| Star Wars Jedi Academy: Novel - Song of Harmony | |
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Lian Del Rey - Student  |
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away... STAR WARS The Jedi Academy Episode 3 Song of Harmony Six years have passed since all the casualties in the Age of War. The Empress has a fled to the planet of Coruscant to make a hidden base there, leaving the the Deathstar completely defenseless. Josh, who has managed to keep from morning the death of his master, Vaughn or more commonly now known as Shadow~G, has gone to the planet of Naboo where they are making the new Jedi Academy. There are rumors that the Empress got a new apprentice from the Jedi Academy. But from all messages from the Empress, she claims she has no apprentice. However, there are now more casualties reported from Coruscant now more than ever. Now, Josh and his fellow Jedi are disguised as imperialists to interrogate any other imperial and discover what is the source of this problem.. _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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[Not in story] This is really... really.. ..not good. It really ruins the Star Wars stuff. We come to Earth and some guy sees a lightsaber and says, "HEY! You're the guy from the Star Wars movie!" "How do ye know?" "Because I saw de movie. You came to our planet and then cut stuff up. You got all the crystals and the world was saved!" "Wow you're good." "Ahahayup! And in this scene you cut my head off." I mean, come on! If it was Earth, then they've watched Star Wars and seen the lightsaber and everything. They'd think we're just fakers and all. They'd already know what's going to happen! Just make it to a remote planet infested with Rodians. _______________ slorp |
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Trekked - Student 
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(in story) on Rodia... "ARGG this darn Speeder won't start up again!" "Really? you said it won't do this again." "i know but the Crystal seems to have been shaken loose again" "well just put it back then" second man starts to get annoyed "What do You Think i am DOING?!" "hey relax i was just trying to be helpful" "you want to be Helpful? then go get some Anti-freeze,just don't Stand there making IDIOTIC comments!" First man looks up at sky "whats that?" Second man looks at first man "what is it now? has the moon turned blue?" "i think i have seen a Shooting star but" second man stares untill he gets impatiant "WHAT? what do you see?" "that Star went right down" "it's probilly you Imagination...again" "no i swear it's(thud)" "if you are thinking of laying down on the Job forget it beacuse you wouln't like to work in this weather" Second man turns around to see a Lightsaber in his face "what do you want?" "the crystal" looks Nervous "sure take whatever you want" gets stunned after he gives the Crystal "now i have another Crystal for my Lord"... (not in story)this is the Best i can come up with on short Notice _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody This comment was edited by Trekked on May 23 2003 05:44am. |
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Vaughn - Student 
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[not in story] maybe, but who says that its not in an alternate universe, with different time zones between universes? What i mean is... all the happenings in the world (universe?) of starwars could have taken place yesterday in an alternate universe. Think about it. Just play with it, i knwo you have the capability Lian. *neway, my ending kinda.. ruins everything... but whatever* _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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[Not in story] Vaughn, Star Wars takes place from a long, long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. The galaxy is so far nobody would live from getting from their galaxy to ours. Plus, Star Wars timeline takes place before the prehistoric age :O _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Again, I tell you Vaughn, the story has alternate endings :O _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student 
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Josh snapped awake. "Of Course!" "What is it?" Flamori 1 asked. Josh ran down the stairs, not hearing F1's question. "What in the name of... is that boy doing?" Flamori thought to himself. Josh sat down at the star chart, typing quickly. "Josh...Josh...JOSh.....JOSH!" Flamori repeated louder and louder. "Oh sorry Flamori. I think I found a lead. On this planet... in the Earthos system... Human World." "That planet? They are highly low-tech, how can they have the crystal?" Flamori asked. "Easily. The crystals split up 12 times, right?" "yes" "Each time, it went to a different planet, but we captured them every time." "Go on..." "This time, they exceeded their boundries, and got to different universes." "Go on..." "Ok. Three crystals, four universes. The wizard universe has its own power crystals." "Go on..." "The Demon world has the blood crystal, we have the academy crystal... the Human universe has the Ocean Star. The third planet in the Earthos System... the little blue one... has the Ocean Star. How do you think it has the water?" "So... when the crystal crossed the gap... that would explain why that universe was created so recently." "Heh, So maybe, our universe