| Star Wars : The Jedi Academy - The Novel | |
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Jedi Al Khalaas - Student  |
A Long time ago, In a galaxy far far away.....
The Jedi Academy!!! A Story in numerous parts! In which you decide what happens, and you can star. I cant think of any rules, but post your continouation of the story in response to the last post , keep it real, keep it funny but not too silly. I will kick off the first Chapter....... This post was edited by Jedi Al Khalaas on Jan 10 2003 05:15am. |
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Bubu - Hubbub 
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and someone should compile it all together, proof read, and post up the finished work on the forums! weeeeeeeeeeeeeeee  _______________ make install -not war |
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Vaughn - Student 
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salty stands up. Looks DJ in the eye. and says " im afraid DJ, i cannot kill you. I cannot control you. You are the DJ_Sith, i am the Salty_DJ... but i can do this!" Salty kicked DJ. He kicked him so hard, that DJ disconnected from the server. "good.... now... i... can... pass....out" Salty Passes out.
"I sence a distrubance in the force" the Sith Lord Buzz said. "What is it sir?" "i do not know. It seems as if DJ has failed, and there seems to be a very big power... Do you have the admin codes yet?" "not yet sir! We do have a knight password though." "THATS NOT GOOD ENOUGH! GET TO WORK!" Buzz screamed. Suddenly, Eclipse, who had his full title on, marched up to Buzz. "it ends here. I am afraid this is not the way of the jedi, but" *Buzz Vader has been slapped* Buzz went flying. "time for the finisher" *Buzz was teleported right infront of Eclipse* "good bye, sith lord!" Eclipse jumps down, RDFA style on Buzz. As a last ditch effort, Buzz uses his saber as a block. "fool" Eclipse thought to himself. Eclipses saber chopped right through the saber blade of Buzz, and right through Buzz himself. Buzz was on the floor, in two peices, a look of shock on his face. "the deed is done. The academy is safe." "or is it?" Eclipse spun around. Standing there, was Buzz Vaders boss. This was no Sith, nor Dark Jedi. this was possibly the greatest Jedi Ever. No words could escape Eclipses mouth. A beast, of fire and shadow was standing there, with a flaming whip, two massive hooves, two horns, and two Massive Sabers. "SithLord Balrog!" Eclipse knew that he did not have much time. He turned around and ran "AMEMPOWER" Eclipse yelled. *you are not logged in* "rats... not now!" *Eclipse is teleported to the matrix room* "im safe, for now." "what took you so long?" All the JATs, JAKs, JAStaff and JACs were standing there, all empowered. A smile ran across Eclipses face. *the destroyer Cometh!* The SithLord Balrog had dual double-bladed sabers now. Suddenly, the wall collapsed. There, with the Balrog, were thousands of little creatures, about the size of men and women. The JAS's all ran in, sabers glowing. "We'll stop the little ones, you JAT/K/C/Staff take care of the big one! The final battle started (not in story. I think it would be nice if the person who started the thread finished it off, if its going to have a finish, that means Jedi Al Khalaas has the honour of either finishing it, or giving the honour to someone else. what do you guys think? PS, ive really enjoyed writing this, we should start another once this one is finished!) _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson This comment was edited by Vaughn on Jan 22 2003 07:10pm. |
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Trad Redav - Student 
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hehehehehe keep it up i'm too tired right now to write anything :\ _______________ Well then. Just so you know, just because I don't post often doesn't mean I don't lurk this place multiple times every day... |
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SaltyDJ - Ex-Student 
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The battles, both at the collapsing pit and the DJ's in the lost temple rage. The Sith seem to have the upper hand, and things look pretty ominous for the Jedi there.
Eclipse awakens from his coma, there is no one in sight, and the massive academy walls separate him from civilisation; he is now alone in the swamps of Yavin... ---------------------------Back In Kansas------------------- BUBU IS CONNECTED!!!!!! JK2 is now installed and Bubu begins to load the academy server, he is now in the game again; yet he is unable to hack it and gain admin powers, his regular strength and saber... ---------------------Meanwhile at the Academy------------------- Salty is on the floor, managing to hold back DJ's RDFA, DJ's saber is scorching Salty's face: it is now too much for Salty to bear, he gathers up all his strength and connects with the force, throwing DJ to the floor and stunning him... |
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Eclipse DKana - Student 
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where did I go after I killed the sniper? |
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SaltyDJ - Ex-Student
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LoL  |
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Bubu - Hubbub
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w00t! how in the world did you know that i have a friend called toby who lives 2 minutes from me and has a faster connection???? Salty, the force is truly with you!
