.
A fallen Aayla Secura and a revived Exar Kun walked out of the darkness.
"Long before the Age of War started, I managed to turn these two to the dark side." She started to walk backwards. "If you can manage to destroy these two, then you might even have the PRIVELIDGE to even lay your eyes on me." The Empress disappeared into the darkness, and sat down on her throne.

Exar Kun turned his head to Aayla Secura. In a second, they both turned their heads to Josh.

"Master..
Shadow~G..
Lianiotte...
everybody else..
I cared for!"

A lightsaber sounded. Flamori 1 was behind Josh wearing Flamori 2's clothes. "Taken care of," said Flamori 1 cooly.

"Begin!" echoed the Empress's voice.

To Josh's and Flamori 1's surprise, Aayla Secura and Exar Kun appeared behind their backs.

Quickly avoiding their moves, they charged towards the dark Jedi. They jumped over their heads to perform a YDFA.

With extreme flexibility, Exar Kun and Aayla Secura managed to stay in the middle of the air while saberlocking onto the Jedi's lightsabers.

Flamori 1 started to deal with Aayla Secura while Josh was dealing with Exar Kun.

There were countless specials and saber locks. Over time, Flamori 1 defeated Aayla Secura and joined Josh.

With the same process, eventually Exar Kun died.

They both turned their heads to the darkness where the Empress was sitting.

The Empress started walking up to them.
Slowly.

They just stood there for a few seconds in front of eachother.

"Pathedic Jedi FAILURES!" said the Empress, and almost instantly, their sabers collided.

The Empress kicked Flamori 1 out of the way by spinning around. "Destruction!" shouted the Empress.

Josh started floating mid-air by the black lightning booming out of the Empress's hands. All nearby items flew up to Josh and exploded on impact.

She gripped the two of them, and started bashing their brains into eachother. She then tossed them into the ground. "You like it," she sneered. "This is scarcely the beginning."

Josh and Flamori 1 charged towards the Empress.
"Maukikka Push!" shouted the Empress.
She was pulling their bodies now, but pushing their heads.
CRACK!

They both flew on the ground crying, yelping in pain. Josh crawled over to the motionless Flamori 1, who had a bloody gash on his neck. "Go on.." he said weakly. "I am not about to die yet.. just do your part."

Josh got onto his feet. He touched his neck. He wasn't bleeding as bad as Josh.
But Josh had the last existing Bacta Tank, so he used that. He hoped he made the right choice.

The Empress seemed exactly impossible to beat.

The Empress pushed Josh way back. He charged towards the Empress, but the Empress dropped her lightsaber down (not literally) and it made very bad cuts on Josh, who then collapsed to the ground.

"I wouldn't call this Dooku style. I'd call it... Finish Off." She raised her lightsaber into the air, and started to swing it down for the kill.

But then..
There was a frosty mist sound, and large frozen crystals struck the Empress. The Empress got hit and wounded badly, and flew into the ceiling.
"Raaarrghh!!" she yelled angrily. With Destruction, she melted the ice. She used Black Drain, almost killing everyone.

Except for those who already have been killed.
She looked around. "So these are my opponents.."
She looked at Lianiotte, and then Josh. "Be glad that Lianiotte didn't die completely..
yet..
Otherwise, you'd have tears running down your cheek even after death."

Her own royal ship flew down, and the Empress walked inside. Before going completely in, she stopped.
"I'm going to need a new apprentice.." she muttered to herself. With that, she went in.

Josh crawled his way over to Vaughn. He was dead. He crawled over to Lianiotte. "Thanks.. you saved my life," said Josh thankfully.

"No problem," replied Lianiotte. She raised her hands in the air. Three colored crystals started hovering in the air.
"These are just holograms.. find these crystals - The Blue Crystal of Ocean..
The Green Crystal of Academy Purity..
and the Red Crystal of Blood..
will then you be able to defeat the Empress." She stopped the holograms. "There will be no more clones from me," she said. "Sleep.
Yes...
...sleep."

