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Star Wars Jedi Academy: Novel - Song of Harmony
Apr 29 2003 03:32am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
Lian Del Rey
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...


STAR WARS
The Jedi Academy


Episode 3
Song of Harmony

Six years have passed since all the casualties in the Age of War. The Empress has a fled to the planet of Coruscant to make a hidden base there, leaving the the Deathstar completely defenseless.

Josh, who has managed to keep from morning the death of his master, Vaughn or more commonly now known as Shadow~G, has gone to the planet of Naboo where they are making the new Jedi Academy.

There are rumors that the Empress got a new apprentice from the Jedi Academy. But from all messages from the Empress, she claims she has no apprentice. However, there are now more casualties reported from Coruscant now more than ever.

Now, Josh and his fellow Jedi are disguised as imperialists to interrogate any other imperial and discover what is the source of this problem..
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slorp

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Jan 27 2004 08:39pm

Flash
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 Flash

[Not in Story]

Yay, I'm confused!:D

Jan 27 2004 08:21pm

MarkoZ
 - Student
 MarkoZ

[Not in Story]
OK, I'm very confused now.

[In Story]
Markos sat in his Stealth-Class shuttle, looking back at the lump of scrap metal that was his Imperial Interdictor. Bodies and atmosphere were venting from several large gashes in the hull. He felt a sinking feeling in his stomach.
Aeril's going to kill me, he thought. Well, he thought, at least I'll be with my father again.
His father who had died fighting for the Republic in the Clone Wars. the father who had let him be abducted by a Sith Master and train him in the ways of the Dark Side of the Force.
Some father, he thought.
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"Easy is not for a Jedi"-
Corran Horn, "I Jedi"

Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol.


This comment was edited by MarkoZ on Jan 27 2004 08:21pm.

Jan 27 2004 12:12am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
I dunno, the other posts were too confusing..
I just followed what just made sense, and The Incewhatever is Aeril's ship?
I think not. Aeril just got intoduced into this story and now she's just going to get blown away like nothing?
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slorp

Jan 26 2004 01:37pm

Kyle Sieran
 - Student
 Kyle Sieran

OK. Lemme see how many Empresses are their. And can you give me their alignment?
Lianiotte=Dead&Bad right?
Aeril=Alive&Bad?
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-If a Jedi ignites his lightsaber, he must be ready to take a life. If he is not so prepared, he must keep his weapon at his side.- ~Odan Urr Keeper Of Antiquities~
[Brother to Shadow(JAP), Kyle Katarn(JAS),Medlar,The White Wizard, D@RtHM@UL, and ROBIN OF LOCKSLEY!!!! (ROBIN)/(ROBIN HOOD)]/ NOW KNOWN AS Sednox (if he changes his name one more time...POW!):D Which is bigger? A mole of NaCl? or a mole of Pb?


Jan 26 2004 10:20am

Flamori Athena
 - Student
 Flamori Athena

[Not In Story]
Lian, Trekked, Markos: Has anyone even BOTHERED to read my and kyle's posts? The Interdictor was snared by an Alliance cruiser, Trekked was taken to Coruscant for interrogation by the Senate. This means no battles between Markos and Trekked, the Interdictor is a hunk of useless metal floating in space, and Markos probably escaped on some shuttle or the other.

Lian: I already wrote about the evacuation of the Jedi Academy, scroll down. They're heading for the Black Academy now.

Quote:
Forgot to add one more thing. About the Empress. If you're talking about Aeril and not the Empress I was talking about, she was the Empress before the Evil Lianiotte killed her and Empress Lianiotte (The Empress) took over.


WTF??? :confused:
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True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing.


Jan 24 2004 07:08pm

Trekked
 - Student
 Trekked

[Not in story]
listen, i am gonna take a break so i give control of trekked to Lianiotte fornow until i feel up to it (Brother gave me a COLD!!!! ) :mad: darned big bro...
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he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody

Jan 23 2004 11:50pm

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Yep, I agree with Flash. But at least you won't be confused. :D
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slorp

Jan 23 2004 06:15pm

MarkoZ
 - Student
 MarkoZ

OK, I've edited it now..... Sorry for all the confusion I caused.....
_______________
"Easy is not for a Jedi"-
Corran Horn, "I Jedi"

Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol.


Jan 23 2004 06:05pm

Flash
 - Student
 Flash

[Not in Story]

Well, you can read all this and search for the other two stories and read them if you really want to know what's going on, but it will take you hours and hours....

