| Star Wars Jedi Academy - Novel: Age of War | |
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Lian Del Rey - Student  |
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...
STAR WARS Episode (Who Knows) Age of War 13 years have passed since the destruction of Desann and Galak's defeat in the BATTLE OF THE ACADEMY. Bodies of those who opposed the academy are scattered throughout THE OLD REBUBLIC THE SECOND. Strange sightings have been seen in the old inactive planet of YAVIN4. Most have been seen in the destroyed JEDI ACADEMY. MASSADOOBIE and his long-time partner, DJ SITH, have been sent to YAVIN4, and seek out what the cause is....... _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student 
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[not in story - ORO!!!, how does Hiko live through Kenshins sucession technique?]
Edit: [not in story] Rurouni kenshin, it rules. I think everone should see it. But, dont fall inlove with it, and steal it from me! [in story] "BLAST!" Josh was angry. "Master! Why didn't you destroy her while you had the chanse?" "If i told you, you wouldn't belive me" Shadow~G answered. "I would" Ulic replied. "true. Because Lian was once a good friend of mine, i can never kill her. It is sad, i know" "you have became weak, Shadow~G" Flash said. "I am still stronger than you can ever imagine." Shadow~G reminded him. "The empress was part bluffing when she said that it was just a warm up." "what do you mean?" Flash asked, confused. "in a true warm up, you dont end up breathing too hard, and you sure as hell dont end up with a big gaping cut on your chest. She was trying, but she wasnt trying her hardest. As you can see, I was still trying harder than her, because I didnt want to kill her, just make sure she couldnt distroy anybody." "Foolish" Soong said. "look, if we tunnel to the Black Academy, we can train and get ready for her. I will go see my mentor, and then we can come back and destroy her once and for all." Josh said. "no, they took our tunelling devices... but.. no, i probably shouldnt use inspontaneous movement (instant transmission to all those english DBZ fans). Let us sit here, and meditate untill we are either tortued to death, or executed. I will try to get some wizards to help." "ah... Shadow?" "yes Flash?" "are you really the one that was once called 'Vaughn'?" "once, i was known as Vaughn. But now, I am much stronger. Here, this is what we need. Let us break out of the cell, get our sabers back, and then get out to our homes to rest. Should be easy enough..." the lock clicked open "that was too easy" Bubu thought. "ok, everybody know mind trick? Good, lets go" And off they went, towards the weapon cache. But, their every move was watched by Evil Lianiotte, who was wanting to get her revenge on Josh... _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson This comment was edited by Vaughn on Apr 08 2003 05:25am. |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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The Empress tossed her saber away into the pit.
A saber hilt flew out of the chair's arm. It flew directly into Lianiotte's hands that were behind her back. Her eyes were closed. On her right side a black lightsaber ignited. She opened her eyes. On her left side, another one ignited. She twirled the lightsaber over her head. She had a dual lightsaber. "Impressive... most impressive... but you are not a complete Jedi yet!" None but Shadow~G knew what the Empress was talking about. "That was a good round, but, it was just practice." "What?" asked Shadow~G, shocked. "You honestly didn't think that you would win this battle so easily, did you?" the Empress sneered. "Show your best," Shadow~G said. "Why would I bother? If I showed my true power the entire universe will be destroyed. No torturing, no nothing. Where's the fun in that?" She shook her head around. "This is scarcely the beginning." "For us, I might add. It is the end for you." "Do you mock me?" asked Lianiotte. She deactivated her lightsaber, and threw her hilt at Mideon, standing near the pit. "MASTER!" shouted Soong. Mideon fell into the pit. "Noooo!!!" "Not to worry, my dear boy!" shouted Mideon, who landed on a part of the pit. "I am okay!" "Then... what are you going to do?" Mideon built up a checkers set. "Was that the best you could do?" taunted Shadow~G. "Master Shadow~G," said the Empress. "You have fought gallantly. Now, it is finished." Outside the Deathstar, many Tie Fighters were hovering around the Deathstar.. They can not win the battle. For now. With that, the Jedi were forced to retreat. Shadow~G was upset. "I'm looking foward to the day our lightsabers collide together again." He knew there wasn't anything he could do, the Empress and her apprentice aren't weak minded. And with that, they left. Forced to give up any weapons, items, and equipment they held. [Not in story] I'm watching Rurouni Kenshin right now Vaughn   _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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"ENOUGH!" a voice bellowed from the shadows