The End.
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slorp

Apr 29 2003 03:04am

Vaughn
 - Student
 Vaughn

[not in story]
Why Lian, why?

Are you trying to outdo my mega post?!?!

well, lets see what the empress does
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When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are.
- Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson


Apr 29 2003 02:48am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
OK guys. Please do not post until I post after this comment, puhleeze :)
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slorp

Apr 29 2003 02:14am

Vaughn
 - Student
 Vaughn

[not in story]
Long post, ne?

Geeze, what did i really say there? not much.. :/
ah well READ!

Edit: yes, i kept F2 out of it, bring him in, for some crazy phiza to happen Flamori 1
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When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are.
- Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson


This comment was edited by Vaughn on Apr 29 2003 02:15am.

Apr 29 2003 01:54am

Vaughn
 - Student
 Vaughn

Yells, screams, pain
Thats all that Josh knew was happening. He automatically blocked, as if he knew what was comming, but couldn't stop anything. There was a dance rythm, and it was impossible to break.
He felt a great push on his chest. He flew back, and banged his head against the wall. Blackness crowded into his brain.

"Come on Josh, get up!"
"But Master, I'm tired!"
"You will never become a master jedi with that attitude!"
"I dont care, I just want to rest..."

"Where am I?" Josh thought to himself. He looked around.
"I remember this place! I know that waterfall, I know that tree... this is one of the training simulations that Master put me through. But, why am I here?" Josh wondered to himself.

"come on, get up!"
"but Im to tired!!"

"Ah! I remember this... wolves are going to attack, then a flock of birds... and then three dark jedi." Josh said

Just as he said that, a big pack of wolves came.
"Fend them away with the force!"
"Yes master!" the student replied.
the Wolves retreated, as the birds arrived.
"Defend against them! But, do not kill any!"
"Why not?"
"It will distrub the balance" The master and Josh said at the same time.
The birds left

"WHere are you, JEdi?" a dark voice was heard.
"Now, use all your skills to defeat these jedi!"
"But master... I cannot!"
"Belive in yourself, once you do, you can do anything!"

the Dark jedi were too much for the young student to handle. Josh took his oppurtunity. He Jumped infront of the student, protecting him.
"Back off Darkies!" Josh said weilding the saber.
"Master, who is that?" the student asked.
"Someone who you will meet at a later time" the Master replied.

Josh fended off the dark jedi with relitive ease, using both his sabers almost perfectly.
"master, he is pretty good! Can you beat him?"
"Maybe. It depends on how good he's feeling" the master replied.

"Good sir, I am sorry for disturbing your training. May I have a word with you?" Josh asked
"sure"

"Master, I need your help. How can I defeat an evil so great, that not even the light side jedi crystal can defeat it?"
"Trust in yourself Josh. Please, call me Shadow~G. You fight well, hopefully my student... you... will be more focused. Well, trust in yourself. Fight not to kill, but to protect. When you do, you will become unstoppable. Go now, they need you..."

Josh snapped awake. He got to his feet. Vaughn and the Empress were in a saberlock. She pushed him down. HE (Vaughn) was badly damaged. The Empress went Dooku style, and was about to kill Vaughn.
"Stop!" Josh yelled
"I thought you were dead. You are stronger than i thought" the Empress said.
"well, you didnt count on much. Your fight is with me, not my master."
"You assume too much. When your master turned to the light side, I was born. Born with the seul perpose to kill him. I was sent by the force itself." The Empress said angrily
"Maybe, but I am directly from the Light side, and I am the sworn protecter of everything good. He is a good guy; you are not. You must feel justice!"
"What is justice? Death for the poor? Money for the rich? You can't defeat me! I tire of this, noncense! I will go 75% power to destroy you, and everything you stand for!" the Empress said

Everyone was taken aback. Her force power seemed to increase dramastically.
"Try this one for size!" the Empress said.
"Very nice, but you forget one thing. As the protector of all that is good, directly from the Light side, I get all the pain from the people you, and the dark side, has killed! Because of that, I am much stronger than youll ever imagine!!!" Josh said while powering up. Their force skills were evenly matched.
"It is obvious that this... contest, cannot be decided by our knolwege of the force... but by our skills with a lightsaber!" The empress said while igniting her saber.
"Fine then" Josh said, igniting both of his sabers.