Jan 23 2004 05:51pm

MarkoZ
 - Student
 MarkoZ

I got confused. I didn't read previous parts of the story, so I wrote down what came to my head. Sorry all.
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"Easy is not for a Jedi"-
Corran Horn, "I Jedi"

Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol.


Jan 22 2004 12:29pm

Garos
 - Student
 Garos

...:confused:

Jan 22 2004 04:18am

Kyle Sieran
 - Student
 Kyle Sieran

[Not in story]OK, I'm a little confused, first off...Trekked was nowhere near the planet Naboo when the Interdictor stopped him. The post said he initiated an omega gamma 2 plan or something than shot off into hyperspace after being denied asylum from the Academy on Naboo. He was ripped out of hyperspace by the interdictors gravity wells. He's nowhere near the planet naboo, which was apparently beginning to pummel the crap outta the academy. Second, i was going to add to my comment after having disabled the interdictor, 3 Assault transports began boarding the interdictor, it got messed up because we fail to look back i believe...I don't know what to do, its up to the author, Lianiotte. Should I edit my post so that the story makes sense?
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-If a Jedi ignites his lightsaber, he must be ready to take a life. If he is not so prepared, he must keep his weapon at his side.- ~Odan Urr Keeper Of Antiquities~
[Brother to Shadow(JAP), Kyle Katarn(JAS),Medlar,The White Wizard, D@RtHM@UL, and ROBIN OF LOCKSLEY!!!! (ROBIN)/(ROBIN HOOD)]/ NOW KNOWN AS Sednox (if he changes his name one more time...POW!):D Which is bigger? A mole of NaCl? or a mole of Pb?


Jan 22 2004 12:13am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Markos:
Do you mean the Empress? :) If so, the Empress is dead already. Bringing her back would make the trilogy a whole mess of the evil females dying and coming back continually, making them seem immortal. Since they are clones of Lianiotte, I don't want to sound like I'm the kind of person that thinks of me allpowerful :)
Just wanted to clear that out.

Trekked:
Trekked, Trekked, Trekked. What am I going to do with you?
I guess I need to translate my post earlier into Galactic Basic.

THIS IS WHAT YOU SAID:
*Trekked Continues to cut through Metal, about 2 minutes later he manages to get through and he holds his Lightsaber at the ready to deflect Blaster Bolts*

"Nobody move, if you move you shall face destruction."

*Trekked grins artificially*

Trekked, artificially means it's made by humans and not by nature. How do you grin like that? Using big words doesn't mean it makes sense. :D I know I have made some confusing posts, but so have many other people. But at least their vocabulary is in line. :D
Sheesh, chill. You get mad like a 1st grader.

This is what a STORY version of what you just said would be like.

Trekked continued to cut through the metal, and eventually went through. He had his lightsaber at the ready, prepared to deflect blaster bolts. "Nobody move, nobody gets hurt."

[You could have said that. Or you could have said:]

"Nobody move, or you shall face destruction."

[You may be a robot, but you DO have a life. :D Nobody's immortal or allpowerful, Trekked. Remember that. That goes for you too, Markos.]

"Nobody move, or you shall face destruction." Trekked smiled evilly.

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How could a robot smile anyway? Another point, it doesn't matter how small your posts are.

VAUGHN: I'd write more, but not now.

My point isn't how long your messages are, but the fact that it's a STORY and not a RP.

And if you "heard" [technically read] what I said, you wouldn't have said what you've just said, now would you?

I know I'm being mean towards you, but saying:
"Sheesh talk about PMS"
isn't really the Happiness Cruise either. I'm not saying this just to say it either. I'm giving you a lesson that it's a story and not a RP. What you said is a RP. What I said, which is a correction of what you said, is a story. Like I said, get adapted to the story mode.

MARKOS:
Forgot to add one more thing. About the Empress. If you're talking about Aeril and not the Empress I was talking about, she was the Empress before the Evil Lianiotte killed her and Empress Lianiotte (The Empress) took over. Also, Aeril's on her own Star Destroying cruise. :D If it doesn't take too much time, please clear that out.. :D

AND ONE LAST NOTE: Aeril would be the next empress. Will she be? We shall see.

Since I'm here, I might as well add on to the story.

