| Star Wars Jedi Academy: Novel - Song of Harmony | |
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Lian Del Rey - Student  |
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away... STAR WARS The Jedi Academy Episode 3 Song of Harmony Six years have passed since all the casualties in the Age of War. The Empress has a fled to the planet of Coruscant to make a hidden base there, leaving the the Deathstar completely defenseless. Josh, who has managed to keep from morning the death of his master, Vaughn or more commonly now known as Shadow~G, has gone to the planet of Naboo where they are making the new Jedi Academy. There are rumors that the Empress got a new apprentice from the Jedi Academy. But from all messages from the Empress, she claims she has no apprentice. However, there are now more casualties reported from Coruscant now more than ever. Now, Josh and his fellow Jedi are disguised as imperialists to interrogate any other imperial and discover what is the source of this problem.. _______________ slorp |
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Trekked - Student 
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( not in story) for your Info i had Finished a Falty clone...the Last one of them and i shall correct myself _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody This comment was edited by Trekked on May 30 2003 05:46am. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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[Not in story] Trekked, read the story. Originally, the planet was completely blue. The only thing other than the clones that were seen was the ship. Nothing else. Nothing. No offense or anything Trekked, but near the end of the story, please do not write about the Empress. Again, no offense. Everybody started out somewhere. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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[Not in story] *sigh* There are only two clones of Lianiotte left. The rest are rejects in the burning planet. The two remaining are The Empress and The Wingless. I know I may have done it before with the Empress, but don't make yourself seem all-powerful. The Empress IS all-powerful. And it would be stupid to blow the clone to bits otherwise the Empress would become even MORE powerful. Then what?  _______________ slorp |
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Trekked - Student 
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(in story) Trekked Manages to Find the Crystal in a Small House filled with Strange objects and Pools of boiling Water.... "This is Not Good,i think i shall activate the Mediphasic Armor" turns On Armor,Just then a clone comes around a Corner... "You shall never have the Crystal!" Trekked Just Cuts her Voice box out "you Clones and your Voices...(sigh) you are too High pitched". "allow me to Introduse you to somebody...Meet my Creation of War...Meet Das Uber Soldat MK4...the Super Soldier" The falty Lian Clone realizes that She is about to be blown to Pieces... ...Meanwhile on Froimate 3... "My Lord? Trekked just Sent a Communica" The Evil Dark lord Smiles and Says "and does he have it?" The Officer Reports "Yes sir and he is onroute to the Site of annointing for the Ceremony" at this news the Dark lord is Pleased... "Good now i need you to put Maxumum Security at the Site Of Annointing As soon as Trekked Enters the System" The Officer Turns towards a Comm Port and Gives the Order to Deploy the Uber soldats at the Site... _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody This comment was edited by Trekked on May 30 2003 06:01am. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Don't feel bad to double post  _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student 
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"you fight well, Jedi..." Flamori 3 said calmly. "Do you know why I have to win?" Eclipse asked him. "It doesn't matter. Because, you cannot defeat me anyway. So why do you try?" "Because, what I am doing will help the universe... even scum like you!" "I seriously doubt that..." "Just Watch Me!" Eclipse yelled, rushing toward Flamori 3. Flamori 3 was taken completly off guard. Eclipse's slash got alittle of Flamori 3's chest. On the recoil, Eclipse formed a very powerful force push. Flamori 3 was thrown back; his lightsaber flew helplessly aside. "And now, the finale... Flamori 3, you have a choice... be at the mercy of the Light side, or die." "Die, how?" Eclipse, using the force, picked up an apple (yes, an apple), and threw it out the door which was wide open. "Ah, I see... Well, I guess all I can do is this!" Flamori 3 grabbed his saber and leapt out of the door. Eclipse rushed to see what had happened. F3 was falling, very quickly. "COWARD!" Eclipse yelled. "THIS ISN'T FINISHED!!!" F3 yelled while plummeting to the ground. Before F3 hit the ground, he was gone in a flash of red smoke. "He will be back... so thats another enemy we have now." Eclipse thought to himself. Flamori 1 was getting worried, none of the clones made a move. "Eclipse to Flamori, do you read me?" Eclipse broke the silence. At once, the clones recoiled. After realising that Flamori was the one who broke the silence, they leapt towards him. Just when Flamori thought it was all over, two sabers appeared infront of him. Two different sabers, crossing; protecting him from the clones. "Begone!" a voice bellowed "I... I knwo that voice!" Flamori thought to himself. Flamori 1 chansed a look up. Standing there, was the last two people who he thought would be there. Thranduil and Isonic. "What... what are you two doing here?" "You needed help, so we came. Be more thankful next time. Come, we must return you to your ship." Thranduil said. "Have you been following me all this way?" F1 asked. "Not quite. If you remember, the Black Academy has teleport rooms, and Isonic is exceptionally strong in the force... so we could tell you needed help; so we came." "Thank you." "Dont mention it" Isonic said. Thranduil and Isonic lead F1 to his ship. "Remember, when you least expect it, we will be here to help you. Now, we must go" Before F1 or Eclipse could say anything, they were gone. "Is the crystal on this planet?" "Somewhere... but where?" They didn't hear the noise that would give it all away... Trekked was fighting the clones on the planet below. _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student 
