| Star Wars Jedi Academy: Novel - Song of Harmony | |
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Lian Del Rey - Student  |
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away... STAR WARS The Jedi Academy Episode 3 Song of Harmony Six years have passed since all the casualties in the Age of War. The Empress has a fled to the planet of Coruscant to make a hidden base there, leaving the the Deathstar completely defenseless. Josh, who has managed to keep from morning the death of his master, Vaughn or more commonly now known as Shadow~G, has gone to the planet of Naboo where they are making the new Jedi Academy. There are rumors that the Empress got a new apprentice from the Jedi Academy. But from all messages from the Empress, she claims she has no apprentice. However, there are now more casualties reported from Coruscant now more than ever. Now, Josh and his fellow Jedi are disguised as imperialists to interrogate any other imperial and discover what is the source of this problem.. _______________ slorp |
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Trekked - Student 
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(in story)when the jedi arrived there was only a few Troops left to slow them down,so they Cut right through them and Came upon a landing field to witness a ship lifting off "we are too late Master" The Padawan looks to his master "i am afraid that Trekked with that Creature will Destroy us all" The Master looks calm "fear not my young padawan,i threw a Tracer onto his Hull so we can Track him,now come." The Padawan goes with his master to their ship... Trekked is checking his Warmachine with Pride "it is better then i expected..." The darklord Beside him makes no comments "Pilot? how long until we reach the SWF?" the Pilot turns around and tells them one hour "excelent" (not in story) i got back from the Recitle and i ROCKED! i got a award  _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody |
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Vaughn - Student 
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[not in story] Play like the wind! _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Trekked - Student
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(in story)Later at the Site of annointing... "it is finished my lord..." The Darklord turns and reveals his face to the officer "well done now activate the Ubersoldat MK5" the officer looks nervous "sir? do you remember what happened in the X-labs when w emade the Prototype?" The darklord nods and says "yes,it Broke free and killed half of the Progect team,why?" The officer starts to sweat from nevousness "what if it goes insane and kills us all?" "then we die" The officer turns around to sewe who talked "Lord Trekked? i thought you were holding the Jedi off" Trekked wispers in the officers ear,and the Officer looks Panicked "you Meen to tell me that the ubersoldats are being Defeated?" Trekked Nods "i am afraid so,the Jedi will be here in a hour" The darklord hears this and orders a Evacuation of equipment and the crystal Powering the MK5 ubersoldat... meanwhile in the battle field... "what? they are pulling out?" "that's what one of the Troopers we captured says" The older jedi starts to Sun towards the Site of annointing "we can't let them escape with the Crystal!" The younger jedi shakes his head and says that it is too late,they have failed to prevent the Ceremony... (not in story)i g2g in a few minutes beacuse i have a Piano recital in 2 hours. _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] Lian, the Uber solders are the name of the soldiers... geeze, does that need explaining? _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Trekked - Student
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(in story) Trekked Sprins into action,he firsts attacks a Young Jedi,their Lightsabers Cross and Trekked Manages to Get a blow past his Defence and Kill Him. "this is Too easy" Just then The Darkloed Signals Trekked that the Ceremony is beginning and that he should hold off the jedi as long as he can... "this should be Fun Master" Trekked glances at his Apprentice and Says "don't underestemaite the Jedi" Trekked's Uber soldats fire Heavy Rockets into a group of jedi that are Pinned down and Deciamte them... "see? i told you it was Too easy master" Trekked Springs at the Leader of the Jedi when he Get's closer he sees that the face is famiilier... On the other side of the Battle Fieild... "Circle around the jedi! we will flank them!" The Troops Follow orders and split into 3 groups to surround them. "FIRE!" (Wepons fire) just then a SUPER uber-soldat comes in and Blasts through the Jedi Lines... (not in story) i am starting to get tired so i will Finish the Battle Feild Later _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody This comment was edited by Trekked on Jun 02 2003 11:00pm. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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[Not in story] Okay here's the thing. I'm making a new story but this one is still staying up. It's going to be a majorly edited version of the First Novel. Since most of the main ideas are already made, you should have no problem writing in this novel AND the first one. Just a reminder, the NEW novel is the first one  _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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[Not in story] This is just a reminder out of the blue: The three crystals are gathered together to confront the Empress. Those good will attack her. Those evil will get a shard of the Sith crystal to use for unspeakibly evil power and purposes. But the Empress isn't going to be in the last battle. Ohhh no. Definately not.  _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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when Xavion arrived, he saw themess. "Jebus... what happened here?" He asked. "Soong... is Evil..." Thranduil said. "Heh, you can't defeat me that easily!" Soong said, struggling to get to his feet. "TAKE THIS AND DIE!!" "not so fast" Isonic said. Soong was thrown against the wall. A huge force push erupted from Isonic. "The reason I stay here, is because of my power in the force. It is foolish to fight against me" Isonic said calmly. "i... I dont believe it!" With that, Soong passed out. "Get the paramedics in here, we need bacta's, and fast!" Xavion said. "Yes sir!" a voice was heard over the intercom. a few moments later, people carried all the wounded and injured away. "They will be fine in a few days." Isonic thought to himself. --- "Commander! We are under heavy fire!" "What?" Trekked asked. "The Jedi are firing at us! We can't hold them off for much longer!" "Must I go there myself?" "Yarrgh!" "Blast... I am going!" Trekked said to himself. _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student 
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[not in story] just a note, Thrandul isnt the leader of the Black Academy, Xavion is. Thranduil is the second best fighter, Isonic is just amazing in the force _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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Soong launched into a massive forward slash, which Thranduil quickly moved to block. then triggered a YDFA to throw Soong off balance. The Dark Jedi was taken by surprise and recieved a HP minus of 46. Snarling in surprise, Soong extended both his sabers and let them fall slack to the ground. His brow furrowed in concentration. "Damn!" said Eclipse. "Thranduil doesn't know this attack." "Thranduil!" shouted Flamori 1, dashing forward. "Watch out for the-" He gasped as Thranduil was blasted across the room by a sudden eruption of flame, lightning and gravel. Soong's two sabers flashed almost too quickly for the eye to see, and Thranduil was instantly slashed all over his body. Soong's attack was even more vicious than it had been when the Jedi had first fought him a long time ago. "Soong, dammit!" yelled Eclipse, rushing towards the Sith. Soong didn't flinch, but a sudden blast of gravel shot towards the Jedi and slammed him into the wall. Flamori 1 leapt in over the destructive circle and did a RDFA, but a jet of flame swerved and smashed him into the ceiling. The ceiling crumbled slightly, and Flamori 1 hit the floor with a sickening crunch. Something broke. Isonic didn't do anything, but Soong turned on him with a rush of lightning. The air crackled, and Isonic calmly raised a hand and absorbed all the force energy into his palm. "How the hell-?!" muttered Soong, conjuring a fireball in his hands and launching it at Isonic. The psychic drew an shimmering energy shield out of nowhere. The fireball shattered on the edge of the shield. "Damn!' said Soong, launched into an attack the sheer ferociousity of Eclipse had never seen before. Isonic absorbed it all into his shield. Snarling in disbelief, Soong performed a spinning double RDFA that could've torn Isonic apart. Messily. Almost. Just as Soong came down to finish Isonic, the Jedi let loose with all the energy gathered in his energy shield and blasted Soong through the opposing wall into the courtyard. Soong landed hard and didn't move. Isonic looked at the mess around him and shook his head. Hitting the button on his comlink, he opened a line to Xavion. "Xavion, it's me Isonic. I'm in Warp Room 5. You might want to come take a look at this. Oh, and bring the paramedics." Without waiting for a response, he turned the device off. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Trekked - Student
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(not in story)ok i Fixed it.i made it so i only have 1.but it is still enough to do some damage _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] No Trekked, she was awnsering my question. And since when did you have the three crystals? I thought you only had the Ocean Star. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Trekked - Student
