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Lian Del Rey - Student  |
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away... STAR WARS The Jedi Academy Episode 3 Song of Harmony Six years have passed since all the casualties in the Age of War. The Empress has a fled to the planet of Coruscant to make a hidden base there, leaving the the Deathstar completely defenseless. Josh, who has managed to keep from morning the death of his master, Vaughn or more commonly now known as Shadow~G, has gone to the planet of Naboo where they are making the new Jedi Academy. There are rumors that the Empress got a new apprentice from the Jedi Academy. But from all messages from the Empress, she claims she has no apprentice. However, there are now more casualties reported from Coruscant now more than ever. Now, Josh and his fellow Jedi are disguised as imperialists to interrogate any other imperial and discover what is the source of this problem.. _______________ slorp |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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The air around Soong exploded into flame as the Sith whipped his lightsabers forward, ripping up stone and tile. Jets of fire and lightning spun towards Levi, who responded by holding out his spear before him in a horizontal position, the fingers of his right hand outstretched. Soong flew up the stairway, slashing and stabbing at Levi as the guardian spun his spear in a circle, abosrbing most of the attack. Soong's left saber clashed with Levi's spear, the guardian took a quick step forward to throw him off even as another blade snapped just inches way from his ear. Soong whirled, attacking at a speed sufficient to take out a roomful of Jedi. But Levi was no Jedi, and not a flash of red found its way past the guardian's defending spear. Snarling, Soong unleashed a storm of lightning fast strikes onto Levi's spear, then used the Force to rip up the ground at his feet. The guardian leapt backwards calmly, supported by the Force. Before his feet could touch the ground, Soong sent a hundred trailing jets of fire to meet him. Levi spun his spear again, blocking some and dodging the rest. Levi touched down, turning on his heel to face Soong. His spear was glowing unnaturally, held before him in a guard. "Why won't you attack, guardian?" Soong let his sabers fall again. "Are you afraid? Hmm? Running and defending...no matter how well you dodge, your good fortune won't hold out forever." "Actually, Soong," said Levi. "I think you're the one unclear on the situation. I've been doing nothing but defending since this battle started, and none of your attacks have even come close to touching me. Heck, you'd be dead right now if it weren't for your dark side powers." "All that," said Soong calmly. "Is about to change right now." He betrayed no movement that Levi could see, and every attempt to probe his mind turned out fruitless. "Is that so?" Levi's face was indifferent, though his heart was pounding. "I don't see-" He was rudely interrupted by the walls on either side of him, which abruptly exploded. Levi was thrown backwards into the stairs, feeling a few of his ribs crack as he did so. "It's over!" Soong's truimphant voice rang through the dust in the air. Wincing with pain, Levi gripped the edge of the stair with his hands and thrust himself upwards into the air, landing on his feet several steps back. "Not yet it isn't!" he shouted. He heard a laugh, then the walls exploded again. But Levi was already gone, barreling down the corridor at an impossible speed. Soong didn't have time to react as the guardian leapt out of the dust cloud, his spear already gone from his hand. Soong jumped backwards, and Levi's spear appeared in the ground where he had been a second ago. The guardian retrieved his spear from the ground, then flew at Soong to strike again. Soong quickly returned his sabers to their usual length, and parried the attack easily. Levi leapt and dived at Soong from above, the Sith rolled onto his back and kicked Levi the rest of the way down the stairs. Then he followed him down. They had now reached the foot of the stairs, and were in a hallway lined with force crystals. Statues of ancient Sith Lords stood at between the crystals. A huge bronze door stood at the other end of the room. Levi got to his feet. "Congratulations." he said, blood trickling from his forehead. "You're only the second person to have ever made it this far. And you'd be surprised how many have tried." "And I don't plan to stop at second," replied Soong. Then he attacked. The two clashed again and again, circling, attacking, parrying, retreating, then jumping back in to strike again. Levi launched into a far lunge, Soong leapt above to strike him when he passed. Levi rolled out of the way, then shot towards Soong, slashing upwards with his spear. Soong feinted a parry, then leapt sideways to dodge the attack, catching Levi off balance. Levi recovered quickly, blocking Soong's attack with a flick of the wrist. Soong jumped high, throwing the saber in his left hand at Levi's feet while pulling into an RDFA with his right. Levi leapt above and backwards away from Soong, then caught Soong's saber in a deadlock. Levi flashed Soong a confident smile. His spear was indefinitely longer than Soong's lightsaber. There was no question as to who would win the lock. None at all. . "Looks like this battle's over." He studied the Sith's face. It was completely composed "You're good," said Soong. "But even you can't remember everything. That's what I was counting on." Levi frowned. Strange. It was almost as if...then he felt a burning pain across his back. Sithspit! He had forgotten about the other saber. There was no blood, but the lightsaber had done too much damage. Levi fell to the floor, his spear coming to rest beside him with a clatter. His pain was numbed by the shock of his own death. Then a warm sleepiness washed over him and he closed his eyes and to become one with the Force. Soong watched as the guardian fell, almost gracefully, and closed his eyes never to open them again. Levi had been a worthy adversary, and had the situation been different, Soong would have enjoyed fighting with him by his side. But Levi had resolved to fight to the death, and it could not have ended any other way. With a final, parting nod towards Levi, Soong walked down the hall into the depths of the Sith temple. