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Lian Del Rey - Student  |
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away... STAR WARS The Jedi Academy Episode 3 Song of Harmony Six years have passed since all the casualties in the Age of War. The Empress has a fled to the planet of Coruscant to make a hidden base there, leaving the the Deathstar completely defenseless. Josh, who has managed to keep from morning the death of his master, Vaughn or more commonly now known as Shadow~G, has gone to the planet of Naboo where they are making the new Jedi Academy. There are rumors that the Empress got a new apprentice from the Jedi Academy. But from all messages from the Empress, she claims she has no apprentice. However, there are now more casualties reported from Coruscant now more than ever. Now, Josh and his fellow Jedi are disguised as imperialists to interrogate any other imperial and discover what is the source of this problem.. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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[Not in story] CRAP!! I was posting a story addition but it got screwed up!! I'm not going to type ALL THAT OVER  Here's a summary of what I said. Something possessed the healer droid. Markos flew off in space from the air hiss-ment. A ship flew by. Yadda. _______________ slorp This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on Feb 04 2004 05:22pm. |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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[Not in story] Positions check! Academy Jedi: Aeril's ship, which is in orbit around Naboo is that right? Black Academy Jedi: The same White Academy Jedi: The same Academy Search Team: Returned to the Star Wars Galaxy, also on Aeril's ship. Markos: A sick bay on a White Academy ship? Trekked: Held prisoner on Coruscant Flamori 5: somewhere Kyle: with Trekked on Coruscant (he's on the Alliance's side I think) Shadow~G, (the original) Lian: heading somewhere The Empress aka Evil Lian: somewhere Now these are the active characters in the story. And by the way the Jedi Academy has about 2000 Jedi, and the Black Academy 200. Go see the war stats in my earlier post. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Either way Flamori 5's still alive. _______________ slorp |
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MarkoZ - Student 
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[Not in Story] Can I just say it makes no sense that the guy Markos killed was a Jedi. The reasons for this are: 1) They were in the Imperial controlled section of the ship. 2) The taunting kinda proves it was a Dark Jedi Quote: "Back already?" taunted Flamori. "I would have thought you'd have learnt your lesson." "I'm a slow learner," called Markos. [In Story] Markos's shuttle drifted into the docking bay and touched down. The White Academy Jedi levitated Markos into the ship and left him there. "Wait here," he said. Not likely, Markos thought, already getting up as the Jedi left. He headed aft towards the small medical bay. "Greetings, Captain de Dranz," the M-1 Medical droid said. "Don't call me that, and fit me with a prosthetic arm now," Markos said, sitting down on the bench. "Yes, Captain de Dranz," the droid replied. Anger is of the Dark Side, Markos thought, taking a few calming breaths as the droid got to work. _______________ "Easy is not for a Jedi"- Corran Horn, "I Jedi" Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol. This comment was edited by MarkoZ on Feb 03 2004 04:39pm. |
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MarkoZ - Student 
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[In Story] Markos again woke up in a great deal of pain. However, not all of it was physical. He looked up at where Flamori's body should have been, but instead saw a Jedi. "Oh no," he muttered. "Oh God, no." A man in pure white robes ran past the corridor, but stopped when he saw Markos. "Come on, we're getting you out of here," he said, coming up to examine Markos's arm. "No! I have to find Flamori!" Markos yelled. "He's already escaped," the White Academy Jedi said. "There's nothing you can do." With a gesture of the Jedi's hand, Markos started levitating. "I have a shuttle," Markos said, succumbing to the inevitable. "OK, where is it?" "On Naboo, but it's fully slave rigged," Markos said, fumbling for his beckon call on his belt. "Call it then," the White Jedi said. _______________ "Easy is not for a Jedi"- Corran Horn, "I Jedi" Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol. |
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MarkoZ - Student