except i'd never hit him with a baseball bat, i'd use a golf club..  _______________ make install -not war This comment was edited by Bubu on Jan 22 2003 08:39am. |
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Hector Thrawn - Ex-Student 
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but then hector rushes in lightsaber on to save the Day but fails to notice the spiked pit as he enters with an RDFA. As he plummets quickly to an untimly, humiliating, sad, tragic [add adjective] death hector cries "Alas! the gods have lured me on to my destruction. I
deemed that the hero Deiphobus was by my side, but he is within the wall, and Minerva has inveigled me; death is now indeed exceedingly near at hand and there is no way out of it". poor hector. (sorry i realized it was a good time for an allusion) This comment was edited by Hector Thrawn on Jan 21 2003 07:01pm. |
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Sniya - Student 
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Johnney he has arived to get the page.Both of themsuddenly feel a massive surge in the force they do not know if it is good or bad but neither of them want to give the other help _______________ The real question is not whether machines think but whether men do. Bertrand Russell http://www.thejediacademy.net/forums_detail_page.php?f_id=970 |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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..when suddenly a part of the roof collapses in burnt.. yellow.... ashes.
Somebody jumps down from the top of the academy roof. It's a Lianiotte with blood-red eyes and red hair. She has her arm around Vaughn's neck. She activates a dual-bladed saber. Everyone in the academy appears in the pit room. "Odd," said Aeth S'kray. He looks around. Many students and teachers are falling off the plank due to how many people are on it. Vaughn is knocked out lying in Chosen One's arms. "Who did this?" he asked, looking at an open wound. The wound gets bigger and bigger every second, like his flesh is a scorched wheat field. "Never fear," said Eclipse in all his almighty glory. "I'll go get a bacta." The ground shakes. The ceiling (once again) falls down and lands right next to the door. "I am Lianiotte's clone." said the red-head Lianiotte. Everybody sees her at the bottom of the pit, standing over blood of those Jedi who landed on the spikes. You didn't need to know that.
She reactivates her saber. She uses some Xtreme for jumping (hoho) and uses Force Lightning. The pillars at the right and left supporting the mini-planks get gaps and start to fall. They are about to land on the plank. The plank moves right some. The "wooshing" of Lianiotte's saber is head. The pillars supporting the bigger plank start to fall. The plank starts falling. Lianiotte jumped onto one of the falling pillars. One of the Jedis, lightsaber activated, fell onto the pillar. He looks up at Lianiotte. The Jedi is none other than... _______________ slorp This comment was edited by Lian Del Rey on Jan 23 2003 07:15pm. |
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SaltyDJ - Ex-Student 
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Meanwhile, Salty and DJsith look at the bodies piled up, it's truly a disturbing sight.
"Give me the page DJ" Salty sighs. DJ just looks at him, his eyes don't seem quite right. This is not only bad news, but damaging to Salty's ego!! He is indeed powerful, but not powerful enough to Mind Trick DJsith!! "I think I'll keep it Salty" With a flash both DJ's draw their sabers and face eachother... ---------------------Meanwhile, in Kansas----------------- Bubu awakens from his shock, his computer's completely fried, and he needs to get back into the Academy to help out, he runs out to his friends house. Bubu arrives at his friend Toby's door. Toby opens it and meets a baseball bat midway. "I'm sorry about that" Bubu says, tying his friend up, and begins to hastily install JK2 on his friends computer, which has.....A FASTER CONNECTION!!!! Bubu grins maniacly. ------------------Back in the Academy------------------- Johnny over heard the conversation leading to the fight between SaltyDJ and DJsith; being too weak to participate in the fight, Johnny quickly goes to the Academy archives and looks for any copy's of The complete idiots guide to defeating Sith Lords. "What Dumb#*@es!!" He thought. "The most handy book a Jedi could have and the allll wise, allll knowing Doobie only ordered one copy!!!!" It was settled, despite being beaten up and his saber singed, Johnny would have to storm the hall and get the page from DJ... This comment was edited by SaltyDJ on Jan 20 2003 09:49am. |
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Vaughn - Student
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im confused :S
Rampage thought... I really should have put seeing on. >   Johnny looked at the burned carcas on the ground. Thats odd... SNIPERS!
He jumped. Eclipse ran through the door, and the sniper shot. Eclipse, seeing it comming, dodged it, pulled out his saber, and charged at him. The sniper was toast. But the question still remains, how are they going to use the document to destroy the sith? The darkside clouds all _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Rampage - Student 
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(...) a long red beam hit Rampage in the head...a sniper... Rampage was suddenly in the middle of the Main Hall, the spawn point..... |
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Rampage - Student 
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-----------------Rampage and Johnny-----------------
When Rampage's purple saber was so close to Johnny's face Johnny's eyebrow was burned, (...) This comment was edited by Rampage on Jan 19 2003 03:26pm. |
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Rampage - Student
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[NOT in story] Mabye it was something with the force....
