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Star Wars Jedi Academy: Novel - Song of Harmony
Apr 29 2003 03:32am

Lian Del Rey
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Lian Del Rey
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...


STAR WARS
The Jedi Academy


Episode 3
Song of Harmony

Six years have passed since all the casualties in the Age of War. The Empress has a fled to the planet of Coruscant to make a hidden base there, leaving the the Deathstar completely defenseless.

Josh, who has managed to keep from morning the death of his master, Vaughn or more commonly now known as Shadow~G, has gone to the planet of Naboo where they are making the new Jedi Academy.

There are rumors that the Empress got a new apprentice from the Jedi Academy. But from all messages from the Empress, she claims she has no apprentice. However, there are now more casualties reported from Coruscant now more than ever.

Now, Josh and his fellow Jedi are disguised as imperialists to interrogate any other imperial and discover what is the source of this problem..
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Jun 15 2003 02:21pm

Lian Del Rey
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 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Sweet! Commenor has the coolest music :P

[In story]
Upon arriving in Commenor, Trekked just looked around. He jet down to the bottom road, and head toward the hotel. Entering inside, he approached the desk.

"Greetings," said the lady at the desk. "My name is Sennitosia."
Trekked scanned the lady. "Sorry, but my sensors indicate your name is... something like.. Li... Lianiotte?"
The woman went big-eyed. "A droid!" she shouted, and it echoed through the large hotel.

Two royal guards jumped down from the chandelir, and pointed their pikes at Trekked.

Trekked glared at the guards. Two rays beamed out of his "eyes," fairly close to their feet. Trekked looked back at the lady.

She became transparent, and her hair flew around her head in random directions. She started floating, and went beneath the ground.

Trekked quickly sabered the two guards, but he wasn't fast enough for the lady. She went inside Trekked's mechanical body. Instantly, Trekked became possessed.

Only the Empress could do something like that.
And the Empress, it was.
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slorp

Jun 15 2003 10:03am

Flamori Athena
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 Flamori Athena

Trekked groaned. Slowly, he felt his senses come back, and almost instantly he wished he didn't. Every inch of his body ached, and he wasn't quite sure that there weren't any parts of him missing.

Curse the sadist who invented pain receptor systems in droids, he thought. (He IS a droid, after all)

His photoceptors winked into existance, and he noticed a rodent-like Ranat scavenging what he apparently thought was a broken-down droid for working parts.

Trekked struggled to move, but most of his body systems failed to comply. Damn, he thought. This is not good. Maybe being a droid does have its disadvantages.

He watched helplessly as the Ranat proceeded to pick his insides clean. Suddenly he felt a spark in his primary circuitry. In a flash, he realized that he could move his head again. Then his arms. Then his torso. Then his legs.

Trekked came as close to smile as was possible for him, then seized the Ranat by the tail. The craeture squealed in pain and tried to wriggle free, but Trekked tightened his grip and finally the alien realized the futility of the situation and went limp.

"Oh no, you don't." said Trekked. "Playing dead isn't going to work with me, you little rat." He made an attempt at standing, failed, and assumed a sitting position.

"Now, let's not waste time. I know you can speak basic. I know you're not as stupid as you look. And if you give me a reason to, I will destroy you. Understand?" Trekked nailed the Ranat with his most terrifying droid-glare, who squeaked and nodded frantically.

"First question." Trekked paused. "Where are we?"

"Corvis Minor." squeaked the Ranat. "In the Distral system."

"Good. What is your name?"

The Ranat shook his head.

Trekked would have frowned, had he a face. "What, do you mean, no?" His grip tightened on the rodent's tail, and it let out another squeak, one which caused Trekked's sensitive sound receptors to spark.

"All right!" snarled Trekked. "Fine, I'll just call you Squeaky."

The Ranat shook his head again.

"You have a problem with that?" asked Trekked dangerously.

The Ranat continued to shake his head, albeit faster.

"Good. Now, take me to your ship. And no complaints. I want to get off this blasted planet." He set the Ranat down, but extended his mechanical arm to keep a grip on its tail.

The Ranat led the way, and soon Trekked found himself facing a Correlian YT-6700 frigate called NightCaller.

"Good," he said once they were on board the ship. "Now set course for Commenor. I have some friends there who can get me out of this mess."

