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Hip-Hop Mixtape Cover
Apr 24 2006 07:55am

CuZzA
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CuZzA
There's nothing much to comment on really because it's not finished yet, but I would like some feedback. What I mainly want feedback on is the blending because I think it's something I've succeeded on in this piece.

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The finished version will have text on aswell :)

Thanks guys,
-CuZ

Edit: I also think that the "no flaming people's work" rule is stupid, so, please, if you think something does need desperatly changing, I would appreciate it if you say. This is because I'm never going to get better as a designer if all I get is "FANTASTIC WORK" from everybody (Unless it really is fantastic ;):P:D)
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This post was edited by CuZzA on Apr 24 2006 07:57am.

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Apr 25 2006 03:27pm

Sared
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 Sared

The whole glowy thing around him is too.....'undefined' may be the work I'm looking for. It's clearly there in some areas, and not quite there in some areas. Unless thats your intent.
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Apr 24 2006 10:03pm

DarthMike
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 DarthMike

ITS SH1T DO THE WHOLE THING OVER. ACTUALLY YOU SHOULD JUST GIVE UP, YOU SUCK TOO MUCH.




No not rly dude, looks allright. I would question the style, but the art and blending looks good.
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Apr 24 2006 06:17pm

CuZzA
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 CuZzA

Quote:
It blends very well. I don't think the person in the picture looks like he is actually a part of the background picture, but you only really notice that if you look at it all over really closely for a bit.


Sometimes, the main render in a graphic like this (mixtape cover) isn't supposed to look as if it's in the background...but only sometimes
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Apr 24 2006 06:16pm

CuZzA
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 CuZzA

Quote:
There is a difference between flaming and constuctive criticism y'know ;)


If I get a post saying it's sh1t, then I'll take that as constructive critism aslong as he/she gives a reason
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Apr 24 2006 11:19am

Setementor
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 Setementor

It doesn't look bad. It blends very well. I don't think the person in the picture looks like he is actually a part of the background picture, but you only really notice that if you look at it all over really closely for a bit. Still, very good job. It blends well enough I think. :)

Apr 24 2006 11:15am

Eica
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 Eica

There is a difference between flaming and constuctive criticism y'know ;)
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Apr 24 2006 10:32am

AvaloN
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 AvaloN

looking good

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