They clashed. Their skills were incredible. Now, Josh was ready for anything. Any push/pull he would counter instantly, and his saber style was incredible (holding both sabers together, producing a double blade (ie, instead of | , it was || , kinda funky)
Amist the power comming off the two, Vaughn was revived. He looks up. He sees his Padawan and the Empress battle. They are evenly matched. He gets up and sheaths his lightsword. The fight continues between Josh and the Empress.
At one moment, Josh has his saber in the wrong place. Seing this, the Empress leaps at the oppurtunity. Her saber gets under his, and cuts him. Josh falls down, in pain. The Empress pulls another Dooku. Seing this, Vaughn (using his incredible speed) closes the distance, and preforms a 'battou-jitsu' (draws his lightsword out of the sheath, very quickly and with precision) He blocks the Empress' saber, sending her back, and stumbling over Josh. After he got up and composed himself, he looked at the Empress.
"You know, your awfully pretty for an evil sith. Maybe, in a different universe, my evil counterpart and you would make a formidble team. But not here. This ends now!"
"Strong words. Maybe your saber is as strong as they are" the Empress challenged
"heh, its stronger" Vaughn said.

The empress charged at Vaughn. She did not expect what happened next. Instead of trying to dodge, he ran strait into her. His saber style was impressive, but not nothing the empress had seen before. Suddenly, he sped up. His hands moving in blurs, the jedi strained to see his saber (sword) move. Empress took the wrong side of the blade. Right across the chest. She let out a scream
"Behemeth! How could you hit me? I am the strongest!"
Vaughn sheathed his sword.
"You fool. I was once dark. That is how I could tell what you were doing. Any of your force attacks did not hurt me that much. Remember? When you releaced your black lightning, I could still move and breath afterwards. Most of the other people were fried very badly; I was just hurt, but i could still take it. I was once the most evil creature in any universe. But I was shown the light. And you can still see it! Just join us. Throw away your evil, and destroy the dark saber crystal." Vaughn said.
"Ill do something more dangerous than that!" The empress took out the Academy Crystal. She threw it against the ground.
The moment it hit, time seemed to freeze. Ulic, Bubu, DJ, Doobie and Vaughn all looked like they were hit hard. The crystal shattered. Then, it burst into flames.
Bubu, Ulic and Vaughn, fell to the ground. Writhling in pain.
Josh woke up.
"MASTER!!!" he screamed
"Wake up.. come on... wake up!"
"Josh... take this... defeat the empress...It is time for me to die...I have done alot of bad things in my life... but I would like you to tell the students at the Black Academy... that... there will be.... a... new... leader...soon" Vaughn said.
"DOnt go master... dont go!"
"Josh, live for yourself...if you do, you will be... unstoppable" Vaughn said... and he died.
Ulic and Bubu looked at eachother.
"Are we dying father?" Bubu asked.
"No... we are just losing our powers. While you still can, check on the rest of the Belouves...I think that part of the crystal held the Belouve family..."Ulic said in a weak voice
"then why...did Shadow~G die?"
"he was unofficially part of the family, remember Bubu?" DJ said, "Now rest, you must survive this..."

"Empress!" Josh said very angrily. "Now, You die!"
With that, Josh used his newfound power (hate) and attacked the Empress.

[not in story - incase you were wondering, make the thing Vaughn Gave Josh interesting; I have it as a 5 yen coin attached on yellow string]
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When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are.
- Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson


Apr 29 2003 01:07am

Vaughn
 - Student
 Vaughn

[not in story]
but remember Lian, your clones change every time... that doesn't mean that the empress is automatically cool!
OH!!!
Vaughn 50,000
Lian 48,974
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When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are.
- Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson


This comment was edited by Vaughn on Apr 29 2003 01:07am.