was created in the same way... All of our theories are incorrect?" "No. But theirs is..." "True." "Hey, you know... thats a good idea. If we try the Human Universe... that planet.. whats it called?" "Earth, I think" "Earth... Earthos system... they really don't know very much do they?" "Well, one scientist knows enough to cross the gap between the universes... The son of that scientist was the father of my master... you must remember." "Yes.. now, we must get to that planet. The other jedi took our only ship capable of universal travel... were stuck here for now." "Not exactly." "What?" "One thing that I learnt flying with my master, was how to predict Universal flares. There is one comming soon. If we hit it correctly, we sould be able to reach that universe." "Alright... shall we go?" Flamori asked. "No. You need to stay here. I will stay intouch with you telepathically" Josh said. "Rats.... Ive always wanted to see that universe first hand." "Don't worry. Im worried about the future. I'll set up contact with them." "So your worried for another demon war?" "Naturally. It was frightening. And only one of those could bring the universe to the end." "For the 13th time." "True... but this may be the end. For good." "Ok. Go now, and get the crystal. May the force be with you." With that, Josh left. "May the planet Earth be close to your landing spot." Josh's craft rumbled as it exited the atmosphere. He is on his way to the final act. [not in story] Ok, lets work from there. And yes, Earthos is OUR SOLAR SYSTEM, and Josh is comming to our planet _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] of course... good idea Flamori. My ending requires most of the jedi to live, for the jedi to get the crystals, but for someone to set up the fact that they cant be fused to cause the crystal that opened the void for the 'real' Jedi to come through. I dont want to give up more, but basically... most (if not all) the jedi live, the jedi get the 3 crystals, a big battle... then ill write what i was hoping to write (and yes, i did foreshadow it). So i guess that sets up my ending... of course, you dont have to listen to it... but if you want my climax/ending... go ahead Edit: I knew there was something i forgot. About the huge battle... its basically a recreation of the demon war on my profile (a long time ago). Jedi + Wizards + Humans VS Demons + Allies of the Demons (im open to the allies here). Alternate Universes also work... Carry on _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson This comment was edited by Vaughn on May 22 2003 11:08pm. |
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Trekked - Student
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(in story) On the Stardestroyer Vanguard... "Admerial? set Coarse for the Demon world,Trekked will Meet us there" the Admerial looks nervous. "But Sir. there are Creatures that can Torment us within Seconds" But the Darkman says "i Don't care! i am getting that Crystal!" the Admerial looks worried now "NO! you can't Do that! you'll break the Inner Seal!" the darkman Glares at the Sobordinate "HA! i Don't care! i shall get that Crystal if it is the Last act i do" the Admerial now looks Terrifyed "sir? why do you NEED those crystals? i am sure the X-labs on Jurodro could Make some like them" Big mistake... the Darkman looks agary at the Insabordinaton... "if you Will not Change coarse i shall haveto give you Disiplinary Feedback" Now the Admerial look defeated "very well sir" _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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[Not in story] Well Vaughn, if you don't want us to ruin your ending you'd best at least tell us which way you want the story to go. And Trekked, you're getting better but try putting in more than just dialogue. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Trekked - Student
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Near Forares 5... "My Lord we have verifyed that it is one of the Crystals" "Very Good,i shall have a Ship pick it up,it Shall arrive in 3 days...can you hold out until then?" "we shall wait near the Poloxe System and await the Arrival of the Starship" three hours later... "Trekked?" "what is it? "for a Minute we were reading a Starship,but now it's..." "What? what? what happened?" "it vanished sir...without a trace" "it must be a Ship useing a Cloaking Device" "shall we go to Alert Status sir?" "not yet.i wish them to think that we don't know they are Commming" "what do you think they are after sir?" "the Crystal WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU IDIOT?" "i shall prepare the DarkTroopers for Security in case they try to Board us"... (not in story)this took alittle While to Figure out i hope it dosn't upset the Plot. _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody This comment was edited by Trekked on May 22 2003 01:32am. |
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Vaughn - Student
