Star Wars Jedi Academy: Novel - Song of Harmony | |
Lian Del Rey - Student |
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away... STAR WARS The Jedi Academy Episode 3 Song of Harmony Six years have passed since all the casualties in the Age of War. The Empress has a fled to the planet of Coruscant to make a hidden base there, leaving the the Deathstar completely defenseless. Josh, who has managed to keep from morning the death of his master, Vaughn or more commonly now known as Shadow~G, has gone to the planet of Naboo where they are making the new Jedi Academy. There are rumors that the Empress got a new apprentice from the Jedi Academy. But from all messages from the Empress, she claims she has no apprentice. However, there are now more casualties reported from Coruscant now more than ever. Now, Josh and his fellow Jedi are disguised as imperialists to interrogate any other imperial and discover what is the source of this problem.. _______________ slorp |
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Trekked - Student |
(not in Story) if you are wondering it is Josh and that other jediiii what's his name runing Towards the Exit killing Soldiers In their Path _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody This comment was edited by Trekked on May 26 2003 05:14am. |
Trekked - Student |
(in story)in the Crypt... "i am sick of this place!" "ya but what are those Creatures?" "where did they all come from?" "Don't ask me nobody tells me anything" (distant Screams) "MY goodness!! did you hear that?" "ya and i wish i hadn't" "we have gotta get out of Here! Quickly follow me back to the Enterance" (three Soldiers run to Enterance)... "What?! the Ladder it's destroyed!" "they have sealed us in here!" (closer Screams) "get ready (loads Blaster rifle)They'r Comming!"..... _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody |
Lian Del Rey - Student |
[Not in story] Vaughn, this is a post I made: But Eclipse's trance was suddenly stopped. His mind changed to a naked (don't get any ideas, perverts!) body, hair falling down from her head. Her arms and legs streched out, mechanical wires flowing out. Suddenly, his image got closer to her face from somewhere else. (ahem.) Two, piercing blood-red eyes opened up, visible behind the hair. The wires went before her, and suddenly flew closer from Eclipse's view. The pain. The real live pain. He thought about what happened for moments and moments... and then realized. "The Empress," Eclipse thought out loud, "...is a female reincarnation of The Virus!" It was true. The Empress was dead, but now back, even more powerful than ever. Living in your computers. Your electronics. Your minds. Even in your very bodies. Suddenly with that, Eclipse had a craving for killing. The Empress has poisoned his mind, with the very thought of her. _______________ slorp |
Lian Del Rey - Student |
[Not in story] Okay nevermind. Instead of the demon queen being The Empress, being black and white, hair hanging down, etc., she looks like Infested Kerrigan (if you've played StarCraft) and.. just ran around. With the Crystal of Blood on her neck. [In story] Eclipse, having his mind being infested with The Empress's madness, continually almost kept collapsing into the water. Josh quickly activated his lightsaber and cut off the hand. [Not in story] About Soong activating his lightsaber even though he lost it, just make it like, he used Force on them all. [In story] Josh looked up. What a strange moon. "What's wrong with that?" He noticed the moon to suddenly turn. When it was done turning, it revealed what they have not seen in ages. "The Deathstar?!" It almost had the evil laughing glare of the now-dead Empress, virus form, on the Deathstar. And an emerald blast that could have destroyed the whole planet, struck the blue planet, evaporation all the water, revealing mutated Rodians. Quickly, somehow, the Rodians quickly evaporated as well. The only thing left on the planet besides the Jedi, was a hilt of a lightsaber. "This.." Josh said slowly, "..this is where Lianiotte's cloning took place.." Suddenly, they heard a groan of voices inside the earth of the planet. Hands popped out of nowhere, all over the small planet, digging themselves out. Mutated Lianiottes. Not as strong, but millions. These were the reject clones. The Jedi quickly activated their lightsabers. "We're surrounded!" Josh yelled. "No!" shouted Eclipse, who managed to bring back his sanity. "If we kill them," yelled Xero, "then The Empress will be even more powerful!" "But so would The Wingless," stated Eclipse. "Well that, but the Deathstar is right there. Who knows where the power will go to?" While the clones were digging themselves up, a ship was being dug out as well. That's convenient. The Jedi quickly jumped into it, in full retreat. The crystal was not there. _______________ slorp |
Vaughn - Student |
[not in story] When did the empress die? If she did, then the demon queen doesnt exist, the virus empress doesnt exist (the virus was the evil being at the end of the first JA novel, remember?) Your contradicting yourself, and confusing me... _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
Lian Del Rey - Student |
[Not in story] It's Virus not Viral, and The Empress IS The Virus Empress! Grr.. Remember my post, The Empress died and..... yaddayadda.. that's why the queen can teleport around so quickly, looks so creepy, and is in black and white and.... yadda. _______________ slorp |
Vaughn - Student |
