| Star Wars Jedi Academy - Novel: Age of War | |
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Lian Del Rey - Student  |
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...
STAR WARS Episode (Who Knows) Age of War 13 years have passed since the destruction of Desann and Galak's defeat in the BATTLE OF THE ACADEMY. Bodies of those who opposed the academy are scattered throughout THE OLD REBUBLIC THE SECOND. Strange sightings have been seen in the old inactive planet of YAVIN4. Most have been seen in the destroyed JEDI ACADEMY. MASSADOOBIE and his long-time partner, DJ SITH, have been sent to YAVIN4, and seek out what the cause is....... _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student 
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[not in story] someone write... or ill do some crazy complication :S Edit: yes, if you look down, for this fight, Shadow~G is Vaughn, it got hard writin Shadow~G very quickly.. try it; type Shadow~G as fast as you can, then type Vaughn as fast as you can.. which is easier? Note: Vaughn = Green saber + Green lightsword. Shadow~G = Black lightsaber + green lightsword. Josh = Orange saber + yellow shortsaber (and hes carrying Vaughns Black saber which 'transforms' him into Shadow~G) _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson This comment was edited by Vaughn on Apr 25 2003 03:33am. |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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[not in story] 6 comments without a scrap of sanity! It's a new thread record! _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] Stop teasing me! _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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[Not in story] /me poses like Kenshin does in my profile pic _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] thats why many people write it; one person, the story is either good or bad, more, it gets interesting. It also works your improv skills _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flash - Student 
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[not in story] I would write more, but not now... J/K Vaughn. I'm really not writing more because I don't know what to write, the story is getting confusing again.  |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] WHY MUST YOU TEASE ME LIAN?!?!?! _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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"But no need to worry," the Empress continued. She brought out a red crystal. "We have the crystal of all Sith Lord power.." then she brought out a green crystal, "and the Jedi Academy Crystal's main shard." [Not in story] I would write more, but not now..   _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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"What is wrong master?" Elian asked. "The power of the force Crystal is much more powerful than i thought..." the Empress answered [not in story; I would write more, but not now...] _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story] When did you change your pic, Lian? Probably about time I got one... [In story] "Can you see them?" whispered Flamori 1. YubYub was at a window near the landing platform, watching out for the Empress and her apprentce. "Yes," whispered YubYub back. He had no idea why. Their presence was no secret, and if the Empress wanted to listen in on them she should have no problem anyway. "Let's try to sneak past them," said DJ Sith. "I don't think this is an ideal battle location. There's too much risk of an atmosphere breach." "How will we do that?" asked Ioshee. "The Empress will surely sense any attempts to escape." "Not necessarily," said Shadow~G. "We have a lot of powerful Force-wielders on our side too, me, Mideon, and Lian, now that she has the white force crystal. We should be able to trick the Empress." On board the landing platform, the Empress and her apprentice waited for the Jedi to disembark. "They should be coming soon," said Elian. The Empress didn't waste breath on words. She could sense a sudden subtle shift in the force. Not very powerful, but... There was a sudden force ripple near the boarding ramp of the Doomanator. "What the-?" she muttered. Probably nothing. Just a slight disturbance... Her eyes widened. Quickly she moved to warn Elian, but she knew it was too late... Two hours later, she came to in a small room in one of the lower level Coruscant residential areas. Since the worldshaping on Coruscant, the whole planet had been rebuilt virtually from scratch, which meant that for the first time in close to millenia, the citizens of Coruscant walked on real ground instead of steel platform. "What the-?!" she mutttered angrily, then realized the truth. The Jedi had tricked her. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Vaughn - Student
