| Star Wars Jedi Academy: Novel - Song of Harmony | |
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Lian Del Rey - Student  |
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away... STAR WARS The Jedi Academy Episode 3 Song of Harmony Six years have passed since all the casualties in the Age of War. The Empress has a fled to the planet of Coruscant to make a hidden base there, leaving the the Deathstar completely defenseless. Josh, who has managed to keep from morning the death of his master, Vaughn or more commonly now known as Shadow~G, has gone to the planet of Naboo where they are making the new Jedi Academy. There are rumors that the Empress got a new apprentice from the Jedi Academy. But from all messages from the Empress, she claims she has no apprentice. However, there are now more casualties reported from Coruscant now more than ever. Now, Josh and his fellow Jedi are disguised as imperialists to interrogate any other imperial and discover what is the source of this problem.. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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[Not in story] "So, You are dying allready?" "Wha? WHere am I?" Josh asked. "You are in the realms of Dreams. Close to the Realms of Death." the voice said. "Who are you? Show yourself!" the voice stepped forward. "Master!?... Your dead!" "This is the realm of dreams, and past memories. You need help. You can never defeat the Demons, or even the Empress like this... Let us begin training." Lol, I read that part when the Helm's Deep Theme started playing  _______________ slorp |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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[Not in story] No Vaughn, Vector Prime is the name of the hyperspace vector where the Yuuzhan Vong first entered the galaxy. It is not a planet. To put it simply, it's an intergalactic airport. [In story] Soong extended his lightsaber blades, letting them slack into whips. The demons came at him like flies on a corpse. Soong snapped into action, whirling his blades around and instantly killing any demon foolish enough to come with a hundred yards of him. He swept through their ranks like a vibroknife through hot butter. The demons fell like leaves. Soong let the Dark Side flow through him, empowering him, ocassionally lashing out with strikes of lightning and flame. In seconds, hundreds of demons lay dead. But more still approched the Sith, silver blades flashing. "Damn!" said Soong, as he started to run. Normally, he would never have turned his back on a fight, but this could go on for a while. Gathering his force energy, he leapt off into the night. Meanwhile, Eclipse rested in a Jedi trance, letting his sense expand and envelope the universe. The ship was in hyperspace, stars streaked past as they crossed the galactic rim. It was going to be a long journey, taking weeks or even months. He had no way of knowing. The only ones he knew about who had ever attempted this kind of journey and survived were the Praetorite Vong, and they weren't telling. The Jedi shifted. The awnser was out there, somewhere among the stars. Together, they would find the Ocean Star. And maybe even defeat the devil, when he arrived. Together, they would. With that thought in mind, he eased back into his trance. [Not in story] Kinda like the ending of Heretic I, isn't it? _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Vaughn - Student 
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"Damn... Vector Prime is the planet from legends..." Isonic said "So what does this mean?" Thrandiul asked "It means we may end up helping the jedi. Vector Prime is the planet rhumored to be the wear house of the crystals (Think the Temple of Time). It should tell us where the three crystal shards went." Isonic said. "So basically, We may be able to get our hands on the Ocean Star?" "Thats right. But only the Jedi at the Academy can use them. We have no need for it." "That is true. Maybe we should hold onto it; so if the Jedi become attacked, we will still have the Ocean Star." "Good thinking." "Well, the course is set, so were off!" "Geeze, I would have thought that you would become even more skilled than before." Vaughn said. "Master... I am not used to fighting people who are more skilled than I" Josh replied. "Stop Whining. Now, Approach me faster! [sry about the Hiko]" "Yes master." Josh managed to block Vaughn's attack, but he never saw his hand comming from behind. "Don't focus just on my saber. There are many more dangerous things out there. Try again." "This time... I will get you, Master!" "Thats the spirit I like to hear!" Josh charged Vaughn. In one fluent move, Josh striked at the only open spot on Vaughn; his left hip. "I got him!" Josh thought to himself. Josh blinked. He noticed that Vaughn had blocked his attack, and was holding it so Josh could see his mistake. He took a full swing, making it very easy to predict. "Not quite" Vaughn kicked Josh in the side of the head. Josh went flying, and landed hard. "When I knew you, you would be able to beat me. Six years without full training can really damper someone's ability" "I never had to use it! I would always use the force to stop them from attacking" Josh complained. "That is good, but when it comes to defending