[not in story] well, ill re write it then... but a few things, not trying to be repettitive. I dont remember anything about the empress being in the demon world, she was off doing whatever on her own planet, probably getting stronger (what i see her doing, ill tell you when the time comes, dont want to ruin the surprise). Again, about the empress, she hasnt been in the story yet, but remember the Viral Empress? Shes in and she's terrorising the Jedi. Jedi Being Human, yes, but heres a question for you: "This story takes place a few (about 16 or so) years after the first JA Novel. Now, if you remember in the first JA Novel, alot of stuff happened. But, the jedi came and interacted with us, the people writing the story, remember? So, why don't you like the idea of jedi comming to the non-force world of us? They did it before, and you didnt complain, so why complain now?" Ok, ill re read for the lightsaber... ill rewrite it then (thats gonna be hard though...) Alright... anything else from your post i can answer, ill edit it if i find them Edit: Demons being almost perfect; even the perfect warrior has weaknesses... maybe theirs is the fact that soong is crazy angry, demented, trying to get the crystal for god knows what, and hes really angry... not to mention very good with the sword (almost a Tenken) _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson This comment was edited by Vaughn on May 25 2003 03:13pm. |
Lian Del Rey - Student |
[Not in story] Vaughn, word just in: JEDI **ARE** HUMAN! I'm talking about the human Jedi. None like.. Kit Fisto.. or.. Lando Calrissian... eugh... (just kidding about Lando) _______________ slorp |
Lian Del Rey - Student |
[Not in story] Vaughn, re-read what I wrote. Soong lost his lightsaber in the vortex! And remember, these demons are almost perfect.. better read the thing I wrote about Soong again. Sorry. ^.^' EDIT: Okay, now you REALLY have to read my paragraph over. The demon queen, she's The Empress. ^.^' _______________ slorp This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on May 25 2003 04:14am. |
Trekked - Student |
(not in story)remember that Trekked and the Darkman has the Third Crystal _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody |
Vaughn - Student |
[not in story] well Lian, explain to me this. Why is it that you only start flaming the alternate universes after we bring them to the human universe? _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
Vaughn - Student |
[not in story] since of course i dont know which ending to write about (the mutant rodians, or the human interrogation), ill go back to Soong. [in story] "Damn... I didn't count on fire breath... I guess i'll have to resort to good old Mideon's power..." Soong thought to himself. He made a quick stop, and turned. He ran head first into the Demon hoard. In a purple flash, Soong was behind them, turning again, and flying back. Two Demons fell dead. "Very good Soong. But, you have no idea of the power of The Demon Queen!" The demon said laughing. "And you don't know the power of the dark side of the force..." Said Soong. "Oh? We have a wanderer... now, it is time for you to perish along with the rest of your crew! Kill him!" "AAAH!!!!" The demons yelled in their war cry. "Exellent.. now, to destroy them all" Soong thought to himself. In a purple flash, the demons fell. They were sliced in half, and some were sliced into quarters. "You're better than you look... Sith poser. But, you cannot defeat the most powerful Demon there is!" The Demon Queen yelled, blowing fire at Soong. "Damn, she's right. I cant get past her fire breath...there must be a better way." And a better way, there was. At that moment, Bubu appeared behind the Demon. "Sorry hun, but its time for you to go." Bubu said while using a lunge on her back. "What?!? Where did you come from?!?" the Queen said while screaming in pain. "YOU LOSE DEMON!" Soong screamed. In another red flash that passed right through the demon Queen. Soong's ultimate force attack... propelling his force power as it would a saw, it can cut through almost anything. "Noa..." The Demon managed to say, as her head rolled off her shoulders. "Thanks for helping me. Now, I must go." Soong said, reaching out for the neclace with the crystal on it. "Not so fast Soong. We need that Crystal to bring harmony to all the universes. Please, let us have it." "No." "What do you want with it?" "I am here to commemorate my master Mideon, who passed away protecting this place. I cannot let you use it for your own devilry!" Soong yelled. "Soong... Don't make me destroy you." "JusT TRY ME!" Soong yelled, getting ready for force flashes. "*sigh*, well, If I must, then you shall perish." Bubu said. "Bubu... you knwo what to do?" "Yes, I know. stop asking me" "Sorry, continue" Bubu rushed Soong. In a very quick move, he pushed him off balance using a strong force push. With Soong on the ground, Bubu swong high, strait down. Before his saber hit Soong, he deignited it, and rolled over him, grabbing the crystal. "Thanks!" Bubu said, as he jumped up into the waiting ship. "B@stard!" Soong yelled The ship left the Demon world. "You have the crystal?" Flamori asked over the intercom. "Yes.. But now, Soong is against us once again." "I knew that was going to happen. Well, get back to the Academy. Josh is out getting the last one, and then we can start the ceremony!" "alright... Jedi team out" _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson This comment was edited by Vaughn on May 26 2003 02:38am. |
Lian Del Rey - Student |
[Not in story] DBZ and Star Wars are two completely different things. And for your information, they are different GALAXIES, not UNIVERSES, so they are the same timeline. And anyway, they travel inside their own galaxy. Don't ruin the storyline like this. It's stupid. Really. _______________ slorp |
Vaughn - Student |