Apr 29 2003 12:32am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Because the Empress is a clone of Lianiotte and Lianiotte is COOL :P

Lianiotte: 48,974
Vaughn: 1
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slorp

Apr 28 2003 11:26pm

Vaughn
 - Student
 Vaughn

[not in story]
>_< you got me there

Lian .5, Vaughn 1

allright, so i guess he has seen one more black saber, but... damn.
wait, if it was in a different galaxy, and when i say galaxies i usually mean dimensions/universes, then how could it have been the empress'? OH!
boomb
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When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are.
- Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson


Apr 28 2003 03:28pm

Eclipse DKana
 - Student
 Eclipse DKana

[not in story]

see I disappeared again :P

Apr 28 2003 05:01am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Edited it now, frickety frick frick :)

Also Vaughn, this is what you said in a post, a long time ago..:

Shing! Slash! A black lightsaber flashed.
"Ow, was that a mosqutio?" Flamori 2 asked.
"You are tougher than you look," a familiar voice said.
"....Vaughn? But,,j yiu were taken by the virus and killed! How are you..." Aeth asked in shock.

...blahblahblah...

Anyway Shadow~G said he's only seen one other, but that was in another galaxy

He does!
Look at the first page
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slorp

Apr 28 2003 03:06am

Vaughn
 - Student
 Vaughn

[not in story]
DOH! (about empress' saber. remember, only 1 person in history made one!!! :( ah well, ill change it...2 people. Shadow~G and The Empress)
about the sword, remember how i introduced the light sword a long time ago? Its basically a lightsaber katana. The same properties as a katana (the curve, the cut on swing, one sharp side), but a lightsaber (so it can cut though most objects, and withstand many beatings)
thats why you think its like kenshin's sword. Well, i invented lightswords a long time before i saw kenshin, i just havent thought about them in a while. Note, i made it so that the lightsword can be ignited in the sheath for the dou Ryu sen (if you remember what that is)

Note: why didnt you write?

Edit: where did it say that Evil Lian had any othe rcolour, i was saying the empress' red, and you said BTW Vaughn: Evil Lianiotte has a black saber. Thats all good, but i never said hers wasnt black, i just didnt specify. I specified on the Empress, which you did not [(Vaughn 1, Lian 0 ) JK]

Edit 2: Gah! make up your mind

Edit 3: updated scoreboard; Vaughn 1.5, Lianiotte -0.5! (for that mistake on your character)
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When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are.
- Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson


This comment was edited by Vaughn on Apr 28 2003 04:18am.

Apr 28 2003 02:53am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Vaughn, that sword is too much like Kenshin's :)

BTW, Empress has a black lightsaber.

[Edit]
Edited it lol, frickety frick frick :P
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slorp

This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on Apr 28 2003 03:58am.

Apr 27 2003 04:05pm

Vaughn
 - Student
 Vaughn

[note: just in case anybody was wondering, Josh has the black lightsaber, so Shadow~G calls himself Vaughn when he has his green saber. Just so you know who im reffering to]

"DIE EMPRESS!" Soong yelled
"Not today JEDI!" the Empress yelled
"Too bad Im not a jedi!" Soong replied as he charged the Empress.