"who..." Bubu started "It is I, and I am here. Josh, withdraw. Jedi, withdraw. My battle is with the empress, and only her." Shadow~G said while walking forward, with his saber in hand. Only Josh noticed that his lightsword was under his cloak [He was wearing a kinda Hiko style suit, you know?] He stopped in the center, ignited his saber, and pointed it at the Empress. "You, and me, no tricks, lets fight." He said. "foolish" the Empress said. "As you wish". The empress took off her cloak. All the Jedi looked shocked, but Shadow~G did not show any change of expression. The Empress looked younger than Evil Lianiotte! (kinda like Palpatene (in his late 40's?) teaching Dooku (late 50's?)). "Were you expecting me to be an old hag like Mindion over there?" "I didnt know what i expected... but I knew you were evil. And now, I know for sure. But, there is some good in you. Join us, and end this pain." "Fool! I am the most powerful Sith there ever will be!" "I see. You have decided to throw away any chanse of life for power. That is your way. I was once there. And I know for a fact, that in your current state, you cannot destroy me. Even if you destroy this body, you can never defeat me!" Shadow~G exclaimed. "Try me!" The Empress said They both charged at eachother. Black blade against Red blade. The people watching were watching in awe. They looked as if they were playing with eachother. One would slice hard, and the other would parry easily, and swing around for a finisher. At that time, the other would not be there. It looked like a dance, the speed at which they were dueling, it seemed to have a definate rythem (sp?). Suddenly, both lightsabers flew off in opposite directions. The Empress kicked Shadow~G, who hit his head on a wall. "So, this is how the great 'Shadow~G' finishes. At the hands of an olbie. *ignites saber* Now, it is time, to finish you off once and for all!" the Empress preformed a DFA. All seemed to be over. But, at the last moment, as his saber reached his hand, Shadow~G pushed the empress. Her saber did not kill him, but it did damage his lightsaber. "you...." "hahaha! Now, you are defenceless. It is time to die!" "Do you know why they call me Shadow~G?" "no, why?" "I dont know. But, while I was away, I learnt a very special art. This art is called... Battou-Jitsu!" "Battou-Jitsu?" Bubu asked to Ulic. "it is another way of saying that hes going to use the momentum of drawing the sword out of its sheath to try to kill her" Ulic explained. "but, he doesnt have a sword!" Bubu said. "doesnt he?" At that moment, Shadow~G grabbed his lightsword and swong. He hit the empress. She quickly stood up, and looked at her stomach. Her shirt was ripped, and there was alittle burn mark on her skin. "I WILL KILL YOU!!!!" She yelled, while running at Shadow~G. Shadow met her saber with his sword, and the duel continued... [not in story] along with battoujitsu, he has learnt some Hiten Mitsurigi Ryu, if anybody knows that that means *looks at Lian* if no one responds, I will have to continue... _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story]
Sure, just make sure ELian is mature. [In story] All ELian's wounds were healed (including her hand) "Is that the trick?" Soong snarled. "No, it gets even better." ELian turned to the Empress. The Empress wasn't panicked or shocked in any matter whatsoever. Lianiotte held up her hand, and a large green ball appeared, hovering over her hand. "This ball will go boom if it touches anything that moves." The Empress tossed the ball, almost calmly. It divided into (at least) two-hundred pieces. Surprisingly, all Jedi dodged the tiny balls. The balls reached over the pit of the throne room, then they combined, and fell inside the pit. In a few seconds, green energy light poured all over the throne room. Almost like when Emperor Palpatine fell down, but all the light was green instead of blue. They gazed in amazement and horror at the pit, and then looked back at the Empress. Fifty more green balls were hovering around the Empress. "Gahh!" cried Eclipse. All the balls flew around them. Soong was hit, and the ball hitting him exploded. "Soong!" shouted Mideon. When the dust settled, Soong was lying on the ground. "Are you okay?" "Owie! But tis a flesh wound!" imitating Chainer. "It's alright... it's not bad." Lucky enough for Soong, a small portion of the ball hit him. They looked at the Empress. "There's a lot more then where that came from," said the Empress, calmly. "I'd say you're bluffing," said Master Mideon. "I don't know. Maybe I am. Hard to tell, isn't it?" The Empress raised her hand into the sky. Tremendous amounts of lightning, black lightning, red lightning, and white lightning, struck the Empress's hand. Her face had no pain expressions. "Enough of this charade." Eclipse sensed what was going on. Hovering over the Deathstar was a tremendous amount of energy-lightning, black, red, and white. He looked at the Empress's neck. The thing was gone. _______________ slorp |
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Flash - Student 
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"Withdraw, and I will spare your lives... But if you do not..." Josh began to say.
