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Star Wars Jedi Academy: Novel - Song of Harmony
Apr 29 2003 03:32am

Lian Del Rey
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Lian Del Rey
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...


STAR WARS
The Jedi Academy


Episode 3
Song of Harmony

Six years have passed since all the casualties in the Age of War. The Empress has a fled to the planet of Coruscant to make a hidden base there, leaving the the Deathstar completely defenseless.

Josh, who has managed to keep from morning the death of his master, Vaughn or more commonly now known as Shadow~G, has gone to the planet of Naboo where they are making the new Jedi Academy.

There are rumors that the Empress got a new apprentice from the Jedi Academy. But from all messages from the Empress, she claims she has no apprentice. However, there are now more casualties reported from Coruscant now more than ever.

Now, Josh and his fellow Jedi are disguised as imperialists to interrogate any other imperial and discover what is the source of this problem..
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May 17 2003 02:05pm

Flamori Athena
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 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
Let's see if I can't bring things back together, shall we?
[In story]
"Sithspit!" shouted Xero, getting onto the ship along with the other Jedi.

"Xero, what happened?" asked Flash.

"Trekked," explained Xero. "I was about to take him out when he detonated a charge in the florr. The SOB escaped and set the ship to self-destruct."

"Time to get the hell out of here," commented Bubu, expertly piloting the ship out of the hangar bay.

Just as they cleared the ship, it blew.

"All right," said Bubu. "Time to find what we're really here for."

"According to the data I pulled from the Highwind's computers, the legendary Ocean Star is on a planet called Alexandria, in a nearby galaxy." Ioshee paused. "Trekked seemed to have a lot of information on the crystals."

"You think he's after the crystals too?" asked Flash.

Ioshee shrugged. "Who knows? If that's the case, we might run into him again."

[Not in story]
No, this is NOT an invitation to bring Trekked back into the story. At least, no sooner than necessary. :)
[In story]
On the demon world of Malak, Soong watched the demons in the square below proceed with their daily activities, which included raping, eating, raping, drinking, raping, sleeping, raping, killing and raping. The demons were a sick lot.

From his temporary abode atop the church bell tower, Soong was safe from the demons. They seemed to have given up the search for him, and considering the fact that most demons avoided the church like vermin, it wasn't likely to be revitalized anytime soon.
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May 17 2003 01:12pm

Flamori Athena
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 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
For those who don't get it, the Jedi were captured by Trekked, who happens to be wandering the universe just like them. The previous few posts were all about what was going on on the Highwind. (That's Trekked's Interdictor) And Trekked, try to read the other posts a bit more, only one Jedi (Xero) was fighting Trekked, and there are no other Dark Jedi on the ship. That should be all.
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May 17 2003 07:11am

Lian Del Rey
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 Lian Del Rey

Ok Trekked I know you like to roleplay and all I do too. But this, apparently, is a story, not a roleplay. Stories have long, vivid descriptions of... whatever. Little sentences coming from everybody would make everything.. not... make sense.

Use more characters than Trekked. I get extremely confused when you put on little bits of lines, while the other writers continue to write about The Song of Harmony and The Three Crystals.

What I posted is an example on how long your average post on this thread should be. Okay well maybe a little shorter. :) That'd be grand.
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slorp

May 17 2003 06:48am

Trekked
 - Student
 Trekked

(in story)suddenly there was a Exlposion in the back and one of the Dark Jedi rush to see what the Noise Was
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May 17 2003 06:46am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Okay, let's try to get this back to.. story oriented...ness.

[In story]
Yells, screams, pain
Thats all that Josh knew was happening. He automatically blocked, as if he knew what was comming, but couldn't stop anything. There was a dance rythm, and it was impossible to break.
He felt a great push on his chest. He flew back, and banged his head against the wall. Blackness crowded into his brain.

"Come on Josh, get up!"
"But Master, I'm tired!"
"You will never become a master jedi with that attitude!"
"I dont care, I just want to rest..."

"Where am I?" Josh thought to himself. He looked around.
"I remember this place! I know that waterfall, I know that tree... this is one of the training simulations that Master put me through. But, why am I here?" Josh wondered to himself.

"come on, get up!"
"but Im to tired!!"

