| My first, 100% finished song ! :P | |
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_Muro_ - Student  |
Here it is ^^
I wanna know critic opininons from all of you guys hehe 
LINK: http://lcs.net.pl/muro/Spinv2.rar _______________ *Proud comment owner of: Dash Starlight's - 700th, Buster Senatu's - 100th, Yuken Zalak's - 250th, Laziana's - 100th, Para's - 75th, Zeke Asakura's - 800th! |
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Maher - Jedi Knight 
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btw great song...period _______________ Still here | My Lightsaber |
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_Muro_ - Student 
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Henkes, great thx for advice they are very useful I'm not good with percussion so in this first part of the song my friend helped me, which is playing on drums ^^
Roan, thank You for compliment, it's nice of You to think that way, but I don't think it's talent It's just love for the music ^^ I promise You all that I'll make christmas song ! ;D
DJ Sith, I used Cubase SX and this dizzines maybe caused with the help of few effects that I gave to the guitars to make it more listenable ;P I don't have a good guitar so I had to do it 
Thank You all for your critic words and good advices ! _______________ *Proud comment owner of: Dash Starlight's - 700th, Buster Senatu's - 100th, Yuken Zalak's - 250th, Laziana's - 100th, Para's - 75th, Zeke Asakura's - 800th!
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DJ Sith - Jedi Council 
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What did you record with this with? This is a good song, but you sound scared as hell.
Edit: The alternating stereo thing makes the song hard to listen to on headphones. Makes me dizzy. _______________ My car is made of Nerf. This comment was edited by DJ Sith on Nov 02 2006 07:24am. |
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Roan Belouve - Retired 
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Muro
That shows real talent. Nice song and Alex is right, Christmas Song must be next on the list _______________ *Bro to Vaxxla,Padawan of FiZZandOdan-Wei Part of the mighty Belouve Dynasty-Knight of Nippledom.Twin of Selphestal!**Proud Master to Kaelis and Acura Friend to anyone who would call me the same . Pic by the amazing Majno (merry)
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Henkes - Student 
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Sounds nice!
Only remark though... I bet you used a drum computer for the drums... In the beginning the double drum kick on the 3 and 3Ah sound good, but in the rest of the song i sugges t you use a kick only in 1 and 3, not the 3Ah. also use a snare on 2 and 4, this will improve the flow of the song i think... but good job! I enjoyed listening to it! _______________ Get on your feet and do the Funky Alfonzo! |
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Setementor - Jedi Master 
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Quote: Maybe I did it subconsciously and made my vocals a little quieter cuz I'm a shy guy you know ^^
I know...so snap out of it and stop being shy! You can do it! This was nearly perfect as it is! 
Oh, and a christmas song would be awesome! I don't care how good it turns out, just give it whatever you've got!  |
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_Muro_ - Student 
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Maybe I did it subconsciously and made my vocals a little quieter cuz I'm a shy guy you know ^^ _______________ *Proud comment owner of: Dash Starlight's - 700th, Buster Senatu's - 100th, Yuken Zalak's - 250th, Laziana's - 100th, Para's - 75th, Zeke Asakura's - 800th!
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Setementor - Jedi Master
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The voice sounded a tad bit too quiet in some places and my ears did seem a little sensitive to the sound, but apart from that, good job. |
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Sho Koon - Student 
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I think it is a very good one for a first song.
Your voice makes me feel calm with the music. I put it on loop. _______________ Proud owner of Malak's 50th and special 300th, Alex D'Kana's 3600th and 4000th, Laziana's 200th and [Jawa][Obi-Wan][SW]'s 1300th comment. |
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_Muro_ - Student
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Lol ! xD Ok I'll think of something ;P
By the way Alex great thx for opinion ! _______________ *Proud comment owner of: Dash Starlight's - 700th, Buster Senatu's - 100th, Yuken Zalak's - 250th, Laziana's - 100th, Para's - 75th, Zeke Asakura's - 800th!
This comment was edited by _Muro_ on Nov 01 2006 12:26am. |
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Alex Dkana - Staff 
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Quote: Do a christmas song!! _______________ To strive, to seek, to find, and not to yield | Unbowed, Unbent, Unbroken | Rhaiko D'kana - SWTOR EU Guild Co-Founder | Is it what the teacher, teaches? Or what the student learns? A Dkana |
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Rosie - Student 
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Do a christmas song!! |
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Alex Dkana - Staff
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I thought it was really good.
Your vocals were a bit quiet in places, at least to me, however they worked well, and the music itself was very good, one bit about 1:50 into the track i was particularly impressed by. Some nice guitar work.Can't think of any other critisims ofhand. Nice work. _______________ To strive, to seek, to find, and not to yield | Unbowed, Unbent, Unbroken | Rhaiko D'kana - SWTOR EU Guild Co-Founder | Is it what the teacher, teaches? Or what the student learns? A Dkana |
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