"Withdraw!" ELian cut him off mid-sentence. "There is no way we would withdraw!" "Then I guess we'll have to finish you off" Eclipse said grimly. He leapt at ELian, attacking her with such a strength that she was caught off guard and her saber was sent flying from her hand. "Don't think you're going to win this" ELian sneered "The only reason I lost my saber is because I was concentrating on Soong, not you. You are hardly worth my time." "Oh, just give it up! You can't even fight with your saber hand cut off!" Soong yelled. "Fools." ELian said softly. "You think I would be stupid enough to only know how to use a saber with one hand? I can perform just as well with both." "A brave bluff, but there is no need lying to us." Eclipse deactivated his saber. "Come, think about what Josh said. You won't be able to win this battle. If you value your lives you and the Empress should leave now." "A BLUFF? YOU THINK THAT I AM LYING TO YOU?" ELian ignited her saber. "If you really think that, then why don't you come and fight me?" "If that is what you wish," Eclipse said softly. "Let's get her, Soong." The two of them began to attack ELian again. At first, it seemed that they were equally matched, but ELian began to tire. Soong swung high, and ELian raised her saber to block his attack. But as she was doing that, Eclipse stabbed low and his saber pierced her leg. ELian fell to the ground. "Enough is enough." Eclipse said "You should be happy I only stabbed your leg. I'll give you one last chance. Leave now, or be destroyed. To everyone's surprise, ELian started to laugh. "You think I am defeated? You pathetic Jedi. I happen to have one last trick up my sleeve..." [Not in Story] I'll be gone until Saturday guys, so don't be surprised if I'm not writing anything. BTW, while I'm gone, could you please keep Flash alive? Thanks! |
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Vaughn - Student 
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As all the Jedi attacked head on to the Empress, Eclipse sneaked around to the back. He jumped out of the shadows and did a RDFA.
"Yes! we've won!" Eclipse thought. "I dont think so" Evil Lianiotte said. Her saber was inbetween the Empress's head and Eclipse's saber. "What?" ELian turned the attack on Eclipse on. Sencing that Eclipse was in trouble, Soong jumped to help. Elian was taking Soong and Eclipse on, who were both trying to kill her, without killing eachother. "Go now, my padawan" Shadow~G said. "yes master" Josh flew across the room. Like a flash, his orange saber flew across the room, blocking ELians blade from slicing Soong in half. His blade rolled up hers and sliced her hand off in one motion. "AAAAAA" Elian screamed. "What did you do?" "Withdraw." Josh said "What?" the Empress said (who had pushed all the jedi away). "Withdraw, and I will spare your lives... But if you do not..." (Sorry, classic Kenshin phrase). _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Eclipse DKana - Student 
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"Look who's here" Bubu said
Then all the jedi/sith activated their sabers. The empress pushed Bubu away as if he was nothing. and she turned around to talk to ELian. "Do you see that?" Eclipse said. "What?" said the person next to Eclipse, it was Huxley "The empress has some device in her neck" said Eclipse "er???" hux said. "use seeing then you can see a small device in her neck" eclipse said "You're right!" hux replied. And so the words spread throughout the group. "We need to destroy it" "Now foolish weaklings, its time for you to die" "I'l go destroy it when she's fighting , Eclipse said" As said the battle begun. From the sides Seekers rise and Eclipse said "this is my chance" (go finish it with saberblocking a shot or so ) |
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Vaughn - Student
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Mideon was insane! The jedi looked on with their jaws open. All they could see, were red flashes. They couldn't even see him move. A reborn fell dismemberd here, a zombie exploded two meters (about two and a half yards) away, and a shadow trooper would have a big hole in its throught there.
