| DARKNESS FALLING CHAPTER IV | |
|
Roan Belouve - Retired  |
Ulic's Story Continues You can Find it here. Follow the link  Comments welcome _______________ *Bro to Vaxxla,Padawan of FiZZandOdan-Wei Part of the mighty Belouve Dynasty-Knight of Nippledom.Twin of Selphestal!**Proud Master to Kaelis and Acura Friend to anyone who would call me the same . Pic by the amazing Majno (merry) This post was edited by Roan Belouve on Apr 21 2004 03:16am. |
| Poll | ||
|
Ok you know the drill ranking of the story so far (Chapters I - IV) Please let Ulic Know again if your rankings of it go up or down and feedback is great! Thanks
|
| Login and add your comment! |
| Comments |
|
Ulic Belouve - Student 
|
I'll put in my comments here: First off, thanks for the feedback. This thing is nice and too the point, because I based it all on a video game/RPG type of plot. I mean, there the stories are told by action, dialogue, and and great visual detail. No one plays a video game long to sit around in the Galactic Senate or something. I usually hated the political junk in the stories. I'll still place it in, but in the background. Also, this is fun for me, because I have to remember how things happened, and where I was initially going. Such as in this chapter: "Anorax gave Cid his lightsaber....hrmm.......oh....riiigghht I remember that incident." (Internal chuckle). Plus, I'll keep you guys in the dark about a lot of things, and reveal all of them in a sort of weaving pattern, so that you see everything come together at once. And again, the one thing that probably won't be figured out before I want it to be is exactly what Jared's last name is, and the significance to it. That'll be a fun trip. But I am working on subsequent chapters, though you will see a slowdown after Chapter VI. That's where I originally stopped writing, though I have picked it up again. But again, feedback, questions, comments, things you want to see. (I plan on having them drop by the Academy at some time, hafta throw the Ulic Belouve cameo in there). Well, maybe not the Academy. That'd confuse continuity. But I'll have them run into other ally Jedi. _______________ Jedi do not fight for peace. That's only a slogan, and is as misleading as slogans always are. Jedi fight for civilization, because only civilization creates peace. |
|
Jawa Rikard Falk - Ex-Student 
|
yeah bail i likea the story to _______________ bye all i had a great time here i will never forget it i really gonna miss u all |
|
Bail Hope of Belouve - Student 
|
w00000000t I still like the story!!  congrats!!  another 5... I personally really like the quotes from the Jedi Code and from Yoda. _______________ Visit the Belouve Family Website! Quote: I try to have fun with my friends and try to make a difference as best I can. What does making a difference mean? Well, it can be as simple as saying hello, answering a question that seems obvious or heck, just talking. -- Vladarion
Want to know Vladarion? Read the Article about his life here. |
|
Fire - Student 
|
Very awesome story Ulic I like the large amounts of dialogue that basically tell the story. Vast detail as well, great job! |
| Login and add your comment! |