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. This comment was edited by Flamori Athena on Mar 03 2004 02:11pm. |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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[Not In Story] We're fighting a WAR here, who's so free to go get a couple of mercenary Jedi out of retirement? The battle would be over by the time they even reached Aeril! space travel takes time, even hyperspace travel. Also: The White Academy Jedi. They. Are. Only. Human. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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Kenji Kamidake and Selsius are Jedi of the Jedi Academy who have been venturing through Commenor for many years. Although since there have been reports of the hotel being attacked by a shadowy fiend called, "The Empress," their nervousness has taken up a notch. Kenji, especially, for he was around before most people even knew the Empress. He has been thrown around by the Empress, Aeril, even the Evil Lianiotte, months before the Battle of the Academy period. He still relies on a relaxing life, soaking in richness and credits, living out his remaining life as an unnoticed merchant in the streets of Commenor. Selsius has done well as his job as a Republic Soldier and, along with Kenji, has been rewarded a lightsaber. He's ventured with Kenji, and always will, and will take over Kenji's place when Kenji has become one with the Force. They both are Jedi of the Jedi Academy. But neither of them have known about the Battle of the Academy, they never knew how much involved the Academy was in the Age of War, and they've never even heard of the Song of Harmony. But that's all going to change. Kenji walked over to his stand as he gave a rifle to a silver-skinned rodian, waving at him. He wasn't old, but he wasn't young. He wasn't in the middle, either. Selsius was resting on the wall, E-11 in hand, lightsaber on belt, waiting for if anybody would dare to break the law in his sight. Kenji went back to his work station, working on his new modified version of the jetpack. "I'm getting to old for this," he grumbled. "Nonsense, old friend," Selsius said. "You're not that much older than me, and I'm not old." "No," he said. "I'm too old for being a weapons merchant. I should have taken my promotions when I had the chance." Selsius shrugged. Kenji walked back over to the stand when a figure in Jedi robes approached. "Good afternoon," he said. "What would you like to buy?" Kenji asked. "I have no use for guns," he said, "and instead I'm telling you about this thing that's gone on the Jedi Academy." "Continue." "For many years, the Jedi Academy has gone through many... difficulties. Wars, battles, deaths, and all that. You should come out of weapons selling and help us Jedi in the Academy's cause." "Back to the Academy?" Kenji asked. "Me and many others have already finished our training and have become members of the Jedi Order. Why should we go back now?" "It's not like that," the Jedi continued. "The Empress has arisen again—" "Ohh, I hate that person." "—and her former master, Aeril—" "Will this madness end?" "—is back too. Evil Lianiotte—" "All right, all right!" Kenji shouted. "I get the point," he said. "The Jedi Academy is under attack. Or we are attacking something. Either way we're going through something that involves fighting." "Here are the directions to where the Jedi are," he said, as he passed over an electronic device. "So, will you come?" "Let me sell a few guns, and I'll consider it," Kenji said. The Jedi walked off into the crowd of Commenor. "What now?" Selsius asked. "Pack your things," Kenji said with a grin. "We're going." _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student 
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[not in story] everyone asks questions Lian. About them not talking... well, i thought people would not be happy if i just talked about the black academy knights, and neglected the white academy members. Even so... if there was a HUGE disturbance in the force, you're going to wonder what happened. what was so confusing about it? basically, Isonic, traumatized by the death of Thrandiul, went crazy. He shot a black-hole particle into the midst of the demon fleet, and activated it, killing most of the ships in the vicinity, as the white and black academy ships flew away. [in story] "Isonic... do you read me?" Xavion's voice was heard through Isonic's comm board. "Yes... yes I hear you. What do you want? You should be metras away by now!" "And so should you!" "I have to destroy the demons!" "let the imperials and Aeril do that. Right now, there are too few of us, so we must regroup before our attack. If we could get to the other Jedi... maybe we could help, or they could help us." "understood. I will close the black hole, and i will jump towards your signal. Isonic out." Isonic pressed a button. The explosion had begun. All the demonic ships inside the black hole exploded, scrambling the rest of the ships. When the explosion had passed, Isonic's ship was nowhere to be found. He had returned to the jedi. _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] The White Academy Jedi never ask questions, especially masters. As a matter of fact, they barely say anything at all. Especially since they've been around for a very, very long time, could you turn the confusement level DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWN a notch? _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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"This is for all the lives that have been lost here..." Isonic said to himself. "For Thrandiul... May you rest in peace!" Isonic charged his ships main guns. He started chanting something under his breath, as his eyes glowed a blueish colour. "Goodbye... Demons." Isonic pushed a button on the control panel. A single beam of green light shot towards the Demon formation. Xavion looked up. "Oh no... ISONIC! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!?" "I am fixing our little... demon problem." "You will kill everyone!" "Not if you leave now!" Xavion cursed under his breath. He opened up his comms to every jedi ship. "Jump to hyperspace now! In a few moments, there will be an explosion bigger than anyone here has ever imagined!" "But we can't leave you sir!" one of the White Academy Padawans replied. "You won't be leaving me... I will follow! Just make sure you are atleast 1000 metras away!" "But sir... we won't be able to see this danger!" "But you will still be able to sence it with the Force, and long-range scannars. Just go!" The hoard of Jedi ships flew away. "I hope you know what you are doing, Isonic. It would be a shame to lose you. May the force be with you; Fly safe " Xavion thought to himself as he launched into light speed. "Demon warships. I'm sure you realize, that you are going to die. I will give you 30 seconds to turn around, and go back to where you come from, or I will be forced to destroy you all." Isonic said to the demonic spacecrafts. "You are lying." the Demonic general replied. "Wait 25 seconds, and you'll find out." "No ship move an inch! He is bluffing... he can't possibly destroy us all. He is just one ship!" "The fear is settling in... 12 seconds" "Sir... what if he is not bluffing?" one of the demonic warriors questioned. "Then, we shall die fighting!" the general yelled. "3...2....1. I see you do not value your lives. You shall be destroyed." Isonic said calmly. He pressed a button on the control panel. Right in the middle of the demonic fleet, a huge flash of green light appeared. Particles flew everywhere, touching each ship it could. Then, as soon as it began, everything had started to collapse on itself. "Black hole!" The last words the Demonic general spoke, as his ship was sucked and imploded into oblivion. "What in the force was that?" one of the white academy masters asked. "That was Isonic's last resort... he opened up a black hole in the middle of the Demonic fleet. They will not survive." "But wont he be killed also?" "Last time he wasn't. If he can pull himself together, in order to close it before it sucks anything else in, then he won't die." "What if he can't?" "Then we get as far away as we can, and warn Courasant to label this sector as being dangerous. And possibly get the black-hole jedi clean up squad. If they survive." _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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[not in story] can we stop with the spamm of "post or else" please? its getting REALLY annoying and PS... Shadow~G has a black saber, he did get it back from Flamori 5, who stole it _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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Soong was already halfway down the stairs when he heard Levi's voice. "Stop," rasped the Sith temple guardian. His eyes still had a trace of the earlier fear, but most of it had been won over by anger. Guess where his spear was pointed. Soong looked at Levi where he stood by the archway at the top of the stairs. "Don't you get it, Levi? You can't stop me. I could have killed you back there. The fact that I didn't doesn't mean I won't. I let you live once, and I don't think I'll be doing it again. Why don't you just let me be and pretend that none of this ever happened?" "Over my dead body," retorted Levi. "You'll regret not taking my life when you had the chance, Soong. I won't be so easy this time." "I don't expect you to be." Without waiting for a reply, Soong sent a shock of force energy towards Levi. Levi spun his spear protectively before him, and absorbed the energy into his spear. Then he thrust his spear forward, sending a blast of telekinetic energy back at the Sith. Soong leapt above the blow, which struck a dent into the stone tiles of the temple floor. A jet of flame erupted from the ground at Levi's feet. The guardian had no time to react, and was engulfed by the flames. Soong regarded the burning archway with contempt. "Disappointing, but hardly unexpected." He turned and continued on his way down the stairs. Then he heard a chuckle from behind him. "Not so fast, Soong." Even with the warning in the Force, and the reflexes drilled into him by years of training and experience, Soong barely managed to roll out of the way before the ground at his feet exploded, sending stone and asphalt flying. Soong spun on his heel to face his adversary. The flames were gone. In their place stood Levi, looking none the worse for his near brush with death. The top of his spear seemed to be on fire. "Disappointing, but hardly unexpected." taunted Levi. "I expected more from you, Soong. Did you not feel my continued existance in the Force? Or is that typical Sith arrognace?" Soong snarled, and the archway above Levi collapsed, sealing off the entrance with rubble. But the temple guardian had disappeared. "Surprise," hissed a voice in Soong's ear. The Soong heard the crunch of breaking bone, and looked down to see Levi's spear sticking out of his chest. Then it was withdrawn, its owner kicking the Sith to the floor. "It looks as if you're the one who overestimated his strengh, friend." Levi nudged Soong with his foot. The fallen Dark Jedi was lying in a pool of his blood. Then the blood evaporated, turning into a fine red mist that