yourself, it is nessicary to practice everyday. Now, Try again. This time, if you can't beat me, you won't be able to defeat the empress and Diablo." "How do you know about Diablo?" "Jedi always find ways for information." "Allright... here I come" Josh triesagain... [hex, cant finish] _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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"So, the search for the Demon Galaxy begins," said Flamori 1 as he watched the Jedi board the ship. Eclipse, Xero, Wingless, Flash, Bubu and Ioshee. The rest were staying behind to guard the academy. "Yes, and none too soon." said Eclipse. "Do you think we can cross the rift?" "The Vong managed it," replied Flamori 1. "And that was decades ago. We should make it, especially with the improvements in technology since then." "We're not flying coralskippers," Eclipse reminded him. "And the Vong might have been lucky." "Don't worry, my friend." said Flamori 1. "The force is on our side." "Hmmph." said Eclipse, then turned away. Meanwhile, at the Black Academy, Thranduil and Isonic were reporting the mission to Xavion. “So the Jedi are searching for the Demon Galaxy,” said Xavion when they had finished. “A futile search. I have tried many times myself.” “Times change.” said Thranduil. “Do you believe the legend about the crystals?” “It certainly is possible.” said Xavion. “Will you do nothing, then?” asked Isonic. “What can I do?” Xavion shrugged. “This is not for me to achieve. If twelve generations before us have tried and failed, what makes you think we’re special?” “The universe is going to end!” shouted Thranduil. “Technically, no.” said Xavion. “Just the universe as we know it.” Thranduil just stared at him. Isonic remained emotionless as ever. “Okay, listen up.” said Xavion. “Your new mission is to follow those Jedi. Spy on them, and report back to me.” “From halfway across the universe?” Thranduil frowned. “How?’ “Okay, maybe not.” admitted Xavion. “In that case,” he pressed a button on his desk, and a trap door appeared at the duo’s feet. “You’re on your own.“ Soong stood facing the demons. Behind him, Mideon lay on the ground, in a puddle of his own blood. Dead, and no longer of any help. This was Soong’s fight. The Jedi looked at his dead master, and wondered why he felt no emotion. After all, Hi master had taught him many of the skills he had today. Without him, he’d probably be dead. Darth Mideon had taken him from the weak child he’d been and shaped him into a Sith. But perhaps it was because of that. Sith were not like Jedi, not as vulnerable to the conflicting virtues within. Mideon had taught him to be cold and calculating, and he was just that. To the point of not even caring that the closest thing he’d ever had to a father had died. Up ahead, the demons swung their swords wildly, challenging him. There were too many of them, far too many. To accept would be an act of suicidal gesture, or… It would be an act of a Sith. [Not in story] Soong is in the Demon Galaxy, please do not move him yet, or bring the Jedi in on the scene. They can go search for the Ocean Star first. [In story] Thranduil screamed as he fell down, down, down. Isonic somehow managed to refrain from showing action of any kind, and hadn’t so much as blinked. Suddenly their descent ended abruptly, and the each found himself in a pilot’s seat. Their seat belts strapped them in automatically, and a female voice sounded. “Preparing for takeoff, clearing access for Black Academy shuttle Knight II granted.” “Wait!” howled Thranduil. “There’s been a horrible mistake!” The computer paused. “There is no mistake. You are Black Academy Jedi Thranduil and Isonic. This shuttle has been pre-programmed to take you to the galactic exit vector, Vector Prime.” “Vector Prime?!” Thranduil looked incredulous, but the Knight II had already entered hyperspace. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Vaughn - Student
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[Not in story] "Actually, Vaughn, the first one WAS made. Check the previous commenents after Padawan on a Stick commented." What is this 'first one' that your talking about? I read my post again, and i have no clue what your reffering to. Please tell me so i can fix it _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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[Not in story] Actually, Vaughn, the first one WAS made. Check the previous commenents after Padawan on a Stick commented. _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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"Wait, I have a question" ioshee asked. "What is it?" Flamori 1 asked "What does this 'Hell' have to do with anything? We got the blood crystal, we need the Ocean crystal, the Academy Life Focus is regenerating, We need to get the White Crystal from the Empress... What does Hell have to do with it?" ioshee asked "ioshee, you dont get it do you? The demons are going to fight us. If we can destroy their capital Hell, then we can stop it from happening." "So in effect, another Demon War is going to happen?" ioshee asked "Thats right... It wont be pretty, but if we win, then peace in the universes will come" Eclipse said. "Damn. I was hopeing it wouldnt come to this" Flamori 1 said. "Flamori to Josh... Flamori to