the scene seemded to go slow motion. Soongs saber was closing in on the Empress. It seemd as if it took a full 15 seconds to get to her. At the last moment, Evil Lianiotte jumped infront of the saber. Time resumed. Evil Lianiotte was stabbed, and she died almost instantly.
"heh... Mistress...*cough*...win...for us" and with that, Evil Lianiotte died.
"She looks very pretty, just lying there." Josh said to himself.
"Most people look more handsome or beautiful when they die. Its strange; as if they found peace. But be careful, something is going to happen... I feel it." Vaughn said.
"HAHAHA now you can't possibly win! I am INVINCABLE!!!" the Empress yelled.
You could feel the force vibrating from her. Her force power increased by a third.
"Now you can't win!" the Empress said.
"Cant we?" Lian and Levi said in unison.\
"If you check your force levels, you will see that we increased also" Levi said.
"thats true!" Bubu said in surprise.
"If you remember, they are the same person. When one of them dies, the surviving ones become more powerful. Thats why in the end of the clone wars, the clones were almost impossible to kill." Doobie said.
Levi and Lian got to their ready positions.
"its our fight now.. are you ready?" Lian said.
"It depends... are you ready... to die?" the Empress asked.
"HERE WE COME!" Levi and Lian yelled in unison.

No one had seen the level of fighting here. It was crazy, as if they had coreographed it. The empress dodged one swing, blocked another, and repeated. She was magnificent in dueling. However, Levi and Lian got the wrong side of her saber. Levi was cut horribly, and Lian was knocked back from a force push.
"Lian!" Josh yelled
"Levi!" Lian whispered.
"Lianiotte, my sister...*cough* host. Now that I'm dead, the empress will be even stronger! Now, you must run, or destroy her. Do what is right! My time...is...up" And with that, Levi died.
The newformed power swelled up in Lian.
"Good bye, brother" She said.
she stood up, her eyes narrowed. She was angry. She turned and pointed her lightsaber at the Empress.
"Now,you die!" Lian said
"you are foolish. I am also stronger. You cannot defeat me, because I will always be stronger than you!" the Empress said.
"Lianiotte! Stay back. Let Josh and I handle this" Vaughn said.
"No, this is my..."
"LIAN! get a grips of yourself. What she says is true. She has the darkside force crystal. She is much more powerful. If you perish, she will become invincable! We need you to stay alive." Ulic said
"Alright" Lian said while she disengaged her saber.
"Comeon Josh, let us end this here" Vaughn said

"Empress. You must feel lucky. You get to be the first who feels the new blade," Vaughn said as he drew his lightsword, "it may look blunt, but when i turn it on, it becomes a lightsaber on one side. But its very special. You can hold the blade, without getting cut too much. It is specifically engenerred to cut on the swing. Now... it is time for you to die." Vaughn said as he ignited his sword.
Josh ignited his orange and his yellow long sabers, keeping his master's saber and his shortsaber at his side.
"Let us begin!" the Empress said.

Four colours joined the battle. The Empress' black, Josh's yellow and orange, and Vaughn's green. All you could hear were screams. the battle continued

[not in story - remember, Vaughn has become faster (IE HitenMitsurigi Ryu fast... Godspeed), again, if no one writes, i will! and I will ruin the story! Muahahaha (by ending it... then not.. like i did last time :P)]
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When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are.
- Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson


This comment was edited by Vaughn on Apr 28 2003 04:18am.

Apr 27 2003 03:34pm

Vaughn
 - Student
 Vaughn

[not in story] doobie is there, he just didnt say anything
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When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are.
- Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson


Apr 27 2003 12:41pm

Flamori Athena
 - Student
 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
Nooooooo you don't!
Oh yeah, and what happened to Doobie anyway?
[In story]

The Empress rushed towards the Jedi, but Mideon and Soong leapt in to engage her, sabers flashing. The Empress snarled and emitted a wave of pure force energy, knocking them both away.

"Mideon! Soong!" yelled DJ Sith, but the Empress cut him short.

"You should be worrying about yourself, Jedi!" she shouted, a maelstrom of force lightning gathering to strike in her hands.

Seemingly out of nowhere, Lian and Levi moved to head off the Empress.

“This fight is between us, Empress.” said Levi.

“So, “ hissed the Empress. “You are the male clone of Lianiotte. Levi, the fallen Jedi.”