"amazing" ioshee said. "master?" Josh said. "yes Josh?"Shadow~G answered. "do you think they need our help?" "Not right now. Once the real fight starts, we will go in there and help kick some empress. Fair enough?" Shadow~G said while smiling. "Yes Master"Josh said. Josh picked up his saber and felt the hilt. "This may be the last time I use this, but it will be the best time too." Shadow~G looked at his battleworn saber, and his new lightsword. "I never thought the experiment would be a success. If we survive this, then I will find a way to upgrade my saber, and my light sword." Josh and Shadow~G looked up. Mideon and Soong were both facing the Empress and Evil Lianiotte. "This party is over" Soong said. "Oh really? You havent even gotten us to, flinch." Evil Lianiotte said, sounding like Tavion. Soong ignited his saber. "Stop talking!" He rushed her. Seing the attack comming, Elian Force Pushed Soong. He hesitated for a moment, and blinked. When he opened his eyes, Bubu had blocked Elian's saber. "Brave of you, but foolish" Evil Lianiotte said, imitating Dooku now. "Look whos here..." _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Flamori Athena - Student 
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[Not in story]
A new writer! W00t! [In story] The Jedi/Sith walked up towards the Empress’ throne room. “Well, this is it.” said Flamori 1. “The final hour.” agreed Bubu. [Not in story] Hold on, you said there were 10 Jedi present. Plus two Sith. And Shadow~G and Josh, the Padawan. And Flash. Since those ten have not been named, I will take the liberty of doing so myself. Btw, Lian, where’s Doobie? [In story] Flamori 1, Eclipse, Bubu, YubYub, DJ Sith, Chosen One, Jacen Solo, Ioshee, Aeth S’kray, Huxley, Darth Mideon and Soong looked up at the forbidding double doors that led to the Empress’ throne room. “Impressive,” said Eclipse. “It’s nothing.” said Darth Mideon, who had been in the throne room before. “Just cheap plastic. See?” He plunged his saber into the door, and it fell forward. Lian and Evil Lian were waiting by the throne. “Ah, the prodigal Sith returns,” taunted Lian. “Knew you wouldn’t stay away for long, Mideon. You’ve always been a joke.” “Boy,” whispered Ioshee to Bubu. “Soong has powers we’ve never heard of, and we haven’t even seen Mideon fight. If that’s her idea of a joke, I’d hate to stick around when she gets serious.” “The joke’s on you, Empress,” snarled Mideon, holding his lightsaber high. “Oh really?” asked Lian. As if by some prearranged signal, ten thousand Reborn, Zombies and Shadowtroopers emerged from the shadows of the vast chamber. (Perhaps ten times the size of the one on the original Death Star.) “This is not good, “ muttered DJ Sith, as the opposing forces closed in on them. “Soong!” shouted Darth Mideon. “Let’s go!” In an instant, Soong ignited both his lightsabers, and was into the darkness like a fly on a carcass, flame and lightning trailing off the blades of his sabers. He was in his element, using the exact technique he had used in his first battle against the Jedi: Blades, Lightning, Flame, Drain, Repeat. But this time to greater effect, for the reborn had no idea how to counter the attack. Darth Mideon, on the other hand... _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Flash - Student 
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"You see, Flash, for that little attempt to kill me, I'm going to kill you in the most painful way I can think of." Lianiotte said, pacing around the lagged Flash. "But I'm not sure exactly how to do it."
"I might as well torture you for some amusement, I could use the laughs." Lianiotte gripped her saber, still staring at Flash. "Now which body part should I cut off first? How about your arms?" "Thanks, but I think I'll be needing those," Flash replied with a smile. In a flash (no pun intended) he whipped out his saber and leapt at Lian. His yellow blade came down hard, only to meet air. Lian had rolled to the side, and was now charging him. They began to duel, neither of them seeming to give in to the power of the other. Suddenly Lian jumped over Flash, landed behind him, and executed a backslash that Flash barely avoided. But he was not fast enough, as Lian's saber had left a burning gash in his back. Flash fell on his knees, grimacing in pain. "I can't give up now," he thought. He got back on his feet, and charged at Lian. But Lian was ready. Flash was struck by Force Lightning and sent flying across the room. He slammed into the wall and was knocked unconscious. Lian called in two guards. "Take him away," she said, motioning towards Flash's limp body. "Do you want us to kill him, your highness?" one of the guards asked. "No," Lian said, "Keep him in a prison cell for now. I think I will use him to test my new torture devices. After Flash was taken away, Lian stretched out with the Force. "The Jedi are almost here. Hopefully they will prove to be more of a challenge than Flash was." |
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Vaughn - Student
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"foolish attempt, boy!" Lianiotte said.
