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Carve - Student  |
Hey guys... this is just something I've been fiddling wity now and then. I wrote most of it in one day, but came back and added the last couple paragraphs. Just yesterday I noticed again, did some editing and touch-ups, and was curious what you guys thought of it. So here it is: http://www3.telus.net/superfluosity/story.html If you read it I would really appreciate feedback, suggestions, opinions, anything! At the very least... give it a rating =) P.S. I voted myself "3" so I could see the results. _______________ © This post was edited by Carve on Sep 10 2004 08:08pm. |
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Waddya think? 1 = sux 5 = sex wee
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JamesF1 - Student 
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Not bad, not bad at all  _______________ Website |
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