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Acey Spadey - Student |
ok well. I kinda got the idea of a story from a friend, and thinking it was a little, started writing. What scared me is this, that i actually wrote a decent amount. and this is just the First chapter. heh..tell me what you think.. http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/acey_spadey/story.rtf Just some reviews here of the story from those who have seen it. Eclipse - well it rox really nice to read and its nice having other JA people in hehe. Ash - OMG that story rocks. its like crack, i cant get enough of it. hurry up and write chapter 2. hurry, hurry, hurry!!! if you need any more one liners, im always here for ya ![]() so give it a read and tell me what you think _______________ .Lag Bro to Xanatos. Adopted Twin to Bubu. Big-Brother to SmilyKrazy ---- JATSRAD Guru, JASE Member, JA SP Mod Staff ---- The Order of the Stick -- Big thanks to Mango for my avatar -- Quote: Sometimes you've got to specifically go out of your way to get into trouble. It's called fun.
Quote: (Random hella old quote) <Fizz of Belouve> .. in sovjet russia, cereals spit at YOU!
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Battlin' Billy - Student ![]() |
So far so good Acey! Keep it going!![]() _______________ Midbie Council Member #2 - Profile ID 2073 | Member of B@rtM@ulS@ar | Owner of Monty's 2000th comment & D@RtHM@UL's 8100th comment | Former Padawan of SilkMonkey & Arcuss JA Goaltender & NHL Fan | Fellow Rush fan to Axion|Plo Koon is my oldest JA friend Post your RL pics HERE! | Post you JK2/JK3 screenies HERE! |
Marq - Ex-Student ![]() |
hey acey fair decent wouldnt mind a second chapter cheers for the enjoyable read, first ive done in a while. _______________ For every pause i was nearly garenteed time to speak. It's always the selfish who say that life is way too short. I'm not looking to get old, but I bet it'll happen anyway. |
Jello` - Student ![]() |
I like it, little horny and perverted... Based on a true story? Lol ![]() _______________ Brady Brothers: Orion-Greg, Furi0us-Peter, Me-Bobby. Long lost cousin to Flash. Midbie Council #007. Ex-JAK. |
Jacen Aratan - Student |
Oh please almighty Acey, don't you have need for a grumpy, people-hating, apatic (sp?), hated dane? ![]() |
Acey Spadey - Student |
your gonna have to crawl better than that if you want a part in the next chapter..hehehe _______________ .Lag Bro to Xanatos. Adopted Twin to Bubu. Big-Brother to SmilyKrazy ---- JATSRAD Guru, JASE Member, JA SP Mod Staff ---- The Order of the Stick -- Big thanks to Mango for my avatar -- Quote: Sometimes you've got to specifically go out of your way to get into trouble. It's called fun.
Quote: (Random hella old quote) <Fizz of Belouve> .. in sovjet russia, cereals spit at YOU!
Quote: whats the point of growing up, if your not allowed to act childish!
Padawan - Henkes
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Jacen Aratan - Student |
It's cool, you're not that bad of a writer Acey (note: when I say that it means "good", not "not too bad but still sucks" ![]() ![]() |
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