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Liso - Student  |
For the people who wanna know: Finally I wrote a new chapter.. Sorry it took so long  Well here is chapter three Sorrow, pain and death I would like to know what you think about it! _______________ "We make a living out of what we get, we make a life out of what we give." |
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Aiddat - Student 
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Grim sounding name... I like the story. _______________ -Aiddat, the Gran with the green blades. "You have a right to be angry, but believe me when I say you don't want to feed that emotion." - Kyle Katarn {Owner of Liso Jowol's 550th comment, Conchris Chaotic's 80th, 150th and 350th comments, Pink Floyd's 200th comment Tyrant's 695th comment, D@RTHM@UL's 10600th comment}, accidentally tricked Pink Floyd into giving me his 1700th comment, I also have Alexander D'Kana's 1950th comment, Mindrith Pride's 1850th comment and I used the same accidental trick on Lewis's 100th comment, and I have Aiddat's 1992nd comment (birthyear), and #Elmo's 450th comment. Unsuccessfully tried to prove Senor Hat's theory wrong. Click for screenshots. Padawan of R2-D2. |
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Darth Jason - Student 
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nice _______________ I have seen EP3 now I can die happy and complete. Happy Star Wars Completion day everyone!!!! |
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Wicek - Nugget 
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I just finished reading of your story and everything is OK, except those poor stormies in first chapter  Liso could use other way - mind trick or even run, but it also make sense, because she hanged with that evil Yall so she do work in bad way I like it |
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Phantom - Student 
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Nice _______________ -Phantom Ex-Master to Threat. Proud owner of Sazabi's 1500th comment! And Threats 50th comment "Insanity: a perfect rational adjustment to an insane world" |
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Mister Clutch - Student 
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Nice story .. |
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