Squeaky hastily set to mapping a course to the Commenor system, and within minutes, the NightCaller entered hyperspace. Trekked relaxed into his chair. He was on his way again.
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Jun 15 2003 08:05am

Flamori Athena
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 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
You guys are a bad influence...and after a while in the academy I begin to feel more at home and I get lazy. :D

Yeah, well, my old posts were better.
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Jun 14 2003 08:26pm

Vaughn
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 Vaughn

"What is it Flamori?" Ulic asked.
"I felt a disturbance in the force. Something terrible is about to happen." Flamori 1 said.
"I was afraid of this. Shall I tell the students it is time for war?"
"The time has not come yet, but it is almost upon us. Where is Bubu?"

"Right here Flamori. How can I help you?" Bubu asked.
"Do you still have the shard from the Academy Crystal? As long as we have it, we can still have a chance of winning this war."
"Yes, I have it. However...This is a discharged peice. The power from this crystal shard has fallen; all it will do is complete the Crystal. But, lucky for us, the crystal needs this shard to operate completly. So... while we have this shard, the crystal cannot become complete, and the song of harmony will stay away untill we are ready for it." Bubu said.
"Thats what I wanted to hear!" Flamori 1 said.

"In that case....I will Kill you all!" a voice was heard.
"Who are you?" Bubu yelled.
"Muahahahah"

"Where are you?"
"In time... you will find out!!!"


[not in story]
alright... that didnt quite work out :/
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- Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson


Jun 14 2003 02:46am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

"So," said a familiar voice in whatever is left of the Deathstar.

The Throne Room.

"Yes?" asked a female.

"They still do not know... the Truth?"
"No."

A cloaked figure walked out from behind a shadow, walking up the stairs, approaching.. The Empress.

It was Buzz Vader.

His black helmet glistened a bit. "They are also not aware of the extremely powerful magic that flows within the crystals?"

"Not all of them," responded the Empress. "Only Soong knows.. and Mideon."

"Mideon?" questioned Buzz Vader.

"He is Soong's master. He also dominated in 3D checkers... Soong got really mad."

"What?"

"Never mind," said the Empress. She sat down in her chairs and watched the fuzzy screens that lied within the walls. Nothing could be read on them anymore. She glanced at Buzz Vader.

She then disappeared like wind blowing smoke. Buzz Vader was puzzled.


The Empress appeared at the shrine, hovering over Soong.

"Hello, Soong," said the Empress calmly. "What do you want?"

Soong sputtered out words. Eventually, he managed to say, "world domination!"

"It is clear you could dominate the world easily. All you need is a Deathstar." She twitched her eye at Soong. "Well, Soong. There is use for you yet."

"What do you mean?"

"Unfortunate it is your master died before you could complete your training. You are not ready."

"Then I'd like my master, Mideon, back."

"No," said The Empress quickly. "You are.. too late."

A ghost version of Master Mideon hovered beside The Empress. "He is now... mine."

Mideon dropped onto the floor with his feet. Quickly, Soong had a huge gash on his cheek. "Never again call me without reason." The three crystals flew over to the Empress. "There is.. however.. one way you can.. survive."

Soong looked up.

"Build me.. a fourth Deathstar. Round Sithtroopers, Stormtroopers, Super Battledroids, bounty hunters, and all the Dark Jedi you could possibly find. And bring them to me. But in the meantime..."



The crystals appeared at the feet of a Jedi.

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slorp

Jun 14 2003 02:28am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Jedi fool." said F2, his right hand raised in a simple, almost relaxed, movement. "You are no match for me."

And Bubu felt the truth of his words as his Force push shaterred on the edge of F2's powerful Force presence like nothing.

"Do not anger me," said F2, still calm. "I want you to do something for me."

"In your dreams, pal." retorted Bubu, trying to probe F2's mind and instead coming up against an impenetrable blank wall.

"I want very much to kill you, Bubu. The only reason I'm holding back is because you're more useful to me dead than alive. Don't tip that balance. You have something I need. The force shard you took from the shattered dark crystal all those years ago. Give it to me."

"In a million years," managed Bubu, reaching out for his comrades, then realized F2 was blocking him from the Force. "I'll kick your decayed ass."

F2's grip tightened considerably, and his eyes blazed. "The balance plunges." he said, and Bubu had one last vision of black lightning exploding from F2's fingers, before he passed out, and knew no more.