"Ah! I remember this... wolves are going to attack, then a flock of birds... and then three dark jedi." Josh said

Just as he said that, a big pack of wolves came.
"Fend them away with the force!"
"Yes master!" the student replied.
the Wolves retreated, as the birds arrived.
"Defend against them! But, do not kill any!"
"Why not?"
"It will distrub the balance" The master and Josh said at the same time.
The birds left

"WHere are you, JEdi?" a dark voice was heard.
"Now, use all your skills to defeat these jedi!"
"But master... I cannot!"
"Belive in yourself, once you do, you can do anything!"

the Dark jedi were too much for the young student to handle. Josh took his oppurtunity. He Jumped infront of the student, protecting him.
"Back off Darkies!" Josh said weilding the saber.
"Master, who is that?" the student asked.
"Someone who you will meet at a later time" the Master replied.

Josh fended off the dark jedi with relitive ease, using both his sabers almost perfectly.
"master, he is pretty good! Can you beat him?"
"Maybe. It depends on how good he's feeling" the master replied.

"Good sir, I am sorry for disturbing your training. May I have a word with you?" Josh asked
"sure"

"Master, I need your help. How can I defeat an evil so great, that not even the light side jedi crystal can defeat it?"
"Trust in yourself Josh. Please, call me Shadow~G. You fight well, hopefully my student... you... will be more focused. Well, trust in yourself. Fight not to kill, but to protect. When you do, you will become unstoppable. Go now, they need you..."

Josh snapped awake. He got to his feet. Vaughn and the Empress were in a saberlock. She pushed him down. HE (Vaughn) was badly damaged. The Empress went Dooku style, and was about to kill Vaughn.
"Stop!" Josh yelled
"I thought you were dead. You are stronger than i thought" the Empress said.
"well, you didnt count on much. Your fight is with me, not my master."
"You assume too much. When your master turned to the light side, I was born. Born with the seul perpose to kill him. I was sent by the force itself." The Empress said angrily
"Maybe, but I am directly from the Light side, and I am the sworn protecter of everything good. He is a good guy; you are not. You must feel justice!"
"What is justice? Death for the poor? Money for the rich? You can't defeat me! I tire of this, noncense! I will go 75% power to destroy you, and everything you stand for!" the Empress said

Everyone was taken aback. Her force power seemed to increase dramastically.
"Try this one for size!" the Empress said.
"Very nice, but you forget one thing. As the protector of all that is good, directly from the Light side, I get all the pain from the people you, and the dark side, has killed! Because of that, I am much stronger than youll ever imagine!!!" Josh said while powering up. Their force skills were evenly matched.
"It is obvious that this... contest, cannot be decided by our knolwege of the force... but by our skills with a lightsaber!" The empress said while igniting her saber.
"Fine then" Josh said, igniting both of his sabers.

They clashed. Their skills were incredible. Now, Josh was ready for anything. Any push/pull he would counter instantly, and his saber style was incredible (holding both sabers together, producing a double blade (ie, instead of | , it was || , kinda funky)
Amist the power comming off the two, Vaughn was revived. He looks up. He sees his Padawan and the Empress battle. They are evenly matched. He gets up and sheaths his lightsword. The fight continues between Josh and the Empress.
At one moment, Josh has his saber in the wrong place. Seing this, the Empress leaps at the oppurtunity. Her saber gets under his, and cuts him. Josh falls down, in pain. The Empress pulls another Dooku. Seing this, Vaughn (using his incredible speed) closes the distance, and preforms a 'battou-jitsu' (draws his lightsword out of the sheath, very quickly and with precision) He blocks the Empress' saber, sending her back, and stumbling over Josh. After he got up and composed himself, he looked at the Empress.
"You know, your awfully pretty for an evil sith. Maybe, in a different universe, my evil counterpart and you would make a formidble team. But not here. This ends now!"
"Strong words. Maybe your saber is as strong as they are" the Empress challenged
"heh, its stronger" Vaughn said.

