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May 09 2003 10:19pm

Acey Spadey
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Acey Spadey
ok well. I kinda got the idea of a story from a friend, and thinking it was a little, started writing. What scared me is this, that i actually wrote a decent amount. and this is just the First chapter. heh..tell me what you think..

http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/acey_spadey/story.rtf

Just some reviews here of the story from those who have seen it.

Eclipse - well it rox really nice to read and its nice having other JA people in hehe.

Ash - OMG that story rocks. its like crack, i cant get enough of it. hurry up and write chapter 2. hurry, hurry, hurry!!! if you need any more one liners, im always here for ya :D

so give it a read and tell me what you think
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May 13 2003 04:15pm

Battlin' Billy
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 Battlin' Billy

So far so good Acey! Keep it going!
:)

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May 13 2003 10:29am

Marq
 - Ex-Student
 Marq

hey acey fair decent
wouldnt mind a second chapter
cheers for the enjoyable read, first ive done in a while.
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May 12 2003 11:41pm

Jello`
 - Student
 Jello`

I like it, little horny and perverted... Based on a true story? Lol :)
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May 12 2003 02:16pm

Jacen Aratan
 - Student

Oh please almighty Acey, don't you have need for a grumpy, people-hating, apatic (sp?), hated dane? :)

May 12 2003 10:43am

Acey Spadey
 - Student
 Acey Spadey

your gonna have to crawl better than that if you want a part in the next chapter..hehehe
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.Lag Bro to Xanatos. Adopted Twin to Bubu. Big-Brother to SmilyKrazy ---- JATSRAD Guru, JASE Member, JA SP Mod Staff ---- The Order of the Stick -- Big thanks to Mango for my avatar -- Quote:
Sometimes you've got to specifically go out of your way to get into trouble. It's called fun.
Quote:
(Random hella old quote) <Fizz of Belouve> .. in sovjet russia, cereals spit at YOU!
Quote:
whats the point of growing up, if your not allowed to act childish!
Padawan - Henkes


May 10 2003 10:22am

Jacen Aratan
 - Student

It's cool, you're not that bad of a writer Acey (note: when I say that it means "good", not "not too bad but still sucks" :)). How about giving me a line in the next chapter? :D

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