| Star Wars Jedi Academy: Novel - Song of Harmony | |
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Lian Del Rey - Student  |
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away... STAR WARS The Jedi Academy Episode 3 Song of Harmony Six years have passed since all the casualties in the Age of War. The Empress has a fled to the planet of Coruscant to make a hidden base there, leaving the the Deathstar completely defenseless. Josh, who has managed to keep from morning the death of his master, Vaughn or more commonly now known as Shadow~G, has gone to the planet of Naboo where they are making the new Jedi Academy. There are rumors that the Empress got a new apprentice from the Jedi Academy. But from all messages from the Empress, she claims she has no apprentice. However, there are now more casualties reported from Coruscant now more than ever. Now, Josh and his fellow Jedi are disguised as imperialists to interrogate any other imperial and discover what is the source of this problem.. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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[Not in story] Markos, all the Jedi that would be on X-Wings have docked on the Star Destroyer. _______________ slorp |
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MarkoZ - Student 
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Markos leapt into the pilot seat of the shuttle, his front smarting from the impact and his lungs still stinging after being in a vaccuum. The fingers of his metal hand clicking on the yoke, Markos turned the shuttle around just in time to see the hull of the Star Destroyer be sucked out into space, a glowing blade just visible inside the gap. "What the!" Markos yelled as a flight of X-Wings shot past him towards the hole. He turned the Lambda-class shuttle after them. _______________ "Easy is not for a Jedi"- Corran Horn, "I Jedi" Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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The ruby blade burned through the red figure like it was nothing. But another one flew overhead, casting fire below at the Jedi. He jumped up and burned its wings off. The Jedi landed and looked at the demons surrounding him now. "This has gone on way too long," he said, and made the earth below him quake. The demons flew backwards, and the Jedi ran over to a demonic pedestal. He placed his hand on a button, and fire sprayed from the pedestal. There was pure red light that appeared taking form of a crystal-like shape. The Jedi grinned and placed his hand on the lines. But to his surprise, his hand went right through the shape. "What?!" he said. He frustratedly growled and turned. He, Soong, then jumped into his TIE Fighter and took off. Leaving Mideon's body completely defenseless. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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[Not in story] Kyle, you must realize that the whole story's not based on you. Or Trekked. Or Lianiotte. Or Shadow~G. It's based on the Adventures of the Jedi Academy. There is no main character. And if your character gets pushed back and pwned by Aeril's 1337 skills, then your character gets pushed back and pwned by Aeril's 1337 skills. EDIT: I didn't make a huge display of feminism intentionally. I was just making the female characters do stuff. And hey, you missed a few "she"s and "her"s.  _______________ slorp This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on Feb 10 2004 05:25am. |
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Kyle Sieran - Student 
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[not in story] whos fighting? I never intended a fight, just wondering why my character was reduced to a retard with a saber and given two lines??? And is the theme of the story supposed to be comical?It seems like it. _______________ -If a Jedi ignites his lightsaber, he must be ready to take a life. If he is not so prepared, he must keep his weapon at his side.- ~Odan Urr Keeper Of Antiquities~ [Brother to Shadow(JAP), Kyle Katarn(JAS),Medlar,The White Wizard, D@RtHM@UL, and ROBIN OF LOCKSLEY!!!! (ROBIN)/(ROBIN HOOD)]/ NOW KNOWN AS Sednox (if he changes his name one more time...POW!) Which is bigger? A mole of NaCl? or a mole of Pb?