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F2 reached the landing pad. "I have been expecting you, Empress..." "Dont waste your time Flamori. You and I both know, that if you were in perfect health and if I were in your condition, I could beat you with one hand." the Empress said. "True, but I have another offer. This you cannot refuse." "go on..." "do you want to kill Mideon and Soong? I have just the plan. You and your padawan should challenge them to a duel. Start to lose, then jump off the platform. As you jump off, I'll set some explosives to go off, killing both Soong and Mideon, and you two will leave to safety. Hell, you could probably hit the rest of the jedi with them. What do you say?" "good idea Flamori. Where is this platform?" "Over here..." Flamori 2 lead the Empress and ELianiotte to the platform, and they setup for the showdown. "Wake up! Thats why im superior, I can wake up on cue..." "aww what do you want Levi?" "someone is here to see you." "Who?" Lian asked. "Some friends of yours." In walked Bubu, ioshee, Ulic, Josh and Shadow~G. "Hi Lian, sleep well?" Bubu asked. "It was better before you woke me up..." Lian mumbled to herself. "What was that?" Bubu asked "nothing... I slept well. Whats the problem?" "Were nearing Courasant. In a few hours, we will make our decent." ioshee said. "Well why didnt you wake me up in a few hours?" Lian asked. "Because, m'lady, there is something very interesting happening on the surface of Courasant, and we need you to come to a decision." Josh said. "allright... do tell" Lian said. Ulic explained what was happening on the surface. "The usual riots, but a very strong presence of Dark power... the Empress and her Padawan are there." "weve got enough dark side force users... Shadow~G, Mideon, Soong... were packed! How could you tell if Courasant has it, if weve got two masters that have stronger powers than you can imaging, plus one,who is almost finished his training!?" Lian asked "We have our ways." Shadow~G said. "allright, continue Ulic" ioshee said. "What we plan to do, is send in disctractions. We do not know who they want to kill, but I can promise you that its one of us." Ulic said. "If they kill either Lian or I, they will become stronger. If the Empress kills Elian, Lian and me, then she will become more powerful than you can ever imagine...she must be stopped." "But if we kill the empress, then Elian will become twice as powerful; stronger for herclone dying, and stronger from anger at us. There must be another way." Shadow~G said. "Fusion." Mideon said. "Jebus, you scared me." Josh said. "Where did you come from?" "I couldnt help but hear the plan. This is what we must do..." Two hours later, they arrived on Courasant. They decided it was time. "Master, are you sure this disguise will work?" Josh asked. "People have forgotten who i was. They only remember who i am now. They dont know me by my face, but by my saber. Transporting it to the academy, and getting my green one, im just as good as Vaughn. Now, an element of surprise is in order." Shadow~G said. "Oh yes, Master, I fixed your lightsword... what will it be called?" "Dragon... Dragon Katana." Vaughn said as he unsheathed the sword. "it is a beautiful blade, even when its not ignitede." He sheathed it again. "Come, let us fight the Empress..." Vaughn said And they went to the designated spot... the platform _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student 
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[not in story] flash, there are places for people like you. But, if that does happen, id be very happy. Will it happen? probably not; thed probably change only the nessicary facts, like different universes, two other academies, all of our names... etc etc etc just the impt details  _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flash - Student 
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[Not in story] I can see it now...millions of copies sold overnight, George Lucas will ask us if he can use our stories for Episodes VII, VIII, & IX, we'll become the richest people in the world...Hey! I can dream, right! |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Hehe, I'm typing out the story already, I've reached the part where Flamori 2 first comes to Cal Omas. ..and I've printed stuff out. _______________ slorp |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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[Not in story] lol, what a story this is turning out to be. Let's print it out when we're finished and get it published...hah. [In story] Meanwhile, on... [Not in story] Where's the current Jedi HQ anyway? [In story] Meanwhile, on board the bridge of the Galactic Alliance Warship