Josh!" No response. "Damnit! Ok, let me try this..." "Flamori to White Academy, do you read me?" "We read you. How may we help you?" "Do you have any information on the Empress' wearabouts? We need to find her so we can get the White Force Crystal." Flamori 1 said. "She has disappeared since the fight 6 years ago. Right now, were trying to contain Soong and Mideon. They have lots of spirit left in their tired bodies." "They are still alive?" Flamori 1 asked. "I thought they died when the empress was leaving" "No, they arent that weak" "I see, well, if she ever comes by, just call." "allright. White Academy out" "That was insuccessful..." Flamori mumbled to himself. "F1, what do we do?" "We wait... And we meditate on this problem. If anybody can find the Ocean Star, then we will be one step closer to defeating the Sith AND the Demons for all time." "Yes sir!" the Jedi said in unison. as they left, Flamori thought to himself "I just hope it will be enough..." "So, You are dying allready?" "Wha? WHere am I?" Josh asked. "You are in the realms of Dreams. Close to the Realms of Death." the voice said. "Who are you? Show yourself!" the voice stepped forward. "Master!?... Your dead!" "This is the realm of dreams, and past memories. You need help. You can never defeat the Demons, or even the Empress like this... Let us begin training." [not in story] Please, dont break Josh out of his training with Shadow~G, i have some ideas for what they are to do... if you want, just leave the training to me  _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] Oh okay, right... Here's the fixed version. [In story] Okay, let's summarize what has happened up until now." Flamori 1 looked at the Jedi around him. Eclipse, Xero, the Wingless and the Belouves. "First, the Academy Crystal, the Life's Focus was destroyed in the battle against the Empress. The Blood Shard we have, and the Ocean Star is probably lost somewhere in the universe, if our mysterious visitor can be trusted." "Wait." said Eclipse. "What about the White Crytsal? The one that Lian had? I know it's not a part of the original thing, but since the Life's Focus was destroyed, can't it be used as a substitute?" [Not in story] Hah, that's one more thing for you to think about. [In story] Flamori 1 shook his head. "We lost that to the Empress to. She probably has it now." "Damn!" Eclipse pounded the table. "The universe is going to end and all she can think about is her stupid warmongery!" "We have no choice but to find the Ocean Star." said Flamori 1. "Hold on," said Xero. "I just thought of something." "The legend tells of a Demon capital world called hell, right?" Flamori 1 nodded. "Then tell me this, which planet in the Demon World System we know is called Hell?" There was silence, then Eclipse spoke. "There isn't one." "Exactly." Xero nodded. "So now you see the problem. There's a link missing in the chain. Where is Hell? If it's not in the Demon World System, there are only two possibilities. One, it hasn't arrived yet. Two...." He trailed off. There was a silence, then Bubu turned to Ulic. "You don't think......a Demon Galaxy?" [Not in story] There you go...version 1.1 _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] Flamori... you must rememeber Josh is still in the Black Academy Bacta tank. Thranduil and Isonic dont want anything to do with our affairs here at the jedi academy. The Academy Crystal is in our hands, and is regenerating. Only a shard of it was broken by the empress (the Belouve shard) just to think about it _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] Hey I finally got a profile pic! Ya like it? Ya like it? I believe the White Academy is not a Jedi training ground. Remember, the guy in charge wasn't much of a force sensitive. It's probably just a research lab. [In story] "Okay, let's summarize what has happened up until now." Flamori 1 looked at the Jedi around him. Eclipse, Josh, Xero, Thranduil, Isonic, the Wingless and the Belouves. "First, the Academy Crystal, the Life's Focus was destroyed in the battle against the Empress. The Blood Shard we have, and the Ocean Star is probably lost somewhere in the universe, if our mysterious visitor can be trusted." "Wait." said Eclipse. "What about the White Crytsal? The one that Lian had? I know it's not a part of the original thing, but since the Life's Focus was destroyed, can't it be used as a substitute?" [Not in story] Hah, that's one more thing for you to think about. [In story] Flamori 1 shook his head. "We lost that to the Empress to. She probably has it now." "Damn!" Eclipse pounded the table. "The universe is going to end and all she can think about is her stupid warmongery!" "We have no choice but to find the Ocean Star." said Flamori 1. "Hold on," said Isonic. "I just thought of something." Everyone turned to the dimunitive ten year old. "The legend tells of a Demon capital world called hell, right?" Flamori 1 nodded. "Then tell me this, which planet in the Demon World System we know is calle Hell?" There was silence, then Josh spoke. "There isn't one." "Exactly." Isonic nodded. "So now you see the problem. There's a link missing in the chain. Where is Hell? If it's not in the Demon World System, there are only two possibilities. One, it hasn't arrived yet. Two...." He trailed off. There was a silence, then Bubu turned to Ulic. "You don't think......a Demon Galaxy?" _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Vaughn - Student
