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DJK - Student 
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awsome darth! 1000/10!-DJK |
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Plo Koon - Student 
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didnt read all of it but it was sure awesome  _______________ Free Tibet! Click this link,and learn Here too |
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Darth Bamse - Student 
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Quote: coolies, I like it especially the ending I really like it, congrats man I hope to see more of your work but please try to use " or ' when a character is talking like this: -"Evin!" my master Wenh called out. "You're back! We started to worry." it just makes it more easier to read, but that's just what I think, I'm sure a whole lot of people would disagree with me  Well, this is mainly an experiment. I'm testing various methods of writing. This time, I consiously did not use ":s or ':s. I intentionaly left room for a sequel. If I make one, it will be in a completely different style. _______________ Why use only one saber, when you can use two, and double the mayhem? |
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Bail Hope of Belouve - Student 
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coolies, I like it especially the ending I really like it, congrats man I hope to see more of your work but please try to use " or ' when a character is talking like this: -"Evin!" my master Wenh called out. "You're back! We started to worry." it just makes it more easier to read, but that's just what I think, I'm sure a whole lot of people would disagree with me _______________ Visit the Belouve Family Website! Quote: I try to have fun with my friends and try to make a difference as best I can. What does making a difference mean? Well, it can be as simple as saying hello, answering a question that seems obvious or heck, just talking. -- Vladarion
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Bail Hope of Belouve - Student 
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just give me a second, and I'll read it _______________ Visit the Belouve Family Website! Quote: I try to have fun with my friends and try to make a difference as best I can. What does making a difference mean? Well, it can be as simple as saying hello, answering a question that seems obvious or heck, just talking. -- Vladarion
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