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Lucas "Luke" Ammons
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Senor Hat - Student 
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I'll give it a look mate  Also welcome to the academy _______________ I have beaten The Internet. The end guy was hard. |
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Rinzler - Student 
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Don't throw your opinions at me, I don't care. your story completely ignored every other religion in the world except muslims and christians. What about jews, catholics, bhuddists, hindus etc? they all do a mass convert to either 'radical muslims' or 'eternally correct christians'? epic storytelling. Those are your opinions in that story and I also have a right to disagree with them. I'm not going to get into an arguement about 'the war on terror' because i'm criticizing your story, not your country. On another note I thought, along with the religious war theme it was very poor. A lot of parts didn't make sense, for instance a building being 'triagular' is impossible as a triangle is a two demensional object and there wouldn't be any space inside it to live. You also borrowed a lot from real world events and didn't bother to disguise them when attempting to write fiction. If you want to make a reply to my post, do it in your thread where it belongs and keep your political views off my profile. Nathaniel Ricardo von Mertzelder Anthony Francesco Broderick the 69th "Dane" _______________ I fite for teh usars!1 This comment was edited by Rinzler on Oct 06 2006 06:12am. |
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Jade Jedi - Retired 
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That's ok mate it happens all the time.  _______________ *CLICKEH->Never risk the Fett Man|*Download my Saber here. Made by master craftsman Pink Floyd_Mintaka + his 2002 & 4000 comment's [Laz's 700th comment][BDKawika's 600th comment] & Owner of a TOWEL award!!|Master: Sared Padawans: Rage-Ball and Dante Eagle.|*Jade Jedi at The Jedi Academy Archives "There's only one Return and it's not of the King it's of the Jedi" Randal Clerks 2 The top 10 reasons why I procrastinate: 1. |
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Virtue - Jedi Council 
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NotSoLittleCaesar - Student 
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woot. the name lucas rules! _______________ Quote: I mostly agree oh Lord of the squeezy mop
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Aiddat - Student 
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I don't know, you kind of make it seem like Muslims are bad guys. I don't agree with all the bombing, but you did it too much. _______________ -Aiddat, the Gran with the green blades. "You have a right to be angry, but believe me when I say you don't want to feed that emotion." - Kyle Katarn {Owner of Liso Jowol's 550th comment, Conchris Chaotic's 80th, 150th and 350th comments, Pink Floyd's 200th comment Tyrant's 695th comment, D@RTHM@UL's 10600th comment}, accidentally tricked Pink Floyd into giving me his 1700th comment, I also have Alexander D'Kana's 1950th comment, Mindrith Pride's 1850th comment and I used the same accidental trick on Lewis's 100th comment, and I have Aiddat's 1992nd comment (birthyear), and #Elmo's 450th comment. Unsuccessfully tried to prove Senor Hat's theory wrong. Click for screenshots. Padawan of R2-D2. |
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Aiddat - Student 
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Okay, I'm not very active here... I guess I'll read it. _______________ -Aiddat, the Gran with the green blades. "You have a right to be angry, but believe me when I say you don't want to feed that emotion." - Kyle Katarn {Owner of Liso Jowol's 550th comment, Conchris Chaotic's 80th, 150th and 350th comments, Pink Floyd's 200th comment Tyrant's 695th comment, D@RTHM@UL's 10600th comment}, accidentally tricked Pink Floyd into giving me his 1700th comment, I also have Alexander D'Kana's 1950th comment, Mindrith Pride's 1850th comment and I used the same accidental trick on Lewis's 100th comment, and I have Aiddat's 1992nd comment (birthyear), and #Elmo's 450th comment. Unsuccessfully tried to prove Senor Hat's theory wrong. Click for screenshots. Padawan of R2-D2. |
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Mic Den Octela - Student 
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Heya Lucas! I'll read it as soon as I get a minute! _______________ -Padawan of Virtue -Brother of Menaxia, *|irael, Krynn Adept, Majno, Ris Win Juljul, DaMi3N, Beowulf, Dash Starlight, Carrock and Yuken Zalak Bartender at Munes bar. Sir Mic of Nippledom! Proudly beating Wang, since '07. (Crackdown) |
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Ash_Ayuni - Ex-Student 
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Nice to meet you Taav. Coreyn_Rell..I live in Florida right now, but soon I'll be moving back to Maryland. Hope to see you in game. Be Safe. |
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Smilykrazy - Retired 
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cool welcome to the JA!! I will read your story in a bit when I have more time and less homework. I hope you like it in the JA! Its been my family for four years now _______________ RIP MOM 06/29/58-07/31/08 Married to Koyi Donita 4/30/11 |
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Virtue - Jedi Council 
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Hello there. Welcome to the Jedi Academy! - Virtue.  _______________ Academy Architect |
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Dash Starlight - Jedi Instructor 
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Thanks Will get back to ya soon as Im done reading EDIT: I think you wrote a nice story Plenty of imagination where it came from; good job _______________ The name is Bond. James Bond. This comment was edited by Dash Starlight on Oct 05 2006 02:18pm. |
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Everon - Student - The winner!!! 