lingered around Soong for a moment, then re-entered his body through his wounds. "What in the Force-" Levi's mouth was hanging open, his spear limp at his side. Slowly, the Sith rose, like a phantom from the grave. He slowly turned to face Levi. Then, as the guardian watched dumbstruck, the hole caused by the spear's entry diminished, then vanished completely, leaving no sign of the injury that had been present just seconds before. "How-" Levi never got to finish the sentence, for Soong chose that moment to lift him off his feet with a powerful Force grip and slam him hard against the wall. Something cracked. Actually, several somethings. "I don't think so," said Soong, igniting his lightsaber. Levi's mind was screaming questions, but he managed to break the grip with a burst of telekinetic energy, sending the Sith maybe half a step backwards. Then Soong shot forward, catching Levi's spear in a deadlock. Levi, sensing that he was loosing, planted his feet firmly against the ground and threw himself backwards. Not expecting even this simple trick, Soong, was thrown off balance, allowing Levi to get under his guard with a quick lunge. Soong avoided the worst of the attack, but the pain in his left arm was excrucriating. "All right," he said angrily. "Now I'm mad." His other lightsaber burned to life, then he let both his sabers hang slack in his hands in a seemingly careless guard. Levi frowned. He was sure he had never seen Soong's move before, yet it was strangely familiar in his mind, like a part of someone else's memory. Then the blades of Soong's lightsabers went limp. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not In Story] I seriously do not know. Read back a bit and find out. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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MarkoZ - Student 
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[Not in Story] Sorry, just had to do it...  Oh, and by the way, have I been completely chucked out of the story just 'cos my internet was down for a few days? _______________ "Easy is not for a Jedi"- Corran Horn, "I Jedi" Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol. This comment was edited by MarkoZ on Feb 29 2004 06:19pm. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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In front of the window, the Blue Crystal of the Ocean, Green Crystal of Academy Purity, and the Red Crystal of Blood shimmered beautifully. Shadow~G's emerald blade crashed into Aeril's red one. Soon, the remaining Jedi surrounded her, but Aeril jumped up, and in mid-air, spun around, kicking every Jedi around her. Shadow~G was weak from the earlier battle, and every other Jedi jumped back up from laying down. All but Shadow~G. Aeril noticed this and turned to him. She pointed her lightsabers at him. "Now, Vaughn, we realize who's in charge here." She jumped up and was about to perform a DFA2... And she had hit. The black blade rose black mist, and soon, the red blade had caused all the mist to turn into ruby, and crash into the ground. But she had not hit Shadow~G. He was standing next to Lianiotte. "How?" Aeril asked. "You were caught in your moment," Lianiotte replied. "So caught up in it that you didn't create a shield around Shadow~G so he could only absorb the Force. That's why I pulled him." Aeril groaned with frustration and kicked DJ Sith into the wall behind him. There was now a small crack in the wall, but DJ Sith managed to get back up. "I don't get it," he said. "The new crystals should have kicked into effect by now." Aeril looked to DJ Sith. "Only a true person strong in the Force can open a powerful crystal's true power." Then it hit Lianiotte. "The true power of the red blade is to paralyze its victim, and then turn him into a red statue, which would collapse a few seconds later. The black blade captures the soul of its possessor if the true power is opened up. The dark inside of them will be the blade. "But for us, in order to get angry could lead us to the dark side. But we'll have to get angry in order for us to open the crystal power." She looked at the other Jedi. "You can try, or you won't. It's your choice. But at least one of us will have to get angry in order for us to achieve peace in the galaxy." DJ Sith volunteered. "I am no longer a council member of the Jedi Academy. The Jedi Academy is filled with wonderful Jedi strong in the Force. And so is the Jedi Council. I will be the one getting angry, and if I ever fall to the dark side, I know I've lived up to the point I no longer have a purpose of the Jedi Academy. So—" "Just get on with it!" Aeril shouted. "So..." DJ continued, "if I die before this massacre ends, when Massadoobie wakes up, tell him it's his duty now to protect the galaxy." "That's a noble cause," Josh said. Aeril sighed with relief. "Finally the talk is over. Let's just get back to the part where limbs fall and the heads will roll." Lianiotte's eye twitched. "That's just gross." Then the Jedi returned to battle. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] I already told you that there's an ending and an alternate ending.  