“That’s right,” Levi didn’t waste another second. He did a lunge at warp speed, but the Empress teleported away and thrust her saber at Lian. Empowered by the force crystal, Lian easily parried and launched a counterattack, spinning in from the right, but breaking off in midstrike then hacking down in yellow stance.

The Empress ducked then came in from the side, but Lian leapt above the cut and kicked the Empress to the floor.

Before she could get an attack in, however, the Empress rolled to her feet and did a six stroke blue stance combo, three from the left, then three from the right, ending it in a sudden switch to red stance, and RDFA’d the unsuspecting Lian. Her lightsaber was knocked out of her hands, and she fell to the floor.

“Now, witness the power of the Dark Side!” cried the Empress, lightning, flame and shrapnel gathering around her as she prepared to strike.

Suddenly, Levi pushed her into a wall. Lian jumped back into the attack as the Jedi watched, healing and empowering the two with the force.

The battle raged on, and the Evil Lianiotte suddenly decided to join in. Shadow~G, Josh, Eclipse and Flamori 1 also entered the battle, the light of their sabers casting eerie shadows on the walls.

[Not in story]
Please don’t bring in F2 yet. I have something special planned for him. OK? OK.
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True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing.


Apr 27 2003 05:26am

Vaughn
 - Student
 Vaughn

"So, with the shard, we can win, right?" Evil Lianiotte asked.
"This is what the shard does. The crystal grows every time a new student arrives, or is born. With this new student/birth, part of them is infused in the crystal. This crystal gives them power, life, and skill. By destroying the part of the crystal that they are in, destroys them. Do you understand?" the Empress explained
"Yes, but this is the question... which lives are encased in this crystal?"
"we will find out."


"I suddenly have a bad feeling" Bubu said.
"Me too. Its as if my life suddenly fells as if its ending." Ulic said.
"Thats forseeing the future, But the question is, when and why?" Silk replied.
"I can vouch for that" DJ said.
"If you remember back to the old academy war, the crystal was broken up. We retreived most of it, but the Virus took one shard. Im assuming that shard is now in the hands of some evil, but i dont know whom" DJ explained.
"So, somewhere, someone has a force crystal with one of our lives in it?" Bubu asked.
"Yes" DJ said.
"why am i suddenly paranoid?" Flamori 1 asked.
"Dont be. Now it is time to fight." Vaughn said.

The jedi walked to where they felt the disturbance in the force.
"Where here" Lian whispered.

"Welcome... to your doom!" the Evil Lianiotte said as she ignited her saber.
"We have no buisness with you. Bring your master here. All we need is the shard, and we will be on our way." Ulic said.
"HAHAHAHAHA," Elian laughed,"and how am I to belive that? Those two wish to kill us. I cannot let that happen. DIE!"
Elian rushed Mideon and Soong.
"Stop" Josh said as he blocked Elian's saber. "Bring your mistress here, and we will be on our way"
"Why should I belive you?" Elian asked.
"because we do not wish to harm anyone." Josh replied.
ELian turned off her saber. She walked down the path a few steps. She turned around.
"If you fight my mistress, you shall perish"
"we are willing to take that chanse" Vaughn said.
"Good. Empress, they are here"
The empress appeared from the dark.
"How pleasant it was for you to join us... I assume you are looking for this?" She said holding the shard.
"Give it to us, and no one will get hurt..." DJ said

"Not on your life!" the empress said while charging.

[not in story] its late, and i wanna do something else now... so if no one writes, ill finish the scene soon
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When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are.
- Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson


Apr 27 2003 03:26am

Flamori Athena
 - Student
 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
Not me. :D

/amlazy
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True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing.


Apr 26 2003 02:10pm

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Somebody write already!
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slorp

Apr 26 2003 12:11pm

Flamori Athena
 - Student
 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
Just copy the word "Shadow~G" and Ctrl V.
Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G Shadow~G
:D
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True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing.


Apr 25 2003 11:23am

Eclipse DKana
 - Student
 Eclipse DKana

[not in story]

Why do I always disappear:confused: :mad:

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