| clan stories | |
|
Nero - Student  |
At a clan page everybody needs a story so here are two stories, the first one is written by me. the second one by messiah.. here they come: A long, long time ago in a galaxy far away there lived the race of humans. Their powers where supreme, but there was a problem... Within the race of human only war did exist. Hate lived in all the hearts and war was unstoppable. For ages the human race kept in war, but then release came… From the ever-living race of ancient human a great Sith Master came. His name was Messiah. He came to earth with his apprentice Helium at time of Great War. He appeared in the middle of battle and destroyed the fear in all hearts. He became Emperor and he ruled the world with iron hand. He found other humans who where strong in the Force and trained them into Sith. Fast his army of sith was finished. But the humans rebels kept fighting. The begin to train Jedi and attack the empire… The war begun….. When the war started Messiah was still able to control it. He had a large army and his sith where very strong. Until the final day… The Jedi’s reachd the palace of Messiah, the biggest battle between jedi and sith ever fought started, big groups of jedi and sith where fighting at the road to Messiahs palace. After a few days the jedi reached the palace of messiah… He was thrown in a cell with his apprentice. They where sealed in without any food or water. People thought they had died and within a few centuries they where totally forgotten. As earth lived in time they where now under miles of rocks and stones, without air, food and water they suffered pain and disease after each other, but they couldn’t die…. After ages of pain, disease and suffering they where able to come out. But when they reached the earth surface the whole planet was desolated. They walked trough the destroyed palace, where they found their lightsabers. Nothing else had remained…. Centuries of their unstoppable life they trained at the desolated surface, still suffering pain and disease. But they found strength in their slowly growing powers. Then 10.000 years after their capturing they saw a big war vesicle. They teleported themselves to it and that’s how they found their way out… When they reached the first big civilised planet they landed. The few Jedi on this planet sensed their great power and out of fear they attacked them. Every man living on this planet except for two where killed… Their names where Nero and nXs they also where from the races of ancient human. They decided to join Messiah and Helium as they couldn’t die as well. These four men together formed an order, The Ancient Order… They decided to build a big temple where they could train and be save when war reached… It some time, but exactly two hundred years later the castle was finished… A few rules where made to remain the power of The Ancient Order. Only those who applied to these rules where asked to join The Ancient Order… They will be dedicated… They will be skilled… They will be able to use the Force… They will show respect to us… They will accept our rules… Within these rules they started to search members who where suited for The Ancient Order. This is how The Ancient Order came up and how it will remain forever… This time no one will be able to forget them………… ------------------------------------------------- Second story!!! A long, long time ago in a galaxy far away there was a huge beautiful Temple... In that temple there were very powerful Jedi Masters who traind there padawans with a lightsaber and in the Force. These padawans often stayed in the temple to learn and learn, and one day to become a Jedi Master and to teach to new Jedi… But there were 2 students who one day decided to leave the temple and start exploring the Galaxy and train on other places. There names were Nero and xNs… They traind with there lightsaber on much planets, traveled from planet to planet, in search for jedi outside the temple. They coulnd’t found anyone for years, till the big day arrived… Nero and xNs saw a huge Ship in space, with a trick learnt in the temple they teleported themselves into the warship. They saw huge armies, ready for a big war, Nero and xNs explored the ship to find the leader and kill them to stop the war. Suddenly Nero felt a huge force present, and fast after that another. xNs wanted to find out who they were, so they both want to the room were they felt the strong Force present… They saw 2 humans, the 2 humans were surprised by the Jedi. They sensed that Nero and xNs were strong jedi. Nero asked there names, one of them said: I’m Messiah, and this is Helium. But Nero and xNs didn’t sence that Messiah and Helium are Dark siders… Messiah tried to let Nero and xNs fall to the Dark side, but they were to strong traind and wouldn’t fall to the Dark side, so they wanted to destroy Nero and xNs… The Fight began, Nero fought Messiah and xNs fought Helium… Nero and xNs had both Staff sabers, and Messiah and Helium both Dual sabers, they went in a big duel, they seemed to be about equal strong, even when xNs changed and started to fight Messiah and Nero against Helium… No one could kill the the other… Then Nero stopped the fight, and proposed a deal, he said: Wait! Why don’t unit our powers? Why don’t we train other people, still weak in the Force? Why don’t make a Order? Messiah agreed with Nero, if they couldn’t kill eachother they better could learn from eachother, to become even stronger as they are now… They searched for a planet, finally they found one: Naboo! Nero and xNs told stories about Helium and Messiah about the Jedi Temple, so they decided to make a better and stronger one. Helium learnt Mind Trick from xNs and he let some weird water people with big tungs make a huge palace… In this palace there were all kind of rooms, on the planet there were all kinds of race, and they found some people who were strong in the Force… …they started to train them Both Light and Dark Side The Founders of this order called themselves Council members. They just needed a name, and that name was: The Ancient Order _______________ -Nero Quote: Curious, Smartass, what else? This post was edited by Nero on Sep 18 2003 05:01pm. |
| Poll | ||||||||||||||
wich one is better???
|
| Login and add your comment! |
| Comments |
|
Nero - Student 
|
please also leave a comment why you are thinking one of the stories is better _______________ -Nero Quote: Curious, Smartass, what else? |
|
Messiah - Ex-Student 
|
same storys _______________ Council member of ={TAO}=, site: http://www.tao-clan.tk/ |
| Login and add your comment! |