But it may not be what you think. _______________ slorp |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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Soong put the flute to his lips, and played. A haunting tune swept across the fields, filling every crack and crevasse with its sorrowful melody. It was majestic but sad, filled with what seemed like pain and depair from battles ages past. A heavy silence hung heavy in the air, broken only by the rustle of the leaves in the trees. Soong's melody increased in depth if not in pitch, and soon every animal in the fields stood transfixed, mesmerized by the haunting tune. In the trees, birds stopped singing. On the ground, animals turned their heads towards Soong and the source of the sound. Predators stopped stalking their prey, and even the prey stopped caring. Even the the insects stopped moving. The east wind blew, sending dry leaves rolling across the grass. A breeze ruffled Soong's dark hair as grey clouds gathered in the sky. Several rays of filtered light made it through the cloud layer, one of these falling onto Soong like a spotlight upon a performer. The silence was breathtaking. Then the tone of his melody changed, and became dark and commanding. The listening animals crept back into their holes, terrified. The sky darkened, and the light vanished. The wind became cold and strong, sending leaves from the trees. A light rain began to fall. Soong played on. Storm clouds gathered and broke, lightning played across the sky like cracks in pavement. A feeling of dread was in the Force. The animals in their homes shivered, there was a sensation of utter despair in the Force that even they could feel, armies fought and were destroyed, thousands upon thousands of lives were wasted needlessly, their desperation was suffocating, the dead desired to rejoin with the living. Millions of spectral figures could be seen charging across the fields, their death cries ringing through the heads of all present. The rain lashed down, leaving pebble sized holes in the ground where it struck. And Soong played on. The armies of the dead clashed, broke and reformed, then clashed again, the animals trembled uncontrollably, feeling as though darkness itself were closing in on them, yet no move they dared to make, saved only the terrified breaths they drew. Finally, Soong's melody climaxed, and the two armies were joined for a final time before fading away as swiftly as they had come. The storm passed and the sky was clear again. But the animals did not dare to venture forth from their homes. Soong nodded slowly, then walked back towards the temple. Levi was lying on the ground, paralyzed with fear and shaken to the bone. His head was in his hands. He was whimpering. Soong smiled inwardly. The temple guardian's force sensitivity was already working on overdrive thanks to the death in the air from the battle several light years away. There was no way in the Force he could have withstood the melody. "And now," A cruel smile form on his face as he contemplated the trembling Levi. "You will allow me access to the temple." With that, he stepped over the guardian's trembling form and passed under the high arch and into the Sith temple. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. This comment was edited by Flamori Athena on Feb 29 2004 02:39pm. |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] Oh yeah, one more thing... Quote: They are ancient Jedi nearly invincible, ones who are almost THE Force. All their blades are white and they have white hilts... I mean, come on! Invincible? even nearly invincible is still...brpsh I think what you mean is Quote: all strong with the force, and not to be dispatched with the usual triviality , in other words, not to be reduced to numbers and killed off just to emphasize the power of an enemy's attack.example: he attacked, killing 5 jedi at once. she sent off a shock of dark lightning that killed 12 jedi and knocked out another 5. every jedi except x, y and z was trapped in stasis. (x,y and z being the big names in the story) I know I'm being a bore, but I had to say that. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. This comment was edited by Flamori Athena on Feb 29 2004 12:53pm. |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not In Story] I have emphasized on this a thousand times, the Jedi Academy Crystal IS the green crystal used in the Song of Harmony, the Life's Focus. By not screwing it up I thought you meant for us not to do anything stupid. Isn't this novel a joint production after all? If you really want your own ending (after all everyone has his or her own ideas about how the story ends) we'll go back to what Vaughn said what seemed like an eternity ago, and do multiple endings. Then everyone's happy, cause I want to write part of the ending too. Writing now, no need for those quote spam posts.  _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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Aeril jumped up and was hovering over the ground, as it looked, almost instantly, as the lightsabers flew into her hands. She made her arms cross in front of her chest, and as she was moving her hands above her head, she activated her ghostly black and fiery red lightsabers. She now had her hands over her hand and a little bit before her shoulders, as she twirled her lightsabers hovered over her hands with the Force in a full 360 degree rotation 5 times. "You may know how to do pretty impressive poses, but that doesn't mean you are strong in the Force," Lianiotte said. Acey Spadey looked at Lianiotte. "She's stronger than you think." Lianiotte didn't answer. Aeril was still hovering over the ground as she went down the small steps and flew 2 feet in front of where she was before. "I hope your skill is as well as your blab," Aeril said cooly. She spinned around three times and then made her lightsabers fly far in front of her, slashing all the Jedi except for Lianiotte, Josh, Shadow~G, DJ Sith, Massadoobie, Flamori, and Flash. The rest could see the battle that is about to occur, but they could not move for they were stuck in stasis. The lightsabers flew back in Aeril's hands and she smiled. Josh raised his eyebrow. They were in a stare-down for about a minute. Finally, Aeril jumped high in the sky, rolled up to the Jedi, then rolled to her left, with her lightsaber pointed out. She managed to cause a big gaping wound in Massadoobie's leg, so he had to sit it out. "He's very lucky she didn't make the blade go deeper," Lianiotte said, her purple lightsaber ready for any incoming attack. "Otherwise he would have vanished into black air." "How do you know this if you were dead?" Josh