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Flamori 1, what happened to your very good posts like that? :P

BTW, keep on posting. I will not allow this... thing... that has stood for a thousand years fall. My negotiations.. will not fail.
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slorp

Jun 11 2003 04:00am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Trekked, it's a story, not a roleplay. If it was in a laboratory, the narrator would have said it. It would also have been in a discussion. Don't you watch the movies?
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slorp

Jun 10 2003 11:01pm

Trekked
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 Trekked

{not in story) :) you think i was stupid enough to have the REAL crystal with me? it's acually in my Laboratry under heavy guard.
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Jun 09 2003 02:31am

Vaughn
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 Vaughn

[not in story]
when was the last time i wrote?... just now

if you mean the story... a long time ago. So let me get this strait... Soong has all three crystals, is by the empress shrine...corrupted, trekked is dying in some ground, the jedi are gone, and he is calling forth the empress to end the world... ok... if you want... i can write some crazy stuff
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When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are.
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Jun 07 2003 04:29am

Sauron-the-rasta-mon
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 Sauron-the-rasta-mon

[not in story] this sucks i wrote a story buts its all out of wacks with the story too bad huh have to read it all this really sucks:mad:oh yeah my moms drunk
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Jun 07 2003 03:49am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
I know that Flamori, that's just to remind you what the names of the crystals are :D
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slorp

Jun 07 2003 01:13am

Flamori Athena
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 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
5th comment from the bottom.
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Jun 07 2003 01:12am

Lian Del Rey
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 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
But there's a connection to the Black Academy and the White Academy. :D

Hey Vaughn, when was the last time you wrote?
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slorp

Jun 07 2003 12:59am

Flamori Athena
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 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
"But Flamori 1 and Eclipse and Vaughn and Lianiotte went," said Acey. "It made them heroes."

"It made them dead." Flash sighed.

See Vaughn, what is meant here is that the Academy Jedi believe we're all dead, references to "wild adventures" also includes Age of War exploits. The explanatory writings would be:

"But Flamori 1 and Eclipse and Vaughn and Lianiotte went ON WILD ADVENTURES," said Acey. "It made them heroes."

"It made them dead." Flash sighed.

Get it?

And Lian, yes there are three crystals. Soong has the Life's Focus (the Jedi Academy Crystal) and the Blood Shard and is currently going after Trekked, who has the Ocean Star.
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Jun 06 2003 06:35pm

Vaughn
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 Vaughn

[not in story]
Lian... soong faught in the black academy. Lianiotte's clones were made in the white academy. You said it yourself >: (

Flamori: Vaughn and Lian are dead - they both died at the end of the age of war
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This comment was edited by Vaughn on Jun 06 2003 06:42pm.

Jun 06 2003 03:36am

Lian Del Rey
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 Lian Del Rey

Soong continued to fly toward Trekked, going past any security with ease.

He looked up at the Eye.

[Not in story]
The Eye is a huge mune, triple size of the sun (in real life) with The Empress's eye's shape, and that it is.

She's watching.

[In story]
The Eye blinked.

Suddenly, everything stopped. Only Soong and Trekked were moving... and the Empress.

Trekked tried to get help by the dark lord because of the approaching Jedi, but he wouldn't budge, even his shirt. Trekked looked at Soong in fear.

"You have something I want," said Soong, having red light flood into the room, activating his lightsaber.

Trekked glanced down at Soong's lightsaber, then looked back up. "So be it, Jedi." He activated his lightsaber as well.

They both ran up to eachother and performed a DFA, clashing their lightsabers together. They went into a saber lock. Soong smiled and glared at Trekked. Trekked was slightly frowining. "Yaaargh!" Trekked yelled.

Soong's Force push shattered onto Trekked, and he flew backwards, crashing into a wall.

Trekked sprinted back to Soong, slightly wounding Soong's arm and leg.

Soong jumped over Trekked, and landed behind him. He performed a light backstab. Missing his target, he stabbed his shoulder, and neck slightly.

Trekked screamed in pain, and collapsed to the floor. Soong deactivated his lightsaber and shook his head. He raised one hand into the air, and the final crystal landed into his hand.

"Enough of this charade," he said. He was about to heavy slash Trekked to finish him off, but suddenly there was a strange sound, and Soong disappeared like wind blowing a puff of smoke.

He appeared at the Empress's shrine, and was about to summon the Empress herself.
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slorp

Jun 06 2003 03:23am

Lian Del Rey
 - Student
 Lian Del Rey

[Not in story]
Ahem, these are the names of the three cystals, and they were put in the end of the Age of War.

The Blue Crystal of Ocean
The Green Crystal of Academy Purity
and The Red Crystal of Blood
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slorp

Jun 06 2003 02:57am

Flamori Athena
 - Student
 Flamori Athena

The two Jedi, revealed to be Acey Spadey and his Padawan, dashed towards their ship in hot pursuit of Trekked, when suddenly Flash, replacement head of the Academy since Flamori 1's away, stepped out over the bodies of the fallen Ubersoilders with no apparent signs of care.

"Acey, wait." he said. "Now that the academy's been attacked, we need you here as a knight. We can't have you running off on wild adventures while the academy withers."