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"Josh!" "yes?" "Have you ever been here before? I felt as if I knew this place" "I have been here once before. 7 years ago, during the Demon Wars. The Demons came into the other universes to fight. We came here to fend them off. I think the Crystal of Blood is in that temple off ahead," Josh said as he pointed into the distance. "Then lets get going" "Not so quickly. If we take the wrong path, we will fall death to the vortexes. We must use our jedi powers... but they are severly limieted here." Josh warned "Allright, what do we do?" Eclipse asked. "I say we fly" "How?" "One thing that the force can do. Use force jump, but a heightened level, and force speed at once. In combination to push when you get close to the land... its almost the same as flying." "ok.. on three...1...2...3!" They jumped. They hovered (using Josh's technique) to the base of the temple. "Allright, this is the plan. We get into the temple, find the crystal, and get out using the watches." "ok" They went in. Inside the temple didn't look to bad. Some dark corners, but nothing out of the ordinary. "This place... isnt too nice" Josh said to himself "Pull yourself together. We just need to get to the end" "Yes, but remember, if you let your guard down, they will kill you." "Who is they?" "The people watching us from the shadows" "Were being watched?" "In more places than we thought" They cautiously walked up to the end room. "Ok, we go in there and get the crystal. We then run outside and use the watches. ok?" "Yes...lets go". They opened the door. THere were many statues of horrible creatures. Fangs, claws, wings. all of their eyes were the same - evil looking eyes. The crystal was suspened in mid air, above one of the statues arms. "Ok, get ready to run" Eclipse said. Eclipse walked around the statue for a few seconds. HE gets on the oppisite side of the door. He backs up, and takes a run at it. He jumps, dives, and grabs the crystal in one swift motion. "You have taken the crystal... you must die!" all the statues said in unison. "LETS GET OUT OF HERE!" Josh yelled to Eclipse. And they ran. One of the statues swong its arm out at Eclipse. In a flash, the statue's arm was on the ground, writhering. "Thanks" "No problem" they got into the main hall. They saw the exit. They looked at the steps. There, were hundereds of Demons. They looked behind them, and the statues were closing in fast. "Ok... DEMONS! IF you do not let us past, then you shall all die. DO you remember me?" Josh yelled. "WHO ARE YOU?!" the Demons asked. "My Master was Shadow~G, the one who defeated your master" at the name of Shadow~G, some of the demons shifted nervously. "Now, Let us past!" Eclipse said. "NEVER!" the Demons yelled "Withdraw" "What did you say?" "Withdraw, and I will spare your lives... but if you do not" Josh said dangerously. "CHARGE!" the Demon captain yelled. Josh and Eclipse charged the Demons. Their sabers flowing with energy. Josh, with his double sabers, slaying demons by the seconds. Eclipse, using the force to confuse them, while he slaughtered three in one swing. "Eclipse! Get into open space and call forth the watch to bring us back tothe Academy!" "What about you?" "It doesnt matter! Just get out with the crystal!" "I can't let you die!" "If you dont go, I will die!" With that, Eclipse dissapeared. "Good, they are watching us" Josh said to himself. He let out a big blast of force energy. "Demons! If you do not let me leave in peace, the rest of you will end up like the ones at my feet. Slain, damaged, and severly injured." "CHARGE!" "Where am i?" Eclipse asked. "Your in the Black academy." "Where's Josh?" "Hes in the backta... hes not good. Go back to the Academy, and give them the crystal. Your search for the final crystal begins now" _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student 
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[not in story] Wasnt Mentor higher than Master? Neway, this story takes place about... 16 years in the future... or atleast 6 years after the age of war, which happened 6-10 years after the first jedi academy novel, which basically hasnt happened yet... so dont worry _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Eclipse DKana - Student 
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[not in story] erm vaughn, remember the jedi mentor rank got wiped out. Besides Im a Jedi Master :/ |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Just to make a statement, this blows the 1st story faaaaaar away _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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But suddenly, they were stopped. It was the gathering. A vortex appeared on one of the scorched hills. A blood-red hand flew out of it and grabbed Eclise and Josh. Eclipse activated his lightsaber and started to cut at the hand. Only to be squeezed tighter. And then appeared another vortex. But this time, something else came out of the vortex this time.. The Dark Lord, Diablo (the devil.) "This is the demon world," he started out, slowly walking towards the two, making the planet shake