The empress charged at Vaughn. She did not expect what happened next. Instead of trying to dodge, he ran strait into her. His saber style was impressive, but not nothing the empress had seen before. Suddenly, he sped up. His hands moving in blurs, the jedi strained to see his saber (sword) move. Empress took the wrong side of the blade. Right across the chest. She let out a scream
"Behemeth! How could you hit me? I am the strongest!"
Vaughn sheathed his sword.
"You fool. I was once dark. That is how I could tell what you were doing. Any of your force attacks did not hurt me that much. Remember? When you releaced your black lightning, I could still move and breath afterwards. Most of the other people were fried very badly; I was just hurt, but i could still take it. I was once the most evil creature in any universe. But I was shown the light. And you can still see it! Just join us. Throw away your evil, and destroy the dark saber crystal." Vaughn said.
"Ill do something more dangerous than that!" The empress took out the Academy Crystal. She threw it against the ground.
The moment it hit, time seemed to freeze. Ulic, Bubu, DJ, Doobie and Vaughn all looked like they were hit hard. The crystal shattered. Then, it burst into flames.
Bubu, Ulic and Vaughn, fell to the ground. Writhling in pain.
Josh woke up.
"MASTER!!!" he screamed
"Wake up.. come on... wake up!"
"Josh... take this... defeat the empress...It is time for me to die...I have done alot of bad things in my life... but I would like you to tell the students at the Black Academy... that... there will be.... a... new... leader...soon" Vaughn said.
"DOnt go master... dont go!"
"Josh, live for yourself...if you do, you will be... unstoppable" Vaughn said... and he died.
Ulic and Bubu looked at eachother.
"Are we dying father?" Bubu asked.
"No... we are just losing our powers. While you still can, check on the rest of the Belouves...I think that part of the crystal held the Belouve family..."Ulic said in a weak voice
"then why...did Shadow~G die?"
"he was unofficially part of the family, remember Bubu?" DJ said, "Now rest, you must survive this..."

"Empress!" Josh said very angrily. "Now, You die!"
With that, Josh used his newfound power (hate) and attacked the Empress.

[Not in story]
What's that? What you say? All your base are belong to us?
What you say?
This is from the second novel? Oh well.
Not in story at all.
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slorp

May 17 2003 06:41am

Trekked
 - Student
 Trekked

(not in story)noticed i said NEARLY...

(in story) Seeing that he is damaged he orders a Self-Destruct and he makes his way to a shuttle wit his Troops
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he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody

May 17 2003 06:38am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Ehh.... that's reserved for the Empress Trekked :P
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slorp

May 16 2003 05:15pm

Trekked
 - Student
 Trekked

(not in story)i know how u feel.

(in story)Trekked swings his Saber with Leathal force and nearly Decapitates one of the Jedi
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he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody

May 16 2003 04:01pm

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
This story's getting confusing..
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slorp

May 16 2003 10:10am

Flamori Athena
 - Student
 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
What, two Jedi only?
[In story]
Trekked and his cronies each produced a pair of stun cuffs and surrounded the Jedi, preparing to take them into custody.

Eclipse reached out with the force, signalling for the other Jedi to act. Instantly, the Jedi emitted a pulsating force shock, which knocked the droid and his bodyguards onto their backs.

Trekked snarled and hit the release button, but the Jedi were already out the door. The droid and his human compainions were sucked out into the vacumm of space.

"Quick," said Xero as they watched Trekked shake his plexisteel fist at them. "They're holding the ship in place with a tractor beam. We have to find it and shut it down before Trekked finds a way to get back in. Let's go."

[Not in story]
Sound familiar?
[In story]
Xero walked down the corridor avoiding the guards as they passed. No one saw him. If they did, he made them forget. Stealth was of the essence here.

Soon, he located the ship's main power array. Drawing out his lightsaber, he threw it at the support cables, leaving the ship (literally) dead in space.

Ignoring the cries of panic and confusion, he shot into the darkness of the ship, using the Force to guide him towards the hangar bay.

As he reach the first of the hangar bays, he felt a dark presence in the force. It was Trekked. The droid was standing at the end of the corridor. A lightsaber ignited in his hand, lighting the corridor with a blood red glow.

"Prepare to die, Jedi!" he screamed, rushing at Xero.
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May 15 2003 11:48pm

Trekked
 - Student
 Trekked

(in story)however...one of you is gonna live,the other will not.The one that lives i will let go to continue his mission.the Dead one i will take to my master
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he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody

May 15 2003 11:37pm

Vaughn
 - Student
 Vaughn

[not in story]
what i meant was...
The story isnt written like a story. It was written as if it was happening as we are typing it. Like its in THIS UNIVERSE/Dimension. The other two are/were written as if they were in a fantasy world. Thats what i meant
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When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are.
- Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson


May 15 2003 05:21pm

Trekked
 - Student
 Trekked

(in story)no i wasn't destroyed i was offline for a cuple days...you Jedi are so easy to fool.
And now u are my prisinors,and don't attemt to Escape i can just emety this hanger of air in 2.21 seconds.(not in story)o yeah this is a good story so far.
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he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody

This comment was edited by Trekked on May 15 2003 05:21pm.

May 15 2003 11:23am

Flamori Athena
 - Student
 Flamori Athena

“Trekked!” shouted Xero.

“Who?” asked Ioshee.

“Trekked, the Jedi droid.” Bubu frowned.

“Oh, him.” said Ioshee. “I thought he was dead...”