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Vaughn - Student 
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[not in story] can we stop with the fighting please! not in the story... fight scenes are always the coolest. I mean in the workings... can we stop fighting! DONT YOU REALIZE ITS TERING US APART!!! And as you are currently aware, my spelling sux0rz.  _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student 
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[not in story] Kyle.... basically what happened, Aeril just showed her l33t skillz, and 0wn3d some random jedi. She never said that Kyle was killed... just knocked back from the wall. [in story] Shadow~G looked up, and smiled. "Come now... is that ALL you can do? My girl-friend and The Empress were much scarier than that." He said with a chuckle. "What..." Aeril started. "Well, first off, had you not shown us that you can slice us in half as easily as butter, then we would have been much more SCARED if you did it during a fight. Man, evil is just not evil anymore." "Do you mock me?" "But of course! Evil is just not evil anymore." "Master... what the heck are you trying to prove? and You had a girlfriend!?" Josh asked worriedly. "I am just proving to her that she doesn't scare me," Shadow~G whispered to Josh, "now ignite your sabers, and get ready for the biggest battle of our lives. This may be the time when the pain returns. And yes... it was quite interesting... how do you think I built the Black Academy?" "yes master...you dirty man." "oh yes... drop the Master... I don't want to die again with you calling me master." "yes ma...Shadow~G." Shadow~G and Aeril took their battle stances. Aeril, with her sabers, in their respective hands, pointing up and to the side. Shadow, with his saber in his left hand, right hand extended, with his saber pointed at Aeril's chest. "I bet you've never seen this move before..." Shadow~G said quietly. "Actually... I have. Let me guess, you will throw the saber at me?" Aeril said cooly. "Damn..." Shadow~G thought to himself. "I never thought of that..." They stood staring eachother down. Each one ready to kill anything that moved. The tension was high, Everyone felt as if the final battle was about to begin. The pain was too much.. Ioshee coughed... Shadow~G and Aeril both disappeared. Aeril and Shadow~G landed with their backs to eachother. Both had a single saberburn down the right side of their cheek. "Good shot. I was expecting something... else. But look, I'm shaking. Let me take a breather. You, young (not dead) fokes, have some fun." Shadow said as he sat down. "I have all the time in the world to kill you Jedi." "Let her have it" Kyle said as he ran forward. [not in story] Id write more... but im tired and scared. _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] Note: Josh carries his masters old saber (both the black and the green one), but does not use them. He uses his dual shortened orange blades... _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Kyle Sieran - Student
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[Not in Story] Geez, sorry. Didn't know Wingless was a woman! you went all out vengeance on me and my character, portraying him as the retarded jedi who thinks he can solve any problem with a lightsaber. You then proceeded to create a flagrant display of feminism! Quote: Kyle walked over to where they thought the door was. "Nothing I can't handle." He activated his blade and started cutting where the door would have been. BANG The wall in front of him exploded and he flew backwards, a small part of him having... a small fire on him. The pilots got out of their ships. To their side, a rectangular part of the wall got kicked down, revealing a lady in robes. Shadow~G lead the group of X-Wings. The lady in the robes walked over to the group of the reborn Jedi and pulled off her hood. "Lianiotte!" Acey Spadey cried. And all the Jedi (except Kyle) warmly greeted all the reborn Jedi. "Lianiotte," Aeth S'kray said, "your clone is here." The Wingless emerged from out of the shadows. Lianiotte looked at The Wingless and laid her eyes on Aeth S'kray. "She's not a clone." The Jedi gasped. "You're the clone then?" Ulic asked. "No," Lianiotte responded. "Neither of us are clones. Although we are very much alike. No, we are not sisters either. It's hard to explain... and now's not the time to explain it either. Aeril waits beyond this wall. The door behind Aeril hissed open. She had sensed their progress the whole time, and she has been drawing more power from the crystals while she was waiting. Markos de Dranz smacked into a lambda shuttle that was fortunately flying by. He smashed about four of them (Alt fire) and ran Grendo ran over to Wingless and did rapid fire on her. But The Wingless moved her saber where he was going to shoot right before he pulled the trigger.The Wingless looked like she wanted to lay down and sleep. She looked like she was about to yawn. "Okay, Grendo," she said, "this has gone on WAY too long." She activated her cyan (yes, cyan) lightsaber and shoved it into Grendo Jenta's