asked. "I know a lot of things," Lianiotte said. The Jedi leaped up and started sabering at Aeril. She tossed her lightsabers up at the ceiling (still activated,) crouched down as if she were doing a dual saber shield, and created a big ball of energy around her that exploded, knocking all of the Jedi backwards. Lianiotte gripped the wall behind her and slashed at Aeril. "You're good, Aeril," she said. "Are you sure you're not a clone of me?" "Very funny," Aeril said sarcastically. She used Black Lightning on Lianiotte, and then kicked at Josh who was behind her. Shadow~G then leaped up to Aeril, grabbed onto the ceiling, and was about to do a DFA on Aeril. He did, but Aeril blocked it with her black lightsaber, and Shadow~G flew backwards like a ball of air was hurled at him. Aeril cracked her neck, and then started performing the best lightsaber moves you'd've ever seen. Lianiotte used a Force Push on Aeril, but she absorbed it. But that gave her the advantage, so Lianiotte ran up to Aeril and kicked her stomach, causing her to fly backwards. Because of this, a green crystal flew out of Aeril's pocket and landed on the floor. The two females stared at eachother, glancing at the emerald crystal also. The crystal flashed and all the lightsabers fell to the ground, deactivated. The two female Jedi leaped towards the crystal, and they both grabbed it at the same time. Lianiotte tripped Aeril and grabbed the crystal, but from the ground, Aeril kicked Lianiotte's back. Lianiotte charged back and gave Aeril a swift kick to the face and then grabbed the crystal. It was, no doubt, the Jedi Academy Crystal. Shadow~G attempted to Force Pull the crystal, but it had no affect. The lightsabers activated again and returned to the hands of the owners, but the crystal just seemed to have vanished. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] About the White Academy ...The White Academy was mentioned earlier in the novel, and played a little role. But they've been forgotten. They are ancient Jedi nearly invincible, ones who are almost THE Force. All their blades are white and they have white hilts... In war, when not using White X-Wings, they use ancient Jedi ships, created around the time during the war with Exar Kun. And speaking of that, they did a subtle help in the Mandalorian War. _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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"Ugh... my head" Soong muttered to himself as he got to his feet. "Where am I?" he thought. "Hey! You there!" Soong turned around. Standing infront of him, there were 4 stormtroopers, one with a red falcon burned into his plastic armour. "What is your buisness on this planet?" "I crashed." "What is your name?" "Unimportant" "What is your duty here?" the trooper asked, pointing his gun at Soong's head. "I told you I crashed!" Soong said, his hand hovered over his saberhilt. "Sir. Scans confirm that his ship was recently in a battle. I suggest we take him in for quarenteen, and interrigation." "When I want your opinion, I will ask for it." "He's right you know. If you don't stop pointing that thing at me, you will regret it." Soong said, without any scrap of calmless left in his voice. "He?" the trooper with the red falcon on his chestplate said, "that, is the second in command, Lieutenant Jaina. You will not disrespect her by calling her a man." "Who are you then?" "I... sir... am the commander of this group. You will call me sir." "I will do no such thing." "Then... you will perish." The leader pointed his gun at Soong. "Fool" Soong thought as he ignited his lightsaber. "SITH!" Lieutenant Jaina yelled, but it was too late. All four stormtroopers lay dead. "Point that thing at me... not a good idea." Soong wandered up to a big temple in the clearing. There were statues of old Jedi Knights and Sith Lords. "This must have been the planet Master Mideon [not in story] note: Mideon was Soong's master [in story] was telling me about. He said that there was one planet, where both light and dark had ruled. I must have found it..." Soong thought. "Hey! You there.. Freeze!" Soong looked up. Standing infront of him, with a spear in his hand, stood a man, in his late 20's, a look of pure hatred on his face. Soong pushed the spearpoint away from his heart as he walked past. "Stop! Don't take another step!" "Or what?" "Or I will kill you!" "You don't even know who I am." "I am the keeper of this temple. You have no right to be here." "I want to pay my respects" "no you don't. I can read minds. You had no idea that this planet even existed! You are here to take over!" "If I was, then you would be dead by now. I like your loyalty, but I also realize, you know nothing." "I know many things" "Do you know of the force?" "Yes." "Do you know how to use it?" "yes." "you do?" "How do you think I became keeper of this temple? My family have had generations of force users. Me and my brother protect the two shrines on this planet which hold the key." "the... Key?" "Yes. We can't read it, and the ancient texts only hint at what this key is. But, it seems as if its.. what the heck is that!?" he stopped as he pointed to the sky. A big ship was falling into the atmosphere quickly. Peices of it were falling off, the engines were on fire. Escapepods were flying off of it in every which direction, even towards the planet. Suddenly, the ship crumpled in on itself. It imploded on itself, before it let out a huge explosion. The man standing beside Soong screamed. "What happened to you?" Soong asked indifferently. "The reason... My family entrusted me in this shrine and my brother in the other... was because I am very sensitive... to the passing of souls. Over these past few hours, my head has been hurting like crazy. Ive been sensing fluctuations in everything. Even the trees seem to be crying out to me." "You will make a fine man. What is your name?" "I am Levi." "Levi? I once knew a