everytime his foot landed on the ground. "Everybody is already dead." Josh managed to grab his lightsaber, and threw it at the dark lord. Sparks flew out of Diablo a bit, but left no scratch. His arm hit the saber. It deactivated, and flew into a vortex. This planet reminded Eclipse of somewhere, a long time ago.. Xeo. When Flamori 1 and the demented Flamori 2 were fighting. "In time you will realize the truth," he said. He fell into a quicksand-like vortex, and within seconds, he disappeared. Slowly, the hand went back into the vortex. Fire was hurled everywhere. "..Well that was weird," said Josh. And they continued on. "But.." Eclipse thought to himself. "... What *is* 'The Truth?'" _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] sorry Lian, what? What about me? You spreading rhumors? Why woudl the demons let something (academy) in their way of total domination,. Thats why the Jedi and the Black academy must stop them; as far as i remember, the white academy doesnt really like fighting... but maybe im wrong _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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TiTo (inactive) - Student 
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In came Tito... "Is this the sperm clinic? Oops, wrong room" And out he went again! What are these Novels about? I try to avoid them as much as possible! _______________ Not back yet... I'll come one day, I hope... The madman formerly (and still) known as Tito! Coming to take back my title as "Most insane 'person' in the JA" It's the bizzi, wizza, jizzi, Wizzil, Bizon, wizzay, Wizzat, fizzil ¶°TiTo°¶ - All work and no play makes Tito burn the bacon!  - Officially cured from spamming!!!
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] They have to go through us, the White Academy (which isnt as strong) ?! Geez I know you love yourself Vaughn but please! _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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"Welcome back to the Black Academy, how may I help you?" Thranduil asked. "We have a favour to ask of you. We need the portal to the demon world." Eclipse said. "Im afraid it is unavaliable to outsiders. Im afraid your request cannot be fulfuilled." "Now listen here!" Eclipse started "I will ask you nicely to leave once more. If you do not, you will be killed." Thranduil said forcefully. "Please, remove yourself from the planet." Isonic said. "Do you know who we are?" Eclipse asked. "Does it matter?" "Yes it does. We are diplomates from Flamori 1's Jedi Academy. We are in desperate need of the Demon Warp portal. Can you let us use it, it is for the good of all four universes!" Eclipse said. "Who is the person in the black robe behind you?" Thranduil said pointing to Josh. "He is part of my group" Eclipse responded "He is the one we are looking for, be careful" Isonic said telepathically to Thranduil. "Untill you explain yourselves and why your here, you shall not pass." Thranduil said "Fine. I am Eclipse, Jedi Mentor of the Jedi Academy. This here, is Josh. He was a student of the Black Academy, 6 years ago. His master, was the founder of the school. We need to get to the demon world. And, this is the only place that can do it. Since Shadow~G is dead, we cannot use him to teleport us there." Eclipse said. "so its you, who killed our master, Shadow~G... now, you shall die for your sins!" Thranduil unsheathed his sword. "Time to die... Vermon!" He rushed Josh. Josh, who saw it comming, side stepped him, and slapped him on the back of the head. Thranduil turned around and swong his sword, to meet thin air. Josh was on the other side of him. "Look Thranduil, just let us in. We wont bother you guys. We will just go in, get what we need, come out, and leave the planet." Josh said "Unsheath your sword, and we will let them talk!" "Remember, anger will lead to death." "Why you little!" Thranduil yelled as he rushed Josh. Josh grabed the sheath of his sword with his left hand. He released the sword with his thumb. He then grabbed it with his right hand, and swong it out of the sheath. He preformed a Battou-jitsu. He nailed Thranduil in the rib cage. "ARRGH!" Thranduil yelled in pain. "You wanted me to, now, bring us to the portal, or I will bring myself" Josh said as he sheathed his sword. "Shadow~G taught you well" Isonic said. "I will take you to the portal. This way please" When they reached the portal, Isonic turned it on. "Do you know how to get there?" he asked "Yes. Its the door on the left. Do you have any new equipment that we will need?" "Yes, take these watches. They will steer you toward whatever you want." "Thank you Isonic. Tell the master of the academy that i will not damage anything in here. And tell him that I did not kill my master" "As you wish" Josh and Eclipse entered the portal door. They stopped infront of the door on the left. "Are you ready?" Josh asked "Are you?" Eclipse responded. "lets go" they opened the door, and stepped in. When the door closed, they could see the demon world. the skys were red, the hills were black. instead of many planets and systems, the Demon Universe was just one big planet. "I remember this place. This is where we defeated the demons in the demon war, 7 years ago." "Do you know where the crystal is?" "yes. this way" there, Josh and Eclipse started out on their journey to find the Crystal of Blood, located int he Demon world. What they didn't know, was that they were being watched, by more than one person. "Do you belive that he didn't kill Shadow~G?" "no. He is more dangerous than we think he is. Remember that. HE took out Thranduil with one attack, and Thranduil is one of our best fighters." "But Shadow~G's style was almost inbeatable." "True, but no one could master it... it was impossible" "well, whatever it is, we must watch what they really are doing" "agreed" _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student
