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Jake Kainite - Student  |
yes I normally do stupid rhymy things, but this is serious, so try not to laugh  I'm in kind of a depressed mood right now so I really need to get this off my chest.This ones about me trying to get over my Ex, and just about relationships and stuff. This is for that someone special this short rhyme is my confessional Make mistakes my heart that breaks no more of your precious time I'll take Regret the past nothing I can do my heart still belongs to you Sorry Becky we didn't fit not a real relationship looking someone whose new just to fill the gap that you tore in my life and left me bleeding now I'm sat here alone and needing don't want someone just for sake dream of them and never wake need someone, won't make me hide someone who makes me alive bubbly but lonely so frustrated too long have I masturbated Want love like a fairtytale but I'm too scared that I will fail Beckys gone but I'm still here Sos what she gave that bitter fear Just wanna explode wanna cut loose too many meaningless girls I get confused This one is a little happier, bout why I write and stuff. Writing down lyrics cross legged on the floor just can't stand this feeling no more The outcome of this is impossible to see writing about things which mean nothing to me boring existence, oh so dull Same experiences numb my skull Writing rhymes is my only escape too much life for me to take This is better than joints, this is real better than needles, better than pills Most people think I waste my time jotting down words, lines and rhymes Don't want fame, don't want money some people would think thats funny but I can't expect them to understand these rhymes and words that flow from my hand cos its true, I don't want much all I need is that lyrical rush from completing a line that touches my heart all the way through, to finish from start I've evolved The world revolves but I'll be a failure I've been told I'm the future of mankind lines and words circle in my mind all that matters is that it opens MY eyes some of this is truth Most of it lies.... Thankyou  _______________ Apprenctice of Jedi Master Ascari (deceased) Descended from a line of great Jedi Will argue any point of view from any side |
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Jake Kainite - Student 
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*bows* thankyou thankyou I'm guessing you all prefer my silly stuff better though, so I won't pester you with my life passion again _______________ Apprenctice of Jedi Master Ascari (deceased) Descended from a line of great Jedi Will argue any point of view from any side
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Jello` - Student 
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Nice work. Would make a great song IMO _______________ Brady Brothers: Orion-Greg, Furi0us-Peter, Me-Bobby. Long lost cousin to Flash. Midbie Council #007. Ex-JAK. |
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Mace Windu - Retired 
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*Crys* Muy bien Jakey.. _______________ -Mace Windu "When a fool says something foolish, do not answer the fool." -Windu To Vladarion, though I know you are in a better place - it makes me shake to think that you are not awake - when I think about you it makes me smile - i know you have gone into the clouds to head for heavens gates - you have changed my life - in an incredible way - and so I say thank you - may you rest in peace |
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Jake Kainite - Student 
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Cheers guys _______________ Apprenctice of Jedi Master Ascari (deceased) Descended from a line of great Jedi Will argue any point of view from any side
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Sared - Retired 
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*Bow* Well done! Its good to hear I'll have some competition when I run for Poet Laurate of the U.S. _______________ I'm crazy, not stupid. This comment was edited by Sared on Oct 02 2003 07:58pm. |
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Thomasooo - Student 
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I like it, Jake. _______________ In the navy and LOVING it!
Recipient of comment no. 1000 and heart-warming words from Ataris!
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Eclipse DKana - Student 
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*claps* |
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