Little did we know, but the LAG that lagged out Flash was actually force lag. It is one of the lost force powers, where you use lag to control someone else. There are only a handful of people who have learnt how to use it. These people are offspring, of the very first jedi. [note: that wasnt that good, but its late, sorry] _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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Erm, Flash should have lagged... Erm.... Yeah. _______________ slorp |
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Flash - Student
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And then, Flash runs in front of both of them and does a DFA, which would have killed Evil Lianotte, if Flash hadn't lagged out midair...heh, I always lag out at the worst moments.  |
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Vaughn - Student
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"Where did you get that?" Evil Lianiotte asked
"I found it..." Lian said with sarcasm. "no, tell me the truth master. Where did you find that Black Bladed Lightsaber? It is custimary for us Sith to have Red saber blades, and only one jedi in the history of the universe has ever had a black blade!" Evil Lian protested. "I know, I killed him and took his saber. He was no match for me." Lian said. "Yes Master, what is our next move?" Evil Lian asked. "It is to move to the north. There, we shall get ready for the Jedi and those two Puny 'sith' to come and attack. Once we wipe them off the face of the universe, we shall rule all." "Yes master." -- in the other universe -- "Well, our work here is done." Shadow~G said. "It is time to get back to our home now... JEDI! We are finished here. The Demon Army has been defeated, and I sence a distrubance in the force in our Universe. It is time to go." "Yes master. But, what can we do? We can bearly move. By travelling to the other Universe, Our Universe, it would surley kill us. Let us stay a while, and heal ourselves." One of Shadow's students protested. "Fine then. You and any jedi who wishes can stay. I will go with the jedi who wishes to come home and fight another battle. ANY who wish to stay STAY!" Shadow~G yelled. All the jedi, accept for Shadow~G's Padawan stayed. "Master, I am here to help you, where ever you go" His Padawan said. "Thank you my Josh. This will be your hardest mission. If either of us fails, the other will go to the academy and call for help. Here, take this neclace. It was a good luck charm given to me by my second love. It will keep you safe. And take this, my short-saber (One of Shadow~G's recent inventions. It emits a blade that is about half the size of a normal saber blade). Its length is half of a normal saber, so it is more difficult to use effectivly. Use it as a last resort. Now, lets go!" With that, Shadow~G opened up a portal. He and his padawan walked into it, and they were gone. -- At the Black Academy -- "Sir, have you heard the news?" a staff member asked. "What news is it, Whatson?" Shadow~G asked. "There is going to be a fight between the Jedi and two Sith, against the new Empress. Are you going to fight in this battle?" "THat is why I am here so early. Do you have my Light Sword ready?" "yes sir, I do." Whatson reached into the coupbard (sp?). He pulled out something that looked like a katana sword. Shadow~G took the blade out of the sheath. The blade itself was dull. It looked like it could not even cut butter. Shadow~G Hastily sheathed it. "Do you know what a light sword does?" "No" said Whatson and Josh in unison. "It is a light saber, but heavily modified. It is modelled after the ancient samuri race. Their swords were very sharp (hense the lightsaber part, it can cut through almost anything); they could slice through human bone like it was butter. Now, here is the interesting part. It is different from any other type of Saber, because... you can touch the blade. This saber was designed so that it only cut when swong. Therefore, you can hold the blade without it cutting your hand off, unless you try to stop the blade with your hand." Shadow~G explained. "Watch" Shadow~G unsheathed it, and ignited the saber. The dull blade transformed. To their awe, a green light started eminating from one side of the blade, the cutting side. Shadow~G held the blade directly in the middle. His hand did not burn off, and was not cut. He swong his blade right into a can of pop on the table. Three seconds later, the can fell in two peices. Shadow~G sheathed the sword. "Another great thing. You can have the sword turned on while its in the sheath, incase you need to have a quick slash and do not wish to slow down to turn it on. Its a very useful weapon." Shadow~G explained. "I see" Josh said. "Now, lets get going!" With that, Shadow~G and Josh left. Their ship flew off into space, headed toward where the Death Star loomed. They were getting ready for the biggest fight, of Jedi VS Sith. -- Death Star -- "They are comming. 10 Jedi from this direction, and 2 Jedi from this direction. They cannot consieve how stupid they are." the Empress said. "Should we kill them now?" Evil Lianiotte asked. "No, it would be better if we saw them fight..." Lianiotte said while laughing. "Let them come... Let them come..." Lianiotte said. [not in story] - Hows that for some preping? _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Eclipse DKana - Student
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[not in story]
I read this alot
I like it when I come in do something cool and hope that time I dont get it
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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Meanwhile on the Deathstar in the EMPRESS'S Throne Room.....