Doomanator, the Jedi and Sith waited patiently to finally reach Coruscant. "Preparing to exit hyperspace," said Relic Fey'yla. Flamori 1 gave a silent cheer. Finally. The other Jedi looked similarly relieved. Relic Fey'yla looked around at the unusual assortment of strangers on board his ship and shook his head. The son of the late Borsk Fey'yla, he did not share his father's anti-Jedi stand. Even so.. "Approaching Coruscant now." said one of the bridge officers. The Alliance Warship emerged into the debris field which had been slowly accumulating around Coruscant for the past century or so. So many battles had been fought here, the place stank of death. And yet, thought Relic, watching several Huorian scavangers scour the debris field for parts, life goes on. "Life goes on," said Cal Omas, watching the Doomanator approach the planet. The Jedi had arrived, which meant Flamori 2 had failed. There was a knock on the door. "Come in," he said, not bothering to turn around. The door opened, and Flamori 2 stumbled in, his cloak covered in blood. "So," said Cal. "The prodigal son returns. I told you not to bother coming back if you failed." "Unexpected complications," hissed Flamori 2. "The Jedi Lianiotte's clones are making things difficult. There's the Empress, the Evil Lian, the real Lian, and a male called Levi. I ran into him on the way here." "Clones?" Cal paused to consider this. "Never mind. The Jedi have arrived, Flamori 2. You know what to do." "Right." Flamori 2 started for the door. "And, remember this, my dear Dark Jedi." called Cal after him. "If you fail again, you'd better run away as far as you can, because any less will not save you from my wrath." Flamori 2 made no reply, but he did not have to. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story] Nicely said, Vaughn. *hasn't used computer in over a week* It feels so weird to type! _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] Flash, a recap of what you read. The Empress has a padawan, who is called "Evil Lianiotte". We find out, that when the empress takes off her hood, she is Lianiotte, who has gone evil. So the empress and her padawan look very very similar. Now, here is the thing that gets confusing. Both the empress and Evil Lianiotte are clones of the Real Lianiotte (who I assume is the one at the academy). So, up untill now, I referred to the empress as lian, because i didnt knwo that the empress was just a clone of the real lianiotte. So basically, the clones (except levi) of lianiotte that we have seen sofar are evil. Makes sence? So its her clone that wants Shadow~G dead, not Lianiotte. Lianiotte (Real) and Shadow~G are friends _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flash - Student
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[Not in story] Now I'm confused, weren't they fighting each other a few posts ago? Maybe, I should read ALL the posts over again. At any rate, I'll at least delete that part about killing Shadow~G. |
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Vaughn - Student
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"THOSE TREATUROUS B@$74%*$!!!!" Lian yelled. "you didn't think we would just give you the stone... you must earn it. That was a fake. You must defeat our best fighter to get it." From behind the speaker, a young male stepped out. "Do I know you?" "We grew up together, Lianiotte!" "What do you mean?" Lian asked "You dont get it do you? You asked for your clones to be different in different ways, every time. I, was the only clone, that is male... prepare to meet your doom, sister!" He said "What is your name?" Lian asked "Levi, you forget easily.. Lian" Levi said as he drew his saber. Lian ignited her blade. "I do not wish to kill a clone of mine that has not gone evil... I do not wish to fight you" "But, you must defeat me to be able to defeat the Empress, Evil Lianiotte, or Shadow~G. I was also one of the weaker of the clones... but, I am also strong enough to defeat the Empress!" Levi said. "If I must!" Lian said while she charged in. [not in story - If you have heard the Kenshin battle theme, think of it right now] "TIME TO DIE!" Levi yelled They faught. When Lian looked like she was winning, Levi would turn the tables suddenly. When Levi had the advantage, Lian would use crafty techniques to gain the upper hand again. Lian saw her opening. She faked left, turned right, spun her saber over her head, and using force speed, made a downward slash at Levi's left shoulder. Seeing that he had no chanse to survive, Levi did something no one had ever seen before. He blocked the lightsaber blade with his hand. Shock fell across Lian's face. Levi force pushed Lian away. She stood up and asked him; "How did you do that? You blocked a lightsaber blade with your bear hand. You