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"Sir!... SIR!!?!? are you allright?" a student asked "ugh... protect... the... crystal" Flamori caughed. His mouth reupted in vomit. He woke up. "Where am I?" he asked. "You are in the medical bay. You started breathing again, you just threw up. You should get some rest." the doctor said. "Has the enemy arrived?" Flamori asked "Yes, don't worry. We defeated them. Eclipse found a shard of the Academy Crystal. Theres alittle part broken off of it, but we used the power we could to drive the enemy back. We're safe for now." the Doctor said. "Tell him to put the crystal in the regeneration deck. IF we can regenerate the broken crystal part, then we can get the full power of the Jedis that were born in that time period. Maybe even revive the ones who have died since then." "He has. The crystal is full again, Damon has gotten his full power. Bubu, unfortunatly, was overwhelmed by the infulx of power.... and.. well, see for yourself" the Doctor said while pointing to a bed down the row. there lay Bubu, hand outstretched, twitching. "He had too much power, and couldnt get rid of it. He was not used to that much force flowing through his body" the doctor said "Will he be ok?" Flamori asked. "Well, his old master has been by his side day and night. Bubu was the only one who couldn't take the full power of the Belouve family flowing through him. Its kinda scary, we hope he will wake up in time for the return of the enemy." "Return!?" "as they left, they exclaimed that they will come back, with a bigger army to kill the jedi, and the other universes. We hope that we can fend them off. They have to go through us, the White Academy (which isnt as strong), and then the Black academy to get to the other universes. I hope we can defeat them." "How much longer untill I can walk again?" "sleep for one day, and you will feel better" "ok, good night" And Flamori fell asleep. [not in story] gotta love the dream sequence [in story] "No, NO!!! Dont do that!" the crystal froze in mid air. He saw the moment it hit, the different peices scattered everywhere. He looked up. Vaughn squirmed. All of his good energy leaving him. Then, it hit him. "VAUGHN YOU SOB!!" Flamori yelled "whats wrong Flamori?" Ulic asked him. "I know why Vaughn is dead! Remember back to when the crystal was broken. Remember how he said he used to be the most evil creature in any universes?" "yes..." "well, when the crystal hit, it took away his lightside force; which he was born with." "Go on..." "he forced the evil out of him. Thats how he died!" "I dont understand" ioshee said. "he forced the evil out of him, ending his life as a being, so he wouldn't create more death and destruction on the universes. but by doing so, he caused more pain and death than he really realized. CURSE YOU VAUGHN!" Flamori explained "its probably for the best" "i dont care! we need him more than ever now!" Flamori said "it doesnt matter. if hes not here, he cant do very much can he? Anyway, were doing the best we can. in some sences, Josh is better than he is." "well, i guess your right... time for more sleep" and Flamori fell asleep again, this time, a dreamless slumber. [not in story] i hope no one has hit add your comment before i have _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] well, my ending kinda messes things up. Flamori, it was after reading your post (well, half way through your post) _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Never fear, Vaughn! There will be 2 endings! [In story] Flamori 1 turned back to the computer. There was one search result. The Ocean Star. Curiousity got to him, and he quickly clicked on the link. In big, bold letters on the screen, it said but four words, and nothing more. "What is the password?" Flamori 1 viewed the source. There was some.. very scary.. ASCII art in the source, that couldn't be seen on the page. Women and children crying, the men had tears of blood running down their cheek. Flamori 1 didn't notice how the light suddenly went dark in his surroundings. He just stared at the screen. For the longest time, it had nothing. He kept on scrolling down.. until.. Boom. The computer now had a mind of its own. The voice was female.. and the words were swirling fire, disappearing everytime the sentence was finished, it brown smoke. "We all make our mistakes.." "And you are looking for the crystals, right?" "Too late for you.." "I destroyed the crystal.." Flamori 1's head started to hurt. He remembered, six years ago... And the memory begins... Vaughn sheathed his sword. "You fool. I was once dark. That is how I could tell what you were doing. Any of your force attacks did not