Levi. He was killed in a heroic battle." [not in story] well... Lian brought back Empress/Evil Lian/Lian/Wingless... so why not bring back Levi, eh? [in story] "He did? Strange, because I felt as if I had two lives." "Mabye you are sencing someone else." "No... but thats another story. I cannot allow you into the temple." "Why not?" "I can sence the evil in you. I cannot allow you to gain any power." "I see. If you change your mind, or if you want to secure your life, call me. My name is Soong. Im crashed on the outside of town." Soong said, as he walked away. "heh... I think i know what to do now... I need to find out whats in that temple... "Soong thought to himself. Soong took out a small flute he carried with him. "Maybe you will show some use." He said as he clutched the instrument in his fist. "Now... I shall play and wait." HE brought the instrument to his mouth, and started playing. _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] Sorry Lian, when i posted my post, i didn't see your warning post _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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Flamori drew a deep breath. This was it. After so many years of fighting, it would finally end here, one way or another. If they defeated Aeril, and somehow managed to nullify the destructive power of the crystals, the universe would be saved, and with the unholy alliance between the Empress and the Black Academy, it would stay that way for a while. If Aeril won, the power of the crystals would sweep across the indomitable vastness of space, extinguishing every life form in the universe. One way or another… The Jedi, about forty all told, were assembled before the huge doors leading out of the hangar and on to…well, they would know when they opened the door. Though no sound reached him through the vacuum of space, he felt the intensity in the Force and knew that beyond the walls of the station, his friends were fighting the demons. It was a hopeless battle, he knew. One from which there was no escape, and the only certainty was death. There would be no victory for the Black and White Academy forces; no bright dawn after the dark. They had to defend the station from the vicious onslaught of the demons, to give the Jedi enough time to complete their mission. They would fight to the death. They had to. If the station was destroyed, the feeling of death in the Force would almost certainly trigger the Song of Harmony, and it would all be over in a flash. Maybe, he thought, we would be better off that way. They would feel no pain as the universe was destroyed. There would be no time to grieve, not even to realize what was happening as they were washed over with white oblivion. But there was always the chance that Aeril might yet find a way to escape the demons and harness the energy of the crystals. If that happened they were all done for. The ability to destroy whole galaxies with a thought, no individual had a right to that power. There would be dire consequences for the universe indeed if Aeril were allowed to escape with the crystals. That was why they had to fight. If they could not defeat Aeril, they could at least stall her long enough for the station to be destroyed. But first, there was the problem of the door itself. It was dark as deep space and smooth as polished marble, with no grooves or markings that the Jedi could see. Every attempt to push it open was met with stubborn resistance. Even the Jedi’s newly energized lightsabers could make no dent in the metal. The door even seemed to resist even the Force. Even the most powerful of the Jedi could not persuade it to budge, or reveal what lay on the other side. Not that it prevented one Jedi from passing out with the effort of trying. Massadoobie and DJ Sith had ordered them to run Force tests over every surface in the wall, hoping to find some weak spot, which they could attack and break through. But so far the wall seemed to be actively resisting all their advances, along with the door, and it didn’t take long for the Jedi to admit defeat and regroup by the doors. DJ went over to Doobie. The former leader of the Academy was brooding by one of the X-wings. Doobie looked up as he heard DJ’s approach. “Any leads?” he asked hopefully. “None.” DJ sat down next to Doobie. “This won’t do. We’re already tired out and we haven’t even met Aeril yet. Heck, we can’t even open the stupid door. It’s like we’ve lost before we even begun.” "There must be a way.” Doobie frowned. “Aeril isn’t the type to shy away from battle. There must be some way to open the door, I know it. Wait a minute…there’s one trick I haven’t tried yet.” He stood up suddenly and walked towards the door. He stopped, closing his eyes and reaching out with the Force, hoping for…what? DJ had no idea. Then Doobie’s eyes snapped open. “I know,” he said. “There’s a Force switch somewhere in the door. We can’t sense it because the door itself shuns the Force. But I’m willing to bet we can still trigger that switch, even if we don’t know where it is. Aeril must use this way sometimes, and it would be foolish to assume the door can only be opened from the inside.” “So how do we find this switch?” Flash joined the conversation. “We focus all our energy on that door and push as hard as we can.” replied Doobie. “We’re bound to find it.” “All right, action at last.” said Acey. He called to the assembled Jedi, and DJ relayed the plan to them. When he finished, Shadow~G spoke up. “It should work. Unlikely as it is that a simple Force switch is all that is required to open this door, when all other possibilities have been eliminated, what remains must be true.” “I’m ready if you are.” said Josh, tightening his grip on his lightsaber. “Draw your sabers,” said Lianiotte. “We don’t know what may be waiting for us on the other side of that door.” Fifty lightsaber blades snapped to life. The hangar was filled with a humming