should have been sliced right in half then." "I know, but, there is much you have to learn. One such thing, is that if you kill a clone, they arent dead - they bind with you. So if you kill me, you will get some of my power. That is how Shadow~G is so powerful! He binded with alternate formes of himself, not clones. His power increases exponentially. He has been holding back this hole time; he is too scared to harm the Empress, for two reasons. One, he knows she will become stronger, or someone will become stronger if she dies, but he does not know who. And Two, its wrong for a gentleman to harm a lady. Even if she is trying to kill him." Levi explained. "Allright, then shall I kill you?" Lian asked. "No, we shall bind... but before we do, we must fight the empress. Here, Take the force crystal, and this..." Lian smiled. He gave her a shirt that said "Lianiotte" on it, and a hat that says "Death", and ofcourse, a scythe. "Thanks Levi!" Lian said. She was about to give him a hug, but she thought it would be best not to (seing how he is her... in a way) Now, it is time to get the Empress! [not in story] Note: Flash, Shadow~G and Lian are on the same side - they are friends (i think). They want to get the Empress... maybe a personal grudge, but they are friends, so she don wanna kill him... I hope _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flash - Student
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[Not in story] Lian, where are you going with this? Well, I don't have much time to write so I'll make it short. [In story] After a short jump through hyperspace, Lian's ship was right in outside of Ithor. She broughther ship to a rather rough landing, thinking about how easy it was to get on the planet since the Vong attacked. "This is so easy" Lian said aloud "There must be a catch." I mean, what is so important about this soil?" She bent over and put a small sample of the soil into a pouch she had brought. For a while she stood there, gazing at a once beautiful world that was destroyed by the wrath of the Vong. She walked back to her ship and took off. "Now that I have unlimited force powers, destroying those pathetic Jedi will be a piece of cake." Lian said, smiling. Suddenly, she heard an explosion and her ship shook violently. Lian rushed to the cockpit and looked out the viewport. "No, it can't be...." [Not in story] I have no clue what it is, so someone make something up, im not feeling that creative right now. This comment was edited by Flash on Apr 17 2003 09:44pm. |
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Vaughn - Student
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"humm... all I have to do, is get a little sample of a planets soil, for a crystal that grants me umlimited force use! Man these people are stupid" Lian thought to herself.
And she was off, to collect the soil. [not in story - I would write more, but i have hw...] _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story]
This story gets more confusing everyday. [In story] Tiew shook his head, clearing his thoughts. "I know just the thing." he said, walking down the corridors of the White Academy. "Follow me." "Look at this," he said, as they reached the end of the corridor. There was a hooded stone statue holding a large scyth on a wooden pedestal. "The Grim Reaper?" asked Lian sarcastically. "What-?" "Thy does not see what lies beyond the shadows of vision." said Tiew sternly. "Harken now, and heed to my words!" Lian was about to make a smart comment, preferably about Tolkien and cheap imitations, but Tiew grasped the Reaper's scythe and twisted it in his hands. There was a whirring noise, and the wall slid back to reveal an extension of the corridor. Eternity mirrors traversed the length of the passage from all sides, making it difficult to tell where it began and where it ended. "Cute," muttered Lian. "This way," said Tiew, walking down the corridor. At the end, though it was hard to tell, he stopped. "What now?" asked Lian. Tiew ignored her and reached out with the Force. He had a rather poor force-sensivity, but this particular job didn't require much. He felt the force lock hidden behind one of the mirrors and entered the unlocking sequence. A moment later, a door appeared somewhere in the seemingly never-ending passage. "Let's go!" he said, and then led Lian into... Four more eternity rooms, across three fire pits, lightning rooms, and while all the time under surveillance by close-circuit cameras, AI enchanced trip mines and security droids. "What could you possibly have in this ol' dump that's so important?" muttered Lian as they left two guardian dragons unconcious on the floor behind them. Tiew pretended not to hear her. "Behold, the pride and joy of the White Academy," he said, stepping into the