hurt me that much. Remember? When you releaced your black lightning, I could still move and breath afterwards. Most of the other people were fried very badly; I was just hurt, but i could still take it. I was once the most evil creature in any universe. But I was shown the light. And you can still see it! Just join us. Throw away your evil, and destroy the dark saber crystal." Vaughn said. "Ill do something more dangerous than that!" The empress took out the Academy Crystal. She threw it against the ground. The moment it hit, time seemed to freeze. Ulic, Bubu, DJ, Doobie and Vaughn all looked like they were hit hard. The crystal shattered. Then, it burst into flames. And the memory is finished.. "Yes yes, you're remembering right.." Flamori 1 had the uneasy feeling he was being watched... But not just by the Empress. He could hear air coming into the room. "But your mistakes prove fatal." The Jedi looked right and left. Empty room. He was the only one there. Chemicals were being poured into the room. "And now you realize.." "You should have killed me when you had the chance?!" Two arms flew out of the screen, grabbed Flamori 1's head, and bashed his brains into the computer screen. Slowly, blood started dripping down. He was dying. Until somebody came to rescue him. But the last memory he thought before he passed out (not died) was... The Song of Harmony... is coming. _______________ slorp |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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[Not in story] You mean after reading my post or what? _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] i suddnely thought of a crazy ending...  but bed first _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] The end of Age of war was incredibly complicated..I just read it for the sixth time and I still don't get it. [In story] "But what about the blue crystal, the Ocean Star?" wondered Flamori 1 aloud. "Huh? Did you say something?" asked Eclipse, who was busy giving out orders and making preparations for the descent upon Yavin. [Not in story] Eclipse...wasn't he with Josh? [In story] "We know the green crystal, Life's Focus is lost in the ruins of the Yavin Academy." said Flamori 1. "The Blood Shard, the red one, is somewhere in the Demon World System. But what about the Ocean star, the blue crystal?" Eclipse frowned. "I don't know," he admitted. "But it'll probably turn up halfway. Such things have a proven knack for doing so, especially with Jedi involved." "I guess." said Flamori 1. "Time to revive a bit of Jedi history. I'll research the crystals. You just go search for the Life's Focus." "Got it." said Eclipse, and he jumped of the side of the ship along with the other Jedi. Their surface rockets propelled them along the planet's surface for awhile, then dipped them into the atmosphere upon reaching the pre-programmed location, Luke Skywalker's Jedi Academy. [Not in story] Technically, that's what it is. Massadoobie must've just taken over after Skywalker retired. [In story] Meanwhile, Josh, Xero and Huxley were approaching the planet Orion VII, home of the Black Academy. Josh looked out the viewport at his old home, and gulped. "Do we really have to do this?" he asked. "We have no choice," said Xero. "Unless you know of any other planet with warp access to the Demon World System." Josh remained silent as they landed. The Demon World System was hidden somewhere in the depths of the unknown region, accessible only by warp gate. Which was the reason the rest of the galaxy was seldom bothered by them. There were few who knew the system existed, and only one who knew its location. Shadow~G, his late master. The Alliance crusier Forsaken Glory landed on the Black Academy's landing pad. From the highest tower of the Black Acdemy, the new leader of the academy, Xavion, watched the newcomers disembark. "Thranduil," he said into the intercom. "Take Isonic with you and greet our guests. Be careful, though. I can see Josh there." "Josh?" came the returning call. "Shadow~G's apprentice?" There was a sharp intake of breath. "We don't know if he was responsible for Shadow~G's death," Xavion reminded Thranduil. "But be careful all the same." Isonic was the academy's most powerful Force-sensitive. Not much with the way of the saber, but his control of the Force was unmatchable. It was said in Dark Jedi circles that Isonic could crack Shadow~G's mind open like a walnut if he really wanted to. Not that it had been proven. Yet. Thranduil knew what Xavion meant by taking him along. Isonic could scan the minds of the newcomers for hostile intent, and there would be no resistance. Thranduil himself was an impressive swordsman. Only that he didn't use a lightsaber. students at the Black Academy were encouraged to construst their own weapons out of saber parts, and anything else they could find. Thranduil himself had constructed a kind of double-sided katana, based on the same technology as the lightsword. The end result was a long iron stick with blades on either side. [Not in story] On the lightsword, I guessed. [In story] Thranduil summoned Isonic from his chambers, then proceeded to the landing pad to meet thenewcomers. On board the Jedi Wish, Flamori 1 searched the academy databank for the history of the crystals. Force