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(in story) At the Site of annointing... a Elite Guard goes to acuple Troops Getting Ready to recive Orders "Allright The Ceremony is about to begin,once we are halfway through the Annointing be SURE not to look at the Ruins" "w w w what will happen if we look?" the Elite Guard looks at them Cruly and says "if you look? well firest your Blood will begine to Boil then...well it dosn't really matter after that,Stand you posts here and make sure we do not lose Power" Guards Snap to attention and Say "Yes SIR" elite Guard walks away to Tell His Superior that all is ready... "Trekked...you have arrived with the Prisinor?" Trekked Stands at Attention and reports "i have my lord,But we have a Small Problem" The Darklord Glares at Trekked and asks "what did you say?! we have a Problem? what is it then don't just stand there" Trekked Joints starts To get alittle Rusty "well the Jedi Know we are Here" This Angarys the Darklord "ARG do they know what we are Doing here?" Trekked Looks pleased that His master Brings up the Subject "no sir they only know I am comming here to Deliver 1 of the Crystals" At this the Darklord calms down "good...they Do not know our plans...Triple Security in all sectors,esspecailly the Annointing Ruins" Trekked Turns to leave but the Darklord makes a Signal "oh and Trekked? Bring Me the one called Eclipes..i Feel that he will come here to Kill us all" Trekked says "Yes my master".... _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody This comment was edited by Trekked on Jun 01 2003 10:27am. |
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Trekked - Student 
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[not in story] huh??? What do u want? _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Trekked _______________ slorp |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] Who called you a male? [In story] Soong looked down at the two Jedi from his post atop one of the pillars in the room. "Greetings, Jedi." he said, smiling. "Who are you?" demanded Thranduil. "And how did you get in here?" The smile grew wider. "Your pathetic security systems could be cracked by a five year old, much less a grown man trained in the ways of the Force." "You're a Jedi?" Thranduil seemed surprised. "You could say that." said Soong, and his twin sabers flashed to life. "He's a Sith!" shouted Thranduil, drawing his weapon from its holster behind his back. "Get out of my academy!" "Careful, Thranduil." said Isonic. "He's good." "Maybe." said Thranduil. "But I'm better." Isonic shook his head. "Correlians." he said simply. In his chanber at the Black Academy, Eclipse heard the sound of sabers clashing. Initially he didn't think it was more than a duel amongst students, then he felt the level of energy in the force. Something was very wrong. He rushed outside. Flamori 1 was already outside his room. "Soong." he said. Flamori 1 nodded. "He's fighting Thranduil in one of the academy rooms." "We have to help him." Eclipse drew his saber. "They're in there." he nodded towards one of the doors. "After you." Eclipse and Flamori 1 burst into the room. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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In the Black Academy... Thranduil and Isonic walked past the many rooms of the Black Academy. They came to the room where Shadow~G was about to die by the Empress, when she was holding him back, dropping him into the corner of the endless pit, until Shadow~G changed his mind, and flew back up. Thranduil looked around. He stumbled on Isonic's leg, and fell backwards, with Isonic, and the rest of the Jedi. It seemed they accidently fell into the endless pit as well. Or did they? They fell for a little bit, until they landed head-first onto brown solid concrete. Ahead of them was a statue of Lianiotte. Legend tells of the builders of the Black Academy knowing very much ahead of the future. But it came to a limit. They already knew that this very exact moment was going to happen. It was extraordinary. They could find out the future if they could find them. But they're dead now. Killed by.. The Empress. So anyway, they built the room many, many years ago, knowing Lianiotte would be dead. Isonic knew that if they could do something they'd find out more information. He started praying at Lianiotte's statue. Moments later, the statue started glowing. A few minutes later, wind started howling through the room, and a ghost came out of the statue. Lianiotte. They all looked up at her. She looked down at them. Not waiting for greetings, she began talking. "The Empress haunts your steps. She lives in your minds, she lives in your body, she, most of all, lives in your hatred. Even if you combine all the crystals, there is only one way to defeat her. The Truth." "Milady," interrupted Isonic. "What... is the truth?" "In time you will understand the Truth. But for now..." Lianiotte held her arms up in the air. Slowly, a puff of smoke formed a minature radar, that tells you where the crystals are. [Not in story] Different from the Dragonball Radar, DBZ fans :O [In story] Lianiotte turned her head, and quickly vanished. Soong. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Don't you dare call me a male. Who said that the clone that "died" was the last clone of them all? _______________ slorp This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on May 30 2003 03:08pm. |