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[not in story] lol - nice cover Lian (no sarcasm) _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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Flamori 1 jumped to his feet. All around him, the Lianiotte clones were staring at him. Unblinkingly. Silence fell over the ranks of the clones. They surrounded him and then did nothing. Just...watched. He didn't dare to break the silence. Who knew what kind of effect it would have on the clones? It was unlikely that they could defeat him individually, but there were so many. If there was to be a battle, he might be defeated by sheer force of numbers. The ranks of the clones stretched out across the swamp as far as he could see. Exactly what the hell had Lian been trying to do, anyway? He wondered. The day drew on, and neither the clones nor Flamori 1 moved or spoke. Nothing. Just silence, eerie in its intensity. On the ship, Eclipse had somehow managed to get back onto his feet. Flamori 3 seemed to take it as an offense, and began attacking him instantly with a strangely glowing dual blade. Eclipse caught his attack and begin to launch a counterattack, but Flamori 3 was good. The two battled backwards and forwards, across the main hold of the ship, neither gaining the upper hand for long before giving it away again. Once, Flamori 3 managed to slash Eclipse across an arm, but Eclipse quickly launched a RDFA that shaved a bit off Flamori 3's right foot. After that the fighting got more decidedly intense. Eclipse cut high across Flamori 3's shoulder, the latter ducked and came up under Eclipse's saber with a quick lunge. Eclipse jumped and slashed down, missing his adversary but tearing the ship's door open. [Not in story] No time now, got to GOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGO!!!!!!!!!!! _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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[Not in story] This planet we're talking about here, it's the Double-Earth/Demented-Rodian/Rejected-Lian place, right? Edit: Never mind, I get it now. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. This comment was edited by Flamori Athena on May 28 2003 09:51am. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] *looks around* Hmm.. Edited. _______________ slorp This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on May 28 2003 05:30am. |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] er, Lian, remember, Flamori 1 is at the Jedi Academy... not on the planet of reject Lians... *and yes, im doing this because you do it to me* _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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Flamori 1's ship flew up from the Jedi Academy and joined the fleet to tell them the information, since their communicator cells were gone. A robed figure walked up to the commander of the reject Lianiottes. "You're late," she said, looking at a robed figure slowly walking to her on the ruined planet. "Patience, slave," said the robed figure. "Pathedic, foolish reject. Without being as powerful as Lianiotte, you are worth nothing." "Just a bunch of talk, all you are." The robed figure continued walking on. "I will get them eventually." "Make progress, and get them now." "That can be arranged," said the figure. He revealed his glowing blood-red eyes, activated his red lightsaber, and performed a DFA, with a jump so powerful it went on top of the ship. Flamori 1 was the victim, who fell to the power of the Sith Lord. "Gaghh!!" The figure pointed his lightsaber's end at Flamori 1's face. "Do not move. You are obviously no match for me." Eclipse didn't hear the commotion, and continued flying the ship. The figure shifted his view. He looked at Eclipse. He got a smile on his face. His view went back to Flamori 1. "You are all failures." "In your dreams!" The figure's eye twiched. He held his lightsaber and spun around, making a gash into the ship, making Flamori 1 fly out of the ship, and land back onto the planet. The fate of Flamori 1 was lying in the hands of the rejects. He walked up to Eclipse, and invisible hands drew around Eclipse's neck, holding him up the air. He managed turn around to get a view of the attacker. The ship was now flying itself. "Where are the crystals?" asked the hooded figure. "I... don't.. have them!..!" "Brave of you, boy. But foolish. We know Soong came to the demon world and got the crystal. Wouldn't you have it by now?" "Soong... is.. no longer with us!" The gripper shook his head. "Give me the crystals. You obviously stand no match for me." Eclipse strugged to make a reason, but the grip was getting tighter. The only thing he mangaged to say was, "wh-... who .. are you?.." "It should be an honor to know my name." He turned Eclipse to a window of the ship, preparing to throw him out. While attempting to throw him out of the window (which failed since Eclipse held onto the edges while about to be thrown out) he said only two words. "Flamori 3!" _______________ slorp This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on May 28 2003 05:30am. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Well because it wasn't released yet  _______________ slorp |
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Eclipse DKana - Student 
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uh I never saw that one.... |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] It would be in the way of things. Make the novel first then we can make pictures. (By the way, a long time ago when I was writing the beginning of Age of War in a printable format, I made a picture of DJ Sith and Flamori 2 fighting near Lianiotte and Eclipse's crashed ship, yahh!) _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] id be game for that except for one thing... I CANT DRAW  _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] Shall we make a graphic novel, then? _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Eclipse DKana - Student
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ooh ooh I made a picture of what would happen when the crystals combine http://members1.chello.nl/~r.vennik2/cooldingetje.jpg |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] The first one was different. That was a completely crazy, out of the way thing. As long as we don't interact with Star Wars movie fans it should be okay. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] That was the rephrase. _______________ slorp This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on May 27 2003 02:34am. |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] go along with what? What you said? I don tunderstand what you said, so i cant go along with it, can i? _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Just go along with it _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] Oro? Could you rephrase that Lian? _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] I've felt that already. Read the first novel. _______________ slorp |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] Lian, why do I sense you don't like Earth being brought into the story? They can work together fine, just forget all that timeline stuff. If the story has to be based on reality we might as well just stop now. The fact that Double-Earth has no Star Wars just means that no one is going to run up to us babbling about Jedi and stuff while we're on earth. I don't like being ignored! _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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