| Another One by Jake | |
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Jake Kainite - Student  |
I'm trying to write a song that feels breaks my heart, brings tears, appeals Making things rhyme is all to easy but making it mean something often turns out cheesy I'm trying my best but its starting to hurt all I need is that magic word written loads, all with pointless notions want to write one that feeds my emotions I know you think I'm wasting my time dreaming of something better, in rhyme Theres other things that I could do but instead I write these lines for you Most of you think this is really boring just stumbled on it browsing through this forum (like that line<<<  )but there is hope, maybe I'll own a big car cos if you're reading this then you've read this far see it can't be that bad if you're all still reading the curious part of your mind I'm feeding I'll stop now and let you go this one is finished, lost my flow  _______________ Apprenctice of Jedi Master Ascari (deceased) Descended from a line of great Jedi Will argue any point of view from any side |
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Lancer007 - Student 
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Woah thats a nice poem Jake. |
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Darkwood - Student 
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nice _______________ -Darkwood- |
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Jaiko D'Kana - Student 
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HAHA NICE ONE JAKE w00000t !!!!!! _______________ The greatest discovery of my generation is that a human being can alter his life by altering his attitudes of mind. William James (1842 - 1910) |
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Battlin' Billy - Student 
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Your ryhmes are hilarious, Though sometimes nefarious, Keep the ryhmes coming, And make them up fast, If someone doesn't like them, They can kiss my......toe!  _______________ Midbie Council Member #2 - Profile ID 2073 | Member of B@rtM@ulS@ar | Owner of Monty's 2000th comment & D@RtHM@UL's 8100th comment | Former Padawan of SilkMonkey & Arcuss JA Goaltender & NHL Fan | Fellow Rush fan to Axion|Plo Koon is my oldest JA friend Post your RL pics HERE! | Post you JK2/JK3 screenies HERE! |
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Bubu - Hubbub 
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haha this is hilarious JAKE RULES!! _______________ make install -not war |
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