stomach. Grendo went wide-eyed, of course. The Wingless didn't believe in making her enemies suffer, so shetwirled her lightsaber and removed his head clear off his body. She then gripped both him and his head and threw the two into the nearest pit. Aeril had no shocked look on her face at all. "You cannot win, Aeril," Kyle said. "Believe me," Aeril said, "The Empress hacked into my computer system before. I don't want her around any more than you do. I need this power. But it's not like I couldn't beat you all without the power." "I beg to differ," Shadow~G said, activating his She made her polished lightsaber hilt fly into her hands. She twirled the hilt around and activated her own... black... lightsaber. But then she moved her left hand, and another hilt flew into her hand. "Yes," Aeril interrupted. "And I have better control of it then you'll ever find in your entire life." She swung her black lightsaber and instantly 2 Jedi (which were about 18 feet away from her) died. I get childishly knocked out due to arrogance? I'm in the story for two posts and I already look like an idiot! Not to mention you trying to compensate me with a one liner which i say appearing from nowhere after not being heard of!! Do I even fight in that battle? And I know my battle plots may be hard to follow, but Lian, I've seen you do better! I had no clue how you were attacking except the times you referred to moves from the game which by the way I'm assuming you did to mock my post in some belligerent fashion. I'm not mad or anything, don't assume that in this post, but It seems like I just got raped!!!! Info please!!! _______________ -If a Jedi ignites his lightsaber, he must be ready to take a life. If he is not so prepared, he must keep his weapon at his side.- ~Odan Urr Keeper Of Antiquities~ [Brother to Shadow(JAP), Kyle Katarn(JAS),Medlar,The White Wizard, D@RtHM@UL, and ROBIN OF LOCKSLEY!!!! (ROBIN)/(ROBIN HOOD)]/ NOW KNOWN AS Sednox (if he changes his name one more time...POW!) Which is bigger? A mole of NaCl? or a mole of Pb?
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The Jedi kept running until they got into a square room which they could have sworn had a door earlier. They turned but the door had disappeared. Kyle walked over to where they thought the door was. "Nothing I can't handle." He activated his blade and started cutting where the door would have been. BANG The wall in front of him exploded and he flew backwards, a small part of him having... a small fire on him. Traditionally colored X-Wings were flying by Aeril's ship. The pilots got out of their ships. To their side, a rectangular part of the wall got kicked down, revealing a lady in robes. Shadow~G lead the group of X-Wings. All the Jedi that have died all those years earlier used their Speed Jump (like speed, foward, and jump) and landed in the ship... On foot. Not skidding. The lady in the robes walked over to the group of the reborn Jedi and pulled off her hood. "Lianiotte!" Acey Spadey cried. And all the Jedi (except Kyle) warmly greeted all the reborn Jedi. "Lianiotte," Aeth S'kray said, "your clone is here." The Wingless emerged from out of the shadows. Lianiotte looked at The Wingless and laid her eyes on Aeth S'kray. "She's not a clone." The Jedi gasped. "You're the clone then?" Ulic asked. "No," Lianiotte responded. "Neither of us are clones. Although we are very much alike. No, we are not sisters either. It's hard to explain... and now's not the time to explain it either. Aeril waits beyond this wall." The Jedi walked through the rectangular hole on the wall to find the final hall to the Star Destroyer command room. Chin-up, they walked down the hall. [Not in story] The control room looks like the control room on the JK2 Star Destroyer map. [In story] The door behind Aeril hissed open. She had sensed their progress the whole time, and she has been drawing more power from the crystals while she was waiting. Markos de Dranz smacked into a lambda shuttle that was fortunately flying by. He jumped through the window, grabbed the rodian pilot, and threw him out. He pressed a button and a new window appeared. He turned the lambda around and headed towards Aeril's ship. JX-024 stepped in front of Aeril. "No matter what reprogramming you get you'll always be as moronic as the original droid," Aeril said impatiently. "Be thankful that I'm going to let you use your blaster today. Now, fire at the Jedi, conveniently fail, get pushed away in a corner by one of the Jedi and wait for the more superior Grendo Jenta come to dispose of them." "As you wish, master," JX-024 said. He pulled out a built-in E-11 and fired at the Jedi. And to Aeril's surprise, he shot down a random Jedi. And to her not-surprise, a Jedi jumped up, stood on JX-024's shoulders and sliced his head off. Almost. He jumped off his shoulders and pushed him in a corner. Grendo Jenta emerged from the darkness. He pulled out a flamethrower and started burning up the Jedi robes. He quickly switched to the Imperial Repeater and fired at the group of Jedi. He smashed about four of them (Alt fire) and ran up to Aeth