[In story]
Trekked flew away on the lambda shuttle, but was unfortunate enough to charge into Aeril's Star Destroyer's beams as it was attacking the academy in hyperspace.
"Blast," Trekked said. The lambda shuttle shot huge whisps of cloud as it started crashing into Naboo.
Before landing onto the ground of the academy, something blasted inside of the shuttle, and Trekked flew out of the window of the lambda shuttle, and he fell onto the stone of the Academy. As flopped onto his back, the lambda shuttle charged into him. The last that the Jedi on the X-Wings saw was Trekked's robotic head flying up and exploding.

"This is taking too long," Aeril said. "Just shoot one of those hyper-energy blasters at Naboo and we'll deal with part of the Jedi. I'm not stupid. I can't have them overthrow my plans."
The Star Destroyer charged a HUGE ball of energy, and when the electricity started cackling, it got flung into Naboo.

The ball was flying towards the crashed lambda shuttle, and the lambda shuttle turned into bits. The fields and the trees got scorched bad, and about 800 of the Academy Students suffered the same fate. Their X-Wings flew backwards and crashed into the metal exterior of the academy.

Aeril watched the energy ball's destination until the camera that was following it exploded. "That robot. Bring it to me."
Almost instantly, the floor of a hangar from the bottom of the ship opened up, hissing as the floor moved. Five TIE Fighters flew towards Naboo.
Of course the Jedi in the X-Wings would notice them. Red blasts shot from the X-Wings, and it hit one of the wings of the TIEs. It jerked to the right, and smoke started following its trail, but it continued flying into Naboo.
Two X-Wings stopped their flight towards the Star Destroyer and tried to take out the TIE Fighters. They quickened their speed. They shot, and the TIE Fighter that was hit first stopped and crashed into one of the X-Wings.
The X-Wing was badly damaged, but not destroyed.
"We have two X-Wings on our trail," one of the TIE Fighter pilots said.
"Fall back," one of the other pilots said.
They stopped, and the quickened X-Wings went in front of them. The TIE Fighters shot their emerald beams through them like they were nothing. Then they quickly jumped into Naboo.
They took the servered body of the robot Trekked, flung it into the slightly more defended TIE Fighters, and they took off yet again.

They had a brief jump into hyperspace to the Star Destroyer, and they returned to the hangar. A TIE Fighter pilot carried Trekked's body (which kept on shocking the pilot) over to Aeril.
Aeril turned her waist and looked at Trekked's body, and made her eyes look up at the TIE Fighter pilot.
"What is it, mistress? Is there something wrong?"
"No," Aeril said. "I just sense he's a little... unstable. Build a head for it, and make a chip for it to be totally obedient to me, follow all of my rules.. and make it more stable."
"But couldn't you just use your power to make that stuff?" the pilot questioned.
"Do not request anything of me and do what I say. And do it quick. The Jedi are almost here."
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slorp

Jan 21 2004 09:17pm

MarkoZ
 - Student
 MarkoZ

[Not in Story]
So what d'ya think of my first addition to the story?:D
Here's a second, coming straight after the events in the previous post.

OK, Lianiotte told me to edit this so here ya go
[In Story]
Markos left Trekked in the engineering lab and walked the two kilometres to the bridge. He walked through the bridge, receiveing salutes from his officers, to his private quarters. There he sat down. He reached for a concealed drawer in his desk and placed his thumb over the print scanner. The drawer opened, revealing a small sphere in a padded case. He put it in a receptor on his desk.The close band comm system to Coruscant activated and a familiar face appeared.
"Madame Aeril," he said. "I bring good news. Trekked's training is ahead of progress. His Force programming will be completed by the end of the day."
"Well done, Captain," Aeril replied. "We will be able to start our assault on the Republic any day now."
"Thank you, m'lady," Markos said.
"When we have crushed the Republic, a promotion will be ready for you," Aeril said, a slight smile coming to her face.
"Thank you very much, m'lady," Markos replied. He exchanged formal farewells and closed the channel. A grin came to his face. He had been waiting a long time for this promotion.
He walked out onto the bridge, just to be ran into by a young lieutenant.
"Sir!" the young man said, looking flustered. "I'm afraid I have bad news. Trekked has escaped."
"What do you mean escaped?!" Markos yelled at the worried lieutenant. "He was a perfectly willing resident of this ship!"
The young man was taken aback.
"He killed the technician working on his Force programming," the lieutenant explained. "He then proceeded to shuttle bay one, where he stole a Lambda-class shuttle and jumped to hyperspace on an unknown course....."
The young man trailed off as he found his breathing strangely hard. He was lifted off the floor and hung in mid-air, clutching his throat and gasping for air. The lieutenant stopped struggling and crumpled to the floor. The rest of the bridge crew carried on working, a pair of stormtroopers taking the body away.
I'm dead, Markos thought.
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"Easy is not for a Jedi"-
Corran Horn, "I Jedi"

Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol.


