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skankerkid - Student  |
His name is "Big Ed". I call him that because he looks huge. Because I am a fan of all anime with big guns he totes some serious firepower that i designed. Here are the two guns i decided to modify and change to become one: The look of a Derringer http://www.armsportllc.com/engraving_derringer.jpg With the ammo of a 40mm grenade langer http://www.streetpro.com/usp/launcher.html Along with a new type of ammo that is being developed for a german rifle: http://world.guns.ru/assault/as42-e.htm (Side Note: These would be 30mm artillery shells) If I had a scanner I would give yall a picture but thats not gonna happen anytime soon. But the end result is pure genius. So for Big Ed's background: Orphaned at birth, he had a deformaty in his brain. His brain can never rest. It is constantly working overtime. It doesnt even slow down when he's a sleep. Even when he sleeps he only sleeps for about 2 hours. He is constantly active. So while he is constantly active he learns things. Some things being good and some bad. In all actuallity he learns how to make things. In his case he learns how to build / customized guns. and ... i got nothing else. OKOK i got it. His parents lifestyle were you could say more than sedentary. They litteratly sat and did nothing day in and day out. With there inactivity and his active brain he saught out to do things. Being an A student and expert athlete he needed more challenges. His 1st job at the age 13 was an asistant to a professer of enginnering at his local university.....and that will eventually lead to the gun part. _______________ Shout out to DJ Sith cause he's my big bro. Shout out to Debbie because she's my sister in-law. Also it aint cool if aint skewed. This post was edited by skankerkid on Jul 05 2004 06:55am. |
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Acey Spadey - Student 
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sounds good although you may need to deepen his history a little more. like what was the reason for this wanting to customise and create better guns and stuff. you could also add what type of job he has to bring in capital so he has money to spend on the making of the guns and could put a bit more in about his childhood and stuff that may have affected him then. is he a superhero and gonna save lives? is he a supervillan and gonna take lives? or is he just gonna be just himself and stuff what are his goals in life. _______________ .Lag Bro to Xanatos. Adopted Twin to Bubu. Big-Brother to SmilyKrazy ---- JATSRAD Guru, JASE Member, JA SP Mod Staff ---- The Order of the Stick -- Big thanks to Mango for my avatar -- Quote: Sometimes you've got to specifically go out of your way to get into trouble. It's called fun.
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Mic Den Octela - Student 
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YAY FOR ANIME !!!!  _______________ -Padawan of Virtue -Brother of Menaxia, *|irael, Krynn Adept, Majno, Ris Win Juljul, DaMi3N, Beowulf, Dash Starlight, Carrock and Yuken Zalak Bartender at Munes bar. Sir Mic of Nippledom! Proudly beating Wang, since '07. (Crackdown) |
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