[Not in story]
I would write more, but not now...

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May 15 2003 05:28am

Trekked
 - Student
 Trekked

(in story) what the matter jedi? didn't expect me?(evil grin)
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he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody

May 15 2003 02:32am

Trekked
 - Student
 Trekked

(in story)greetings Jedi had a nice trip? waht a pleasure it is to meet u jedi face to faceplate
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he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody

This comment was edited by Trekked on May 15 2003 02:35am.

May 15 2003 02:30am

Flamori Athena
 - Student
 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
Really...I was under the impression that the Ocean Star was in another galaxy. :confused:
[In story]
The Jedi ship drifted through hyperspace, heading for the vast unknown of the universe.

Suddenly, it stopped. Inside the ship, the Jedi were jolted awake.

"Wtf?" said Eclipse. Flash jumped to his feet and went to the viewport. There was a large, familiar-looking ship outside.

"Sithspawn!" he said in shock. "It's an Interdictor!"

"What's the Empire doing here?" demanded Xero.

A voice crackled over the ship's comm station.

"Galactic Alliance cruiser Knight Saber, state your crew and intentions. You are in Imperial space, repeat-"

Eclipse quietly shut off the comm. "Imperial space?" he asked incredulously. "Here?"

"What do we do know?" Flash bit his lip.

"They're not Imperials." said the Wingless.

Everyone turned to look at her. "And how do you know?" asked Bubu.

"The markings on the ship...they don't match."

"Maybe it's disguised." offered Ioshee.

"It's not," insisted the Wingless. "I can feel it."

The others exchanged glances for a moment, then Eclipse shrugged. "Ah, what the heck." he said, going to the comm.

"Repeat, if you do not reply, we will be forced to open fire, lower your shields and prepare for boarding."

"Imperial Interdictor Highwind, we comply." said Eclipse. "Lowering shields now." He keyed off the comm, and started handing out blasters.

"What are you doing?" whispered Flash.

"I wish I knew." said Eclipse. "But we only have the Wingless' word that there's no danger, and personally I prefer to be prepared for any possible situation."

The boarding ramp was lowered, and the doors slid open. The Jedi positioned themselves stragetically around the door.

Finally, a small contingement of guards in various military uniforms entered. The fact that they weren't stormtroopers became instantly clear.

Footsteps echoed down the hallway as a figure approched. Eclipse noticed a lightsaber at it's belt. He also noticed it was a droid.

Trekked.
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May 15 2003 02:01am

Trekked
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 Trekked

(not in story) i don't understand what you mean
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This comment was edited by Trekked on May 15 2003 02:02am.

May 15 2003 12:12am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
As in I told you the first story was already made.
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slorp

May 14 2003 11:37pm

Vaughn
 - Student
 Vaughn

"It is so simple! How could we not think of this... aerth... here I come" Josh said.

[not in story]
i dont know if i posted what i thought i did, but josh checked the archives, and found that the ocean star is located on aerth. So... carry on
[in story]
"Did you find anything?" F1 asked
"Yes. Im heading out to a planet called 'Aerth'. Do you know what to expect?" Josh asked.
"No... but bring your double shortsabers, and your master's lightsword. You may need them both."
"Thanks."

With that, Josh, with newfound hope, flew off to the planet Aerth
[not in story]
i would write more... but i cant right now. and, what do you mean you told me lianiotte? im confuzzled
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When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are.
- Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson


May 14 2003 10:27pm

Trekked
 - Student
 Trekked

( not in story)i cannot download it!!:eek:
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he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody

May 14 2003 10:10pm

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
OK here's what you've been waiting for.. I think... all you Age of War writers!
Yes, it's just the first part-ish, but it's still good, nontheless!

The first 3 (and part of 4) chapters have been packed and ready for download! w00t w00t!

http://www.geocities.com/littlerascalnate/Age_of_War.zip

I don't expect any emails from this, so don't.
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slorp

May 14 2003 09:59pm

Trekked
 - Student
 Trekked

(not in story) OHHHH I GET IT NOW
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he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody

May 14 2003 09:57pm

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Although the first one is pretty f*cked up..
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slorp

May 14 2003 09:56pm

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Why the rush? Everybody idles around. Since you probably have no idea what's going on, read...

The First Novel:
http://www.thejediacademy.net/forums_detail_page.php?f_id=259

(I TOLD YOU, VAUGHN!)

The Second Novel:
http://www.thejediacademy.net/forums_detail_page.php?f_id=802

And up to this point of the third novel. And the last one too.
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slorp

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