| BREAKOUT - Roans Tales Book 1 Part 1 | |
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Roan Belouve - Retired  |
A story I am writing still not finished but here's part 1. Hope you Enjoy comments welcome _______________ *Bro to Vaxxla,Padawan of FiZZandOdan-Wei Part of the mighty Belouve Dynasty-Knight of Nippledom.Twin of Selphestal!**Proud Master to Kaelis and Acura Friend to anyone who would call me the same  . Pic by the amazing Majno (merry) |
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Hitokiri - Student 
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Great so far, however, you need to re-check your spelling, grammar, and punctuation.  _______________ Ph34r m1 1337 5k1llz! |
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DarthMike - Student 
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Quote: /me looks at poll Everyone's a critic and they didn't have the guts to post who they are and say why? Oh well I won't give up the day job ok i was the one who voted no. I only read the first chapter and im sure it woulda gotten better if id kept reading but im just lazy like that.  _______________ "You can't get Windows on a Mac because the drivers are not compatible." --- Some dude from the Geek Squad "So if you have quad-core, you have four times the RAM, right?" --- Some guy at Best Buy This comment was edited by DarthMike on Aug 03 2005 07:37pm. |
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Majno - Padawan 
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Keep writing and I'll keep reading bro, good work _______________ " You've just taken your first steps into a larger world. " - Ben. |
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SaZ - Student 
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lol no worries roan its great story well maybe you should just make it a bit more simple for us noob-brained ppls hehe still great stuff  _______________ playing jk3 since 30th of january (2005), member since 1st of february. [Unofficial Master to Vision and Z�diac ] If you can make a fool of yourself infront of 300 people you can do anything - Jaiko D'kana |
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Roan Belouve - Retired 
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/me looks at poll Everyone's a critic and they didn't have the guts to post who they are and say why? Oh well I won't give up the day job _______________ *Bro to Vaxxla,Padawan of FiZZandOdan-Wei Part of the mighty Belouve Dynasty-Knight of Nippledom.Twin of Selphestal!**Proud Master to Kaelis and Acura Friend to anyone who would call me the same . Pic by the amazing Majno (merry)
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SaZ - Student
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aww it started to get interesting and BOOM - to be continued _______________ playing jk3 since 30th of january (2005), member since 1st of february. [Unofficial Master to Vision and Z�diac ] If you can make a fool of yourself infront of 300 people you can do anything - Jaiko D'kana This comment was edited by SaZ on Aug 02 2005 11:20pm. |
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