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Arina - ex-Student  |
I look at my life the way it is now and I wonder how I ever survived living with you I’m dead inside because of you I’m dead inside I used to be such a sweet child full of innocence I got good grades and I never got in trouble at school till I met you you were so cool I wanted to be just like you you had all the friends I wanted to get your attention and I got it you asked me to marry you and I was foolish enough to say yes and now I’m dead inside because of you I’m dead inside I trusted you and you betrayed me you used me like I was just a toy for your amusement how could you have been so cruel? how could I have been such a fool? you were the one that held me up how was I suppose to know you would let go? I fell 1,000 miles or more I hit the ground hard and now I’m dead inside because of you I’m dead inside I should have seen through your disguise I should have seen it in your eyes you killed me just for fun but wait till you see what I’ve become you had better run I used to be so full of love but now all I feel is hate I hate you and every thing about you but most of all I hate the way you still make me cry you seen me standing there so full of rage and hate and you laughed at me and called me a fool who’s laughing now? I caught you by surprise now I laugh at the look of shock upon your face I rose like smoke I struck like a two-headed serpent I struck so fast all you could do was gasp I laughed at you and asked why so surprised? you made me what I am you showed me hate and I took it in my hand I twisted it to fit me And now you seem to be surprised I know how to use it you showed me how you who were so cruel you thought I was a fool tell me who is the more foolish? me for trusting you or you for underestimating me and showing me the one thing I needed to be able to kill you hate I had hate the hate you gave me the good in me is dead you killed it and now all that’s left in me is hate because of you I cannot trust because of you I cannot love I am truly dead inside I am truly gone all that’s left is a monster that will destroy you and everything that reminds me of you and then who knows? maybe I’ll join you in the pits of hell and fight you for eternity till worlds end and then who knows? who knows? _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" This post was edited by Arina on Oct 16 2003 05:07pm. |
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Arina - Ex-Student 
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 _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Drathir - Student 
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lol!!! rp!! _______________ Where we ask the question, "Is real life really stranger than fiction, or is fiction about real life being stranger than fiction stranger than real life being stranger than fiction?" Ow. -Paradox Lost Want to read my slowly in progress webcomic? -TCTI |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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 _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Drathir - Student
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Arina is deh kewlest!!!  _______________ Where we ask the question, "Is real life really stranger than fiction, or is fiction about real life being stranger than fiction stranger than real life being stranger than fiction?" Ow. -Paradox Lost Want to read my slowly in progress webcomic? -TCTI |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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_______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Drathir - Student
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kewl still lovin it!!! _______________ Where we ask the question, "Is real life really stranger than fiction, or is fiction about real life being stranger than fiction stranger than real life being stranger than fiction?" Ow. -Paradox Lost Want to read my slowly in progress webcomic? -TCTI |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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it actualy started as a song _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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sharwyn - Ex-Student |
MAKE IT A SONG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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_______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Arina - Ex-Student 
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_______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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yea i didn't realise it was that long till i typed it _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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D@RtHM@UL - Student 
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Lots of reading  |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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_______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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_______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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_______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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_cmad_ - Ex-Student 
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omfg someone has WAY too much timg in her hands  lol it's big and i'm too bored to read it _______________ Your friends of today, are your enemies of tomorrow. |
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Lackeh- Retired - Student 
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wow thats personal. wish i could write like that and allow people that see it to live. _______________ A champion is someone who keeps getting up; even when they can't. Founder Of the Jedi Academy Adlut Support Group. PIE!!!!! Padawan of Katan. Brother to MOTREC, DarkDragon, (SKX)DarkBlade, Jacen Aratan, Achilles, Kool_Aide, EvilSquirrel, and Katan's Padawans. |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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 _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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thanx _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Thomasooo - Student 
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I think it's good! ~Thomas Skywalker _______________ In the navy and LOVING it!
Recipient of comment no. 1000 and heart-warming words from Ataris! 
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Arina - Ex-Student
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 _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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_______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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if you think it's good but it could use inprovements then give some suggestions _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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i came up with it when i was listening to metallica _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Fizz of Belouve - Student 
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heya... long time no see.... good to have some of them crazy posters back in here and: very nice prose indeed _______________ One of the Belouve boys, founder of the mighty FiZZsters Midbie council #20 - Fizz - #1933 - Jan '03 - Aug '04 "Renfield, you idiot!" |
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