Lianiotte and her apprentice walked up to their chair. ELian stood next to it, and Lian sat in it. She pressed a button on her right, and a lightsaber hilt came out. "Been a while?" asked ELian. "Not really." Lian grabbed her lightsaber, walked down the steps, and a black lightsaber blade flashed. In a few moments, she started performing at least 10 times better than her apprentice (who fought better than Yoda.) After a couple of 5 minutes, the Empress settled down, threw her lightsaber hilt at the chair, and brought her staff out. Evil Lianiotte could do nothing but stare. _______________ slorp |
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Flamori Athena - Student
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[Not in story]
Ok, I'm back. Hey, anyone realize there are only a few of us actually writing? Anyone reading this post, please leave a comment here, at least to show that we're not he only ones hanging around this thread. Sorry, no time to write now. PS: Don't worry bout a thing, Vaughn. This post is supposed to be creative. You can do WHATEVER you want. _______________ «±» 21st on the Midbie Council, Profile ID: 2027 «±» True wisdom is the knowledge that you know nothing. |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story]
I have just a question for all who are reading this. Tell me if you like the way i am taking the story (or changing it from everyone elses thoughts...), or how you gous thought YOUR character should be like. And I dont mean like, insane l33t Jedi Master who could destroy everybody with one swing, make it realistic. If you dont like my style of writing, tell me ON MY PROFILE PLEASE!!! - dont want to spamm this thread too much 
Thank you. Carry on, keep the ideas flowing _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] ORO!!! i did not see that comming...
[in story] "HAHAHAHA, it took you long enough to figure that one out. And you call yourself Jedi..." the Empress said. "But why? Why are you trying to destroy us? Why did you turn to the dark side?" Silk asked. "It is a long and complicated story... it is the same reason why Vaughn turned into Shadow." Evil Lian responded. "so..." DJ started, but was stopped by a crackeled transmission. "...DJ?.... Bubu?..... anybody?" "Who is it?" Bubu asked. "Good.....works....somewhat..." "Who is it?" Bubu asked again. "...From another...Demon War...Starting..." "Shadow~G?"Ulic asked. "Yes... The transmission....bad....travelling over universes...."Shadow~G explained. "I see, Why are you calling?" "I have.....new ... saber.... Demon attack....soon...nessicary...help" Shadow~G explained. The Empress and Evil Lian twitched at the same time. "They arent starting the party!!! Thats Impossible!" The Empress said. "What party?" Bubu asked. "heh, foolish attempt Jedi. But, I will answer your last question. The Demon war will start in 6 hours. Your friend Shadow~G is in the wizard universe with some Black Jedi to try and stop them from destroying the other Universes. But, he will fail. And we will be there to make sure of it." The Empress said. "Ta Ta" Evil Lian said (in an evil voice). They both swung their hand. Fire, alot of fire all over the place. When the water sprinklers douced the fire, Evil Lian and the Empress (Lian now) were gone. "I did not want this to happen..." a dark voice said. "show yourself!" YubYub yelled. from the shadows, there stepped two men. One in his later years (think Kyle, but with a grey beard), and a younger man (think Kyle with black hair and different face, around Kyles age) walked in, their eyes covered by their black cloaks. At their sides, a flash of light showed a lightsaber on each one. "We have heard everything. We are not here to fight you, but we are here to destroy the Empress and her Apprentice. You do not know my name [not in story - I forget it... - in story], but you will remember him." The older man pointed to the younger of the two, who removed his hood. "Soong!" the Jedi said in unison. "It is I. We shall not harm you yet, we are after the Empress. She has violated the Sith code. And for that, she must pay. We must work together, for our paths are the same for a while. Let us throw aside our hatered for eachother for a few days, untill the empress and her apprentice either are dead, or have givin up their titles as 'Sith'. Are you with us?" Soong asked. The Jedi thought for a bit. Soong remained motionless with his hand out (like a handshake). "Yes, we are" DJ said after a pause, and clasped hands with Soong. "The prophesy is comming true, my apprentice. 'When light and dark cast aside their differences to reach the same goal; the truth will reveal itself'." The master looked off into the distance. "Empress, this is not the ending for us, but the beginning of the ending for you." _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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[Not in story]
Now will you post? But just note "This is just the beginning!" -Count Dooku _______________ slorp |
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Lian Del Rey - Student 
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With that, everybody rushed to their ships.