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Yeah, thats right . EDIT: Neither bungie or lucas, I would like to work at Valve =]. This comment was edited by Everon on Oct 05 2006 03:34pm. |
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Dash Starlight - Jedi Instructor
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Sounds cool Im not sure if I have the time to actually write stories, because of Real Life. Im busy with my study - becoming a teacher of English - as well as with preparing Classes for JK3. But yeah, post anyway, I may not be able to help writing, but I can comment on it if you like _______________ The name is Bond. James Bond. |
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Luke - Ex-Student 
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Hello, Jade. Man I feel imbrarest, It was a case of mistaken idenity, sorry. Actually I sometimes have friends over to play Halo, A sci-fi first person shooter, devolper is Bungie Studios a subsidary of Microsoft. What is your rank, if you don't mind me asking sir? I would lke to use proper rank. In wrighting my story, I tried base the Cybernetic Hunters off real U.S. Marine Recon units. Although the Cybernetic Hunters are a intergalatic force. There are made up of Humans, Reptilians (two seprate species, one that's off a Kamodo Dragon deadly bacteria-filled saliva, and herendes appitte for rotten meat (on occusion live, prey bad guys) The other reptilians are based off marine igaunas, they are more sophiscated in there curlture and grammaticly then the "Komodo Dragons" The "iguanas" speak with a thick british accent, and they eat sumerged seaweed not meat. They both produce pungent gas becuse this. The Cybernetic Hunters use this in combat, mathane gas+lighter=flamethower. If you see any U.S. Marines on your base show them this message. Good d'y, mate Lucas Ammons P.S. Have a ton of friends. _______________ Lucas Ammons This comment was edited by Luke on Oct 05 2006 01:08am. |
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Jaiko D'Kana - Student 
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_______________ The greatest discovery of my generation is that a human being can alter his life by altering his attitudes of mind. William James (1842 - 1910) |
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Dash Starlight - Jedi Instructor 
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Ofcourse I wouldnt mind reading more Sure, you can just post on my profile, Id appreciate it, but maybe it's a good idea to use the Showcase Forum. It's a Forum specially designed for any kind of art - it be modding, scripting, creating avatars or in your case, writing stories. That way, not just I, but everyone in the JA can find the stories (People are more likely to check that Forum than my profile.) People may (and probably will) read it, give opinions if you like and generally be entertained. Take care man _______________ The name is Bond. James Bond. This comment was edited by Dash Starlight on Oct 04 2006 07:56am. |
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Jade Jedi - Retired 
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Hi Taav, your Dad was in the U.S Marines that cool, I have worked with the Marines a few times when they have been to Australia and they're always a good bunch of guys to talk to and very profesional. I to am a diehard Star Wars fan, as are most of the guys here, as for calling me Master Jedi, thats ok, like Sete said it's not required but you can if you like. Sory to that you dont get out much or have many friends due to Cerebral Palsy, it must be terible, I can only imagine you must get lonly at times so feel free to post no my profile for a chat any time. Although if you want to post any of your story's you might like to make a thread here at the Showcase Forum called Taav's storys or something, so everyone can get the chance to read them and contribute if you wish.  As for becoming my Padawan, here is what I look for in a padawan, firstly: 1. they would need to be on the servers at the same time of day as me so we can train. 2. would need to be active on the servers preferably the Home server. 3. they would need to be interested in learning to use single saber stance. 4. and I would like to have known them for a good while so I can get an idea of what they are like as a person. So it's not a no, let's just say we'll see how it goes for now, you might like to get to know some of our JAK+ from the U.S so your time's are more compatable. Anyway good luck and I hope to see you around, all the best Jade. p.s. I noticed you put ma'am at the end of your post on my profile, just so you know I'm a man. _______________ *CLICKEH->Never risk the Fett Man|*Download my Saber here. Made by master craftsman Pink Floyd_Mintaka + his 2002 & 4000 comment's [Laz's 700th comment][BDKawika's 600th comment] & Owner of a TOWEL award!!|Master: Sared Padawans: Rage-Ball and Dante Eagle.|*Jade Jedi at The Jedi Academy Archives "There's only one Return and it's not of the King it's of the Jedi" Randal Clerks 2 The top 10 reasons why I procrastinate: 1. This comment was edited by Jade Jedi on Oct 04 2006 07:14am. |
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Setementor - Jedi Master 
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Quote: Aslo forgive me calling every teacher here "master JedI." It's okay, I was just trying to point out that it isn't required. There have been others who use that often because they thought it essential. Anyway, if all you want to do is talk, I'm on IRC a lot. Just run the applet, connect and double-click my name from the nicklist, then you'll be able to chat with me (if I'm not too busy).  |
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Luke - Ex-Student 
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More general Infromation: My dad was in the US Marines. If you use most lingo I'll understand. I'm 18 years-old, from Kansas. A die hard star wars fan, and aspiring writer. I have cerebral palsy, and don't get out that much (with friends) forgive me if I post a lot of messages on anyone'sprofile. It's just nice to someone to talk someone. Aslo forgive me calling every teacher here "master JedI." I honestly was trying to show respect to them, and ment no annoyce. Lucas Ammons, AKA: Taav Sharroock _______________ Lucas Ammons This comment was edited by Luke on Oct 05 2006 01:04pm. |