S'kray. Grendo shot the big blue orb at Aeth, who flew backwards. Grendo was about to shoot another one, but Aeth pushed it back. It would have landed on Aeril's foot if she hadn't grabbed a longsword and whacked the blue orb (which's energy poured all over the room.) Grendo ran over to Wingless and did rapid fire on her. But The Wingless moved her saber where he was going to shoot right before he pulled the trigger. Grendo's repeater made a coughing-like noise. "Ammo," he grumbled, grabbed a pack, and smacked it into his repeater. He fired again. The Wingless looked like she wanted to lay down and sleep. She looked like she was about to yawn. "Okay, Grendo," she said, "this has gone on WAY too long." She activated her cyan (yes, cyan) lightsaber and shoved it into Grendo Jenta's stomach. Grendo went wide-eyed, of course. The Wingless didn't believe in making her enemies suffer, so she twirled her lightsaber and removed his head clear off his body. She then gripped both him and his head and threw the two into the nearest pit. Aeril had no shocked look on her face at all. "You cannot win, Aeril," Kyle said. "Believe me," Aeril said, "The Empress hacked into my computer system before. I don't want her around any more than you do. I need this power. But it's not like I couldn't beat you all without the power." "I beg to differ," Shadow~G said, activating his black lightsaber. Aeril raised her eyebrow. "Let's play rough then." The Jedi activated their own lightsabers. Aeril put her hand in the air, and all the imperial officers in the room disappeared. She made her polished lightsaber hilt fly into her hands. She twirled the hilt around and activated her own... black... lightsaber. But then she moved her left hand, and another hilt flew into her hand. That saber color was red. But not any ordinary colored red. It was red like a sunset. "Aeril," Shadow~G said, "your black glow is huge. Did you—?" "Yes," Aeril interrupted. "And I have better control of it then you'll ever find in your entire life." She swung her black lightsaber and instantly 2 Jedi (which were about 18 feet away from her) died. She butterflied into the group of Jedi and then performed the lightsaber shield. She made her red lightsaber burn into the chest of a Black Academy Jedi. That Jedi flashed red and then turned into a ruby statue. A few seconds later, he tumbled in rock. She made her red lightsaber then do the lightsaber shield move around her and not the black one. She then placed both of her hands on her black lightsaber hilt. A Jedi ran up to her, and their lightsabers crashed into eachother. But this wasn't any ordinary lightsaber crash sound. It was very loud, and it sounded like a hole ripping in space. The sound made the Jedi get stumped, and then Aeril sliced down from the Jedi's head. The two parts of his body fell away from eachother, but then suddenly stopped in air. Where the flesh would be was moving shadow, and then the body turned black and disappeared in a cloud of shadow. Aeril grinned. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Remember to check the Coffee Break page frequently. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Yeah! And Wingless is a Jedi Master! Do it over and do it right!! _______________ slorp |
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MarkoZ - Student 
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[Not in Story] Wingless is a woman, Kyle! _______________ "Easy is not for a Jedi"- Corran Horn, "I Jedi" Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol. |
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Kyle Sieran - Student 
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As Josh and Wingless started their way down the catwalks, Josh signaled with his hand a stop. "Wait", he said. Wingless turned to look at him "What's wrong?", he said. A brief silence fell over the corridor before Josh's saber flew into his hand from his belt and quickly ignited its green blade as he took a jab into a dark corner on his left side of the corridor, only to be parried by a silver blade which shone keenly in the corner which immidiately countered the jab with a top right slash that moved almost as if the saber was acting by itself. The figure did a front flip behind Josh and in front of Wingless. Wingless only took a split second to glance at the figure. He was a man, full adult, unknown age, wearing the requisites of a jedi;brown boots, blackish greyish combat pants, hooded grey robe, and a combat vest (jedi trainer model from jk3 but with a grey hooded robe). He then ignited his saber to help his friend. Josh took a diagonal swing at the figure who effortlessly blocked it only to swing his lightsaber over his head and behind him to counter a side swipe made by Wingless which he also glanced off sidely leaving Wingless open for a split second which he took advantage of extending the end of his boot into Wingless's face which sent him sprawling across the ground. As Wingless fell, Josh charged at the figure, who did a run up over him into a back flip (the kick so common in jk2) sending Josh to the floor. A White