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Izthyen - ex-Student  |
Hallo, I'ma christopher. I'm a writer like person thingy mabob guy, and i thought i might share some of the things i've written. Tell me what you think please? however, fair warning... most of these poems are kinda morbid... thank you!! ----------------------------------------- Wishes I keep wishing on a dream To wish my dreams true I’ll keep wishing on this dream Until I finally have you Until you’re in my heart And visible to my eyes Until I can caress your skin And never again say bye Now I continue to wish And still continue to wait You’ll be all I ever need Because loving you is fate The only thing that I want The only thing I need Is just to hold and to love you Until in death I’m freed -------------------------------------- Never So Sure When finally alone No thoughts in mind I find myself wishing That you might be mine I can see you there staring Or perhaps you're just watching In a speechless joy filled awe Or a cold and silence mocking What are you thinking? I dare almost ask But if it the mocking I fear you might laugh So I turn then away There never to know And so i do drown In sad twisted sorrow The last light in the darkness Then flickers-soon dies If not you behind me I could fall down to cry So eventually I leave Still wishing I knew While thoughts in my mind Still float down to you And so I do die Your thoughts never known But as I lay dead there My own thoughts are shown --------------------------------------- The End Sometimes i lay there when im still awake I'll get this feeling that the earth will shake There will be blood and some murderous tasks I know this wont end and forever it lasts Then the demons will raise up from earth's cracks We will raise up at first to take our earth back Then they will abuse us to no fearing end They take us in there hands and our spirts will bend And so the blood will run as people will die Well take up our arms and our bodies will fly They will make sure that we wont fight again Thats why we will die and our earth comes to end So whats the point in just asking me why When you know that we are all going to die You could run but there wont be an escape So when you lay there just hope you wont wake ------------------------------------------------- Misunderstanding What is happening to my soul? *It is falling for evermore. What are these flames? Where is my gold? *Your in hell now where souls are sold. Why aren’t I at heaven’s gates? *This is punishment to the wicked one’s fate Give me a chance, let me be free! *Hell is your eternity why can’t you see. These flames are torture! They burn my skin!! *So let them pass through so your spirit will bend. This can’t be hell for in him I believed! *But suicide leads to hell and to me. *For you took your life, left it to me! *So in hell now forever you shall be! ----------------------------------------------- Autumn Brown stricken wood of a gnarled tree Surrounded in shrubs and color filled leaves Filled with browns, reds, yellows, and greens And filled in the air, as migrating birds sing Autumn is beautiful this wondrous fall night Everything’s perfect, its all just so right Leaves soon fall as the wind does blow Sweeping and twirling leaves, putting on her great show Tree trunks are her body, branches her hair Leaves make up her dress, and her breath is the air She's beautiful to look at and how i stare in awe Because Autumn is beautiful on this great night of fall -----------------------------------------------  _______________ And now you ask, why was it that you fell by my doings, why is it that it had to be you... well... such is the just desserts of the wicked |
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dose - Ex-Student 
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Well done. Sounds to me like it should be put to some music. _______________ "If you hold back anything, I'll kill you. If you bend the truth or I think you're bending the truth, I'll kill you. If you forget anything , I'll kill you. In fact, you're going to have to try very hard to stay alive Nick. Now do you understand everything that I have said? Because if you don't, I'll kill you!" |
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joca_bt - Student 
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Man, u are very good. _______________ - Son to Helen Catherine ;p - Random bash.org quote: X: you know what google earth needs? | Y: More 3D buildings? | X: ion cannon button |
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Battlin' Billy - Student 
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LOL! Maybe my mind is in the gutter, but I had to laugh at the subject of this post. The poetry was very good, though. _______________ Midbie Council Member #2 - Profile ID 2073 | Member of B@rtM@ulS@ar | Owner of Monty's 2000th comment & D@RtHM@UL's 8100th comment | Former Padawan of SilkMonkey & Arcuss JA Goaltender & NHL Fan | Fellow Rush fan to Axion|Plo Koon is my oldest JA friend Post your RL pics HERE! | Post you JK2/JK3 screenies HERE! |
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Claudite - Ex-Student |
*rolls up the lyrics in ciggarette paper* That's some niiiiiice stuff! _______________ Yeah, so I have a lot of eggs.- Strong Bad |
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Axion - Student 
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thats some good stuff  _______________ Axion - Yeah. |
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Izthyen - Ex-Student 
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Do you really think so? ^_^ thanks alot!! _______________ And now you ask, why was it that you fell by my doings, why is it that it had to be you... well... such is the just desserts of the wicked |
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CuZzA - Student 
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VERY GOOD!!!! _______________ - Even if Carlsberg made "w*nkers", Christiano Ronaldo would still be the biggest "w*nker" in the world |
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