This comment was edited by MarkoZ on Jan 23 2004 06:10pm.

Jan 21 2004 08:34pm

MarkoZ
 - Student
 MarkoZ

[Not in Story]
This goes in between my first appearence, continuing from Flamori's comment introducing me, and Trekked's escape..
WARNING: THIS IS 2 A4 PAGES LONG

[In Story]
Markos leapt from the viewing gallery, activating his ruby-coloured lightsaber as he fell. Hitting the ground, he rolled to his feet, lightsaber in the "strong-style" position. The glowing blade illuminated his face, the colour contrasting sharply with his bright green eyes. He advanced slowly towards Trekked, circling him. The android matched his movements, twin blades casting long shadows over the bodies of the soldiers sacrificed in his training. Markos leapt toward the robot, blade swinging in a long vertical slash intending to split his opponent from head to groin. Trekked intercepted expertly, lightsabers coming up into the cross-guard position over his head. Markos anticipated the coming attack and rolled back in the direction he had come from. The robot's sabers sawed through the power cables where Markos had just been. The Interdictor Captain came to his feet, using the Force to enhance his sight in the now pitch-lack room. Trekked's visual sensors automatically adjusted to the darkness. The android leapt towards Markos in a graceful, yet potentially deadly, butterfly attack. Markos leapt over in an aerial cartwheel, landing on the other side of the robot. Using the Force, he hurled Trekked against the wall, his lightsabers spinning off in opposite directions and deactivating. The captain pressed a button on his belt, deactivating the robot's aggressive programming.
"That was a good duel, my robotic friend," said Markos,crouching down to the android's level.
"Thank you, Captain de Dranz," Trekked replied, looking up into the Sith's face. "However, once my Force programming is completed, it will not be so easy for you to defeat me like that."
Wiping a bead of sweat from his forehead, Markos made a gesture with his other hand. A flash of Force lightning shot from his fingers, rebinding the power cable. The lights came back on.
Trekked climbed to his feet and started walking behind Markos to the hangar door, picking up his lightsabers with his limited Force abilities. They hovered sluggishly into his hands and he promptly clipped them to his belt. He ran to catch up with the Sith warrior.
Markos opened the door and walked into the blank, grey corridor of the Interdictor. Stormtroopers in glistening white armour moved to either side of the corridor to make room for the two Sith. The death of Troop Commander Laaginsan was still fresh in their minds. Markos had killed him for consistent failure.
"Trekked, take a memo for me," Markos said.
"Yes, Captain," the android replied.
"I must dispose of Troop Commander Laaginsan's body. He's starting to smell."
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"Easy is not for a Jedi"-
Corran Horn, "I Jedi"

Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol.


This comment was edited by MarkoZ on Jan 21 2004 09:21pm.

Jan 21 2004 07:21am

Flamori Athena
 - Student
 Flamori Athena

Trekked stepped into the bridge, his red lightsaber held defensively before him. Then the ion beams hit. The whole ship rocked, sending Imperials sprawling to the floor. Sparks flew as several consoles blew into the faces of their users. Then, the power shut down, leaving the bridge in total darkness apart from the light of the stars. The events that followed must be left to the reader’s imagination, lame as though that may be. Suffice to say that half an hour later, Trekked was in a holding cell on the Alliance cruiser and was on the way to Coruscant to face trial and interrogation.
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«±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±»
True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing.


Jan 21 2004 06:50am

Flamori Athena
 - Student
 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
Actually, Markos, I wrote a post about your character being a Sith Imperial Captain, but I lost it through my own carelessness.

Lian, the crystals will destroy the universe. If Aeril plans to harness that power and use it to take over the universe instead, there should be some explanation as to how.

Trekked, read Kyle's post. The Interdictor was snared by an Alliance Cruiser. Typing now.
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«±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±»
True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing.


