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Arina - ex-Student  |
I look at my life the way it is now and I wonder how I ever survived living with you I’m dead inside because of you I’m dead inside I used to be such a sweet child full of innocence I got good grades and I never got in trouble at school till I met you you were so cool I wanted to be just like you you had all the friends I wanted to get your attention and I got it you asked me to marry you and I was foolish enough to say yes and now I’m dead inside because of you I’m dead inside I trusted you and you betrayed me you used me like I was just a toy for your amusement how could you have been so cruel? how could I have been such a fool? you were the one that held me up how was I suppose to know you would let go? I fell 1,000 miles or more I hit the ground hard and now I’m dead inside because of you I’m dead inside I should have seen through your disguise I should have seen it in your eyes you killed me just for fun but wait till you see what I’ve become you had better run I used to be so full of love but now all I feel is hate I hate you and every thing about you but most of all I hate the way you still make me cry you seen me standing there so full of rage and hate and you laughed at me and called me a fool who’s laughing now? I caught you by surprise now I laugh at the look of shock upon your face I rose like smoke I struck like a two-headed serpent I struck so fast all you could do was gasp I laughed at you and asked why so surprised? you made me what I am you showed me hate and I took it in my hand I twisted it to fit me And now you seem to be surprised I know how to use it you showed me how you who were so cruel you thought I was a fool tell me who is the more foolish? me for trusting you or you for underestimating me and showing me the one thing I needed to be able to kill you hate I had hate the hate you gave me the good in me is dead you killed it and now all that’s left in me is hate because of you I cannot trust because of you I cannot love I am truly dead inside I am truly gone all that’s left is a monster that will destroy you and everything that reminds me of you and then who knows? maybe I’ll join you in the pits of hell and fight you for eternity till worlds end and then who knows? who knows? _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" This post was edited by Arina on Oct 16 2003 05:07pm. |
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Arina - Ex-Student 
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 _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Arina - Ex-Student 
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_______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Axion - Student 
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thats great ^.^ _______________ Axion - Yeah. |
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Padawan On A Stick - Student 
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DUDES HOW CAN YOU SAY "NO" TO THIS BEAUTIFUL WORK OF ART??? _______________ When you are told something for years, you learn to accept it. But, after the truth is revealed, you feel conufusion, isolation, and depression. Then you ask, where do I belong? I'm searching for that answer. |
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Stimpski - Student 
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Very nice job on that one. That one kinda fits some of my RL friends _really_ well. _______________ Stimpski (formerly known as DeathScythe many, many moons ago.) JA Forum ID - 3988 <insert generic &/OR witty tagline here> |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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 _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Padawan On A Stick - Student 
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your 16 and i'm 14, and i *try* to rhyme unsimilar objects by relating them to situations... stupid but funny if you read it lol, and it is inappropriate for here... _______________ When you are told something for years, you learn to accept it. But, after the truth is revealed, you feel conufusion, isolation, and depression. Then you ask, where do I belong? I'm searching for that answer. This comment was edited by Padawan On A Stick on Nov 21 2003 01:25am. |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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so the tone is off and it ends in a cliffhanger nobody's perfect after all i am a 16 year old amature writer _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Padawan On A Stick - Student
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nice... but the tone is off... nice... but the conclusion of this is ends in a cliffhanger... but RL is like this, not just with girls, but with people as a whole, "marry" same thing as being a friend or sumtin... and then they treat you like your an open book, so predictable... until the end, it blows in their face and the victim bites them in the ass when they least expect it... when one has experienced cruelty... he takes the emotional pains from his mistakes, only to transform them into a complex plan to get them all back.. when they least expect it... when they least expect it... ruin them for life and make their life hell as much as possible... only until you find out that they will do the same thing you did... take all the pain and bites you back in your ass... _______________ When you are told something for years, you learn to accept it. But, after the truth is revealed, you feel conufusion, isolation, and depression. Then you ask, where do I belong? I'm searching for that answer. This comment was edited by Padawan On A Stick on Nov 19 2003 11:29pm. |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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00000000000000000kkkkkkkkkkkkkkk _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Thomasooo - Student 
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RL sucks! Let's kill RL!!! DIE, RL! DIEEEE!!!  _______________ In the navy and LOVING it!
Recipient of comment no. 1000 and heart-warming words from Ataris! 
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Arina - Ex-Student
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_______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Smilykrazy - Retired 
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*speechless* Whats sad is things like that actually happen in RL. People can be soooooo cruel! It makes me sad!  _______________ RIP MOM 06/29/58-07/31/08 Married to Koyi Donita 4/30/11 |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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sure _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Sindweller - Ex-Student 
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is a good idea....make it as a song _______________ with great force comes with great power Do things slowly.you'll get big achievment seek for challenge...move forward abit does'nt hurt that much--advisor |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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hmmm this has been fairly sucsesfull _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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 _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Apologetic - Student 
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Im sorry i cant marry you now..... and how dare you talk about deathstar like that _______________ Love GOD and jesus as they love u [move]We defend the peace and help the helpless we r the mandilorian jedi troops![/move] |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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_______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Bail Hope of Belouve - Student 
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Beautiful just beautiful _______________ Visit the Belouve Family Website! Quote: I try to have fun with my friends and try to make a difference as best I can. What does making a difference mean? Well, it can be as simple as saying hello, answering a question that seems obvious or heck, just talking. -- Vladarion
Want to know Vladarion? Read the Article about his life here. |
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Odan-Wei Belouve - Student 
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I like it, truly. Odan-Wei _______________ Padawan and brother to SmilyKrazy - Adopted in the Belouve Family by Fizz and Bubu, BELOUVE ON! - Vladarion, you'll always be in my heart and memories - Spam-Padawan of Jacen Aratan  - [DJ is my beloved wife! - JA Family: Brothers:
Virtue, Furi0us, Vladarion, Hardwired, Janus, Axion, D@RtHM@UL, Motrec, Mike , xAnAtOs , Luke Skywalker; Little bro to SilkMonkey ; Special kind of brother to Kenyon ; Sisters in-law: Rosered, Ain-Soph Aur] Photoshop works: click here |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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_______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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_______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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Arina - Ex-Student
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nope _______________ <Shut up you gutless weasel.> -Rachel "a day may come when the courage of men fails, but it is not this day, this day we fight" |
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joca_bt - Student 
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Very good, do u have a band??? _______________ - Son to Helen Catherine ;p - Random bash.org quote: X: you know what google earth needs? | Y: More 3D buildings? | X: ion cannon button |
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