When in space, they watched Xeo implode, then explode. They entered an old, abandoned space platform. "What do we do now?" said DJ Sith. "Leave all possibilities still standing," echoed a familiar voice. "What?" It was the voice of Lianiotte. "Physically, you may not be able to see me in a long time. Yet I am here to reveal what everybody is saying.. The truth. The Star Destroyer is still holding the Academy Crystal. The dead Flamori 2's servants are growing impatient. You are 24 hours before his Reborn troop grabs his lightsaber, activates the crystals, and harnesses the crystal's power for his own use. The crystal will begin to scare the reborn, so he will throw it out in space. Eventually, the Deathstar will destroy the crystal, annihilating all academy-related Jedi. Those who died in the academy won't even be a memory anymore. Or lost soul. Or will the world fall yet? Everybody will be able to survive. But they begin to notice they will age faster. But before long, they will begin to continually sneeze and cough up blood. And before they know it.. Expiration." Everybody listened to Lianiotte's words in awe. "The dark forbidden crystal Bubu is carrying.... give it to me." A blue and white vortex appeared before everyone. Bubu's eyes opened. He turned to the others, who did not know if he should or shouldn't. "Ah... yes... it is the hour of truth." Bubu brought the ruby crystal out of his jacket, and slowly walked towards the vortex. He closed his eyes, slowly walking.. "No!" shouted a familiar voice of Zero. A blue, wind-like figure shaped like a Jedi Academy Trainer flew towards Bubu and tackled him. Bubu flew backwards, landing onto the ground. The figure flew on further. Bubu didn't know what to do. He looked at DJ. DJ Sith shrugged. "It's your choice. For every action, there is a consequence." Bubu held the crystal up higher, and slowly walked towards the vortex. SWWWSSHHHH... the vortex still went on. Suddenly a thought struck Bubu's head. "No..." he thought. He held the crystal close to his chest. "NEVER! I would never give the crystal to you!" The Empress came out of the vortex, and the vortex closed. "FOOL!" she shouted. She quickly walked up to Bubu, and sideways punched him off the platform. The Empress laughed evilly. "The hour of truth." Everybody was in silence. The vortex re-opened, and the Evil Lianiotte came out. DJ finally realized it. "LIANIOTTE?! YOU'RE THE EMPRESS?!" Out of nowhere, you could see the inside of the Empress's hood, revealing Lianiotte's face. She continued laughing. _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story]
wow, i did not see that one comming... _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Lian Del Rey - Student
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But what really mattered more? Peace, or world domination?
"Master, shall I make an entry?" asked the ELian to the Empress. "No," said the Empress. "Although I should protest the idea, and try to shun from peace as much as possible, Flamori the first is right. This is their own battle." "So.. you have the gift of forseeing the future. What have you seen? Who will win?" The Empress chuckled. "You'll have to find out for yourself. It will be surprising." "The second," thought the Evil Lianiotte. "She would automatically say if we will lose." The battle raged on. Xeo's destruction did not disturb their battle in any matter whatsoever. Lightning boomed in the sky. Blazes of fire charred the air. Puffs of smoke came out of geysers. F1 used push on F2, but, like F2's master, he absorbed it, and pushed it back, turned into a plasma ball. "What a pathedic attempt." The plasma ball struck F1, who then flew back and collapsed on the floor. With this, F2 become more powerful, and got wreathed in flame. The flame disappeared, and slowly walked up to F1, saber in hand. "Goodbye, my irresponsible, brainless brother." He swung his saber up, and began to swing it down for the kill. Time moved, oh, so slowly for F1. He could only lay on the ground, watching his death to come, he's brothers will to dominate all life, just put into a saber, coming towards him. "This is it," he thought. Exar Kun, gripping massadoobie. DJ Sith's opponent, the collapsing pit, the dragon... The balrog, uruk-hais.... The battle for the academy.. Protecting the shards of the Jedi Academy crystal.. the floating Belouve family... The death of Desann.. Zero's death.. Zeo Prime.. Yavin 4.. The disappearance of Lianiotte.. Now Xeo, and the universe... Gone. All gone. Flamori 1 was now about to meet his doom. Until, when chance came... An activation of a saber was heard. Whoever it was, flew their saber unto F2s. With the blow, the person who came to save him almost killed F1. He turned his head. It was the second to last person he'd expect. The Evil Lianiotte. "Brave of you girl, but foolish," said F2. Nobody minded to look at the Empress if she was in pain, horror, or graditude. Bubu turned around and looked at the sky. TIE fighters and X-Wings were fighting in space, close to the Death Star. The Deathstar! "The Wingless never came back from the Deathstar!" thought Bubu. "Hmm... perhaps we have to wait to find out anything on the Deathstar." Bubu now wanted to battle to end a lot sooner. He felt the urge to reach the Deathstar. Flamori 2 was getting concerned, while fighting the ELian. The Empress payed more attention to ELian than him. Suddenly, he realized something. He has passed his training, and ELian has not. He felt his power grow, and started fighting stronger and faster. Everybody gazed in amazement and horror. Whoever wins will change the future in any two ways. ELian was fighting even better than Yoda! But then again, so was F2. Bubu looked at the Empress. Now was his chance. He crawled and crept closely to the Empress, staying in all darkness, avoiding any fire. He stood up behind the Empress, and attempted to pull off her hood. The Empress shifted her eye and punched Bubu's stomach with her elbow. "You did not think you would pull my hood of so easily, did you?" Suddenly, Bubu was teleported to his original spot. The Evil Lianiotte stabbed F2's left shoulder and left leg. F2 yelped in pain. He held his wounds for a minute, then stopped, looking up at ELian. He was mad. He threw his saber at ELian when she was off guard. But it got pulled. It landed in F1's hand. He stood up. "How many times do I have to tell you?" he said, activating a blue saber and a red saber, slowly walking towards F2. "This is our BATTLE!" He started attacking F2, who was completely defenseless. He managed to cut off F2's both hands. F2 landed on the ground. He pointed his blue saber at F2. "This is the end," he said. He was about to turn around and walk back, but a geyser behind him shot up a beam of fire, and it launched F1 foward, slicing F2. The battle was completely over now. The Evil Lianiotte, shocked, turned her head toward The Empress. The Empress didn't seem shocked or impressed at all. "This planet is falling apart," said The Empress. She and her apprentice turned around and walked toward their ship (which just landed.) "It will explode any second now." They went in their ship. _______________ slorp |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in post] this is from F1...