"But Flamori 1 and Eclipse and Vaughn and Lianiotte went," said Acey. "It made them heroes."

"It made them dead." Flash sighed. "It's been years since we they set off to find the crystals, and still no word. It's a critical time in the Alliance, and the Jedi Knights are needed most now, to help hold it together. Trekked must be dealt with later."

"He took many of our students' lives," said Acey.

"We have no choice!" said Flash. "The Alliance needs us as symbols of justice, and this image will not be destroyed because of the actions of another so-called rogue Jedi!"

Acey stared at him for a while, then said, "I understand. Fine. The search will be revitalized later."

"Do you really, Acey?" asked Flash.

"Yes," said the Jedi Knight. 'I do."
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Jun 06 2003 01:59am

Flamori Athena
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 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
Okay, here's the new theory. The Green Crystal Life's Focus was hidden beneath the Black Academy by Flamori 1 and Ecipse when they arrived there. Soong found the Life's Focus and united it with the Blood Shard, bringing two of the crystals together. Trekked still has the Ocean Star. And I will start writing now.
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Jun 06 2003 01:53am

Flamori Athena
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 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
The Jedi Academy Crystal IS the Life's Focus.
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This comment was edited by Flamori Athena on Jun 06 2003 01:56am.

Jun 06 2003 01:47am

Vaughn
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 Vaughn

[not in story]
THE JEDI ACADEMY CRYSTAL!!! >: (
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Jun 06 2003 01:46am

Flamori Athena
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 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
I thought Trekked had the Ocean Star, Soong had he Blood Shard, and the Jedi had the Life's Hope (or whatever)
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Jun 06 2003 01:41am

Lian Del Rey
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 Lian Del Rey

The paramedics took Soong away to a bacta center, and took the Crystal of Blood away from him.

Letting him down on the floor because they had to sign something, his eyes opened instantly the moment the crystal was taken from him. As if suddenly he saw things, his eyes flashed red, and he ran to the pit in the corner, jumped over, and fell.

He fell for a little bit, then grabbed out his grappling hook and shot it to the wall, at a part with a rectangular shape. When he arrived at the part, he kicked the door open.

As it opened, red mist flew out of the room.
This is where the Lianiotte cloning operation took place.

He looked at the bacta-shaped cells, filled with water. The Wingless, Levi, all sorts of clones.

Then he came to the dark front of the room. Glass fallen from the cells, water spilled out, which maybe happened from five to ten years ago. Two signs were laying on the floor.

"Evil Lianiotte"
"The Empress"

Apparently they tried to change their mind to make them evil, but they went over their top, making them too evil, and then killed the cloning operators.

Soong turned around.
Conveniently in the center of the room was a crystal-holder, and after all these years, the center was still glowing.

A crystal was hovering in the middle of it.

At the bottom it said how long the crystal has been in it.

"Three hours."

Soong smiled and snatched the crystal. "I have the blue crystal. I must then snatch back the Crystal of Blood and get the green one.. wherever it is."

He walked out of the room, and almost fell over since there was no ground from the pit.

Believing legend and myth from phrophets, as if attempting to use the crystal for power, he made the crystal hover before him, and then the crystal started glowing.

Suddenly, water started pourining into the "bottomless" pit fast, and it started to rise quickly. The Black Academy was in trouble.

He grabbed his grappling hook and quickly shot it to the ceiling. He flew up and jumped over, right when water splashed to the top of the pit, and poured all over the room.

One of the paramedics rushed into the room. Soong quickly started to grip him tightly, and then another wave of water splashed over the pit, making the room have an inch of water.

Soong smiled and threw the paramedic to the ceiling. He died almost instantly, and Soong took the Crystal of Blood.

He used the power of the Crystal of Blood, and it started glowing red, and cast inferno upon the room, setting it on fire.

"Damn," said Soong. "What am I thinking? This is a waste of power... the water is going to wash the fire away anyway.."

He laughed then held the crystal high in the air. Two meteors blasted out of the Black Academy.

Suddenly, all sound stopped. A faint part of the Song of Harmony was heard.

After a few seconds, it stopped, and the sounds came back. Soong ran out of the Black Academy and used heavy inferno upon it, then stole a ship, and flew off with the two crystals, headed for Trekked.

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slorp

This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on Jun 06 2003 01:42am.

Jun 04 2003 06:56pm

Trekked
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 Trekked

(not in story)yes i can Play the Piano :D
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Jun 04 2003 12:25pm

Flamori Athena
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 Flamori Athena

[Not in story]
Yeah! I got comment 200!

Hey Trekked, YOU can play the piano?
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