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[Not in Story] Oh no!!!!! I'm an evil, cold blooded killer!!!! Ahhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! Please make someone find Markos anyway..... Please...... _______________ "Easy is not for a Jedi"- Corran Horn, "I Jedi" Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol. This comment was edited by MarkoZ on Feb 03 2004 07:28am. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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Also I'm making a map pack based on the novel stuff. Right now my current projects are Black Academy and White Academy... ..or something else which I feel like doing.  _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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The Jedi continued running through the secret passage which seemed like it lasted forever. As it seemed the Jedi were about to doze off, a dark figure emerged from the darkness. Acey Spadey sighed impatiently. "Who are you?" "Don't you remember me?" said the voice of the figure. It started walking towards them. "Six years ago.. fought me..." The Wingless sighed. She knew who he was. "It is I, Grendo Jenta." He made his E-11 Blaster Rifle rise up to a Jedi's head. "And I seek revenge." "Oh," Acey said, "I think we ran past revenge 5 minutes ago." Grendo didn't seem so amused, although the other Jedi seemed to be.. a little. "Revenge isn't something you can obtain," Grendo said. "It's something you receive through.. spirit." He pulled the trigger on the E-11 and blasted through the Jedi's brains 5 times. The Jedi's activated lightsaber flew backwards (and over the heads of the Jedi that crouched in half-a-second) and into the neck of an approaching Stormtrooper, who fell to the ground almost instantly. They were surrounded. "Come on, Wingless, we can take 'em," Aeth S'kray said. The Wingless shook her head, and said nothing. "Come on," said Grendo Jenta. "You're coming with us." He turned and made the Jedi and Stormtroopers follow. SHANG BANG! BANG BANG! BOOM!!!!!!! The wall next to them blew open, a few X-Wing lasers flying into the room.. (which killed about 2 Stormtroopers.) The Jedi started choking on their lack of air. "Go!" They kept on running through the halls, and they could see the X-Wings were following them by looking through the windows. But outside of the ship, one of Aeril's turrets targeted the black X-Wings. One by one, the turrets destroyed them in blue lasers. They all fell , smothered in yellow flame. The turret went back to its idle position until.. WRAAAAAAAAAAAAAP White X-Wings appeared from being cloaked, and destroyed the turret in white lasers. The shockwave of the exploded turret destroyed all of the other of the Star Destroyer's defenses. These were, apparently, the White Academy's X-Wings. [Not in story] If you read earlier, there was an academy called the White Academy which hasn't been brought up much. [In story] The white-robed Jedi walked out of their X-Wings, and the X-Wings, surprisingly, stood perfectly still. The White Academy Jedi weren't wearing any masks, but they could still breathe. SHHHHHHHFWFHHHH... More White Academy X-Wings appeared from hyperspace and cloaking. All of the Jedi hidden in their hooded, almost glowing, white robes went out of their X-Wings. The Jedi that lead them all in a robe with blue stripes at the front of the arms and near the hands activated his white lightsaber. He swung it, nowhere NEAR the wall, and the wall burst open. The White Academy Jedi practically flew into the wall, and as soon as they were all in, they sealed the wall once more. The rest of the Jedi activated their lightsabers as well. The leader White Academy Jedi swung his lightsaber in front of him. All the Stormtroopers died in 3 seconds. All of the Jedi turned to Grendo Jenta, most with a grin on their face. Grendo stammered. "Uhh.. I err... you.. I.. you.. AHHH!!" He jumped up in the air and fled the room with the power of his jetpack. They were almost at Aeril's room now. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] One more thing, Flamori. I said the Jedi were going towards Aeril's ship and the Black Academy students flew there before your post o_o _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] I have no idea what's happening with Markos and Trekked, but here's a summary from what I know so far. In Age of War, Lianiotte said that the three crystals must be joined together to destroy the Empress.. at last. o_o But earlier in the novel, it explains that a single crystal can make you possess extremely powerful.. well.. power. The Empress died (forgot how) yet still lives in a form of a virus. Mideon died, body in front of Soong (who originally possessed one of the crystals. Soong went to the Demon World to find another crystal.. if I recall correctly.) Aeril, the original Empress, has lived even though she never died, and used some Force skill to have all 4 crystals (including the Jedi Academy REAL crystal) and she's waiting for the Jedi (whose planet got attacked by the Star Destroyer) to attack her. Yes, the story is losing its touch. Where are you, Vaughn? _______________ slorp |
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Kyle Sieran - Student 
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[Not in Story] Someone needs to make a summary of the story up to now. I may be old and forgetful, but how did trekked report to aeril? Oh wait.... markos fought with him right then deactivated him right?whats goin on how did markos escape the interdictor from the assault transports the calamari cruiser launched at the disabled ship? What happened to my charrie? no one likes writing about him cept me? _______________ -If a Jedi ignites his lightsaber, he must be ready to take a life. If he is not so prepared, he must keep his weapon at his side.- ~Odan Urr Keeper Of Antiquities~ [Brother to Shadow(JAP), Kyle Katarn(JAS),Medlar,The White Wizard, D@RtHM@UL, and ROBIN OF LOCKSLEY!!!! (ROBIN)/(ROBIN HOOD)]/ NOW KNOWN AS Sednox (if he changes his name one more time...POW!) Which is bigger? A mole of NaCl? or a mole of Pb?