[Not in story] You guys are making me out to be a very powerful Jedi...I love it! [In story] Flamori 2 walked over to Flamori 1 and kicked him across the room. Flamori 1 slammed into the wall, and something snapped loudly. He crumpled to the floor and didn't move. "You're pathetic, brother." sneered Flamori 2, igniting his blood-red saber. "You are no match for me." He lowered the tip of his saber to the floor, then swung it up and aimed it at Flamori 1. "Prepare to die." Almost to fast for the watching Jedi to see, he charged, leaving a maelstorm of air currents in his wake. He was halfway across the room when Eclipse appeared out of nowhere and caught his saber in a deadlock. "Fool," snarled Flamori 2, sweat dripping from his forehead. "Get out of my way and I will make your death a painless one." "A Jedi does not fear death." said Eclipse calmly, though visibly straining to break the deadlock. "Are you telling that to me, or to yourself?" Flamori 2 leaned on his saber, the dark side radiating off him in waves of crimson. "You, Flamori 2." said Eclipse, the last of his strength nearly spent. "Don't you dare call me that!" shouted Flamori 2, his anger feeding his dark presence. "I am the master!" Eclipse felt his force sense strenghening as he gathered his strength for one last devastating blow. But he was so absorbed in his own stragedies, the way the battle would proceed, that he hadn't bothered to consider any other possibilities. Such as that of Eclipse turning off his saber and stepping aside. Caught off guard, Flamori 2 stumbled forward. Snarling in surprise and anger, he spun around to face Eclipse. His saber left his hand and flew straight towards Eclipse, who had been expecting the move. His saber moved to block it, but instead "What the-?" mumbled Eclipse, but he had already figured it out. Flamori 2 had switched off his saber and flew it around Eclipse, which meant- Eclipse cursed his own carelessness as a saber ignited behind him and drove itself between his shoulder blades. "This is definitely going to hurt in the morning." he muttered, then dropped noiselessly to the floor. He wasn't dead, at least not yet, but Flamori 2 didn't have to know that. With a satisfied look on his face, Flamori 2 caught his saber and closed in for the kill, undecieved by Eclipse's ruse. "Enough." said a hoarse voice behind him. Slowly, Flamori 1 rose to his feet and licked the blood from his lips. His eyes were cast in shadow. "This fight is between you and me." he said. There was no emotion in his voice. He paused for effect, then his blue saber flashed to life. "Your life ends this day." Flamori 2 turned to him slowly, not making any fast moves. The two stared at each other for what seemed like an eternity, then, In a blur of movement, they both attacked at the same time. Red and Blue, Jedi and Sith, Light and Dark. It was a contest of wills, Bubu knew. Whoever had the better philosophy would win. It was that simple. The two were unmatched in fighting skills, the only difference between them was their beliefs. It would be close. [Vaughn] there we go, back to regular course... _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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Vaughn - Student
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[not in story] - i have to run, so ill make it quick, F1, take on from the fight plz!
[in story] As Eclipse arrived, he saw something horrible. F1, holding his side with one hand, was defending himself from F2, attacking with one hand (F2 was holding his side, with his wrist stump) F1 made a huge red swing down. F2 blocked, but his saber malfunctioned. He was thrown backwards, and slipped on the ground. F1 released his side to do the swing, but blood bursted out of his side. They were both imobile. Then, the Empress, empowerd F2, who stood up, and walked slowly over toward F1... _______________ When you become an actor, you become the person, and you dont act anymore. You just are. - Tyler HP, Taught by Mr G Simpson |
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