Academy member did a full fledged force leap over wingless who was on the ground and strafe jumped into the air with his purple saber ignited about to swing as the figure extended his hand calling the force to keep the student sailing over him, only to tumble into a fall on his back. As he fell Josh sensed something about the jedi as he combated. The light side. "WAIT!", he shouted to a knight about to swing at the figure, who stopped. "He's a Jedi!", he exclaimed, as the figure removed his hood. Under the hood veiled a semi-aged face brown hair, green eyes, and a small beard. His hair bundled up into a masters bun. He looked about quietly at them. Josh attacked him because he felt the dark side in that corner, but as the man fought, he let his defenses down and the light side shimmered radiantly. Apparently, he used a darkside blanket to hide himself on the ship. Amazing thought Josh. The others began to sense this as well and deignited their sabers. Wingless stood up rubbing his face as he said, "Well, do you have a name?". He stood their deigniting his dual phase saber, and looked at them all before replying with a full voice, "Kyle. Kyle Sieran, Jedi Master. And that saber that belongs to your master" he said, pointing a finger at Josh. "It may contain one of the crystals being so feverishly hunted for." He said sternly. _______________ -If a Jedi ignites his lightsaber, he must be ready to take a life. If he is not so prepared, he must keep his weapon at his side.- ~Odan Urr Keeper Of Antiquities~ [Brother to Shadow(JAP), Kyle Katarn(JAS),Medlar,The White Wizard, D@RtHM@UL, and ROBIN OF LOCKSLEY!!!! (ROBIN)/(ROBIN HOOD)]/ NOW KNOWN AS Sednox (if he changes his name one more time...POW!) Which is bigger? A mole of NaCl? or a mole of Pb?
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] you said the 'dead' jedi were on their way, and you never said they arrived.  anyway, you need to make a huge entrance with alot of flashy lights and a strobe-light for when they enter. I mean, anything else would be uncivilized! _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Visit the coffee break place! Click here! It's a coffee break thread for us novel-writers. _______________ slorp This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on Feb 07 2004 06:52am. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Actually, Vaughn, all the Jedi are on Aeril's ship. They're attacking it now.  _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] Oh yes, Flamori.. FYI for anyone Shadow~G = Vaughn... so if I or anyone talk about Vaughn... thats who they are, and i'm under the impression that he and Lian are on their way to Aeril's ship Edit: its Aeril... not Airel... foolish Vaughn foolish Vaughn _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson This comment was edited by Vaughn on Feb 07 2004 03:51am. |
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Vaughn - Student
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"ooohhh.. Tough guy" Flamori said with a cool smile. "No, I was just trained by the founder of the Black Academy, the strongest jedi who lived." Josh replied "well, he is dead now isn't he?" "He died protecting the universe from himself. Had he not sacrificed himself, the evil part of him would be ravaging the universe now, destroying anything that lay in his path. For his memory, I will defeat you, and lay his lightsaber to rest." With that, Josh took a defensive stance, both sabers at the ready. "And for the possibility of ruling the universe, I shall destroy you, and every other jedi in this universe!" Flamori said as he went into his battle position. "I had hoped I would never have to face this blade, on my masters life." Josh thought to himself. There was a moment of silence, neither one moving, both staring the other man down. "Josh!" Wingless' voice was heard as she ran down the corridor. "Here i come!" Josh muttered as he leapt toward Flamori. Flamori, seeing Josh's first strike comming, easily side-stepped it. He brought the lightsaber down in an overhead strike at Josh's back. Josh, who had made a quick pivot point, already had his saber up to block. "I won't be that easy, fallen Jedi" Josh said calmly. "Neither will I!" Flamori yelled as he jumped back, repositioning his saber. Flamori ran towards Josh. Josh, who saw an opening, slashed where Flamori was about to appear. All Josh hit was air. Flamori had split in two, sending a force copy around Josh, Flamori had found his opening. His saber flew close to Josh's back. "You are dead." Flamori said as he swong his saber in for the kill. "What?" A pure white blade had crossed Flamori's saber, protecting Josh. Flamori looked up, to see a figure in a pure white cloak, with the hood covering their face. "That is enough. You cannot defeat us." the hooded figure said. "Can't I?" Flamori asked calmly. The figure looked up, their face slightly visible under their hood. "...You.... But you're Dead!" Flamori 5 shouted. "Am I?" the person asked, "you can't win. Give me the saber, and turn yourself in." "No. Nev..!" Flamori yelled. At that moment, Josh, who had