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The morning lurked on the Jedi Academy. "GAH!!! Why can't I find anything?!?!?" Josh yelled. "Josh, calm down. You must learn the meditation technique. Try again" Flamori 1 said quietly. "alright, let me try once more." "Josh! Stop now! You have to save yourself!" someone yelled. "ioshee!" Josh heard Bubu yell. ioshee fell. "Josh, do what you have to.. save...the...universe..." ioshee said weakly while looking into Josh's eyes. Josh felt desire to do two different things. He didn't know what he was doing, but he felt the desire to do two different things at the same time. Josh snapped awake. "What did you see?" Flamori 1 asked "I dont know.. I think it was the future..." Josh said. "What happened?" "I'm not entirely sure. It was strange...all I know was there was a huge battle, and I was in a moral conflict... But thats all I knwo what happened." "Humm.. interesting..." Flamori 1 said to himself. "Sir. We have found what we are looking for." Bubu said through the intercom. "You found the place of the crystal of blood?" "Yes. We are tracking Soong in the demon world, being attacked by demons... and one of them has the crystal!" "Damn... just as i thought. Ok, can you get to the demon world from where you are now?" "Yes, why?" "Go, help Soong, but take the crystal." "Yes sir." With that, Bubu turned, and drove the ship into the portal hole. They were gone. "So, its just the ocean star thats left... eh?" "Yes Josh, it is. IF you can find it... then we will be on our way to unlocking the secret of the song of harmony." "No matter how close we get, we will always be far." "heh... now, get back to meditation." "Yes master." With that, Josh went back to his meditation, trying to locate the power source, of the final force crystal; the Ocean Star. [not in story] I'll say this now. I have an idea for the ending... and yes, i did foreshadow it here. Ill ask when it comes up, but can i write the second last thing (the climax... the ending), and if anybody wants... they can write the follow up (if you want to know what i think may happen... just ask). Just to keep in mind _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Trekked - Student
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(not in story)maby i should Practice it on Word Pad _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] "Try to use these quotes, Trekked," said Lianiotte. "You need to make it like a story, not a roleplay. Also please appropriately use feelings." Lianiotte felt goofy for pointing out the obvious, and returned to her work. _______________ slorp |
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Trekked - Student
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(not in story) try it now.i put spaces between spots so it's alittle easier to read _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] Trekked, that's a little hard to understand...don't change the story just like that without offering explanation... _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Eclipse DKana - Student 
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[not in story] uh trekked these are still 2 small messages.... |
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Trekked - Student 
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(in story)On the planet Kegime 4..."My lord i have found somthing" said a officer. "It is crystaline,i shall bring it to the X-labs on Jersea 2 where it can be Tested if it is one of the three,it is a Green color" said Trekked "bring the crystal to me and i shall Verify that it is one of the Three crystals" said the Dark Man. yes my Lord said Trekked.i need to get the other two now The dark man Thought... _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody This comment was edited by Trekked on May 21 2003 10:28pm. |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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Meanwhile, back in the confines of a galaxy far, far away... "Dammit!" said Josh, kicking the data terminal, which responded by sending an electric shock up the offending leg. He screamed, then drawing out his lightsword, hacked the terminal to bits. Flamori 1 came into the archive hall, and rasied an eyebrow at the sight of the destroyed terminal. "What seems to be the problem?" "The greatest search engine in the known galaxy failed to turn up anything on the three crystals or the Song of Harmony." replied Josh. "Surprised?" asked Flamori 1. "Did you really think that there would be any information in the Holonet about an incident that wiped out all life in the universe about twenty million years ago?" "Now that you mention it," growled Josh. "I have absolutely no notion of how this mysterious visitor of yours managed to survive twelve universal purges." "Neither do I," said Flamori 1. "But his words cannot be ignored." "Hmmph." said Josh. [Not in story] Ahhhh heck...I'm in no mood for writing...this post does nothing at all to alter the course of the story.....damn. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] Don't you mean halfway across the universe? _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Trekked - Student