sound, and the Jedi’s shadows were outlined by the glow of the blades. Anticipation hang heavy in the Force. “The final battle awaits,” said Flamori, stepping up to stand beside Flash. “Forth Eorlingas,” said Ioshee, waving his saber around impatiently. “Storm the front,” said Ulic, checking the power cells in his blaster. “A far, far better thing,” said Xero, spinning his lightsaber around in a wide arc. “Closer my God to thee,” said Josh, throwing his saber into the air and catching it. “Pyongyang panjongmoot,” added Eclipse. Lianiotte looked at the others, and held her lightsaber up high. "The Force will be with us... "Always." Then, as one, the Jedi concentrated on the door, mercilessly attacking it with the Force. Slowly, the door opened. Inch by inch, until at last the path was revealed. Flash drew his breath sharply. Before the Jedi was a black-marble room with white marble leading onto a set of very small stairs. Blue crystals brightly lit the room. Past the set of stairs sat Aeril. Behind her was a large, circular window showing the depths of space. Aeril, no doubt, sensed their attempts of coming in. Her lightsabers were set down beside her and she looked at the Jedi flooding the room. She then looked at their lightsaber blades, and, under her breath, chuckled at the thought of her trying to do something unexpectedly. "Fifty to one. Don't you think that's a little unfair?" "Uneven or not," DJ Sith said, "we aren't competitive humans. We are Jedi, and whoever goes in the way of our duty... Will answer to us." All the Jedi pointed their sabers at Aeril. "No sudden movements, now," Flamori said. "I'm not the one you should be worried about," Aeril said. A sound of a lightsaber echoed on the walls of the big room. A swift blow of air flew past the front row of the Jedi, and ten random Jedi yelled as they fell to the floor with a big gash in their fronts. A figure turned from the other end of the wall and was ready to run again. As soon as he started doing his extremely fast sprint, The Wingless held foward her cyan blade, and once more the wind blew again. This time, however, the wind stopped as soon as it went to The Wingless, and the figure flew upwards, landed on the wall, and slid down, lying face-up. There was a burning cut in its shoulder. Eclipse examined the figure. "Uh-oh." It was Flamori 5. He laughed and showed everyone his saberstaff. He then leaped to the sky and was about to perform an Attack-on-Ground (which will from now on be referred to as DFA2.) The Jedi easily stepped aside from Flamori 5's landing point, but they didn't expect the next move. As soon as his ruby blade crashed into the ground, a giant splash damage burned the nearest Jedi surrounding him. "He's been using the crystals," The Wingless said. "But not even the crystals can cover up your weaknesses." The Jedi then stopped standing around, and scrambled around the room. Some tried to go to Aeril, but there was an "invisible wall" in front of her, and as soon as they ran into it, they flew backwards and slammed rudely into the wall on the other side of the room. The Jedi then started using their Force powers on Flamori 5, but he absorbed every power they used. "He uses the crystals," said The Wingless, "to absorb the powers. But as you can see, he cannot absorb lightsaber energy." Flamori 5 then used Speed and cut down 5 more Jedi. 35 are left. The Wingless levitated off the ground with her lightsaber pointed outward and flew around the room, following Flamori 5. He noticed this, and attempted to stab her with a backslash, but his attempts have been in vain. The Wingless was soon over Flamori 5's head, so then she grabbed him by his shoulders, and (ignoring the screaming from Flamori 5's shoulder pain) flew up until where the shield in front of Aeril was in front of her, then she thrust Flamori 5 onto the window. Flamori 5 almost broke the glass, but somehow managed to hold onto the edges of the window. Ulic switched to his blaster rifle and made a few burns onto the window and then switched back to his lightsaber, leaving The Wingless to finish the job. The Wingless spun around midair with her lightsaber activated, and she stopped facing Flamori 5, who was trying his best to not fall backwards. She held her lightsaber up and then threw her spinning lightsaber at the glass behind Flamori 5... Luck was now in the fate of Flamori 5. Or maybe not luck, for there is no such thing as luck. There is the Force. The lightsaber was guided by the Force as the cyan blade spun over Aeril's head and then onto the window... The glass was lightsaber-protected. But with the blade being guided by the Force, the hilt spun around on the glass, and the glass around it started turning orange... Eventually the hilt started shaking with the vibrating glass... The glass soon started to shake faster and faster... Flamori 5 was aware of this. "Curses! You Jedi may have taken THIS life, but I will return and slay you all... I swear it!!" CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCGLASH!!! The glass shattered, flew at Aeril for a second, but then flew backwards with Flamori into the cold of space. Aeril put her hand over her shoulder, palm facing the Space Pit, and repaired the glass with the Force. She had a smirk on her face. [Not in story] Do not continue this part. Continue the ship war, for Soong has unfinished business. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Does anyone bother looking at what I post? I don't want you guys to ruin the final battle, so continue the story in the space part! That part matters as much as anything else. DO NOT, I REPEAT, DO NOT CONTINUE THE STORY IN THE AREA WHERE THE JEDI FIGHT AERIL!! And I already told you two times, three now, so I guess you wasted time posting that kind of stuff, huh? Cuz I'm re-writing it. I know, don't I rock? _______________ slorp |
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