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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Meanwhile, the ship from six years ago when the Jedi Academy Jedi fought the Empress was still orbiting the planet of Yavin 4. It was all still left untouched— And very dusty. No rodian smuggler had come and taken the contents of the ship for they knew it was the Empress's, maybe, and they were too afraid to come in thinking that the Empress is still there, sitting on her dusty throne inside the ship. Either that or they're afraid of the (deactivated, they don't know) turrets on the ship from when the Empress was preparing for the Jedi Academy's Jedi. The bodies have never decayed or disappeared in white or red light, though. Even though Evil Lianiotte was ressurected, her body still lay there, a hole in her back. Josh had grabbed Shadow~G's lightsaber, activated it, and placed it deep into the ship, until it couldn't go any deeper because of the saber-proof layer of metal. But it was gone now. Flamori 5 probably came and took Shadow~G's lightsaber away and claimed it as his own. It also seemed like he turned on Lianiotte's holograms of the three crystals, for the holograms were still floating. Something seemed.. odd.. at that moment. Lianiotte's hologram buzzed uncontrollably... The top half of the Empress's body appeared, robe on, hood over her head. Her eyes shifted at the body of the dead Jedi, and the original one of her dead apprentice. "Dead saber-weilding annoyances rise from death, praise me as you should. Destroy the pesky Jedi and destroy Aeril. Destroy the galaxy as we know it, and make the galaxy as the galaxy of the Empress." Lianiotte, Shadow~G, the Empress, and all the other Jedi that have died rose. But the Evil Lianiotte's body simply vanished. She was already alive. The Wingless suddenly stopped in the secret passage. "What is it?" Aeth S'kray asked. "I feel like I suddenly grew a little weaker..." "What does that mean?" There was a pause, but the Wingless just then shook her head. She continued running with the Jedi. And fast. The Stormtroopers have nearly caught up with them and already started firing their blasters. Shadow~G looked at the Empress and to Lianiotte. "Well, Shadow~G," Lianiotte said. "Did death make you stronger?" [Not in story] Xero said that Shadow~G died because he thought he would be stronger in death. It explains that earlier in the novel. [In story] "Maybe I expected too much," Shadow~G said. The other dead Jedi of the Jedi Academy looked at the two, and then looked into the Empress's hypnotizing gaze. Their eyes turned red. "No," Lianiotte said. "Go back from whence you came." She threw her lightsaber at her hologram, which exploded like 5 trip mines. Shadow~G looked around on the floor. "Where's my lightsaber?" "My spirit stayed here for a while, examining the Empress's defenses. Right before I was about to leave, Flamori 2 came by and took your lightsaber. The blade grew bigger. I think he opened the dark power of the lightsaber." Shadow~G looked at Lianiotte. "Or at least he looked like Flamori 2," Lianiotte said. "Instead of a red robe, it was brown." "Maybe he could have actually changed his clothes?" "Maybe. But I sensed something.. different about him." "We've been dead for a while," Shadow~G said. "Maybe our senses aren't as good as they used to be." "Maybe," Lianiotte said. "But I doubt it." Her eyes suddenly widened. "Do you feel that?" she asked. "Yeah," Shadow~G replied. "The Jedi are falling into Aeril's trap." "Aeril?" Ulic asked. "Yes," Lianiotte said. "She was almost the Empress before Evil Lianiotte killed her. Or at least she thought she killed her. Aeril survived anyway." Lianiotte shook her head. "That's when the Empress took her place. Kenji Kamidake knows the story, but his memory's fogged a little. I doubt he remembers much." "Okay," Shadow~G said to Lianiotte, along with the rest of the Jedi. "To Aeril's Star Destroyer." _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] This would make a good movie, recorded off of JK3. I thought about that while I was watching a Great and Majestic Empire. Except instead of voice acting, we'd have subtitles at the bottom. Because. Plus I don't want you guys saying Lianiotte wrong. That's an idea. I think we'll do this once this story's over. But we need mappers for certain parts. And skinners. But that's where I'll come in. Also we'll need a server to host it. o_o And a cameraman. All I need to know is how to change the movie files into avi files.. or just certain parts of it. @_@ Hey, since doobie likes the novels so much, maybe he'll post the links on the news once they're finished. If that ever happens. Let's make that our goal once this thing is finished. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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Flamori 5 appeared from out of the shadows looking down at the severed body of "Flamori 5." "The weak-minded Jedi of the Jedi Acadmey can be fooled so easily," Flamori 5 said to himself. He disguised a Jedi on watch as him, who just attempted to protect himself. [Not in story] Honestly, Flamori 2 lasted for most of the 2nd story, and Flamori 5 is stronger. He can't last for just 2 minutes.  [In story] "But my time here is short," Flamori 5 said. "I must go to Aeril and protect her from the Jedi.. as if she can't protect herself." With that, he turned and headed towards Aeril's room. As soon as he left, a Black X-Wing rose up, hovering in space. "Look at that body," the pilot said to himself. The Jedi ran though Aeril's Star Destroyer until they bumped into a large group of Reborn and Stormtroopers. They all turned, looking at the Jedi. "Go once more," The Wingless said. She throw a frag grenade behind her black, making a hole into the wall, and the Jedi ran through the hole, walking through the secret passage. [Not in story] I'd write more, but I have a siege class to go to. _______________ slorp |
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MarkoZ - Student
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[In Story] Markos woke up only a few minutes later to find a Jedi Master standing over him. "He's got a bad cut to his shoulder," he heard distantly. "I'm all right," Markos said, scrambling to his feet. "Where am I now?" "We brought you back to the Jedi-controlled section of the ship," said one of the Jedi. "And who are you?" inquired Markos. "My name is The Wingless," said the Master. "Oh," said Markos. "And where's Flamori?" "Are you really thinking of going after him after what he did to you?" asked The Wingless. "Yes," replied Markos. "Do you have a problem with that?" "I just don't want a promising Force-user killed," she said. "Don't worry about me. He just caught me off guard," Markos reassured her, already turning around in the direction the data-card he'd sneaked off Wingless indicated. "Hey! Come back!" The Wingless called after the now distant figure. "Don't worry!" Markos called over his shoulder. [Not in Story] Can I just ask how Flamori got a black lightsaber in the first place. Sorry to sound like a smart-ass, but the physics just don't work (plus it contradicts the name). [In Story] Markos ran the whole length of the ship until he saw Flamori's billowing cloak. "Back already?" taunted Flamori. "I would have thought you'd have learnt your lesson." "I'm a slow learner," called Markos. [Not in Story] Tee-hee, I quoted ep2. [In Story] Markos pulled his lightsaber off his belt. It flipped through the air and landed in his hand with a dull thud. Flamori also used the Force to unclip his lightsaber. It landed in his remaining hand and he activated it. They stood, staring at each other across the long corridor. Then Flamori moved. He sprinted towards Markos, blade coming around in a long diagonal slash. Markos parried with ease and sent his own vertical cut into the fray. Flamori leapt back and rolled back towards Markos after the attack had intercepted harmlessly with the air. Halfway through his sprint, Flamori leapt, bringing his saber down in a long vertical hack. Markos yelled out, but supressed the pain coming from the stump of his left arm, which Flamori had cut off at the elbow. In that attack Flamori had left himself open to attack. Markos brought his saber around and cut Flamori's torso off from his legs, leaving both parts off the body lying on the floor. Then the darkness consumed him and he fell to the floor, unconcious. [Not in Story] Please make someone come and find Markos and drag him back to a shuttle to return him to Naboo. _______________ "Easy is not for a Jedi"- Corran Horn, "I Jedi" Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol. This comment was edited by MarkoZ on Feb 01 2004 06:25pm. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Yay! That last comment made the 333th comment  _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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"You underestimate the TRUE power of the dark side," Flamori 5 replied, and activated his own black lightsaber. "A black lightsaber?" Markos asked. "I've never seen a black lightsaber before. But either way I can defeat you like nothing," Markos grinned. "Like I said, you underestimate the true power of the dark side," Flamori 5 said. In a milisecond, Flamori 5 appeared behind Markos, who suddenly had a burning cut on the shoulder of his shirt. Markos turned swiftly facing Flamori 5. "And perhaps I have underestimated you both," Markos said. "But you are no stronger than the sweat on my brow." He jumped up in the air swinging his saber downwards near Flamori 5 (RDFA,) and Flamori 5 jumped right next to Markos. The tip of Flamori's lightsaber was very close to Markos's back. [Not in story] "Now let's say what a man can do, and what a man can't do," Flamori 5 said. Lol [In story] "Hmm," Flamori 5 said, smiling. "Let's see, if you move, I will kill you. If you don't move, I'll kill you. If you insult me, I'll kill you. There's no way out of this one." He's right, Markos thought to himself. Then it hit him. "I'll admit," Markos said. "You've got some pretty good moves. But I will still win this fight." He slashed his lightsaber backwards... Only to have Flamori 5's own lightsaber to cast Markos's into space. Markos quickly drew the power of the Force to his hands and cast electricity from them, but they just got absorbed by Flamori 5's lightsaber, which's glow grew bigger slightly. "Don't get me wrong," Flamori 5 said to Markos. "I want very much to kill you. The only thing that's holding me back is that you're more useful to me alive than dead. Don't tip that balance." [Not in story] Lol, Flamori 2 said that to Bubu in Age of War near the beginning Ah, good times. Good times.[In story] "And how would I be of use to you?" Markos asked. "My power is far beyond yours. I could kill you instantly in a second." "The balance balance plunges," Flamori 5 said. The last thing Markos saw before he passed out was black and red lightning exploding from Flamori 5's fingertips, and he knew nothing more. [Not in story] You're a great writer, Just Flamori _______________ slorp This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on Feb 01 2004 04:24am. |
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MarkoZ - Student
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{In Story] Meanwhile, Markos was flying his comandeered X-Wing towards the ship which had just appeared in the space around Naboo. He was just about to dock when a huge explosion bloomed out of the docking bay. He flew through and landed his ship. Popping the canopy, he leapt and hit the ground at a run. He turned just in time to stop as Flamori Five sprinted past. "Hey!" he called after the rapidly disappearing figure. Flamori turned. "Yes?" he said, grinning maniacially. "What might you want, Jedi?" "Your head," Markos replied cooly, activating his lightsaber's emerald blade. _______________ "Easy is not for a Jedi"- Corran Horn, "I Jedi" Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol. This comment was edited by MarkoZ on Jan 31 2004 09:38pm. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Ok, Trekked. Take a step back, heck even 100 stepsm and get out of this thread. Trip over your lame posts while you're at it, and I might consider not skimming your knee. [In story] The Jedi Academy and Black Academy X-Wings flew into the Star Destroyer. Two Stormtroopers on patrol guarding a doorway turned and noticed the ships. "Uh-oh," one of them said. An X-Wing turned while landing, and fired their golden beams at the explosives near the Stormtroopers. Soon after, all the other X-Wings landed inside of the Star Destroyer. The newly built Trekked walked into Aeril's room. "What do you want, mistress?" Aeril turned. "Well, what a huge improvement. You don't sound nearly as stupid as the original Trekked was. I believe a new naming is in order. You will from now on be known as JX-024." She turned, then turned back again. "They are coming." She made the crystals over her head disappear in a storage locker in the room. The Jedi got off of their ships and headed towards the doorway the Stormtroopers were guarding. But they all stopped as soon as they reached there, and turned. An Advanced TIE was near the enterance of the hangar. "Oh crap," one of the Jedi said. CHANG! Two emerald beams flew towards an X-Wing, which started to catch on fire. The fire started to spread from below the X-Wing until.. BOOM! And the parts from the exploded X-Wing flew at the other X-Wings, which also caught on fire. "Go!" The Wingless shouted. [Not in story] All the survivors of the Jedi Academy and Black Academy are there. [In story] They ran through the door way and sealed the door shut.. Leaving at least 20 Jedi left in the room. A Jedi Master pounded on the door and tried to cut the door open with his lightsaber.. but it was no use. He pounded once more and then... Ffsshh... He