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(in story) meanwhile half way across the Galaxy...I told you to Secure the Jedi NOT let them get away!(trekked looks ashamed and looks at somthing else Besides his employer) did they get anything out of the Computer that Involves me?(trekked starts to speak now)no they didn't those are under a Tight security lock.(Dark man)good now i need those Crystals to Power my Wepone and i don't want your Excuses...begone now and Get those Crystals...(not in story) if you have read Erlier you will see that i had a little Adventure but now i shall wait untill somone ELSE has a few turns at Writing...that is all) _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody This comment was edited by Trekked on May 18 2003 03:34pm. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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Soong thought while being caught in the fire tornado. Before he did anything, he tried to solve who the woman was. "Silent Whisper! No.. Pure! (who WAS one of the starting characters in the second novel, but nobody used her) No.. Lianiotte! No.. Although she DOES favor her creepiness." He gasped. "It's TiTo!!!!!!!!!!! HE'S EXTREMELY SCARY! No wait a minute... It's Evil Lianiotte! No she's dead. It's a pity too... wait... It's the Empress!" _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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...until Soong got the uneasy feeling that he was not alone. He quickly activated his lightsaber, turned around, and threw it far ahead of him. To hit nothing. But his lightsaber was sucked into Hell (literally,) by his lightsaber being sucked into a vortex just like a Tractor Beam. And in just a few seconds, his lightsaber was flying into the abyss. Soong hated it. "I knew I shouldn't have left digital 3D Checkers for this!" Suddenly he saw a dog. It had the Crystal of Blood in its mouth. He sneered and ran off with it. "Curses!" shouted Soong. He was chasing the dog with a bunch of bath tools. He tried to ketchup with the hotdog with all the relish he could mustard. (That paragraph is not included in the story, just so you'd like to know. It's Not In Story. And as for that last sentence, I heard that from somewhere.) So Soong just gazed off, far on the fiery mountainside, with the vortex that stole the life of a Jedi. His lightsaber. "Looking for something?" asked a mysterious voice. Soong quickly turned around. He saw a completely black and white woman (looking like it was from old-day television, black and white.) whose long hair hung down in front of her face. You couldn't see her face. "Who are you?!" shouted Soong, panicked, for no apparent reason. Soong looked down. She was wearing a necklace, with the Crystal of Blood on it. "I shall send these crystals," said the mysterious woman, "to the most unlikely places imaginable." Her hands rose up from her sides. Hovering above her hands were the other two crystals. She rose them up to the sky, and they flew off in seperate directions. To unknown planets. "Let me show you the wrath of the Demon World!" Flying out of the vortexes appeared hundereds of Desanns. Grown up a little, their own kind, abomination to nature. Their skin red. Eyes peircing yellow. They didn't need a lightsaber to prove they're tough. So they didn't use lightsabers. "Give me... the crystal," said Soong slightly calmly, despite how he was shaking. He was breathing heavily. "Catch me if you can," taunted the woman. She disappears in blue smoke, teleporting all over the demon world. Teleporting around Soong, she said, "resist the nearly allpowerful demons, and try to catch me. But if you see under my face, my eye will prove to be the START to all your problems." One Elder Demon (the demons who look like Desann) hurled a large fireball at the tower. Four Elder Demons used inferno on the tower. And all the rest of the Elder Demons were creating a fire tornado onto the tower, which Soong got caught in, creating many valcanos in the process. Is it this hard to get one crystal? _______________ slorp |
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Trekked - Student
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(not in story)they didn't pull the Info off a comp.you would'v said so _______________ he's a Real nowhere man,Sitting in his Nowhere land.making all his Nowhere plans for nobody |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] Hey, I got comments 99, 100 and 101.  _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] Let's see if I can't bring things back together, shall we? [In story] "Sithspit!" shouted Xero, getting onto the ship along with the other Jedi. "Xero, what happened?" asked Flash. "Trekked," explained Xero. "I was about to take him out when he detonated a charge in the florr. The SOB escaped and set the ship to self-destruct." "Time to get the hell out of here," commented Bubu, expertly piloting the ship out of the hangar bay. Just as they cleared the ship, it blew. "All right," said Bubu. "Time to find what we're really here for." "According to the data I pulled from the Highwind's computers, the legendary Ocean Star is on a planet called Alexandria, in a nearby galaxy." Ioshee paused. "Trekked seemed to have a lot of information on the crystals." "You think he's after the crystals too?" asked Flash. Ioshee shrugged. "Who knows? If that's the case, we might run into him again." [Not in story] No, this is NOT an invitation to bring Trekked back into the story. At least, no sooner than necessary.  [In story] On the demon world of Malak, Soong watched the demons in the square below proceed with their daily activities, which included raping, eating, raping, drinking, raping, sleeping, raping, killing and raping. The demons were a sick lot. From his temporary abode atop the church bell tower, Soong was safe from the demons. They seemed to have given up the search for him, and considering the fact that most demons avoided the church like vermin, it wasn't likely to be revitalized anytime soon. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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