Alslo, RAMPAGE'S SABER IS PURPLE, NOT RED OR BLUE OR ANY OTHER UGLY COLORS! lol  This comment was edited by Rampage on Jan 19 2003 03:21pm. |
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Rampage - Student
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That was when Eclipse came.....
He came in his spaceship, landed in the courtyard, put the auto-pilot on, jumped out of his ship, and watched it fly away.....BUT, it didn't fly away, it landed again..on top of Eclipse, crushing him to the ground.....Eclipse's body was destroyed, but Eclipse survived..... How was that possible?!?!? This comment was edited by Rampage on Jan 19 2003 03:17pm. |
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Eclipse DKana - Student
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why dont you add more of the heroic types? Like me |
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Vaughn - Student
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as DJ closed in on Salty's position, salty heard that mind trick controls people.
"you are now on our side, you ahte the sith, you are now DJ_Jedi" "i am now DJ_Jedi" DJ echoed. the glow in DJ's eyes faded. Wow, that was hard, Salty thought "lets get back to the academy!" "wait, lets get some jetpacks first!" Salty and DJ picked up some makeshift jetpacks. "excellent" they thought as that happened, they appeared in the jedi academy, while the sith were wlaking alover the place, laughing. They saw a body on the ground. AH! its vaughn! he failed his duty to clean up the bodies, and left his own! salty kicked the body and found that in his hand was a peice of paper. DJ recognized the page. "its a page in the "how to defeat sithlords for dummies" book!" they finally had the page to defeat the sith... but how were they going to do it? _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Demon - Student 
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Their only chance was the Force binder. They new that it was the thing that made Demon so powerfull. Unfortunately, they didn't know it was destroyed and instead of searching for it's plans, they went into the Force binder's chamber and only saw the junk that was left. In came Demon and Buzz. "Now my young Apprentices, you will join or die." The dark side flushed thru their minds, turning Rampage to the dark side. Johnny managed to escape in time through the window. Unfortunately, the fall left him uncouncous. Rampage was already falling on him, while making a red dfa. Is this the end??? What about Salty???? _______________ Quote: Peace is a lie, there is only passion. Through passion I gain strength. Through strength I gain power. Through power I gain victory. Through victory my chains are broken. The Force will free me. -The Code of The Sith
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SaltyDJ - Ex-Student
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Contiiiiinuuuuue..... |
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Bubu - Hubbub
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oh my god! they killed bubu! bastards!!
hehe ppl i was just palying with you i love this thread and please find a way to reinsert me.. come on i mean i am the only one who actually died in person and not as the little character on the screen! i was invincible for crying out loud... *cries out loud*
hehehe mooooo _______________ make install -not war |
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SaltyDJ - Ex-Student
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Now that Demon and Buzz have discovered the lost temple, they call 5 reborn to their location to guard the temple from the Jedi.
Meanwhile Rampage, in a state of panic, rejoins the server, he stares into the computer screen and in a flash of light finds himself in the ceremonial hall of the academy, He knows that he now has to liberate the academy. He tries to get all his friends together to help evict the sith lords. He finds Johnny on the floor, in shock, and Rampage quickly tips a *รง#& load of bacta on his leg; with the other Jedi dead or captured, and Salty not answering his comlink, Rampage and Johnny have only one chance....... |
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Demon - Student
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Ulic was preparing for the last attack, but suddenly he hears: Now youn Belouve.......you will die....." He then felt himself being in horrible pain. Demon used lightning on him from behind. Ulic struggled, but Demon's powers were too strong. Ulic died in terrible agony. "Rise my young apprentice" said Demon to Buzz. They both went back. "You will not win Demon." heard the emperor. "Bubu again........" This time Demon could feel Bubu, he could feel him very strongly, because of his changing ip. Demon screamed and let a terrible bolt of lightning that hit Bubu, and fried his computer, electrocuting him (if that's how it's spelled) and killing him in the process.
Meanwhile: Dj Sith finally pinpointed Salty's exact location. He was on..........(u guessed it!) Nar Shadda. _______________ Quote: Peace is a lie, there is only passion. Through passion I gain strength. Through strength I gain power. Through power I gain victory. Through victory my chains are broken. The Force will free me. -The Code of The Sith
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Trad Redav - Student 
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It is the end of rampage...for now.
There is a grisly battle in the lost temple upper level. Ulic pushes buzz down, and knocks him unconcious, however, by the time ulic drops down, buzz wakes up again... sorry it's so short, gotta get to class _______________ Well then. Just so you know, just because I don't post often doesn't mean I don't lurk this place multiple times every day... |
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Jedi Al Khalaas - Student 
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Continue the story!!!!!
(I will later , if noone else does)  |
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