turned and screamed as the X-Wings exploded. The floor of the hangar tore off and the parts flew towards Naboo. The floor crashed on top of a TIE Fighter group, which all exploded at the same time. The remaining Jedi ran through a hall of the Star Destroyer and turned, seeing the back of a robed figure far ahead of them. "I sense your presence, Jedi," the figure said. It turned and activated its black lightsaber. It was obviously a he. His eyes were visible, and red.. like he was possessed or something. But he wasn't. A Jedi used Force push on the figure, and his hood flew backwards. His face wasn't a face they've seen before, but somehow familiar. "Who are you?" the Jedi said. "I am none other than Flamori the Fifth," the Dark Jedi said. "Another Fla— ARRGH!!" The Jedi that pushed Flamori 5's hood off's waist was sliced in half. His lower half fell to the ground and the upper half flew fowards, 2 feet in front of Flamori 5. "Any more volunteers?" he said. "You have expectations too high in yourself," The Wingless said. "Thanks for volunteering," Flamori 5 said with a smirk on his face. TCHU! FWWWWWWWSH! Flamori 5 appeared with his jaw dropped next to the Wingless, who activated her cyan (yes, cyan) lightsaber. His hand was on the floor still clutching his black lightsaber. "I... uh... I.." "Lost," the Wingless finished for him. Flamori 5 grabbed his lightsaber (and made his fallen hand fly at one of the Jedi's faces) and ran down the hall in 2 seconds. "He'll be back," The Wingless said. "He'll be back." _______________ slorp |
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[Not in Story] Seems like our story is losing its touch... |
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MarkoZ - Student
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[Not in Story] Quote: D'oh! _______________ "Easy is not for a Jedi"- Corran Horn, "I Jedi" Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! As the story gets older, the story gets more confusing! Markos, why would there be any republic troopers on Naboo if it's under attack? The Academy is on Naboo, and all the Jedi are approaching Aeril's Star Destroyer. _______________ slorp |
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MarkoZ - Student
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[Not in Story] Perhaps you've misunderstood. What want to do is start a separate mini-novel involving the then Jedi Markos and a few of the other characters. I was just wondering if anyone here would like to help. Anyway: [In Story] Wiping sweat off his brow, Markos set a course for the Naboo system. A few hours later the comm bleeped. "Unidentified shuttle, this is Academy Control. Please transfer your identification and acceptance code." Markos had already started tapping buttons, transmitting a captured acceptance code and a fake ID. "All right, shuttle Lanfaar, you are cleared for landing on the secondary landing pad South of the Academy." "Thank you, Academy Control. Lanfaar out." "Control out." Markos started to prepare the ship for landing and entered the atmosphere. At 500 meters he switched to the repulsorlift engines and hovered to a landing on the pad. He opened the hatch to find himself at the gunpoint of a large number of Republic troopers. Using the Force he pulled his lightsaber off of his belt. He ignited the new green blade. "Please don't make me use this," he said. The troops reluctantly lowered their weapons. "Where can I find the person who runs this place?" Markos inquired. The troop commander stepped forward. "Follow me," he said. _______________ "Easy is not for a Jedi"- Corran Horn, "I Jedi" Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol. This comment was edited by MarkoZ on Jan 29 2004 08:44am. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] No. There is no main character, and when the story's finished, the story's finished. Especially considering there's 2 endings. If you read earlier on the story, this is the last novel of the trilogy. If you want him to return to the light side, do it before the ending. Also, when you are making a post that's out of the story, please use [Not in story] _______________ slorp This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on Jan 31 2004 04:28am. |
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MarkoZ - Student
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Can I make a spin off after the story's finished involving Markos after he returns to the Light Side? _______________ "Easy is not for a Jedi"- Corran Horn, "I Jedi" Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol. |
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