stood up again, had grabbed Flamori's mouth. He was holding one of his sabers in the other hand. "Give them the saber, or I will cut your head off." Josh said cooly. Flamori, reluctantly, dropped the lightsaber. The figure in the cloak picked it up, and tucked it in their cloak. "You think you have won... but the battle has just begun!" Flamori said, as he hit the ground with a flash of blue and red lighting. He was gone. "Thank you. If it wasn't for you, I would have been dead." "Don't mention it. I'm just glad I arrived in time." "Hey... You... you are familiar!" Wingless said. "Of course I am." the figure said as she gave the lightsaber back to Josh. "Keep this. You're master will be pround." the person said, as they turned around, and disappeared down the corridor. "what a strange person" Josh said softly. "I know her.... I just can't remember where from." "Wingless... You look slightly weak, whats wrong?" "I don't know, it feels as if my powers have faded a bit." "come, we must get back to our base." Josh beckoned, as he lead Wingless and the White Academy Jedi back to their homebase. _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student
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"I sence someone..." Flamori 5 thought to himself, hiding in the dark space of a corridor. "As I sence you, fallen Jedi." One of the White Academy Jedi said. "Do you fear me?" Flamori 5 taunted. "The question is not if I fear you, it is if you fear death." The Jedi said calmly, as he walked down the corridor. This was the last string for Flamori. He jumped out of his hiding spot, lightsaber activated. He ran down to where the Jedi was walking. "You die now!" Flamori screamed as he swong his saber down in an overhead swing. "Not today he won't." The Jedi turned around, to see a half length orange saber stopping the black saber from slicing him in half. "That is my master's lightsaber, you have no right to be using it" Josh said calmly. "Oh, tough guy. Let's see who really has the right to tell others what they can and cannot do!" Flamori said as he took a step back, repositioning his saber to get ready for the kill. "Turn thee, Flamori, and look upon thy death." Josh said with a slight smile. [not in story] while you quote starwars, i quote shakespeare... bah, i would write more, but not now, i must take my leave _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] hello... i heard my name :S _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Xanatos - Student 
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Yabba Gahooba!!, i mean. anyway, whats this thread about ?. I havent read the jedi academy series, is this like a pick your own story type thing? lol .</babblingretardedcrap> _______________ |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Markos, did you read what I just said? I said that Markos got sent off in space because the droid self-destructed and the room got destroyed. You're probably the one that's so unlucky because you kind of make Markos overpowered. EDIT: Speaking of which, The Wingless is like an elder Jedi, who would destroy the tracking device no matter who put it on her. o_o _______________ slorp This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on Feb 04 2004 11:16pm. |
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MarkoZ - Student
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[Not in Story] Why does everything bad happen to Markos. Am I just really unlucky? [In Story] Markos drummed the fingers of his metallic hand against the hilt of his lightsaber as he walked across the hangar. This time he was going to get Flamori for sure. Suddenly a squadron of stormtroopers turned the corner. They stood for a moment looking in stunned silence at the man holding a glowing green lightsaber in front of them. By the time they reacted, one was already lying on the floor in pieces. It was a quick slaughter. The stormtroopers all lay dead within thirty seconds. "I'll have to get used to that," Markos muttered to himself. He started running the way his tracker, which he had planted the emitter for on The Wingless, was indicating he should go. It was a long run from the hangar bay to the secret corridor which the tracker indicated the other Jedi were in. He found the door release and opened the door, to be confronted by a long line of saber droids. "Oh crap," said Markos. "This could get messy." He dived into the line. The fight quickly dissolved into a huge melee, the droids crowding around Markos. Spotting a walkway above him, Markos leapt. A mass of metallic heads with glowing yellow eyes looked up at him. Followed closely by a mass of high caliber guns. Markos ran for his life, dodging laser beams which were definately not set to stun. _______________ "Easy is not for a Jedi"- Corran Horn, "I Jedi" Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol. |
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Jippie Phoenix - Student 
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whats up its good but it kinda cuts off _______________ |
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