Crystals, History, he typed in and hit the search button. The computer's processors whirred, then beeped once, signalling the end of the search. "Display data," said Flamori 1, and the gently glowing bluescreen filled with characters. Leaning forward, he read two words: Data unavailable. "What?!" he exclaimed, pushing back in his chair. But suddenly, he felt a powerful force presence, stronger than anything he had felt before, shimmer into being behind him. "Flamori 1," said the spectre. Instinctivelt, the Jedi went for his lightsaber, only to find that the spectre was already holding it. "Who are you?" demanded the Jedi. "Give me back my lightsaber!" "Do not panic," said the spectre. "My identity is not important. My time here is limited, and you must know the truth. The truth of the Force." "What do you mean?" asked Flamori 1. "You will soon understand. Now listen to the truth of the Force. "In ancient times, before the formation of the Republic, the universe was divided in war between three galactic systems. The Evalease, the Omicron and the Agleons. The three systems continued a fight that would not end, as each tried to expand its own territory. "The war continued for several hundred years, and finally a young prince of the Evalease who overflowed with ambition. The young prince fought hard, leading a large army to take possession of the entire universe. "However, the road to victory was long and hard. Therefore, the prince used a forbidden spell to call out the devil, and tried to master the dark powers. "However, after descending upon the universe, the devil killed the prince and destroyed Evalease. The rest of the galaxy, seeing this, formed an alliance to defeat the devil's forces. "In awnser to this threat, the devil summoned his demons one after another. The fighting went on for decades, but eventually the free people prevailed, and staged an attack on the devil's stronghold on Hell, the demon world. "The two grand armies fought for months, building a wall of death and destruction around Hell. The Agleons and the Omicron combined fought bravely, but the devil was cunning, and for a moment victory seemed beyond grasp. "But just when things were its darkest, something happened. A crystal was created, in the midst of the chaos, within it all the spirits of those who had died in the war. And together with the crystal, something else was born. "It was the Force," the spectre paused for a moment, then resumed his tale. "All across the universe, the free people felt the the birth of the Force, and they were glad, for suddenly, though they did not understand why, they knew they would win. In their hearts they heard a song, and there was no tune, but they understood, and it was joyful, and full of sorrow both. "It was the Song of Harmony. "And up in his tower, the devil felt it, and was afraid. For with the birth of the Force, came the masters, the protectors of peace and justice, and the guardians for all that is right and good. "Out of the void, came the Jedi." At this, Flamori 1 reacted suddenly, but the spectre motioned him down. "The twelve Jedi, together with their shining swords of light, helped defeat the demons, and sent the devil back into the endless void of Night. "The universe was saved from evil, and the Jedi were made the defenders of the light. The universe prepared to enter a stage of great peace and prosperity. "But it was not to be. "We cannot allow this, said the leader of the Jedi. We have saved the universe from evil, but it is evil of your kind's own doing. Forever shall the universe be in peril, and forever shall the Jedi be the ones to save and protect it. This shall not stand, not until the wrongs of the universe are righted, and not by the Jedi, but by those who have caused it. "And with that, he plunged his sword into the Force Crystal, shattering it. "The people cried out, for they felt that they had been decieved, and cursed the Jedi, calling them false and traitor. "As the universe plunged into the void, the Jedi Master looked at the people and uttered the Doom of Light. "The universe shall return now into the void of Night, and the time will come for it to be reborn, but it will not end, the endless circle of death and rebirth will continue until the chaos of the universe is ceased. "Then the universe fell into darkness. Twelve times since then it has been reborn, only to fall into darkness once more. Now the eve of the final strom is nigh. The devil shall rise, and create chaos in the universe. And when the shards of the crystal are gathered, the Song of Harmony will be heard, and the universe shall end." Flamori 1 sank back into his chair, overwhelmed by what he had just heard. Thoughts raced through his mind. The spectre was watching him calmly. "Now, young Jedi, you know the truth of the Force. And I must now depart. Farewell, Jedi Flamori 1." With that he faded away, leaving no trace of the mysterious visitor who had revealed so much. "Wait!" shouted Flamori 1, but he was gone. Shaken, the Jedi got to his feet. Dark forces were on the move. He had work to do. [Not in story] Yes, I've finished. Time to collapse... _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. This comment was edited by Flamori Athena on May 04 2003 06:18am. |
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