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Trekked - Student
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Near the Site of annointing on the Planet Geath 2... Three Troops Patrol the Sector while the Ubersoldats Prepeare for their annointing The DarkLord Smiles and turns to the Commander "we Need that Last Crystal...what's the Delay?" The Commander Gives his report Without Sounding Nervous... "Well sir there is a Problem... we think the Jedi already Have it" At this Report The Darklord Suddenly Gets Furious at the Commanders Incompedence... "i don't Have Time for this! all we need is a Jedi Trainee and that Crystal Inorder to Create The Timerift" The Commander Starts to get confused... "Timerift Sir?" The Darklord looks at His Subordinate in annoyance "i intend to Wipe The Jedi From History and Replace them With My SITH lords idiot" The Commander Starts to Ckoke "i am sorry my lord(gasp) i will not Question you again" But The DarkLord Smiles and says. "i am going to make Sure of that" The Commander's scream fills the Valley..... _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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On a suddenly not-so-insignificant planet, Soong rushed on towards his ship. All around him the clones rushed out to head him off. "Damn, this is not good." Soong spun around to face the threat. His saber ignited. The clones didn't have lightsabers, only Night Swords. They were made out of a synthetic alloy that were capable of cutting through most substancs and could actually resist lightsabers for a while. No real substitute for lightsabers, but probably the next best thing. No matter. he leapt forward, using the force to knock back the clones between him and the ship. The force propelled him the rest of the distance into his craft. As he piloted the modified assault shuttle off the burining planet, he watched the clones below. He would have killed them, but by doing so he would have made the Empress even more powerful. And that was definitely uncalled for. Still, all the power in the universe would not save the Empress when Soong caught up with her. There were none that could face him. He was sure of that. The jedi could prove to be a nuisance, and if that happened, he would see to it that they were eliminated. Smiling, he opened a line to one of his contacts. Appparently, the jedi had met up with black academy jedi Thranduil and Isonic. They were probably on their way to the black acadmey now. That was where he had to go. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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[Not in story] Trekked, what is that? Provide more explnation please. Not all of us know what you're talking about. For example, is the pilot Trekked's apprentice? Highly unlikely, but there was no mention of another. How many and who else is in the shuttle? Provide us with these details if you want us to understand more. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Trekked - Student
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(in story) When the Dark Lord beacame aware of the Jedi Academy he was Curious,so After Trekked Dropped off the 2 Crystals he Sent him and his apprentice to the Academy to Kidnap 1 Trainee... On a 3 person Shuttle Headed for Naboo... "This is Taking Far too long... how long untill we reach the Academy?" The Pilot Looks at his Passengers "about 2 or 3 Hours Still Trekked" At This News Trekked Is pleased "good my young apprentice.you will set down on the Far side of the Academy...i will go on foot from there" The Dark Jedi Shrugs and Adds "the Defences are Very low where we shall drop you,they shall never see you comming" 2 hours later... "alright i am out of the Stealth Lambda shuttle" The Apprentice Smiles at this and says "Acknowledged My lord" Trekked Scans the area for Lifeforms "i read negative for lifeforms you should hid behind one of the Moons untill i call you" "yes my Lord" The Shuttle Lifts off into the Sky to Disappear, Trekked Starts his journy on foot to the academy After Cheaking his Equipment... (not in story) i decided to Bring the Academy on Naboo back into the Picture _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody This comment was edited by Trekked on May 30 2003 12:26pm. |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] Probably the capital S, which signifies importance. If that's the case, Lian, capitals don't mean anything to Trekked. PS: I ALWAYS double-post. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Trekked - Student
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(not in story)better? SIR? _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] *cough* Lookit: The Lian Clone realizes that She is about to be blown to Pieces... -Trekked *cough* _______________ slorp |
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