room. "Finally," said Lian, following him in. "I get to see-" her eyes landed on the object encased in double layers of reinforced glass. "A white rock." she turned to Tiew. "This isn't working, Tiew." Tiew lost it. "It's no rock, you unappreciative @#$%&! This white force crystal could change the way of the force as we know it!" Lian was instantly intrested. "White force crystal?" "Yes!" said Tiew. "We have been working on it for five years. It grants the user unlimited force powers." "Unlimited force powers..." Lian whistled. "I could push, pull, speed, absorb, protect, heal, drain, lightning, grip, mind trick, saber throw and rage at the same time!" "Impressive, isn't it?" there was a hint of smugness in Tiew's voice. "It sure is." said Lian in admiration. "Give it to me." "Sure thing," said Tiew. "None of us here would dare to use it anyway. But on one condition." "What?" asked Lian, instantly suspicious. "You just have to do us a small favor," said Tiew. "How small?" "Tiny." replied Tiew. "Kill Shadow~G. Just kidding!" he added, as Lian blanched. "All you have to do is get something for us from an outer rim planet called Ithor." "But that was destroyed during the Yuuzhan Vong invasion." Lian frowned. "And it didn't really count as an outer rim planet." "I know," said Tiew. "But I need you to collect a sample of the planet's soil. That should be no job for a Jedi, and it could be vital for the survival of the Galactic Alliance. Lian thought it over. She didn't really trust Tiew, but the force crystal might be the turning point in the war. "Deal," she said. "Do I get the crystal now or after the job?" "You can have it now," said Tiew. "Because if you really wnated it there wouldn't have been anything we could've done, anyway." He shrugged. "Thanks, Tiew." she said, slipping the crystal into her pocket. "I won't forget this." "Just bring back the sample," said Tiew, but she was already out the door. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] ORO!
[in story] When Lian arrived at the White academy, the first thing she did, was untie herself. "I never liked those cords..." she thought to herself. "welcome back Lianiotte, are you ready for the process?" "no Tiew, I cant stand any more clones. They are starting to take over me. They become evil, demons!" "but, you wanted them to be independant, and powerful, we never said that that could be guarenteed, without the power of the 'dark side'" Tiew said. [not in story - i would write more, but i cant, oro] _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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The Evil Lianiotte looked at the Empress.
"They actually thought it was the real you?" she asked. [Not in story] Get ready for more confusion. [In story] "Those pathedic Jedi failures wouldn't know the truth if it jumped up and bit their behind." The elevator come up, and Lianiotte (not the Empress) came out. "Empress, you will pay for hacking into my transmission." "If you do not remember, my apprentice and I are clones of you, including The Wingless. Do not get me wrong, I want very much to kill you, Lianiotte." They walked around (not next to eachother) the throne room. "But if I were to kill you, we would all be killed. And to remind you, we are not exactly the same." "You might just be corrupted misfits, The Wingless didn't turn out this way." "Or maybe you are the corrupted one. You should be fallen into the dark side." "I may be 4,874 but I'm not THAT stupid." "Oh really?" "Really. Now.... back down. You said yourself, we're not completely the same. Possibly you aren't as good as me in lightsaber fighting." "Maybe so. But The Wingless is more experienced in the lightsaber yet less Force than you. But then again, she didn't turn to the dark side. So maybe I'm almost perfect." "Where did you get your bragging from? You obviously didn't get it from me." "Then how would I be cloned from you?" "Enough of these questions. If the Jedi Academy crystal gets destroyed, you know, you will get killed like the rest of us. Almost all of us. Why? Because you were in contact with the Jedi Academy once, were you not?" "Oh no, the little master female girl found a flaw in my plan!" She drew out a ruby-blood crystal. "But wait, what's this? It's the Dark Side Crystal, with it, I could survive! How lucky of me to have found it!" "Goodbye, Empress Lianiotte, and.. 'Good luck.'" With that, Lianiotte went onto the elevator to go to her ship, and get out of there, to go to the White Academy. (Ooh, new academy ) _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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[Not in story]
BWAHAHAHA, 100th comment!!!
Poop on you guys who didn't make it
_______________ slorp |
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