[not in story] lian, did you not read what i said? Sure it took place a long time ago in a galaxy far far away. But, who says that in that galaxy (universe in my mind), the time is differet? For example, if you ever watch DBZ, youll know the room of spirit and time (hyperbolic time chamber) where one year there equals a day on earth. Or, better yet, Narnia, where no matter how long you stay there, only 1 moment has passed. What im saying is.. use your imagination; the humans do have a part in it, and no, it doensn't ruin the storyline of Star Wars, how would it? _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
Lian Del Rey - Student |
[Not in story] By the way, somebody please write about Soong before he gets lonely and forgotten. _______________ slorp |
Lian Del Rey - Student |
[Not in story] Umm... we could have waited until the end to hear that, Trekked. [In story] The team crashed into the completely blue planet. They jumped out before the ship got devoured in flame. Josh looked around. No sign of civilization. Suddenly, a red hand started tugging on Josh. He quickly activated his lightsaber, spun it around, and cut off the creature's hand. Rodians. Mutated.. Rodians. _______________ slorp |
Trekked - Student |
(not in story)oh and Trekked gets destroyed in this story _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody |
Lian Del Rey - Student |
[Not in story] And we'd be dead because we'd suddenly age. _______________ slorp |
Lian Del Rey - Student |
[Not in story] This is all getting confusing. Earth and Double Earth are practically the same thing, but without the Star Wars movies. I'm not taking back what I said, but yes, Star Wars did take place a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. Why? People believe that we were born in a high-tech galaxy far far far far far far far far far away, a very long long long long long long long long time ago. Then the technology was fading, bringing us to Earth, and then starting the Prehistoric age. Double Earth and Earth are still the same timeline. And still the same thing. We just excluded Star Wars from their knowledge. So, basically, it's still EARTH! If we went to Earth, we'd be going TO THE MOON!!! Because the SECOND Earth hasn't taken form yet. ((The first form of Earth was taking form, but got hit by a meteor, then built the moon.)) And, if we were going to OUR galaxy, we'd be dead. See what I'm saying? So, planet covered with water infested with Rodians it is. _______________ slorp |
Flamori Athena - Student |
[Not in story] Oh yeah, and can you guys PLEASE not screw this up by bringing other characters to Earth. I would prefer it as just Josh and the locals. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
Flamori Athena - Student |
Taken from the Wall Street Journal, 23rd May 2003-Today, a startling event occured at 3.00am (GMT) this morning that might forever change the way we view the universe. A small group of Indonesian fishermen were out fishing when suddenly an unidentified ship dropped out of the sky and crashed into the Pacific Ocean. The five fishermen instantly contacted the Indonesian Goverment with news of a "massive spacecraft falling out of the sky right into our favorite fishing spot", to quote the 45-year old fisherman Shuma Daravon. Instantly the US, Chinese and Russian goverments sent out ships to intercept the craft, each hoping for a cache of extra-terrestrial technology. The Chinese ships, being the closest to the actual location of the crash, reached there first. It is known the ship was taken to a top-secret location, but otherwise details are sketchy. The Chinese Prime Minister refused to comment. -End Article- Josh awoke in a dark room. He had a splitting headache. He looked around him. Where was he? Not in the shuttle, that was for sure. The last thing he remembered was crashing into the planet's atmosphere. Was he on earth, then? Josh sniffed the air around him. It was possible. But why was he here? He vaguely remembered something Flamori 1 had said about the planet's inhabitants being somewhat primitive in comparision to the rest of the galaxy, and of a rather suspicious nature towards anything out of the ordinary. A light flashed on. A voice barked something in alanguage he did not understand. Josh shook his head. His head hurt, and the bright light was blinding him. There was a pause, then the voice spoke again in basic. "What is your name?" it asked roughly. "Josh." said Josh, his vision beginning to clear. "Where are you from, and why have you come here?" Josh said, "It's a long story." "Then you'd better start now. We don't have a lot of time." "It would be a lot easier if I could talk to you face to face, and not through a hidden camera." There was a pause, as they were no doubt debating his request, and how he discovered the camera. Finally, "The validity of your request is questionable." Pause again. "Are your intentions honorable?" Josh groaned. It was going to be a long session. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
Flamori Athena - Student |
[Not in story] No, I have a better idea. Double Earth! A world similar enough to ours, but without Star Wars movies and several other things! Double Earth, the alternate reality! (I will, however, continue to refer to the planet as Earth.) _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
Flamori Athena - Student |
[Not in story] Soong is caught in a big ball of **** somewhere on the Demon World, Eclipse is part of a Jedi Search Team trying to recover the Blood Shard, on the same planet as Soong. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
Eclipse DKana - Student |
[not in story] yea erm this probaly is a stupid question... what happened to Soong and Eclipse? |
Vaughn - Student |
[not in story] Lian, why did i not see that comming from you... well, i was originally planning for it to be a secret mission (if youve seen season 1, ep 2 of FarScape, youll know what they did), and it was underwater (hence Ocean Star). but fine, rodians it is. Mee to bay cora? _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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