Jan 21 2004 04:18am

Trekked
 - Student
 Trekked

[ Not in Story ]

what would you have me do? I am still new at the Story biz :mad: and i can write more then 2 Sentences when i want :mad::mad::mad:
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he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody

Jan 21 2004 12:58am

Trekked
 - Student
 Trekked

[not in story]

I heard you Lian, it's no RPG. :empire:

[ In Story ]

*Trekked Continues to cut through Metal, about 2 minutes later he manages to get through and he holds his Lightsaber at the ready to deflect Blaster Bolts*

"Nobody Move, if you move you shall face destruction"

*Trekked Grins artificially*
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he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody

Jan 21 2004 12:40am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
And what's Aeril doing during all of this? :P

[In story]
"Aeril," spoke an tired imperial commander slouched on a wall of the Star Destroyer, "we've been staring at this crystal for hours. Can't we harness its power yet?"
"Patience, young commander," Aeril said. "Well actually, patience is what I'd say if I was one of those pathedic excuses of dark sided people who let the light side come in and flop all of my plans. I've been waiting for you to say that, and I've always wanted to say that." Aeril ran her gloved hand on the smoothe exterior of the Blood Crystal. "Let's harness this power and take over the galaxy when the dust settles." She grabbed the three out of four crystals and made them hover over her head.

[Not in story]
Heh, now that I think of it, it would sorta look like The Sims :P

[In story]
"Well?" the imperial commander asked. "Does it work?"
Aeril sighed impatiently and had her palm pointed towards the commander. "Well, this is a test to see if it works." She smiled evilly and had a big blue blast of the Force fly out of her hand. It had a huge blow on the commander, and the wall behind him ripped open. He flew out of the Star Destroyer screaming, and a stormtrooper's E-11 Blaster Rifle flew with it. After Aeril was done having her fun time, she sealed the open hole with metal again.
"Well that was fun." She turned on her heel and looked at the Academy Crystal. "Not yet.. Destroying you know defeats the sole purpose of the three crystals I have."
An imperial at a control panel called to Aeril. "Commands?"
"Continue firing. I sense the Jedi will come soon."
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slorp

Jan 21 2004 12:24am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Quote:
[Not in story]
Quote:
[Not in story]
I agree with Flamori, but keep in mind this is, in fact, a story, and not a RPG. :)

That post was for you, Trekked.

Trekked! I'm not posting these quotes from quotes for no reason!
A story is like this:
"Oh my God, they killed Kenny!" he shouted. He grabbed his lightsaber and cut his front off.

A RPG is like this:
*grabs the nearest telephone pole* Say hello to my little friend! *swings it at everyone*

As much as I like RPGs, this isn't one. Throw out the RPGing and get adapted with the story-ing.
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slorp

Jan 20 2004 11:15pm

Kyle Sieran
 - Student
 Kyle Sieran

[Not in story] Once again, hope that was okay...:)
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-If a Jedi ignites his lightsaber, he must be ready to take a life. If he is not so prepared, he must keep his weapon at his side.- ~Odan Urr Keeper Of Antiquities~
[Brother to Shadow(JAP), Kyle Katarn(JAS),Medlar,The White Wizard, D@RtHM@UL, and ROBIN OF LOCKSLEY!!!! (ROBIN)/(ROBIN HOOD)]/ NOW KNOWN AS Sednox (if he changes his name one more time...POW!):D Which is bigger? A mole of NaCl? or a mole of Pb?


Jan 20 2004 11:13pm

Kyle Sieran
 - Student
 Kyle Sieran

In an irefutable demonstration of the force's will, a small blip picked up on the sensor radar of an Officer's screen, he looked precuriously at the blip and sounded to his deck officer.

"Sir, we've picked something up on our sensors."He murmured to his Officer.

The Deck Officer rolled his eyes and was about to speak when Markos paced over to the two and said "What is it, Lieutanant?".

The Lieutanant stammered a quick reply. "We've picked up a fighter on our sensors, X-Wing Class...".

"Fresh meat...", hissed Markos evanescently under his breath before turning to the Deck Officer, "This is Imperial business, this person has no business whatsoever here, kill him immidiately." Said the brash Commander of the vessel.

"Yes sir", The Officer replied before turning to the array of tactical officers working feverishly at their consoles.

"Deploy two squads of Tie Fighters, wipe him out.." The Officer commanded.

"Sir, isn't that a bit brash? It's just one fighter..", Queried the jittery tactical officer.

"Do it, now, Corporal."

"Yes sir". He replied before bunching a series of buttons calling out two squads of ties, the bulk of the interdictors fighter support, into the field.

The squads lines up in a Vic formation advancing on the slow moving X-wing, whom had begun to open its s-foils, warming up its laser arrays. Little to the 12 fighters approaching this snubfighter, that they were in for quite a ride.

