| DARKNESS FALLING CHAPTER VI | |
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Roan Belouve - Retired  |
In a galaxy far far away........... You can Find it here. Follow the link  Comments welcome _______________ *Bro to Vaxxla,Padawan of FiZZandOdan-Wei Part of the mighty Belouve Dynasty-Knight of Nippledom.Twin of Selphestal!**Proud Master to Kaelis and Acura Friend to anyone who would call me the same . Pic by the amazing Majno (merry) |
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DJK - Student 
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oi cool stuff, you got your own web.....grr...i have to get done with my curse so i can too!  |
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Roan Belouve - Retired 
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Darth Bamse I'm sure it will be here soon. Email on Ulics profile. I'm sure he'll be glad to know people are looking forward to reading more. _______________ *Bro to Vaxxla,Padawan of FiZZandOdan-Wei Part of the mighty Belouve Dynasty-Knight of Nippledom.Twin of Selphestal!**Proud Master to Kaelis and Acura Friend to anyone who would call me the same . Pic by the amazing Majno (merry)
This comment was edited by Roan Belouve on May 24 2004 11:20am. |
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Darth Bamse - Student 
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Where is VII? The story surely doesn't end here? _______________ Why use only one saber, when you can use two, and double the mayhem? |
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Lackeh- Retired - Student 
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Keep them coming, good stuff. _______________ A champion is someone who keeps getting up; even when they can't. Founder Of the Jedi Academy Adlut Support Group. PIE!!!!! Padawan of Katan. Brother to MOTREC, DarkDragon, (SKX)DarkBlade, Jacen Aratan, Achilles, Kool_Aide, EvilSquirrel, and Katan's Padawans. |
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Ulic Belouve - Student 
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Yeah, the Angosian Star is powerful...for now... It's like anything else out there. The Jedi kicked ass for some time, then someone figured out how to give them a run for thei money. Same with the Yuzzan Vong, they kicked ass, but the good guys figured it out. I'll let the good guys win a bit, but their advantage will run out in time. You heard Delarus discussing countermeasures. Some of the new stuff will be at less of an advantage. _______________ Jedi do not fight for peace. That's only a slogan, and is as misleading as slogans always are. Jedi fight for civilization, because only civilization creates peace. |
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Bail Hope of Belouve - Student 
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okay, read this one too Quote: “Unidentified?” Delarus said, turning his full attention to the battle display. He saw the fighters with their properly assigned identification tags but one blip had no tag, glowing white was the unidentfied ship, coming in fast. shouldn't blip be blimp? Also, I really like the story again, but isn't that new ship a bit too powerful? how it just attack Anorax's ship like that...? but then, I have no objection to a little power Nice story, I'm looking forward to seeing the next _______________ Visit the Belouve Family Website! Quote: I try to have fun with my friends and try to make a difference as best I can. What does making a difference mean? Well, it can be as simple as saying hello, answering a question that seems obvious or heck, just talking. -- Vladarion
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Ulic Belouve - Student
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I've been working over the weekend to get Chapter VII done...I hope to get it polished to be posted NEXT WEEK. I simply ask your patience, as I have to try to write chapters inbetween all the other things I have to do (like earning an income). This past week was crazy too, over 50 hours, and at odd times as well (I had to work some 1 am to 5 am shifts, all sorts of nifty things from day to day.) But, don't worry. And to whet your appetite, I've figured out the name (I was debating the name for a long time) of one of the new characters I will bring in: Sierra Crimson I wanted to go with something along the lines of Scarlet, but the hard "c" makes it too rough. I wanted a better name. And then there will be Granite. He'll be fun. I also noticed a variety of items I THOUGHT I had put in the story thus far, but it wasn't there. I'll have to double-check that, but that makes writing some future chapters easier, as I have stuff to cover. But, yeah, this should be it for a little while. I'll write as fast as I can. _______________ Jedi do not fight for peace. That's only a slogan, and is as misleading as slogans always are. Jedi fight for civilization, because only civilization creates peace. |
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Daidalus[JAP] Fisto - Student ![Daidalus[JAP] Fisto](/image_thumbnail.php?f_type=users&f_width=49&f_height=70&f_image=3482.jpg&f_odd=1){kind=small}
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sweeet, but no time jet to read.. hang on, ill do it tomorrow ;-) /me waves daid _______________ Founder of the Fisto Family -|- Member of the mighty FiZZsters!! -|- Owner of the second Bail prize for "BAIL RULES!!" -|- I'll never forget you Jaina! -|- Owner of the one and only autograph of Smily -|- SMILY RULES -|- Owner of the 1000th Comment of the great Kueller -|- Big brother to NarCosT Fisto, and ShadowFax . -|- Proud Padawan of Kueller -|-Sir Daidalus Fisto. Official Historian of Nippledom and server to Menaxia, Queen of Nippledom Quote: fiZZe: "gdamubububugmgmgububugrrrrrdsa?"
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