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Setementor - Jedi Master
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Quote: I'm a aspiring writer, and I gave some general information about myself, My I be your Padawan, Now? My previous post answers that very question perfectly well, in my opinion: Quote: So, there are various different ways you can learn here. One way is if a staff member decides to take you on. Personally, I get a lot of padawan requests. Unfortunately, I am unable to train everybody who asks on a regular basis. I currently do not have the time for it, so until I do, I am not able to accept anymore padawans. I will, however, leave you with some advice on how to get a master. A master is most likely to take you on if they know you fairly well and feel you could benefit from their guidance. In order to know them better, you must be patient, active and get to know people more. Imagine that the roles were reversed - would you want to take on somebody you have never met before based on a first impression? You need to be able to trust your padawans, and trust takes time. |
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Dash Starlight - Jedi Instructor
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Awesome, if you ever need me give me a nudge And welcome to the Academy! Not to be critical or anything.. but realize writing phantasy stories about Christians vs radical Muslims may be a sensitive topic. Dont worry though, im sure you meant nothing by it I hope to see you around at the servers man _______________ The name is Bond. James Bond. This comment was edited by Dash Starlight on Oct 03 2006 06:38pm. |
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Luke - Ex-Student
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I'am 18 year-old from the "sunflower state" U.S.A. A Die Hard Star Wars fan Am I. Currently working on two Sci-fi stories: Cybernetic Hunters: Phoneix oF Evil, and Cybernetic Hunters: Sickness. Can E-mail first chapters of both stories to JA Forums. No stealing of Ideas from anyone! For new ideas, E-mail me at: ljataav@hotmail.com, or talk to me about my stories on my profile. Taav Sharroock _______________ Lucas Ammons |
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Setementor - Jedi Master 
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Unfortunately, I am afraid I must respectfully decline your request. Before I explain why, however, there are some important details you should know about the academy: The Jedi Academy is not a place that roleplays and is organised to work in a similar way to that seen in a Star Wars movie or game; it is an online school with a respectful community that are almost all willing to help you to the best of their ability. You shouldn't take the academy so seriously. You are not required to refer to anybody as "Master Jedi". Most people choose to refer to eachother by name, which is what most people tend to be happy with. The academy has one goal: to help you become a better Jedi Knight: Jedi Academy player. There are various ways in which we achieve this goal, other than taking somebody on as a padawan. We provide classes for you to enroll in (if you can make time for them), a holocron full of lots of useful information (soon to contain more detail), a respectful community with several servers for you to train on and even get help from your fellow students and staff members, and also some forums for you to ask questions in or just make a discussion. If you would like to have a live chat, you can use the chat applet to connect to the academy Internet Relay Chat channel - just make sure you stay there for at least a couple of minutes for a response (it's annoying when somebody connects, says "hi", then disconnects half a minute later before anybody has a chance to respond). So, there are various different ways you can learn here. One way is if a staff member decides to take you on. Personally, I get a lot of padawan requests. Unfortunately, I am unable to train everybody who asks on a regular basis. I currently do not have the time for it, so until I do, I am not able to accept anymore padawans. I will, however, leave you with some advice on how to get a master. A master is most likely to take you on if they know you fairly well and feel you could benefit from their guidance. In order to know them better, you must be patient, active and get to know people more. Imagine that the roles were reversed - would you want to take on somebody you have never met before based on a first impression? You need to be able to trust your padawans, and trust takes time. On that note, I have recently noticed that you have been posting an entirely new comment when you wanted to add to your previous post. If after you have made a comment, you feel that you have missed something out and would like to edit it, there is an "Edit" link below your profile picture. If you click it, you will be brought to a page where you can edit your comment. This comment was edited by Setementor on Oct 03 2006 03:00pm. |
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Jade Jedi - Retired
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No probs mate, first of all ensure that your GMT Offset in the "Edit Your Profile" is set to your time zone so classes will be shown in your local time (which I think is GMT-5 for you). Then go to the Classes Page and find a class your interested in, click on "Details" then simply click "Enroll in this class." Making sure you meet the requirements of the class if there are any. If you have any more questions feel free to drop me a line. All the best and I know you'll have fun in the classes, enjoy. _______________ *CLICKEH->Never risk the Fett Man|*Download my Saber here. Made by master craftsman Pink Floyd_Mintaka + his 2002 & 4000 comment's [Laz's 700th comment][BDKawika's 600th comment] & Owner of a TOWEL award!!|Master: Sared Padawans: Rage-Ball and Dante Eagle.|*Jade Jedi at The Jedi Academy Archives "There's only one Return and it's not of the King it's of the Jedi" Randal Clerks 2 The top 10 reasons why I procrastinate: 1. This comment was edited by Jade Jedi on Oct 03 2006 09:03am. |
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