Inside the cockpit, sat Kyle Sieran, a self-exiled Jedi Master, drawing the force deep into him. He beared a unique talent, one very rare in each generation of jedi. His eyes closed slowly as he felt the force guiding his movement and flow as he fell into a battle meditation.

The fighters veered in within 2 clicks, adjusting their reticules and sensory to lock this target, each pilot gripped the control stick uneasily, feeling something wrong. As the fighters fell into position, the X-wing lurched forward full throttle and pitched up, over the ties like a piece of wood over a wave. The fighters had been caught off guard by the crazy movement and released a barrage of laser shots into nothingness. But by then they could've heard the screech of one of their teammates vaporizing into nothingness for the Jedi had cut 1/3 throttle and juked up and around leveling out and taking out a TIE with 2 blasts of his red lasers. He veered left aligning his sights with another as he squeezed his trigger gently ripping apart the next tie. The squad leaders had began to panic and ordered a scatter of formation. Three ties had converged on the starboard side of the X-wing as 2 ties managed to cut around and take the port. They saw this opening and began a barrage of lasers. The X-wing took a hail of shots, his shields held, but had lost 20% of its efficiency. As if by some random luck, the X-wing cut throttle to zero and used momentum to pull up as the 5 ties managed to crash into each other at the spot he was at moments ago. Unfortunately for the Jedi, the 5 remaining fighters (one squad leader left) had rounded about to catch his tail. As if almost planned, the X-wing diverted all power to engines as it sped off towards a corner of the sector, far from the Interdictor. The ties gave a hot pursuit, unaware of the trap the clever Jedi had planted. Kyle broke his trance lightly enough to slam a button on his comm board in the top right of his cockpit before he began move veering maneuvers far out, where the last squad of ties joined in to catch him. At that moment, The Mon Calamari Cruiser broke hyperspace, and veered to a sharp stop right above the interdictor, where 200 Turbolaser batteries began a barrage attack on the Interdictors shields. The Mon Calamari was not alone, for 2 squads of B-Wings, and Y-wings had followed in closely, beginning its assault on the ship.

"Remember, the ship must be disabled, not destroyed, If intel is correct, we'll be able to capture that Trekked..."Il'Ignos, the mon calamari commander chittered over the comms. A wave of confirmations rolled in over the frequencies.
Because the squads were dragged away, the slow moving b-wings and y-wings were free to rip apart the interdictors shielding and began its ion cannon assault.

"Gold 2 Gold 3, your with me on this run, follow close". Gold one of the Y-wings replied.

"Copy lead, following you" The two chattered back. As they moved in they unloaded 12 concussion missiles against the bridge of the interdictor, ripping the shield down to zero.

"All clear blue one, take your boys in". Gold one stammered.

"Copy." Blue one replied as his 6 b-wings dove in towards the interdictors front and pummeled it with ion cannons, disabling the mighty vessel.

Deep inside, electric panels and consoles erupted with sparks of electricity, as the ion bolts delivered overloads to the systems.

"Get back to home one! get back to home..." Screamed the Deck officer just as Static blared out cutting off the hails of screams that rang over the frequencies of the Interdictors channels. This in part to the ion assault.

Il'Ignos stood at the bridge viewscreen, looking profoundly at the sight of the attack before turning to the commander.

"Send the commandos in, lets see if this one man...excuse me one droid, is worth all the trouble we've had today...". Il'Ignos ordered quietly...

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-If a Jedi ignites his lightsaber, he must be ready to take a life. If he is not so prepared, he must keep his weapon at his side.- ~Odan Urr Keeper Of Antiquities~
[Brother to Shadow(JAP), Kyle Katarn(JAS),Medlar,The White Wizard, D@RtHM@UL, and ROBIN OF LOCKSLEY!!!! (ROBIN)/(ROBIN HOOD)]/ NOW KNOWN AS Sednox (if he changes his name one more time...POW!):D Which is bigger? A mole of NaCl? or a mole of Pb?


Jan 20 2004 08:37pm

MarkoZ
 - Student
 MarkoZ

[Not in Story]
Can I be a Sith as well as the Star Destroyer Captain please?...
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"Easy is not for a Jedi"-
Corran Horn, "I Jedi"

Padawan of Hardwired. Brother of Rosered, PlooKoon and Carda Jowol.


Jan 20 2004 05:45pm

CuZzA
 - Student
 CuZzA

300!
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- Even if Carlsberg made "w*nkers", Christiano Ronaldo would still be the biggest "w*nker" in the world

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